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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

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Omg Shabo that was so sad!!! Why do you like tragic things so much and why are you so good at it?I dunno...I just get pleasure out of pain. 😆

I love how you described the pain everyone was going through, especially Heer's and how she'll never her her baby call her "mama"Thanks! :D

I loved how you added the dialogues in the end which signified how much Prem loves Heer. It was really depressing how in the end, when she's teling him that she loves him, it's cut off with a baby crying...
Erm...Ravize?? Heer died, which was why the baby cried and all....was that not obvious? 😕

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My *sniff* spot!

I don't know what to say....😳You know if your comment had ended there I would have been satesfied. 😆

As much as I LOVE and HATE tragic endings, love them for the emotions that evoke in me, and hate them cus well....they're tragic....but seriously that was mind numbing!!!👏👏👏Ohh I don't hate 'em. Thanks!

The way you incorporated all the dialogues was totally superb!!!😃*giggles* Thankssss!

I think the end killed me though....and oh the line about her never hearing the word "mama" That physically hurt me to read...😭😭😭Awwww.....I'm sorry for hurting you but it was too good of an oppurtunity to pass!

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Write some happy fluff soon! 😃Fine. *pouts*

Love you,

Meera😳

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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Shabz, ILY for posting this. (No, I have not been replaced by aliens or possessed by demons, I genuinely love this shot. Despite it being heartbreakingly tragic.) Damn. 😳 Really? Wow. Cool. ily2! 😆

But if this is the reaction you get for writing this shot, what would I get for mine? I told Bhav my idea, and she was ready to kill me! 😆Why did you kill the idea??? You should have totally set it up like it was going to be happy and then BAM....rip their hearts. 😆

Seriously though Shabz, you evoke emotions so easily from your readers, it's as if we become a part of your story, and it's hard to separate fact from fiction. Brilliant work, that is, my friend. 👏👏Thanks di. *blushes* You rock my socks.😉

Absolutely loved it!

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: Garima93

I ish Here!

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Kya yaar...kisi ko rulaana koi tujhse seekhe😭 Dekha! Rulaadiya na!

It was soooo saddd duddeee!!!!! I'm like still crying over it!!!😭😭 But once thing's good that you can right a FANTASTIC tragic story!!! you should really send ur work in to Balaji...I bet Ekta will luv ur stories to make another tragic seriall LOL!!😆😆 Im not evening kidding!

The last part really had me on the verge of tears...I was so about sob...but then my stupid sister barged in the room and I quickly wiped my tears away...but i still felt really sad I hate sad endings...*sigh*...

Anyways, nice job at writing it though!! You hve wonderful skills!! Keep up the great work!!👏👏👏

luvs,
Garmzz😳😉

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Heya! I finally picked up the nerve to read this! Sorry about that, hun! *kaan pakar-ing*

This was so lovely. So unbelievably sad, but at the same time so lovely. This wasn't as bad as some of your other tragic one-shots (I think...) but it was nice. It was poignant, yeah that's the word I'm looking for. Poignant.

Can't wait to read your Meet one!

Love,

Bhav (: