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Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

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^^ I guess it does in some places in late Spring, Summer time!! xx

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Bhavna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

^^ Oh yeah...that makes sense... :D

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Zahra

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Posted: 16 years ago

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^^ Hehe- I was being pretty random- I dunno why I felt the urge to answer that question!! 😆 xx

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Shabz, I think that was perfect. It could not have been any better. It was sweet, and simple, and effective in showcasing just how perfect the two are for one another.

Meher's anger at being woken up so early in the morning, Preet's mischievousness, his little surprise for her, all so simply portrayed which made it all the more stunning. It was wonderful.

I'm still stuck. *sigh* I hate writer's block.

Love,
Radz

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shikha87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

awwwwww preet is so romantique shobo please be the writer for ekta jo atleast we get sum meet scenes

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Thanks for all the comments guys! *hugs* Will reply back soon! =]

--shabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: indiandoll89
mine! 😳

*unreserved* shockingly enough...I don't think this could've been better....Aww thanks!

Her total anger all adorably at him, I just wanna hug them both, or I'll hug Meher and leave all the Preet hugging to you guys!😆Ohhh that TOTALLY works for me! 😃

But seriously 4? in the morning? does he want her to shoot him? cus I would've!😆😆😆 *sigh* I can barely get up at 6😆😆😕 But the whole part of him just laying in her lap, and then taking her up to see the sunrise, I can't stop smiling it was sooo adorable Shabz!😳😳😳That's the point naa? I would have shot hte guy as well, but this is Preet...I mean...Pr-e-et. ☺️

Oh oh oh! The part with her wearing his shirt, and all A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E!😃G-L-A-D Y-O-U T-H-I-N-K S-O.

Write more soon, and oye! the tragic didn't suck....it was just like MAHA depressing, and it seemed kinda lacking near the end, but in all honesty, I didn't want you to write it, fluff, and specially MEET fluff is so much fun!😉😃😳LOL, thanks but it didn't have my "touch" to it I think...aha well,I don't mind fluff! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Thanks Meera! 😛

Originally posted by: Garima93
IT-WAS-FAB!!!!!!!!! THANK - YOU! 😆

AAHH!! Shabzz!!!! Whether its tragic, romantic, or just Meet fluff, you do an EXCELLENT job at writing it!! So sweet, thankss!

Honestly...I don't think this one needs any criticism cuz it was shooo shweett!!! LOL, thanks Garmz!

*sigh* I'm loving Meet more and more each and every day....especially after I read your wonderful songfics/one-shots!!!Hey it's not me, Meet are just so lovable!

LOL! Preet is so naughty!!! Waking up Meher 3:54 AM!!! Has he gone MADD??!?!?! lol...acutually, I would be fuming too if someone woke me up THAT early!!FUMING??? Understatment...I would have been FURIOUS! 😆

But the result was soo sweet!!! The two love birds admiring the sunrise!! how cute!!!I knew you would like it! =]

Loved it shabz!!! Cant wait for ur forth coming ones!!!

Luv yaa!! <3333333
Garima

Thanks Garima! 😃

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: blackdaughter
mine! =)

Oh, that was so sweet!! It was simple and short, but it had everything we needed!!! *thumbs up* 👏Thanks Madhuri! 😃

It's so funny how Meher is shouting/screaming at him the WHOLE time and he is looking at her like he can't her hear and if he can, it's music to his ears anyways (which it probably is)!!!!!! 😆 Awwww, she is wearing his shirt to sleep!!!! 😳 That's adorable!!! Ohhh I like the sound of that, her yelling is music to his ears..maybe I can use that somewhere! 😆

it shows that they have a great comfort level around each other, but at the same time that they know and respect their boundaries!!!! *thumbs up* 👏 I love Meet!!!*sigh* You are not the only one!

Oh....... sunrises are so beautiful!!!!! I would love to just be there with someone i love and watch a sunrise!!! Hopefully in th future i can!!!! *fingers crossed* 😳😆*cough* Do I sense I die-hard romantic here? 😆 Hopefully...*fingers crossed*

That was awesome, great job and can't wait till your next one!!!! *hug*

Thanks so much Maddy! *hugs back* 😃

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra
Okay, so my other comment got deleted *sobs* so I am starting again!! =P I was giggling whilst reading all of this!! My sister was looking at me thinking- Has Zahra gone mental?! ROFL!! But yeah, that is the effect your writing has on me- I become like marshmallow, all soft and sweet!! Aww don't worry about it Zahra, but still this is such a long comment! 😃 LOL, sisters - pft - who cares?

