CHADNI RAAT HAI TU MERE SAATH HAI

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Today I took self imposed evening holiday 😉 (doing home office). Read most of the posts, saved the FFs for reading them later & download the episodes, picmixes & VMs for watching them later in leisure 😃 (may be after one or two months, almost dying due to work pressure). But our show is ending or a time change???? 😭😭😭 God knows, hopefully time change.

All the posts here in the forum are very nice. Very sorry as I am not able to comment on each & every post due to my time constraint but I like all of them they are rocking like our show & lead pair. Whatever happened friends we all will njoy till the end…

After many days I wrote something 😳. Though it is not well planned, its kind of break time writing, pls bear with it, I will not disturb u all in very near future😊.

Now here goes my scene (shift from English to Hindi written in English).

CHADNI RAAT HAI TU MERE SAATH HAI

Rat ka samay hai. Sab apne apne kamre me so rahe hai.

Aaj khidki se chand ki roshni aa rahi thi isi liye kamre me pura andhera nehi tha.

Raj ko rah rah kar khasi aa rahi thi, kuch der baad uski need tut gayi. Woh pani pine ke liye uth kar baith gaya. Uski najar soyi hue Kranti ki taraf gayi.

Kranti uski tarfa pith kar ke soi thi. Raj apni khamosh najro se use dekhna laga. Sar pe dupatta nehi hai, kuch julfe bhi bikhdi hui hai. Pair ke payal abhi saaf dikh rahe hai. Raj ko us raat ki yaad ay gayi yehi payal usne apni hatho se utare the. Usne man hi man kaha ke Kranti ke to pair bhi kitne sundar hai aur fir has di, aur sochne laga ke saradin Kranti usse itni duri banayi rakhti hai ke Raj ko uski taraf dekhne se pahle bhi das bar sochna parta hai.

Par woh abhi is pal ka raja hai abhi khud Kranti bhi use niharne se nehi rokh sakti. Aur fir khasi….

Uski khasi ki awaz se Kranti thodi si hili aur Raj ne apni sans jaise rokh li ho, ta ke Kranti jag na jaye use koi paresani na ho. Aur Kranti ne karwat badli. Raj ko jaise bin mange bahat kuch mil gaya. Abhi Kranti ki chehra saaf dikh raha hai.

Kuch der bin palak jhapkae usko dekhne ke baad Raj ko laga Kranti uske saath aise kaise kar sakti hai. Woh uska pati hai uska pura haq banta hai apni biwi ko pyaar karne ka. Use laga ke jaise yeah chand ki roashni Kranti ke chu rahi hai usse lipti hui hai waise woh bhi usse lipat jae aur dil bhar ke pyaar kare. Sirf pyaar………….

Lekin kuch der baad ek hi baat uske jahan me ghumne laga …….. kash…………..

Do ankho se sab kuch apni man ki tijori me bandh kar raha tha. Aur man hi man need me hi Kranti ko sari khusiya de raha tha. Aur fir khasi …. Is bar thodi jada awaz ho gayi.

Kranti ki ankh khul gayi, bas kuch pal baad Kranti ne dekha ke Raj apni bistar me baitha hai aur uski taraf dekh raha hai. Pehle usse thora ajeeb laga fir woh apne aap ko samhal kar apne kapde thik thak karke uth kar baith gayi. Raj ne kuch kaha nehi lekin thoda thoda khash raha tha.

Kranti pani ki glass ki taraf dekh ke boli thoda pani pi lo aram milega. Raj use dekhe hi jar aha tha. Koi jabab nehi dia aur pani bhi nehi pia. Kranti aab sidhi uski tarfa dekh kar boli pani nehi hai keya. Raj fir bhi kuch nehi bola. Usse laga isi bahane hi sahi uski biwi itni suhani chandni raat me usse baat to kaar rahi hai. Yeah kheyal uske dimag me ate hi usne muskura dia.

Yeah dekh kar Kranti ko gussa aa gayi, usne kaha yeah keya hai main pagal ko tarha boli ja rahi hai aur koi sirf hash raha hai.

Raj ne uski baat pakad li aur kaha chalo yeha jabab me koi hash to raha hai main jab pagal dewane ki tarah apni dil ki baat kisiko batata hu mujhe sirf daat milti hai. khasi….

Kranti kuch kahne ja rahi thi lekin usne bistar se uth kar glass ko Raj ki taraf barhaya aur kaha pi lo aur chupchap so jao.

Raj ne glass nehi lia saratbhari muskaan ke sath kaha pani to pi lunga lekin so jao ka keya matlab. Ajkal need bhi sayad mujhse darne lagi hai isi liye mere paas nehi ati. Abhi woh

sidhi Kranti ki ankho me dekh raha hai.

Kranti ne apni ankhe jukha li. Gusse me glass ko jor se table rakh di aur kaha jise pani pina ho piye, sona ho soye, mujhe need aa rah hai main sone ja rahi hu.

