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gossipgal

@gossipgal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hi there, just joined this forum. very interesting and gripping ff. sounds like a novel.:)p. this is my 1st ever post. you must continue. great concept. the title attracted me towards this ff, its my all time favorite song. very well.

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

this sounds really good please continue!!!

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hey
that was an amazing update 👏 nice concept and first chapter. Hopefully prem is thinking about heer.. cant wait to read the next part...continue soon. 😊

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

title is grt👍🏼.1st pt is very touching and i can feel the ache.u r a grt writer.plz continue soon

-😊sugi

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

It goes without saying that if you're writing it, I'm reading it. So, here I am.

As for comments, I will edit this space in the morning. Its 4 AM...I just read part 1, but I think I'm gonna need to read it again in the AM before I can really comment...feeling rather brain dead at this hour...if ya know what I mean.

But, I will say this: I'm excited that you've started another one. Two-two Jaz fics at once is always good. Heer's secret has me highly annoyed at the moment...and I have a feeling this one's gonna just break my heart...

More comments in after I've slept for a bit...

Love,
~P

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Jaz! Awesome, a FF? I think I've read the others, but not completely, and never commented. Heh.

But this is so intriguing. The first part alone draws me in, it's so compelling! I want to know what has led Prem to this point, to drinking, alone, on his anniversary. What that one person has done that has led him to this. And he probably hates the fact that he has become this, especially because his father was a drunk too.

So intriguing, I cannot wait to see where you take this!

Love,

Radz

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Jinx_7

@Jinx_7

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

very interesting cant wait to read more

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

BTW, is this story going background?

Bcs first of all, AMAZING part Jas...the line "Prem sat their in his darkened room, dark just like his life..." that line just ate away at me...

FANTASTIC update!

Seriously, I was thinking something else about the whole story. Like Heer shows him the way to live etc and mostly, this reminded me of Kitani Mohabbat Hai for some reason...another EK show.

This line "One person who had made time stand still, one person that had taken his breath away, one person that had stolen his heart...one person, that was no longer part of his life. " can just tell you what he must have been going through...

Amazing!

For some reason, this story seems...different...I keep thinking if it will be like Jab We Met😆😆😆

~Shifu

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shabo24
MINE! =] well well...SOMEONE is possessive...SHABBO!!! 😉😉😉

I'm first!! Can't touch this. 😎 duh nuh nuh nuh...totally doing the MC Hammer move

First of all, the TITLE, just makes your heart break, specially after you read part one. What has Prem J. gone through, that on his ANNIVERISARY, he is sitting all alone, drinking?? Sounds like some serious stuff to me! Anyway, AMAZING start! I loved it, specially how you described everything, you really have a way with words. 😃 And INTERESTING charachter sketchs....really..can't wait to see the stories progressing!!! Why do I have the feeling you are going to do something completly OUTRAGEUOUS? 😛 he he...in case you havent already guessed it...this ff is not going to be a smooth ride 😛😛😛...just you wait and watch...what i do with this 😈😈😈...i know...i know...you have a few questions...a few thoughts and suspicions...but but but...all i can say is that you have to stay tuned to find out where this ff is going 😛😛😛...😉😉😉...and haila...outrageous...and ME...never!!! 😉

--shabz

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~
hey, omg.. sounds very interesting..and i love reading ur ff's!! cant wait to see how this one develops too!! update soon, and take care...
~nikki😳

thanks for reading my ff...glad that are interested in this one...😃😃😃

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
oooo Jaz this is the first time I'm reading your ff! 😛

Sounds really interesting! 😃 Love the name and the way you added in the the lyrics! 😳

Hmmm Prem's married?? 😊 I'm surprised...but I can't wait to see what happens next! 😃😃😳

Love you,

Meera😳

hey meera...welcome to my ff...😃😃...im glad that you liked it...you will just have to wait and see what is going to happen with Prem...or what happened with Prem 😉😉😉...i like to torture my readers just a little bit 😛😛...but you will get used to it...ask anyone 😆😆

Originally posted by: srklover93
OMG Jaz!!! Another FF???? Sweet!!!!!!! and as always this one is ROCKING!!!!!!😆😆

I love the whole concept!! and yes it is very different than your other FF's!!! Can't wait to read further!! It sounds really very interesting!!! continue soon!!

Byee!!!!!!
Garima 😳😳😳

yup yup...another ff...just playing with another idea i had 😆😆...lets see how this one turns out...ive pretty much got the whole thing planned out...i just have to get it down on paper 😉😉😉...glad that you enjoyed it...😳😳

JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
hey
interesting title and ff
prem is married
soo touching emotinal chap 1
nice too goood

thanks for liking my ff yaar...lets see how far i can drag this one 😳😳

Originally posted by: ravioli_11
Hey Jaz *waves* Hi *waves back* 😆

I've been a silent reader of your previous FFs and I think your an amazing writer =) haila...silent reader breaking their silence...wah wah...👏👏...i do hope to see more of you comments from now on...😃😃😃...im really glad you like my work...😳

First off, I LOVE that song! It's so sad and depressing and yet I love it =) i love it too...i thought its a really good song...the lyrics just...WOW⭐️⭐️

Wow Prem's married? And yet he's not happy about it being his anniversary? I wonder why...It's all seems mysterious and all. Might be cuz you haven't revealed anything else yet😆 Can't wait to read the next update😳 is he married or isnt he...lol...that is the question...you will just have to stay tuned to see what i have planned for our dashing Prem!! 😳😳😳...you are right...i havent revealed anything yet have i...😈...im evil like that 😆😆

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey new ff
congrants n yeh sounds relly gud totally different from ur othe ff dat iv read hpe dis 1 is just as gud

best of luk

tc

thanks for reading my ff...this one will be different...just stay tuned 😉

JAZ

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