January 14th Update....Very Detailed

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys! I thought I'd try to do an update...it's my first time and wow, hats off to those who do this regularly! Hope it makes sense!

Episode begins with a few shots of Kundanpur. A car drives through (it's Kaveri). The driver tells Kaveri that Kundanpur has arrived and asks where she would like to go. She responds by telling the driver to the Kundanpur school.

Scene shifts to Bhatia House....

Sagar and Jhanvi are sitting along with Shubot and Shanta. Jhanvi is crying and Shubot is trying to reach Kaveri's cell but it is not reachable.
Shubot to Sagar: The whole night has passed and there has been no contact with Kaveri.

Sagar to Shubot: Leave it Jija ji, one day or another the truth had to come out, so why not today?

Shanta to Sagar: No Sagar, don't say that. If you talk like that, then Kaveri will never believe you. She will only think Bua ji's words are right.

Jhanvi to Shanta: But we can't stop her now Didi. She's in Kundanpur now where more than half the people there recognize me. It won't take her even a moment to know about me.

Scene shifts back to Kundanpur....

Kaveri gets out of her car and asks someone sitting outside about meeting the principal. The guy tells her that the principal has gone on holiday.
Kaveri: Taraji...do you know where she is?
Guy: Tara ji? Yes,Tara ji, just a few days back, she left Kundanpur forever! Did you have any work with her?
Kaveri looks disappointed: Yes I did. How about Govind Kaka? Can you tell me his house address or anything?
Guy: Govind Kaka, yea, I know him, but I haven't seen him in a few days. I'll show you his house.

Back at Bhatia house...

Sagar standing and looking at his wedding picture with Kaveri. Jhanvi walks up and sees him looking at the picture. Sagar turns to look at her, both are crying. Shanta and Shubot also walk in, everyone looks sad.
Gudiya then walks in and reachs for Jhanvi's hand : Mamma why are you crying?
Jhanvi looks at her then leaves. Sagar watches her leave.

Back in Kundanpur....

Kaveri and that guy are walking through Kundanpur, he's taking her to Govind Kaka's house.

Kaveri: I'm out of breath walking. How much further is his house?

Guy: I've been to his house once, it is here somewhere. I'll just ask someone.

He asks someone that is sitting on the road where it is.
Guy #2: The house in the next alley..May God give his soul peace.

Kaveri and Guy #1 both look back and are shocked!

*Break*

Scene starts with Kaveri asking: What do you mean? What happened to Govind Kaka?

Guy#2: You don't know? He gets up, just a few days back, he died. I thought that is why you came.

Kaveri continues to look shocked.

Guy #1 : So sad, but he had a son too, didn't he?

GUy #2: Yes he did, he runs the store in the bazaar

Kaveri: Can you please take me to his store?

Guy #2 takes them there.

Mandir ...

Jhanvi is walking up the stairs with hymns in the background. Jhanvi in front of God is crying and says: I promised Gudiya that I would always stay with her. I've only ever wanted happiness for that house, that there be no sorrow. But today, the biggest problem in that house is me. What didn't that house give me? Love, a new name, new relationships? And what am I giving in return? (Kalesh?) What should I do God, please help me. (folding hands) How can I save that house? (crying) How can I save that house?

Bua walks up behind her: The answer to this question, not even god has Jhanvi.

Jhanvi turns around, wipes her tears. Bua walks towards her. Jhanvi stares.

Bua : What should I call you? Jhanvi or Ganga. Ram ji jhoot na bulvai, I don't like either names. But tell me, which name should I call you? What happened? You were just asking God, and now suddenly, you have shut your mouth? Now tell me how you will save the house. You will save the house only if you live there. You got me kicked out of the house now it's your turn to leave. By now Kaveri must have reached Kundanpur and I've heard that everyone in Kundanpur knows you. Meaning Kaveri must know the truth.

Ganga looks shocked.

Bua: What happened? Why is your face like that? Should I tell you something? Whether you are in front of her or at her feet, Kaveri will never forgive you. Forget forgiveness, she will never believe anything you ever say. I want to ask you something, please don't put God in tension by asking him for help. God can't even help you even if he wanted to.

Back in Kundanpur..

Kaveri is walking along with the two men. The street guy stops: Oh no, I forgot. That boy has gone to Benaras for his father's shrad (?)

Kaveri looks at him

Guy#2: Now what will we do?

Back at Mandir...

Sagar: I will never let this happen. Both Bua and Jhanvi turn to look at Sagar.

*Break*

Sagar begins to walk towards Jhanvi and Bua.

Sagar: I knew you would never leave your get out of your pranks. That is why it is necessary to get you what you deserve.

Sagar turns and the police walk into the Mandir (they have shoes in the Mandir!!!) Bua, Jhanvi and Sagar look on.

Sagar: Take her
Police handcuffs Bua. Bua looks at Sagar and then at her handcuff.

Bua: You want to punish me? Just remember, your whole life will become a punishment. You want peace by sending me to jail? Your peace will be taken once Kaveri returns from Kundanpur. She will ask for a divorce!

Sagar: Stop it Buaji, please take her away. Sagar and Jhanvi leave.

Bua: Take her (Jhanvi), she will ruin everything, set fire to everything in that house, the peace, happiness, she will take everything. Sagar and Jhanvi look at Bua.

Bua then goes on to tell the police basically the whole story about how Jhanvi "trapped" Sagar in love. When he married someone else, she changed her name and came back. If you had any shame, you should have drowned yourself. But no, look, without any shame, look at how you are looking at me.

Sagar: Enough, take her!

Bua: Stop, you think by sending me to jail, you will lessen her bad luck? I will not stay quiet, I will scream to the world her truth. First she killed my Shekhar, then she ruined Sagar's life, stole Kaveri's happiness.

Bua continues to say many mean things to Jhanvi and Sagar goes to slap her but is stopped by the police inspector.

Police Inspector: Mr. Bhatia, she is in Police custody and you cannot raise your hand.

Sagar: Take her away from here inspector, take her!

Police Inspector: Relax, take her in the van.

Bua leaving says good will never happen!

Sagar looks at Jhanvi who is standing staring at the police jeep.

In Kundanpur...

Kaveri: What do I do now? I will not leave here without knowing the answers to my questions.
Kaveri then has flashbacks of what Bua told her about how Jhanvi knows so much about Ganga. Kaveri remembers all of this and then ends up fainting. The two men are talking and notice her falling. Kaveri's purse drops. The street guy tells Kaveri to sit and tells the other guy to get water.

Bhatia house...

Shanta and Shubot are sitting.
Shubot: I am upset thinking about what will happen when Kaveri returns from Kundanpur.
Shanta: That will happen what we are all afraid of. I don't think kaveri will listen to anything we have to say.
Shubot: By now, she probably knows the truth. And after knowning the truth, no one will be able to make Kaveri understand. Jhanvi will have to leave this house regardless.

Gudiya hears this and says: No! My mom will not go anywhere.
Shanta and Shubot look at her. I will not let her go anywhere. She promised me that she will not leave me ever.
Shanta runs after a crying Gudiya. Close up on Shubot's tensed face.

Kundanpur...

Kaveri's purse has fallen down. One of the guys bends down to pick up the purse and Jhanvi's photo has fallen out. He reaches for the photo and looks at it shocked. He asks Kaveri: Do you know her? (Jhanvi). She is from here!

Kaveri: What! You know Jhanvi?

Guy: No no Madam, you must be mistaken. This isn't Jhanvi's picture, it is Ganga's.

Kaveri is shocked: This is Jhanvi!

Guy: No madam, this is our Ganga beti.

Kaveri continues to look shocked. Words replay in her head of Bua and what the guy just told her. Camera is spinning around Kaveri and ends there.

Precap: Gudiya crying asks Jhanvi " You won't leave me and go anywhere right Mamma?"
Kaveri to Jhanvi: "Enough Jhanvi! These fake tears will not do anything for me now. Take your stuff and leave from this house!"
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thnx for the update sweetie.
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Wow...What an amazing update for your first time...Fabulous


I hate Kaveri now...What a freak...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I feel so bad for Ganga, always she is crying...this gal has never had happiness....I hope one day the creatives will dry up her tears!

Thanks for ur wonderful update!

Edited by desicutie831 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
You sure thats your first update?? it was awesome!
Today was an interesting episode!
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Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww shucks, thanks guys 😳
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How can Kaveri ask Jhanvi to leave the house even after knowing she is Ganga?!?!?!
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hry wat a epi!

wonder what will happen nexT!
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Thanks for the nice update 😆
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Execellent update, thank you and well done, considering this is your 1st you seem like a pro

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