Fir woh apne bistar ma ja kar let gayi.

Raj ne pani pi li lekin soya nehi, waise hi baitha raha. Abhi Kranti fir se uski taraf pith kar ke soyi hai.

Raj soch raha tha ke ekdin ke liye hi sahi kuch pal ke liye hi sahi usne Kranti ko bahhat karib se dekha hai, apne dil se usko mehsus kiya hai, pure imandari se usko apnaya hai ek pati ki tarah. Use us tufani raat ki ek ek baat yaad aa raha tha. Uske dil me ek tufan uth raha tha.

Kranti so to gayi thi lekin use need nehi aa rahi thi, use pata tha ke Raj usko dekh raha hai, apne najro se uski badan ko chu raha hai. Yeah sab soch ke woh fir uth kar baith gayi. Raj chawk gaya aur pucha keya hua?

Kranti Chupchap Raj ko dekh rahi hai gusse se. Raj ko maja aaya.

Usne muskurake kaha lo bhai need bhi ajkal daat khane se nehi darti.

K: Tum meri taraf kyun aise dekh rahe ho?

R: Kaise? (sararatbhari ankho se dekha)

K: M.. M… Meri matlab hai ke tum dekh kyun rahe ho?

R: Tum aankh khol ke ya bandh karke dekhne ki baat kar rahe ho?

K: (Thoda chawk gayi) Yeah keya tha?

R: Tumhara question clear kar raha tha. (Khasi…)

K: Matlab….

R: Mujhe to ankh bandh kar ke aur khol k ek hi jan dikhai deti hai.

K: Kaun?

Raj ne sirf muskuraya. Raj ke hasi dekh Kranti sarama si gayi. Usne apni najre jhuka li thi. Raj ko yakin nehi ho raha tha apne kismet pe ke Kranti ne keya sachmuch uski ankhe par li thi. Raj man hi man bahek ne laga tha.

Kranti garden jhukake soch rahi thi ke woh fir se kyun sarma rahi hai woh bhi Raj ke samne uske baate sun ke, lekin keya kare dil pe har waqt jor nehi chalta. Apne ap ko samhal lit hi aur apne aap se gussa bhi thi.

Raj ne fir khasi…..

Kranti ne use dekha aur kaha kisi aur ka nehi sahi kames kam apne aap ka to thik se kheyal rakh sakte ho.

R: Mujhe apne aap ko thik rakhne ke liye jo chahiye woh mil hi nehi rahi hai, keya karu? Lekin ek baat to tai hai woh mujhe mil kar hi rahegi.

Fir dono kuch der chupchap. Lekin Raj banto ke bahane hi sahi Kranti ke karib ana chahta tha. Kranti ki jhuki chehre ko dekhte huye usne fir baat suru ki.

R: Woh agar mere paas hoti to main apna aur uska dil o jaan se kheyal rakhta, kisi bhi dard ko, gam ko, dukh, paresani ko uske karib bhi nehi ane deta.

Kranti sun rahi thi uski dil aur sunna chahta tha lekin use to bimari hai ….dimag ke hato majbur usne uski aur Raj ki is pal ki khusiyan chhin ne ke liye ….. apne najre utha ke sidhi Raj ke ankho me dekha aur kaha

K: Hya agar….

Raj bhi uski ankho me dekh raha hai.

K: Agar Manpreet abhi yeha hoti to…

Raj jaise bin awaz tut gaya. Un dono ke ankho me dard tha. Kranti soch rahi thi kyun use khusi nehi milti aajkal Raj ko dukh de kar.

Raj kuch pal waise baitha raha use gussa aa raha tha kispe pata nehi. Uska dimag sun ho gaya tha. Kuch socha nehi pa raha tha. Woh Kranti ke paas gaya aur Kranti ke kuch samajh ne se pehle hi ek hath se Kranti ka hath pakar ke kicha aur ek hath se Kranti ko kamar se pakad liya. Daat ghees kar kaha agar Manpreet hoti to main……….

Kranti ke dono hath Raj ke sine pe hai woh Raj ko jitna apne aap se dur karne ki koshis kar rahi hai Raj usse jada jor se usko apni taraf kich ke pakda hua hai.

Raj ke ankhe dekh Kranti thodi dar gayi thi. Raj ne fir se kaha agar Manpreet hoti to…….

Usne Kranti ko to pehle hi usne apne baho me le liya tha abhi uske hoth Kranti ke kandho aur gale pe ghum rahe the, uske dono haath Kranti ke pith par aur sar ke piche ghum rahe the.

Kuch pal dono aise hi the…… us raat ki madhoshi, pagalpan wapas aa raha the dono me. Abhi Kranti ke hath Raj ke pith pith par ghum rahe the….. woh Raj ko apne aap se dur karne koshis to bilkul nehi kar rahe the. Dono ke hi ankhe bandh the. Kranti ko apni dimag ki sudh nehi thi aur uski dil Raj ko pyaar karma chahta tha.

Lekin Raj ko kheyal aya woh abhi Kranti ko sapne me bhi majbur nehi kar sakta hai kisi bhi baat ke liye, to woh yeah keya kar raha hai. Woh Kranti ko pana chahta hai, uske liye woh sari jindagi wait kar sakta hai. Jab Kranti apne marji se uske paas ayegi tabhi…. Tab tak woh integar karega.

Usne Kranti ke baal sar ke piche se pyaar se pakad ke kicha aur Kranti ka chehra dekh raha tha. Kranti ke ankhe bandh thi, uski chehre pe koi sikayat nehi thi, chand ki roshni se uska chehra chamak raha tha.

Raj ne kaha tum Manpreet nehi ho, tum Kranti ho, meri biwi, meri humsafar, jaise bhi ho hum e saath chalna hai. Hum e ek dusre ko samajh na hai, sathi banana hai, jitna waqt chahiye hum ek dusre ko denge.

Kranti ke ankho se pani bah raha tha. Raj ko use apne aap se alag karne ka dil nehi kar raha tha lekin woh galti dauhra nehi sakta. Usne Kranti ke mathe ko chuma aur uske ansu poche fir dhire dhire apne hath dhile chod diye. Kranti ankhe bandh kar ke baithi thi, uski dil aur dimag ke bich jang chal rahi thi.

Raj uth kar Kranti taraf pith kar ke khidki ke samne khada ho gaya. Uska saya Kranti ke upar par raha tha, usime jaise Kranti apne aap ko mehfuz aur mehsush kar rahi thi. Lekin waqt chahiye……Raj ki yeah baat sahi hai….

Raj fir khas raha tha. Kranti ne kaha khidki ke paas khade rahne se thand lag sakti hai, khasi bar jayegi. Aab andar a jao.

Dono ek dusre se najre nehi milana chahte the fir bhi Raj ne kaha andar aa jaunga lekin koi kitna bhi daate sone ki gurantee nehi de sakta. Yeah sun Kranti ne muskura diya.

K: Agar need nehi ati hai to baat kar sakte hai.

Raj ko laga aaj ki raat sachme bahat suhani hai. Sari jindagi yeah dusri raat hai jo usse yaad rahegi.

Woh jake jamin pe Kranti ke sath baith gaya, dono ko ek dusre ko na dekhne pare is liye dono khidki ke taraf pith kar ke pas pas baith gaye.

Kranti ne Raj ko pani diya Raj ne piya. Kuch der khamosi ke baad Kranti ne Raj se kaha kal baid ji ya doctor paas jane ke liye, Raj ne kaha itna serious kuch nehi hai, fir Kranti ne pucha khasi huyi kaise……………………….. (ek baat se dusri baat, dusri se tisri …. dono baat karte gaye).

Abhi khidki se chand nehi nayi subhah ki pehli pehli mithi roshni aa rahi hai, Raj aur Kranti dono almari me pith laga ka pair pasar ke baithe baithe so rahe hai, Kranti ka sar Raj ke kandhe pe hai, dono ke hath ek saath hai Raj ke pair ke upar. Jag bhul dono so rahe hai, abhi ye dono na dushman hai na dost dono sirf Raj aur Kranti hai.

Abhi din charega roshni tej hogi, har waqt sab kuch sundar ya pyara to nehi hota, dekhte hai age in dono ka keya hota……………..

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poetic thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Bonai, it's beautiful. What a lovely scene!

Loved it, the way the two sat down and talked to each other.

Lovely.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was really cute and nice..

liked it.. atleast in FF we get Raj and K together...

thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woow Bonai.. that was such a sweet scene... I just loved it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum yaar ..........
why u said dat we hav 2 bear u.........
if dis s called 2 bear sumone de WE R PROUD 2 BEAR U..............
AWEEESUMMMMMMMM
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwww bonai its so beutiful i just love its to good dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aati1429

hey that was really cute and nice..

liked it.. atleast in FF we get Raj and K together...

thanks

yeah v only want RK togetther just great work 👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow it was really fantastic . Raj and kranti talking!I dont think that we will see this in show😭. the scene was really sensible. well written
Bonai👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow bonai superb
We get only in ff R & K emotion love cmpassion 2gether
brillant work
wait 2 read more
we hve amazing scriptwriters in our ff who want
R&k 2 gether
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks Poetic, aati, pennu, akshruti, pari, simran, nidhi, sasha, shuleen for ur comments and all other who read the scene. After so many weeks I managed some time from my work and MRD is ending. Its very frustrating 😡😡 & depressing 😕😭.
Abhi keya kar sakte hai.......... Pray to see Prabhleen & Gavie in some other project. love u all 🤗

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