Tere Ishq Mein ~ Part-4, pg-6 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: CINDRELLA

hey ruku
awsome first part dear really enjoyed reading this
👏
sply Raj n Ishika's fights😳

they are awsome😉
keep writing
& would b waiting for the nxt part

waise yeh Raj fresh hone ke liye itna time kyun lagata hai?😆

remember what Aditya sed, 'wo Raj so no more questions'😉 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey nice part 👏 👏 .......Lol.....Ishika n Raj are too much 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start! Ishika & Raj 😆 😆 😆
wil be w8ng fr the next part..update soon...!! 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey nice part 👏 👏 .......Lol.....Ishika n Raj are too much 😆 😆 😆

aage dekhna they wil be 2,3,4 n 5 much 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: starbellz_21

awesome start! Ishika & Raj 😆 😆 😆
wil be w8ng fr the next part..update soon...!! 😛 😳

i knw di.. but hold on as therz a lot more coming on way! 😉 Hpe u enjoy that too..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start
raj and ishikia's fights are intresting
cant wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great start
raj and ishikia's fights are intresting
cant wait 4 the next part
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thanks a ton dear! Wil update soon..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ruksaar great characters 👍🏼!!!...interesting concept 😉....so the story is in flasback right now 😊!!! the first part was amazing 😉!!! god ishika andb raj fight alot 😆, though it's cute 😛!!! ...poor adi has to deal with them 😛!!! .....sanaya n rohan inform them about the project they have won the dutt's !!!.....funny scene where ishika n raj r fighting coz her car was on the way 😆 😆 😆....sab pareshaan hojate hoge in do kie larayie say 😆 😛 😉!!!...who is tanya??? what did raj agree to? where r they going?? what's going to happen at the part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.,...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz......can;t wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....awesome story 👏 😉 👏 😛 👏 😉 👏!!!!!!!.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey ruksaar great characters 👍🏼!!!...interesting concept 😉....so the story is in flasback right now 😊!!! the first part was amazing 😉!!! god ishika andb raj fight alot 😆, though it's cute 😛!!! ...poor adi has to deal with them 😛!!! .....sanaya n rohan inform them about the project they have won the dutt's !!!.....funny scene where ishika n raj r fighting coz her car was on the way 😆 😆 😆....sab pareshaan hojate hoge in do kie larayie say 😆 😛 😉!!!...who is tanya??? what did raj agree to? where r they going?? what's going to happen at the part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.,...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzz......can;t wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....awesome story 👏 😉 👏 😛 👏 😉 👏!!!!!!!.........

heyi dear so glad to see ur comments here! thank u so much... Wil surely update asap..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-2

Recap:

Raj, Ishika, Aditya, Rohan aur Sanaya ek hi firm mei saath kaam karte hai. Raj aur Ishika ki beech ek tender ko lekar hamesha ki tarha behes hoti hai per finally unhe wo tender milta hai. Tender milne ki khushi mei Aditya party karne ka faisla karta hai.. Tanya Raj se kehti hai ki use aur Ishika ko saath kahi aana hai, jisse sunkar Ishika kaafi upset hoti hai…

Story further:

Guests aane lagte hai, aur raj sabko attend karne mei busy ho jata hai, per Ishika ab tak kuch pareshan si thi… Aditya, Rohan aur Sanaya bhi kuch hi der mein waha aate ha.. Sanaya dekhti hi ki Ishika kuch upset si hai…

Sanaya: hey ishika baat kya hai? U sound so low

Ishika: don't ask! Tanya di chahte hai ki main uss… uss Raj ke saath uss naye wale project ke liye jau.. usse pehle hume US jana hoga

{sanaya bursts out lauhing}

Ishika: whaattt???? {just than rohan joins them}

Rohan: kya hua Ishika? Raj to aas paas nahi hai to itni gusse mei kyu ho?

Ishika: what do you mean ha? And for God's sake stop laughing Sanaya..

Sanaya: oh ho gussa kyu hoti ho? Aur phir ye project to tumhara sapna hai na

Ishika: I know, per Adi, tum ya phir Rohan bhi to saath aa sakta hai na.. Why him?

Rohan : Ishikaaa…. C'mon now, ab ye koi badi baat to nahi hai na..so just relax & enjoy the party!

