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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish_88

thts gr8 ull b contng... but wen exactly will ur "soon" come Sleepy

so sorry about it! Actually i was suppose to mail her the next 2 parts which i cudnt and so she too cudnt post further. Anyways im back now, so updating the fic in just a while...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-4

Recap:

Ishika ko palankhet se phone aata hai jiski wajah se wo aur Raj immediately waha jaata hai.. Waha unki Yadavji ke saath kuch baat hoti hai jiski wajah se Raj aur ishika ke beech argument hota hai aur ishika Raj ko thappad marti hai}

Story further….

{yadavji chale jaate hai…ishika ab aur bardasht nahi kar paati aur raj ko gusse se dekhti hai…aur phir use thappad marti hai.. Raj remains still for few minutes.. while Ishika was brewing with anger..}

Ishika: what the hell do u think u're upto? Karna kya chahte ho? Mujhe achi tarha pata hai ki tumhare liye iss school ki koi ahmiyat nahi hogi, per mere liye hai.. Tumhe to bas apne paiso ki padi hogi tabhi uss insaan ki har baat maan li.. U are so disgusting Mr. Singhania..

{Raj too couldn't control his anger and so he steps towards ishika, and holds her tightly by her shoulder}

Raj: {raj was standing extremely close towards her by now.. Looking straight into her eyes… Ishika was a bit nervous now} Main achi tarha jaanta hu ki main kar raha hu.. Apne paise ki fikr nahi hai mujhe… Chahu to abhi tumhare thappad ka jawab de sakta hu aur yakeen maano main aisa kar sakta hu.., per mujhe apni hadho mei rehna aata hai… Iss waqt jaisa ye log kehte hai waise karo… agar tumhe mere saath aana hai to aao, warna… (steps back) raasta khula hai..

{raj waha se chala jata hai, aur ishika gusse se pagal ho rahi hoti… Raj ka un logo ki har baat mann lena use bilkul pasand nahi tha.. wo wahi se bas kahi nikal jaati hai… Raj bahar khade aadmi ke saath room tak jaata hai… Per ishika nahi aati… Raj kuch pal ke liye ishika ke bare mei bhool jata hai.. Raj ke room ke bahar 2 aadmi hote hai, unki madat ya shayd unpe nazar rakhne.. Kuch 3 ghante beet jaate hai per Ishika nahi aati aur Raj ab kuch pareshan hone lagta hai… Tabhi kuch logo ke cheekhne ki aawaz aati hai, awaaz sunkar Raj bahar aata hai to dekhta hai ki sab log daude daude kahi jaa rahe the.. Bahar khade uss admi se Raj puchta hai..

Raj: ye sab kya ho raha hai yaha?

Person: yaha ke halat thik nahi rehte hai sahaab… lagta hai bazaar mei phir tod phod hui aaj…

Raj: kya matlab?

Person: aap to jaante ho yaha ke logo ko… peechle kaafi dino se gaon mei dange chal rahe hai…

Raj: what? Per…..

Person: hum to kehte hai ki aap jitni jaldi ho sake yaha se nikal jaye.. aur madamji kaha hai? Kahi wo bazaar ki taraf to nahi gayi na?

Raj: Ishikaaa…. Pata nahi , wo …. (to himself) ab iss ladki ko kaha dhundu… pehle hi musibatei kam nahi thi jo iss ladki ne aur badha diye hai…

Person: kya hua sahaab???

Raj: pata nahi wo kaha hai… main use dekh aata hu..

Person: per aapka bahar jaana thik nahi hoga

(per raj uss aadmi ki baat ansuni karke chala jaata hai… pehli baar wo ishika ke liye itna pareshan tha.. Wo bazaar ki taraf jaata hai…thodi hi duri per use kuch kuch tod phod ki aawaz sunayi deti hai, aur kuch jalta hua dikhta hai.. wo ghabrakar aage badhta hai, to dekhta hai ki kuch log uski taraf aa rahe hai to wo jhat se chup jaata hai…

Raj: yaha ke haaalat to kaafi jyada kharab hai, pata nahi ye ishika kaha hogi?

