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@DulceAmor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*
Anu you're brilliant! you're seriously brilliant!! I dunno what to say...i am losing words...you know first i was kind of confused in the beginning as to what was hapeening...but then i understood that yuvi ka accident happeneed... OMG!!!😭😭 Seriously Anu...I'm speechless! Seriously speechless! I dunno what to tell you...Seriously...i was on the verge of tears...i was actually numb for 2 minutes after reading the shot!😳👏👏 You seriously rocked this shot!! You have depicted ashi's feelings soo beautifully... God i would literally cry if i visualize the shot even more...i mean i could actually see the thing happening in front of me...and bhaggu!! Amazing Anu!! I wanna come and give you a tight hug!!🤗🤗🤗 Especially this scene happening during elections phase... i mean i don't even want to feel ashi's feeling coz then i would seriously shatter...but seriously anu...when i imagine...i seriously feel like crying!!

You are the best Anu!😳🤗 Love youuu...and i am seriously losing words...i would b back with my feelings later!😳 Love you Anu!🤗 Do keep writing such amazing shots for us!😳🤗

Love,
Nitz

Awwww Nitz, I wanna come n give u a massive hug right now!!!!! Am having tears in my eyes after reading your words. 😳🤗 Thank you sooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗 I'm honoured that you felt it was a good shot. I really didn't mean to make you cry but you have no idea how pleased i am that you felt i wrote it in such a way that it was impactful. I always try to make ppl visualise what is in my mind while they read n it's such a relief to know i succeeded. I wasn't sure if you'd all like the style but felt like experimenting. The credit goes entirely to someone special, who gives me the courage to try new things. 😳 Am so touched by your words Nitz. Thanks so much for reading it and for liking it so much. 🤗

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Natalie Abraham

@-DulceMaria-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Anu is hell touching👏👏👏 esp loved the way u described her grief👏 loved it. and i just loved this part :-

Originally posted by: Anu
Eyes dart over her shoulder in a loathsome glare. He, stepping backwards, face filled with rage, but isn't that a tear rolling down his cheek? Is there not pain in his eyes? A momentary pause. Her heart softening. Beginning to turn towards him, but no, her mind screams at her not to relent. Glaring at him...turning....starting to walk off...his voice carrying on the wind...

This is sooooo like them👏 esp the "face filled wid rage .......tear rolling down his cheek" i cud actually picture this scene in my mind😳

Natalie.

Edited by -DulceMaria- - 16 years ago

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Anu

@DulceAmor

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -DulceMaria-

Anu is hell touching👏👏👏 esp loved the way u described her grief👏 loved it. and i just loved this part :-

This is sooooo like them👏 esp the "face filled wid rage .......tear rolling down his cheek" i cud actually picture this scene in my mind😳

Natalie.

Thanks Natz for reading my shot and for your lovely words, am really pleased that you felt i did a good job with it. 😳 I always try to write so ppl can visualise it like it was happening before them, so you've made my day by telling me you could picture that scene. Thanks so much hun. 😳🤗🤗

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