Ishika: jaante ho peechli baar jab hum palankhet gaye the to wo uhi mujhe chod aaya tha…

Sanaya: uff ho..i think tumhe shaant karne ke liye kuch thande ki zaroorat hai, I'll get a drink for u…

{sanaya drinks counter per jaati hai.. usi ke kareeb Raj bhi khada hota hai per wo kuch aur logo ke saath tha… Sanaya galati se cold drink ki jagah wine glass le jaati hai aur Ishika ko deti hai… Wo bhi gusse mei hoti hai to leti hai aur pura ek hi saans mei pi jaati hai aur waha se bahar chali jaati hai….}

Sanaya: are Ishika suno…

Rohan: sanaya, jaane do use… thodi der akeli rahegi to shaant ho jayegi..

Sanaya: hmm…..

{party chalti hai, kaafi der baad waiter Raj se aakar kehta hai ki koi aadmi usse milna chahta hai jo ki bahar parking mei uska intezar kar raha hai… aur isiliye Raj bahar jaata hai. Wo aadmi uski car ke paas hi khada hota hai. Raj use kuch paise dete hai aur phir wo aadmi chala jaata hai.. Raj phir ander jaane hi wala hota hai ki use kisi ki awaaz aati hai, wo palatta hai per koi nahi hota…thoda peeche aakar dekhta hai to use Ishika dikhayi deti hai jo ki nashe mei hoti hai.. }

Raj: {to himself}ye yaha kya kar rahi hai? Lagta hai dimag ke saath tabiyat bhi kharab ho gayi iski…

{raj uske kareeb jata hai, ishika car ka darwaza kholne ki koshish kar rahi hoti hai}

Raj: ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

{ishika koi jawaab nahi deti}

Raj: {shakes her} ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Ishika: raat mei dikhayi nahi deta kya? Darwaza khol rahi hu

Raj: tumne wine…???

Ishika: haaa.. per…tum..he isse kya hai? Jao yaha se….. go away….

{wo thik se khadi bhi nahi paa rahi thi, raj use pakadta hai to use dhakka deti hai}

Ishika: haat nahi lagana…

Raj: ok ok, ab ye nautanki bas karo aur chup chap yaha ruko main Sanaya ko bhejta hu, ghar chali jana

Ishika: aye Mr. tum hote kaun ho mujhe u order dene wale ha??? Apne aapko bada smaarrt samajhte ho… huh tumhe kya lagta hai main tum jaise chilgoze ke saath aaungi…{laughs}

Raj: whaatttt??? Kya kaha tumne?

Ishika: chilgoza kaha… kya kar loge ha? {laughs, she was about to fall..raj supports her}

Raj: shut up! Just shut up…main sanaya ko yehi bulata hu… {raj apna cell nikata hi hai ki ishika usse cell le leti hai}

Ishika: aye chilgoze chal mujhe ghar chod aa…

Raj: driver samajhke rakha hai kya?

Ishika: ha, shakal se lagte bhi ho…chalo ab jyada bakwaas mat karo aur chalo warna main….

Raj: kya??? Jo karna hai karo main nahi aa raha…

Ishika: dekho main zor zor se cheekhungi ….

Raj: main jaa raha hu tumko jo karna hai karo…..

{raj aage jaata hai to ishika zor zor se cheekhne lagti hai, tabhi wo na chahte hua bhi rukta hai aur uske saamne aake khada hota hai}

Raj: shutt uuuupppppppp!!!!

{she laughs out loud}

Raj: kya hai? Maine kya koi joke mara hai jo tum itni has rahi ho?

Ishika: khud hi cheekh rahe ho aur shut up bhi bol rahe… pure pagal ho tum.. {pulls his cheeks} per mujhe na tum bilkul ache nahi lagte…

Raj: mera bhi tumhara baare mei yehi nek khyaal hai… Ab isse pehle ki log yaha aaye aur mujhe galat samjhe chalo aya se….

Ishika: nahi…. ab mujhe nahi aana…

{raj neeche giri hui keys uthata hai car ka darwaza open karta hai aur zabardasti ishika ko bithata hai aur ghar le chalta hai… }

Ishika: maine kaha na mujhe nahi jana… tum kyu aaye… {aur wo raj ko marne lagti hai tabhi saamne se dusri car aa rahi hoti hai aur raj ek dumse side mei hota hai aur ped se gaadi takra jaati hai…. dono bhi wahi behosh hote hai.. Waha ke log unhe paas hi ke hospital le jaate hai.. Waha ka doctor Raj aur Aditya ka dost hota hai aur isiliye wo Aditya ko bhi inform karta hai. Aditya, Sanaya aur Rohan ghabraye se hospital pohochte hai…}

Aditya: sameer.. {doctor} Raj kaisa hai?