Anyhoooo, that was amazing!! Loved how you started it- Preet poking Meher- I could so imagine that- LOL!! And her reaction to realising that he was actually there in her bedroom at 4am!! BTW- what was she doing wearing his shirt, eh??!! ROFL!!LOL, what do you think?? 😆 I just thought it was cute if he caught her wearing one of her shirts! 😉

The bit about Meher deciding to continue shouting at Preet in order to hide her blush was super cute- reall made me laugh!! And is Preet sweet or is he sweet?? Laying in her lap like that- awwwwwwwwww!! I love that you don't have them married yet- it makes it even more cute- the way you focus on their thoughts about the future- loved it!!In answer to your question - SUPER SWEET! Yea...I think I'll write another shot for right before their wedding, like whne they are getting ready and all?
And wooooowww- the end!!! That was soooo romantic- watching the sun set together, so sweet!!! I DEMAND you write more fluff!! Not that I don't love your tragedies, but you know I am a sucker for all things fluff!! Hehe!! Great job Shabz!!NO one is a bigger sucker then you for fluff! =]

I made the comment a tad shorter this time- but hope you like it!! =P

Love Zahra xx

Z, don't even WORRY about it, for comments, its not quantity, its quality! 😆

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sourpuss
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Ohmygosh I cannot believe he woke her up at 4 in the morning just to see the sunrise! (Where does the sun rise at 4 in the morning, exactly? Here it's out by 6.30-ish!) Aww don't worry hun it was brilliant! The chemistry between them was just fabulous and has completely knotted me up (in a good way!) so much that I think I'm going to throw up. It's a weird feeling, but trust me when I say it was awesome!!!

Love,

Bhav :D

LOL, like Zahra said, probably in SOME places, like depending on the place and time of year I guess...why question it huh? It's a Meet fulff shot - no questions allowed! Erm. Glad to know you wanted to throw up after you read this! 😆 Thanks for the comment di! =]

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Shabz, I think that was perfect. It could not have been any better. It was sweet, and simple, and effective in showcasing just how perfect the two are for one another. Thanks di! =]

Meher's anger at being woken up so early in the morning, Preet's mischievousness, his little surprise for her, all so simply portrayed which made it all the more stunning. It was wonderful. *sigh* I just LOVE Meet. Writing them gives me such a satesfaction, that I only get from writing a really good tragic piece.

I'm still stuck. *sigh* I hate writer's block. I'm stuck too, this is just randomness I'm spurting out. 😆

Love,
Radz

Thanks for the comment di! 😃

Originally posted by: shikha87
awwwwww preet is so romantique shobo please be the writer for ekta jo atleast we get sum meet scenes

Ew. Why would I work for her? She would SO take adventage of my sadistic mind. =] I'm happy writing for myself, but thanks for commetning and liking it! =] As for Meet scenes, keep those fingers crossed! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey guys! *hugs*

Another Meet shot, sorta of a spin of the last one I wrote "Morning Suprises" with Meher and Preet getting married, all fluff, so you can read this without fear!

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She looked at herself in the mirror, unable to believe her luck, her fate, her destiny. She was getting married. Finally. Meher Mann, the youngest daughter, always overshadowed, for once was getting everything she wanted. Preet. All she ever wanted. All she ever needed. She smiled at her reflection at the thought of her to be husband.

She was having a heck of time though, tucking in her duppata just right. Just as she was cursing Heer di, for leaving her alone to figure this outfit by herself the door opened. Sighing in relief at the prospect of help, Meher turned, smiling widly, but just for a second for the smile was replaced with a look of shock within a second.

"TUM! Tum yahan kya karre?"

"Arre? Ye koi tareeka hai kya, tumhare hone waali pati se baath karne ka?" asked Preet, who god knows how had managed to sneak his way to Meher's room without a single soul noticing.

Pulling a face at him, Meher turned back the the mirrior, still struggaling with her duppata, as it refused to tuck itself in properly. Preet kneeled against the wall, his hands crossed as he watched his wife-to-be struggle. He loved watcing her struggle, because then it meant she had to push past her ego and ask him for help and he loved helping her. Pretending he didn't notice her struggaling, he walked so he was standing in front of her and spread his hands out wise.

"Kaise lag raha hoon?"

Smiling at him, Meher cheekily replied. "Insaan jaise lag rahe ho ... zindagi mein pehli baar."

She turned away from him again, still figiditing with her outfit. She could hear Preet behind her, she could hear him smile. Well there was no way she was going to ask him for help. Not if it was the last thing she did. Not if he was the last person to ever exist. Not if her life depeneded on it. Not if -

Sighing, she turned to face Preet, pouting, frusterated at the stupid outfit. Smirking, he knelt down on one knee, and swiftly, in one movement, tucked the duppata into her skirt, causing her to inhale sharply, as his fingers grazed her bare waist, goosebumps erupting all over her body. He stood up, putting his hands on her hips, pulling her closer to him, their faces inches apart. Leaning in, so his lips were next to her ear he whispered;

"Bohat khubsurat lag rahi ho."

Meher blushed, and buried her face into his shoulder. Smiling at her ever changing moods, Preet decided to torment her a little, tracing random shapes with his fingers on her bare stomach, forcing a heat to work its way up her neck on to her face. Sick of his tormenting, she punched him in the gut, threatening him to stop. Laughing, he wrapped her fully into his arms, never wanting to let go.

A noise at the door forced them to pull apart. Frightened, Meher panicked,

"Preet! Jaldi, chup jao!" she whispered at Preet who looked at her, almost lazy.

"Arre, choro na, chup the kyun - arre, dhakka kyun dehthi!" he protested, as Meher frantically pushed him behind the curtian in the nick of time as the door opened, and Heer sweeped in. Hearing her sister behind her, Meher turned, shyle smiling at her sister, silently asking for her approval. The second Heer saw Meher, her eyes smarted. Walking to her, she took her face into her eyes, choking back tears.

"Tu itna badi kab hogayi? Agar Maa aur Papaji tumhe aaj dekthe tho...." her voice trailed off, unable to form the words. Meher hugged her tightly.

"Didi, mein kya aap ko chorke jaari kya? Eki toh ghar mein hoon?" Blinking back tears, Heer nodded, making both sisters hold on tighter. From the hall came a voice.

"Meher, Heer, panditji ne tum dono ko neeche bulya hai..." in came in Kuldi smiling widly, unable to keep in her excitment. She hugged Meher tightly, finally her brother had come to his senses and was settling down, she couldn't be happier. Pulling back, she wiped a tear saying;

"Chalo, Meher, neeche chalthe hai....tum bhi Preet, parde ke peeche se bhar auo, jaldi karo..." she laughed as Preet came out, guilty as charged, rubbing his hand on the nape of his neck stammering;

"Woh, Kuldi, maine kuch ne kiya...woh....woh...MEIN KAANGI LENE AYYA THA!" he exclaimed in a burst of emotion, grabbing a comb off Meher's dresser, and pretending to comb his hair back. "Woh, is Meher ne mujhe parda ke peecha khada kar diya!" Nodding her head at him, Kuldi replied. "Haan haan, sa jaanti hoon mein, ab tum neeche bhi chalenga ya nahin?" Saying that, she waled across the room, grabbing Preet by the ear and dragged him out of the room. "AHHH! DI! CHODO NA! Aaj ki din toh asa maath karo...."

Heer and Meher laughed as he left. Quickly, before tears got the better of either of them, Heer kissed her soflly on the forehead and led her downstairs.

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And it was over. Preet couldn't believe it, as he watched Kuldi and Heer lead his blushing bride to her room to wait for him. He leaned against the pole, contemplating the huge change in his life. Preet! Preet Juneja had finally gotten married! To Meher Mann, who now bore hte name of Mrs.Preet Juneja. Smiling to himself, Preet heaved himself off the pole and made his way upstairs, wondering if he would be able to make Meher blush even more.

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The sun rose the next day, the light hitting two people, who lay, holding each other close to their hearts. Meher winced as the light hit her face. Her first thought was to scream, wondering why someone was holding her so tight as if afraid she would leave him. Her eyes made its way to Preet's face and she remembered the events of the night before today, making her blush. She tried to wriggle her way out of Preet's arms, but he was holding her too tight. She had no choice but to wake him up. She shook his shoulder.

"Preet!"

"Hmphgh." he snorted in his sleep.

"Preet! Utho naa...dekho...saath baj gaye....mujhe pooja ke liye tayar hona hai."

"Kyun? Jaise ho...achi lag rahi ho." he grinned at her, gently pulled the sleeve of his blouse down and kissed her bare shoulder.

"PREET! CHODO MUJHE!"

"Nahhh...don't feel like it." Preet grinned at her, waiting for her to explode. Meher surpirsed him though, her features softening and she knelt in, her lips finding their way closer and closer to his. He shut his eyes, not daring to belive, Meher was in such a mood. All of a sudden, she pushed him in the chest. He fell back, shocked as she got up and ran to the bathroom laughing at him as he lay there, sprwaled. As the door shut, Preet smiled to himself, this time not daring to believe, she had made him blush.

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How was it? I got another Meet, fluff comedy shot.. (PREGNANT MEHER! MUHAHAHA) and after that, I'm sorry, I got a tragic Meet shot, and then AFTER that, I'll try to write a Premeer shot. 😆Also, I didn't edit it, so please *maaf* any mistakes. I can already see some.😆

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--shabz

Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago