FF- Rab ne bana di Jodi!!!-Parts 20,21&22-END 4/4/ - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
awesome fanfic hun!
just loved it! loved Ekta Mai in this😆 she is just super cool in this!😃😃😃
like how shivgauri relation is shapin up and how gauri seems to be in love with shiv! and SRK awesome!😆
hmmm prateek is back.. wonder wht he wants or wht his plan is! looks like, Alok did manipulate some things to get shivgauri married.. wonder wht he is hidin!
and just love Anupam and his lines!
great work hun👏 keep it up😛😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

oye di..... roqin gal...im sooooo sorry fr replyingg late..... bt i did hav 2 catch my breath baq!! loollzz well....AMAZINGG...dats da only wrd i kno...hehe i think khair...FAB yaar i LUV it!!!!!!! x muah x luv shivvyyyy!!

Thanks Rockstar...even I luv Shivvyyyy....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome fanfic hun!
just loved it! loved Ekta Mai in this😆 she is just super cool in this!😃😃😃
like how shivgauri relation is shapin up and how gauri seems to be in love with shiv! and SRK awesome!😆
hmmm prateek is back.. wonder wht he wants or wht his plan is! looks like, Alok did manipulate some things to get shivgauri married.. wonder wht he is hidin!
and just love Anupam and his lines!
great work hun👏 keep it up😛😛😛

Thanks Guruji...so glad you liked it...hehe always wanted Shiv-Gauri together but Ekta mai separated them...so thought of uniting them...😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
yaar i thought to reply 4r ur first part but now it seems i should reply all the 8 parts.n yaar i didn't even read it till now as iam busy with my project😆.dont even know what iam exactly doing with my project but still being very busy with it😆.anyhow yaar.i will read the whole ff on sat n will reply on the same day yaar😊😊😊.
sorry yaar😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: soniayk6

yaar i thought to reply 4r ur first part but now it seems i should reply all the 8 parts.n yaar i didn't even read it till now as iam busy with my project😆.dont even know what iam exactly doing with my project but still being very busy with it😆.anyhow yaar.i will read the whole ff on sat n will reply on the same day yaar😊😊😊.

sorry yaar😊😊😊

Hehe😆😆😆...no probs yaar...take your own time....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

PART 9:

"Hi Gauri! How are you?"

Gauri was just too shocked to react…she just walked off from there…Shiv…poor thing…he did'nt know what to do…he smiled at Prateek…but Prateek just snubbed him….so Shiv turned back towards Gauri…She left towards home…

At home…as Shiv entered…."Shiv!" Gauri just hugged him….she was crying non-stop…Shiv tried to pacify her…but in vain…

"Why has he come back Shiv? Why? I had compromised with my life and my happiness…then why has he come back?" she cried….

"I had compromised with my life and my happiness" these words struck Shiv right in his heart…My Gauri was compromising her life and her happiness with me….n I thought that she has forgotten her past….!" Thought Shiv.

"Don't worry Gauri, everything will be alright!"

The next morning, the phone rings

Gauri: Hello!

Kaya:Di…it's me…I want to met you urgently…please.

Gauri: Why don't you come over?

Kaya: no di, let's met at Caf House…

Gauri: Alright!

Kaya came …but not alone …she came with Prateek….

That evening, nothing was alright; Shiv's life was in for a big u-turn….

As Shiv came back from office…

Gauri: So Mr Kapoor, how was your day in office?

Gauri's tone surprised Shiv….

Shiv: "Mr Kapoor?"

Gauri: Yes and how's Mr Smith?

Shiv: Who? Mr Smith? Who's he?

Gauri: Really! Don't you know Mr Smith…the CEO of KPNC projects!

Shiv: No, Gauri, I seriously don't know what you are talking about?

Gauri: Really? So weren't you the one to call up Prateek…and trap him into your plan…so that he goes to London…n you succeed in your plan to marry me?

Shiv: What are you saying Gauri? N what plan are you talking about? I met you for the first time in the marriage itself!

Gauri: You can't fool me no more, Mr Shiv Kapoor! You pretended to be an angel whereas you were the devil of my life….its b'coz of you that Prateek is not in my life…you are such a loser…u wanted to marry me that's why you decided to remove my love out of your way….Your disgusting,Mr Kapoor! I hate you…I hate you from the bottom of my heart….

Shiv: Gauri...I still am unable to understand what you're saying!

Gauri: Stop being this innocent Shiv…Today I met Prateek and he told me the truth….he told me that you were the one who had hoaxed a call to him in the name of Mr Smith…you knew how important this project was for him…u are a cheat! A liar! U've betrayed me Shiv….u've played with my trust….

Shiv: Gauri…I didn't even know you before our marriage…forget knowing you…I hadn't even seen you…

Gauri: Oh yeah! Then how come Ekta mai got your marriage proposal to my baba….which I rejected it straight away…I guess you couldn't take in the rejection...That's why you planned this out right????

Shiv was absolutely clueless about what Gauri was saying…..

Shiv: Gauri…what are you speaking? I just don't understand a thing….

Gauri: Don't act smart Mr Kapoor! U n ur di ruined my life…n now you are behaving as if you know nothing!

Shiv was almost in tears…he didn't know what was happening…what was wrong with his Gauri??? His thoughts were interrupted…

Gauri: Mr Shiv Kapoor…I can't stand your presence in my life no more….in fact I don't want to be a part of your life either…..I'm leaving you and this house for good….n ya…the lawyers would send you the Divorce papers very soon!

She went to her room…packed her bags…and as she opened the door…Ekta Mai and Gopal were standing outside….

Ekta mai calmy asked her: Whats the matter Gauri? Why are you so upset?

Gauri: Wow! Now this is news! Don't you know…after all you are the great future teller…The great Ekta Mai…who takes decisions of other peoples life….you n Shiv are responsible for spoiling and ruining my life! And now I have decided that I've had enough…I want my life back…n that life is only possible with my Prateek!

Ekta : Gauri, calm down, we need to speak…..

Gauri: No…I've taken my decision…n Thank you very much for playing with my life and my dreams…

Ekta: No Gauri, please calm down and let me explain…..

Gauri refused to listen…

Shiv: Di, let her go…..

Ekta: No, Shiv….Gauri listen….

Gauri walked out of the house and caught a taxi…Di ran after the taxi...But in vain…..

As Ekta mai walked back home, She looked at Shiv…she just couldn't face Shiv …she turned back towards her home…when

Gopal: Where are you going Ekta Mai? I think you owe us an explanation for what has just happened? Why did bhabhi say what she just said?

Ekta Mai remained silent…she didn't speak a word…She was walking towards her house…

Gopal: No Mai…u can't leave till you give us an explanation for what's happened? Do you understand what I'm saying or?"

Shiv: Gopal….let Di go…till date I've never questioned her for anything…and I'll never do that ever…

Gopal: Maybe you don't want an explanation...but I demand an explanation! She has ruined the life of my best friend! How can you expect me to let go off her?

Ekta: I haven't ruined anyone's life!!!! Neither Shiv's nor Gauri's!!!!!!

Do comment😉 Pria
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

hi pria!! wat u made shiv's life in vain!!poor shiv.will gauri return baq 2 shiv?hope she comes 2 shiv.wating for the next part.continue ASAP.hope the mystery reveals soon

jeni
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

omg!!!

amazingg!!

now u seriously haftaa cont sooon

otherwise my stomach will keep achingg!!

LMAO!!

fab part

cont soooooon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
sheeesh! Gauri woman😡! after all tht happened! she is doin this! and goin with Prateek!poor shiv! i really don't want Shiv to take her back when Prateek breaks her so called trust and love ROYALLY!
nice update hun.. feelin bad for Shiv, but nice update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
oh hooo now wht happened yaar my shivy babyyy awwwwwwww feeling xtreamly bad 4r him now em eagerly waitin 4r nxtt
saba

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