||Piya (Special Night)|| Premeer One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

me first!! yay1!!😃 Thanks Avi! 😃

Heyla Meeru!!!!😛 surprise surprise????😳 lol..u must be jumping with joy to read this lol..NOT..

erhmm but me being me..impossible for me to stop commenting on ur stuff.. It's not a surprise, since you WERE waiting for it! 😃 But you have to know I'm sooo glad you like my stuff! 😃😳

This was so romantic!!! fluff to the extreme here lol! Great job!!! I was in a romanticy mood!😆😆😆

Me wanted an explanation from Prem😆 but i understand this is premeer we're talking about a couple who have crazy telepathy communication skills..suckers* gosh i'm jealous anyways.. Definitely, this is Premeer, they don't need to talk!😆😆

Must say the second last paragraph was it? erhmm too lazy to check was mi fav! loved how u described all the candles going out, leaving them with the moonlight only..a very premeer phingoli😆... Awww thanks, I didn't want it to be too extreme!😆

But i'm having a hard time imagining the candles going out one by one..i actually had to stop and try to decipher that..erhmm and it didn't work...lol..but that's ok..we're talking about a land where the moon is always up, and the cure for everything is water... this phenomina is nothing😆 ohh i wonder how this family would survive in the future..u noe with all the climate change and all that..hmm...anyways good job!! and keep it up..i liked this fluff lol..it was cotton candy style..sweet fluff...😳 Yeah don't worry in the Kis Desh land, ANYTHING is possible!😆😆😆 Thanks a lot for liking the cotton candy! 😃

Originally posted by: viniva sharma

ki baat h meera dee!!!! luv it!!!!!🤗

Thanks so much Vini! 😃

Originally posted by: -Anza-

okayy

i absolutly loved it..i hope this is how it turns out 😳

meera...i love the way you described when Prem says 'Heer'

it was amazing, and did i tell you how much i loved it

and the song is perfect for Premeer

Awww how shweet Anza! 😃 I'm really really glad you liked it! 😳 Awww thank you sooo soo much! 😃 I thought the song fit really well too! 😃

Originally posted by: PH4EVR

aww Meera i loved it i loved and just loved it only if our mahan creatives could use a little brains too!!

but Meera im sure by now you know that your a gifted writer Ive always always loved your One- Shots and aswell as you FF's

Good Job!! Hope to see more coming :D

Awww thank you so much hun! 😳 I know na? If only they knew exactly what we wanted! 😊 Teehee, you're so shweet hun! 😃 I'll try to write more soon! 😳

Originally posted by: purplestar22

aww thats was soooo cute and romantic i loved it!!!!

Thanks so much! 😃

Originally posted by: iditri

OMG....i loved it...it was awesome...seriously u sud take this ipshitas place......u r too good...omg i was imagining the whole thing...too good....👍🏼.....👏

Awww thanks, that means a lot to me, I'd take her place, get rid of all the evil ness, and just have cute things with the couple and then every so often throw in a tiny proplem! 😆

Originally posted by: Bul3

👏👏👏brilliant one shot Meera..Loved it very much..great narration..beautiful language..keep up the gr8 work dear!!

Thank you so much Bul! 😃😳 Glad you liked it! 😛

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

OMG, Meera *fans self* Lemme come back to this when I'm not so distracted though. Teehee, I'll wait!😳😆

*edited*

I was watching Merlin. I never should have told Bhav about it, then I would have had Arthur all to myself. *grins goofily* Awww!😆😆😆

The shot was fabulous Meera! It was simple and to the point, explaining the apology on Prem's part to his mom and Veera, and the connection and understanding between PremHeer. And the apparant attraction as well. 😉😆 The love is obvious, the desire sizzling. And leaving the rest to our imagination. *shivers* That was so good. Thank you Radz! 😃😳 Ah yes stupid Prem, although it did seem to work with my scenerio better! 😛 Awww the attraction has to be there!😆 Thank you so much! 😃😳 I had more, but I didn't want it to be TOO extreme!😳😳

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: shanu333

Hey Meera! 😃

I've finally decided to start commenting 😆...I couldn't stay silent any longer 😆

I loved this one 😳... this is my fav one after Tujay Yaad Na Meri Aayi 😳..

