(FF) Meri Jaan - Update page 51 - 14.06.09

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Pooja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Great update Charri......loved it......😃

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@RosyRosh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Brilliant job charri! Love your SS!! Its soo cute!

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Suhana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Great update Charri!! I'm already loving this FF...oops sorry SS...(any chance of this turning into a FF??).....please continue soon!!

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-CharriMango-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

^^ Hehe, thanks a lot Suha! Chance of turnign into a FF? Sorry to say this, but no. I'm too busy with school and homework. This year at school is very very important for me. Sowwie hun<3

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

wow charri di!! aweosome updates!! luv your ss sooooo much!! cant wait to see what happens!! and what u said on the first update(the trash part) so nooooooooot true!!dont ever think that, cuz youre a really awesome writer!! fantastic updates, glad i read it!! thanks for the wonderful updates, and update when and if u can plz, thanks

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Charri - what a lovely SS! 😊

LOL .. that Aditya he is a bit vain, but innocent. Good for him, keeping to his principles! Bet that drinking every Friday night is gonna catch up with him somehow. 😉

Deepika sounds just lovely - very sweet and responsible.

Is Deepika gonna change Aditya for the better once they met again? Or will Aditya make Deepika more relaxed and fun loving. Hmmmm ... or jes maybe, their oh so different personalities are gonna clash big time! <grin>

Can't wait to find out - more please! Enjoyed the terrific start to your SS Charri! Update when you can, of course. 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

^^ Haii, thanks a lot my beauties... *blushing*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Hi guys! I'm back with a new update! Hope you'll like it=)

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Part 3, The Cinema Trip

-Deepika's POV-

It was now 8pm and I was standing outside Riya's house. I waited some minutes and then I saw her coming out of the door. "Hey Deep", she said. "Hey Riya!" I gave her a hug and we both sat down in the car. We drove to Tara's house to pick her up now. She was already standing outside. She sat in the car and then we drove to Nadia's house. We arrived and I saw that she wasn't standing outside. I went outside of my car and to her door. I knocked on the door. Her mother opened the door. I knew her very well. I took her blessings and gave her a hug. "Gunjan Aunty, is Nadia upstairs?" She smiled and nodded. I left and went up to her room. I opened her door and to my suprise she wasn't alone. "Eeew..." I said to myself. Her boyfriend Varun was on top of her and they were kissing like crazy. They hadn't realized I was there. I cleared my throath and they come out of it. They both stood up and looked embarrased. "Nadia, you finished with Varun?" I asked her. "Ehm... m... yes, let's go" She gave Varun a kiss and all three of us went out. Varun drove home and we four drove to the cinema. "Arre yaar Nadia, why did you took so long time?" asked Tara. "I..." I stopped her. "Let me tell you. She was busy with *ehem ehem* Varun". All of us started to laugh and Nadia looked embarrased.

We went in to the cinema to buy tickets. We had decided to watch Dostana. We heard it was pretty good film. We went to in the hall and sat down on our seats. While watching the movie we were eating popcorn and candy. Though we were 24years old, we still loved candy. "Damn he looks hot here!" said Tara. "Eew... do you like John?" I asked her. I didn't like John Abraham at all. He wasn't hot at all. But his 6-pack was nice... "Actually yeah, I like him!" she said. I rolled my eyes. I just coudn't get why she like him. We watched the movie finished. I can say that it was a funny movie. We went to my car and sat in.

"Girls, why don't we go to the Disco?" said Riya. "Yaar, you know that I don't like to go there." I said. I had never drunk any alcohol in my entire life. "You don't need to drink or anything. I just want to have some girl nightout. It will be fun, trust me!" I sighed and agreed. All of us drove there. I parked the car and we went in.

I could almost not see anything here because of the smoking. People were drinking and smoking like crazy. It didn't smell good either. It was loud music too. We went to the bar and sat us down. "Uff... it's smells smoke here" I sniffed. I was starting to get sick of it. "I think we should go" I said. "Yaar, we just came here! Can't we just be here 1-2 hours? I promise we'll go home after 1-2 hours," said Riya. I sighed and agreed. The music got louder and more people started to dance. We stood up all four and walked to the dancefloor. There was some guys who was crowded by many girls. Looks like he was drunk. "Hey sexy, wanna go outside?" a man asked Riya. "No thanks, I'm fine here" she said. She looked at us and we were looking at her. All of us started to laugh. "Why does he think about himself?" said Nadia. We laughed even more. Then we started to dance again.

Everyone was checking up Riya. Well, she had a short red dress on. We saw some guys a little bit away. One of them was looking at Riya the whole time while another talked to another guy. I felt I had seen this guys before. I turned around and didn't care about that thought. I saw Riya looking at that guy. She even winked at him. He just smiled. Riya turned around to us again. "Omg, that guy over there is just so hot! Actually all four of them are hot!" I heard Riya saying. "Omg, isn't that Varun?" I asked. "That really looks like him, but I don't think it's him. He doesn't come at disco's and stuff" she said. After a while they went out.

It was now 2am and we were sitting in the car. Riya was half drunk and Nadia and Tara was sitting on the backseats with her. She was laughing and singing the whole time. A lot of what she said, we didn't understand. Sometimes we just coudn't control our laughters. "Girls, why don't you guys sleep over tonight?" I asked them. Tomorrow I had free. "mmm... sure! It's ok for me, what about you?" said Tara. Nadia agreed. We decided to take Riya with us. We arrived and we helped her in to my room. We sat her on the chair and me and Nadia went to another room to get madrass, pillow and a blanket. We tucked Riya in the madrass and they tucked themself too on the madrass. Riya fell asleep at once and Nadia and Tara fell asleep after 10min. I just coudn't sleep. I was thinking about that guy. Not the one who looked like Varun, but the other one. I felt I knew him and I have done something with him. I turned on my left side. I tried to sleep but just coudn't. That guy just didn't want to go away from my mind. Suddenly I knew where I had seen him. I stood up at once and ran down to the livingroom. I took an album out and sat down on the couch. I looked through it and my eyes widened and my jaw dropped. I was shocked.

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Manusha

@Manusha_Divz

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Aww she is thinking about Adi..am sure its him she saw....love the update...and did John look sexy in dostana or what man....i cant stop looking at his body myself...

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Charri - what a terrific update! 😊

"Nadia, you finished with Varun?" I asked her. <<=== this jes cracked me up! It was like "Deep" was casually asking Nadia she was finished with the newspaper, or something mundane like that!

Verra Funny! 🤣

I really like how you built up to "Deep" remembering who Aditya was. Their next meeting should be interesting! 😉

Hmmm... so was it Varun at the disco? Is Nadia gonna have her heart 💔 broken? 😔

Thanks for the update Charri! Loved it! 👍🏼

Please update when you can! 😊