Sameer: use kya hona hai, bilkul thik hai.. bas halki si injury hai haath pe aur sar pe…

Sanaya: aur Ishika?

Sameer: wo bhi thik hai, haath mei laga hai.. per wo ab tak hosh mei nahi aayi hai, but that's nothing serious, she'll be fine too.

Aditya: thanks yaar

Sameer: oh c'mon yaar don't be so formal now, acha il leave, phir aaunga Raj se milne..

Rohan: hum unhe ghar le jaa sakte hai?

Sameer: ha ha…

Rohan: thanks..

Aditya: per ye accident hua kaise? Aur ye dono ek saath party se nikle the?

{sanaya ishika ke room mei jaati hai aur Aditya aur rohan raj se milne jaate hai.. Ab tak ishika ko hosh aata hai}

Sanaya: Ishika kaisi ho ab?

Ishika: hmm….

Sanaya: ye sab hua kaise? Tum aur Raj jaa kaha rahe the?

Ishika: mere sar mei bahot dard ho raha…..

Sanaya: don't worry tum aaram karo, hum baad mei baat karenge…

Raj's room….

Aditya: Raj ye sab hua kaise?

Raj: uss sar phiri ladki ki wajah se… Ab tak to shak tha ki wo pagal hai per ab yakeen ho gaya ki wo wakaye mei puri tarha se pagal hai…

Rohan: acha baba, filhaal tum aaram karo.. Phir ghar chalke baat karenge…Main ishika se mil aata hu..

Aditya: hmmm…

{rohan leaves}

Aditya: sach bata Raj aakhir hua kya?

Raj: wo baddimag ladki nashe mei dhuth parking mei mili aur ghar chodne ko kaha, jab mana kiya to cheekhne lagi aur jab chod raha tha to ye hua… Ajib balaa hai.. Lagta hai Yash uncle se kehna hoga ki kisi ache se mental asylum mei daaldo ise..

Aditya: {laughs} chal , ab rehne de… Ghar chal..kal baat karenge…

Raj: hmm… ouuucchh! Mera haath… chodunga nahi main use iske liye..

Aditya: ha ha, ab chal….

{rohan raj ko ghar le jaata hai.. Aditya ishika aur sanaya ko unke ghar le jata hai}

Aditya: ab kaisa lag raha hai?

Ishika: thik hu… per wo Raj mere saath kya kar raha tha

Aditya: tumne kuch jyada hi pi li thi wo to bas tumhari madat kar raha tha

Ishika: kyaa??? Maine aur sharab pi? Don't u know me Adi?

Sanaya: ha, ye to party mei thi bhi nahi… maine isi drink diya aur ye…. Oh no.. lagta hai ki mera wala glass Raj ne… oh noo…

Aditya: kya matlab?

Sanaya: actually jab main tumhare liye drink laane gayi thi tab Raj bhi wahi tha, shayad galati se main uska glass le aayi aur usne mera wala…

Ishika: im sure usne ye jaanbujhkar kiya hoga.. Im not gonna spare him for this. Samajhta kya hai wo apne aapko?

Aditya: stop it Ishika. Usne kaha na ki galati si hua hoga, ab iska issue banane ki zaroorat nahi hai.. Har baar har choti choti baat per tum usse ladti rehti ho… for god's sake apne ye differences khatm karlo and behave like a mature person. Galat fehmi tak thik tha per ab to hadh ho gayi hai… Wo kehta hai ki wo sirf meri wajah se saath hai to tum sirf Tanya ki wajah se.. Kya bachpana hai ye? Jiske jo dil mei aaye karo…

{saying this Aditya walks out banging the door}

Next day morning:

Aditya seedhe Raj ke ghar jaata hai…. Per waha dekhta hai ki Raj ki parents laut chuke hai…

Aditya: arre uncle aunty aap kab aaye?

Niharika: kal raat hi laute hai…

Vishal: tum bade hi sahi time pe aaye ho… Raj se pehle tumse ye baat karni thik hogi…

Aditya: kaisi baat?

Niharika: baat to Raj ke baare mei hai per ab tum mei aur Raj mei koi fark nahi to tumse bhi baat kar sakte hai

Aditya: beshak aunty kahiya na…

Vishal: Raj aur Ishika ki jodi kaisi rahegi?

Aditya: jiii?????? {aditya wahi shocked khada hota hai}

……..End Of part-2…….

Comments awaited!

Luv,

Ruksaar

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