{wo log aage chale jaate hai, aur raj kisi tarah se bazaar ki taraf jaata hai…per ishika ka kahi kuch pata nahi hota… wo uska cell try karte hota hai per response nahi aata… tabhi unka worker mohan use wahi dikhta hai..}

Mohan: are sir aap yaha kya kar rahe hai?

Raj: Ishika ka kuch pata nahi chal raha, wo kaafi time se bahar hai…

Mohan: oh ho, kya madamji apni gadi lekar gayi hai?

Raj: shayad ha per baat kya hai?

Mohan: waha peeche wale raastei per ek bada accident hua hai, aur ek safed (white) gadi mili hai.. hume lagta hai waha dekhna chahiye…

Raj: what?? Jaldi chalo….

(mohan raj ko uss accident spot pe le jaata hai…Ishika ki car wahi hoti hai..}

Raj: ye to hamari gadi hai… Ishikaaa…. Ishikaaaa….

Mohan: sir wo dekhiye, madamji ….

{ishika bahot hi zakhmi aur behosh halat mei unhe milti hai…}

Raj: ishikaa… (shakes her) ishikaaa… yaha hospital kaha hai?

Mohan: yeh paas hi mei hai, chaliye….

(They immediately rush towards the nearby hospital and admits ishika there, but due to lack of proper treatment & medicines doctors there advice Raj to immediately take to her to the nearby city hospital to which he agrees and later ishika was shifted to city hospital. By now she was in a terrible condition. Doctors examine her & decides to operate her as she had some brain injury, and so the nurse there comes to Raj for some formalities}

Nurse: aap uss accident wale patient ke saath hai?

Raj: jee ha

Nurse: unka operation karna hoga aur isiliye ye consultation papers pe unke kisi family member ke signatures chahiye.. Aap patient ke kaun hai?

Mohan: ye unke hone wali husband hai..

Raj: perr…

(mohan raj ko chup rehne ka ishara karta hai}

Nurse: to phir jaldi in papers pe sign kar lijiye, time bahot kam hai..patient critical hai…

{Raj had no other option so he signs the papers and hands over to nurse & she rushes out somewhere}

Raj: tumne jhoot kyu kaha?

Mohan: sir agar hum aisa nahi karte to wo madamji ka operation nahi karte. Ye bada hi strict hospital hai. Per agar apko bura laga ho to hume maaf kar de

Raj: nahi, its ok…

(the operation goes for about more than an hour, Raj was impatiently waiting out there, he was trying to contact Adi but his cell was off, but he kept on trying Sanaya's & Rohan's cell too but no one replied. Later Sanaya called Raj but than doctor called him so Raj disconnects the call & rushes to the doctor's cabin}

Raj: yes doctor

Doctor: please have a seat.

Raj: How's ishika?

Doctor: unke sar pe kaafi chot aayi hai jiska mild asar brain per hua hai. Main aapko saaf saaf batana chahta hu ke this may lead to some serious problems. But iske chances bahot kam hai

Raj: main kuch samjha nahi

Doctor: well, im afraid but she may loose her memory, temperorily aur permanent ye keh nahi sakte… Darhesal accident ke baad kaafi waqt guzar chuka tha, aur jis haal mei aap unhe yaha laaye… thodi der ho chuki thi…

Raj: but doctor…

Doctor: aap unke hone wali pati hai isiliye main aapse kuch chupana nahi chahta.. Aisa nahi hai ke she will loose her memory completely ya unhe kuch yaad hi naa ayega.. she will be normal but this may take time. Ab kitna time ye hum nahi bata sakte….

{ye sab sunkar raj was in a complete state of shock. For the first time in his life he had tears in his eyes for ishika..}

Nurse: doctor u're wanted by Dr.mehra…

Doctor: please excuse me, I have to leave, but u take care.

Raj: thanks doctor…

{raj ko kuch samajh nahi aata ki wo kya kare.. wo ghabra jata hai, aur iss sab ka zimmedar apne aapko manne lagta hai…

2 ghante beet jaate hai per ishika ko hosh nahi aata… Raj bahar baitha intezar kar raha hota…tabhi dubara Sanaya ka call aata hai}

Raj: he…heelllooo

Sanaya: Raj, kaha ho tum? Is everything fine there?

{raj kuch keh nahi pata…}

Sanaya: hello Raj, are u there?