And I loved the way you described Prem... 👏... Very nice =D

okie... I'm off to read the Meet one... Byee-Byee

-Shivani

Thank you Shivani! 😃 Aww I'm glad you're not going to be silent anymore! 😳 Wow...you liked Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayi that much? thanks! 😃 Ahh have fun with the Meet one! 😃

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

it was really beautifully written and very romantic...

Thanks so much hun! 😃

Originally posted by: *Shiny*

OMG...i jst loved...i wish it does cumz true...

Thank you sooo much! 😃

Originally posted by: Casssp

Hey Meera this shot is really good. i Loved it.

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Eeeeek! How did i not see this!?!?!? Mine! =D

*Giggle* Meet kabhi nahi sudhrenge!!!!! *shaking mu head in dismay* 😉😆 Awwww, Prem really does think Heer is the most beautiful women!!!!!! *sigh* 😳 Aditi really did look amzing in a sari!!!!! Even if Harshad won't admit it on SBS, Prem defintiely thinks she looked gorgeous! 😃😳

I love how Premeer can feel each other without having to turn or anything!!! They are just so natural!!!! *thumbs up* They understand each other perfectly!!!!! 😳 That's their connection!😳

Okay, now i'm getting goosebumps too!!!! I'm glad you captured that initial shyness!!! It was very important!!! *thumbs up* Ooooooh, i love the effect you had with the whole breeze and candles letting out!!!! That was perfect Meeru!!!!! 👏 Awww I'm so glad you liked it Madz, I didn't know if it would all work or not, since it's my first time writing something like that, but I'm happy it showed! 😃

Awwww, i hope Premeer always stay together!!!!! Great one-shot Meeru and can't wairt till the next one!!! Thank you Maddy! 😃

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

Hi Meera,

OMG.... just like all ur other ones i LOVED this one to...hehehe

Soooooo romantic nd cute...... Meet will never stop butting in will they??...hehehehe........

Thnkzzzzzz so much for this!!

-Luv Pari

Thank you soo much Pari! 😃 I'm really glad you enjoyed it! 😃

Originally posted by: she100

welldear its quite romantic ,,,,,,,,,,,,but in actual i want more,,,,,,,,,,,😳,,,,,,,,,,but u also described it in a beautiful way,,,,,,,,,,,how the candles blown out👍🏼 thats really great dear,,,,,,,,,,but still i want more,,,,,,,,

Sorry, anymore, and I would have made it too extreme! 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

Oh wow. That was written amazingly Meera, just fantastic! I don't know what you are taking about but it certainly didn't FEEL like it was rushed! I was wondering before how you would write it, when you mentioned it in the PM, but you wrote it better then I thought! I don't know, I felt like it was either too short or just not right!😆😆😆 But I'm glad that you liked it, and yes when I mentioned it, I thought I would go full out or something and add the next morning, but I wanted it to stay pure like it should!😳😳

I have to say, best part was how you showed the alternating thought process's between those two, the apprehension, the love was depicted beautifully. Great job Meer! =] Thank you sooo much Shabo! 😃😳 That really means a lot to me!😛

ROFL @ Meet outdoing themselves. =] That had to be added in!😆😆

--shabz

great one shot M...loved it!!!!

hey great prediction hope something like dis happens

Thanks S! 😃

Thanks Zaibun! 😃

hai that was just wow! loved it!

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hai that was just wow! loved it!

Awww thanks a lot! 😛

OMg !!! lovely story ....wow..beautiful i love it ..
too cute ...u should be great writer....

write more stories okay... i would love it to read them more lol

i agree with everyone here.. ur story was amazinggg.. its k its short story but write more and longer stories next time okay ...well done ....lol

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Originally posted by: msb988

OMg !!! lovely story ....wow..beautiful i love it ..
too cute ...u should be great writer....

write more stories okay... i would love it to read them more lol

i agree with everyone here.. ur story was amazinggg.. its k its short story but write more and longer stories next time okay ...well done ....lol

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Awww thank you so much hun! 😳 I do wanna be a writer, not sure which kind yet! 😉😛 But I'm really glad you like my style! 😛 I do have a couple of ff's going around, but these one shots just come to me, and so I write them out!😛😃 Thanks again! 😃