Raj: ha, wo Sanaya…. Im sorry per…

Sanaya: baat kya hai Raj tum itne ghabraye hue kyun ho? Waha sab thik hai na? Ishika kaha hai?

Raj: ishika… wo…

{tabhi nurse aati hai aur mohan se kuch kehti hai aur wo raj ke paas aata hai}

Mohan: sir, madamji ko hosh aa raha hai…

(sanaya ye sun leti hai}

Sanaya: Raj, kya hua hai waha??

Raj: I'll call you back. {and he hangs up and rushes towards ishika's room.. Doctor use check kar rahe hote hai aur isiliye Raj ko bahar rukne ko kaha jaata hai.. Ishika ko ab puri tarha se hosh aata hai, aur wo bas blankly sabki taraf dekhti hai… Doctor use check karte hai…}

Doctor: how are you feeling Ishika?

{wo kuch kehti nahi bas chup chap sabko dekhti hai… }

Doctor: nurse inke husband ko bulao, may be then she'll feel better…

{nurse Raj ko ander aane kehti hai… Raj behad ghabraya hota hai… }

Doctor: look ishika your husband is here.

{ishika bas raj ki taraf blankly dekhti hai. Aur aankhei band kar deti hai}

Doctor: hmm…, Mr.Raj can I have word with u?

{raj bahar jaata hai}

Doctor: well, wahi hua jiska dar tha… But aise mei its only you who can help her.. {saying this doctor leaves while Raj stands there still completely shattered}

Ishika's room…

Nurse: ab thik ho aap?

Ishika: hume yaha kaun laaya?

Nurse: aapke husband, I mean hone wale.. abhi jo yaha the… Abhi aap aaram kijiye…

{bahar raj chup sa khada hota hai..}

Mohan: sir, mujhe kuch kaam se gaon jana hoga… per mai kal savere jaldi aa jaunga, kuch zaroorat pade to phone kar dena…

Raj: hmm…

{mohan leaves, Raj bas akele baitha hota hai…Ishika ki iss halat ka zimmedar wo apne aapko maanne lagta hai…}

Next morning….

Raj wahi bahar baitha hota hai…uske samajh nahi aata ke wo kya kare, kaise sabko ishika ki halat ke bare mei bataye…tabhi nurse aati hai aur usse kehti hai ki ishika usse milna chahti hai… Bahot jhijhak ke saath Raj ander jaata hai per Ishika se nazrei nahi milata aur uske paas jaata hai… Ishika bas uski taraf dekhti hai… phir bahot himmat karke Raj uski taraf dekhta hai}

Raj: kaisi tabiyat hai ab?

Ishika: thik hu… doctor kehte hai ki aap hamara pati hai per hume to aapka naam bhi yaad nahi…

Raj: Raj…. Raj Singhania…

{raj se aur bardasht nahi hota… }

Raj: tum araam karo main abhi aata hu… (aur wo jhat se bahar chala jaata hai.. aur dekhta hai ki Adi aur Mohan waha aaya hai.. )

Adi: Rajj….

{raj just hugs him and bursts out crying}

Adi: Rajj… ya sab kyaa… kaise?

Raj: pata nahi adi… per… ishikaa…

Adi: kya hua use?

Raj: she's lost her memory Adi…use kuch bhi yaad nahi…..

Adi: what?????

………………..End of part-4……………..

Comments awaited!!!

Regds:

Ruksaar

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice story ruksar.....👏.n this part was very well written...brilliant job👏
plz continue soon😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel 16

very nice story ruksar.....👏.n this part was very well written...brilliant job👏

plz continue soon😳

heyi neha, so good to see u here! And thanks for ur comments honey! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruksaar_khan

heyi neha, so good to see u here! And thanks for ur comments honey! 😃

hey dear my name is heena not neha..........bt really concept og ur story is beautiful👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hey glad u continued the fic..........that was a sad part...........hope ishika gets her memory back !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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what a twist! Grt update ruku! Cnt wait to read further, pls update soon!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey rukshar...........i have read all the parts........and i must say it is very strong and powerful concept.........i love it totally........ple ple ple continue bcoz it will give me restless night bcoz i was all night thinking about this ff..........ple continue so i acan sleep peacefully.............thanks for this wonderful ff............take care..........
love
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ruku............ple yaar continue kar na apni ff

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