Raj's Love Story

Originally posted by: saba_saiel

Hi my lovely MRD forum friends,

We had a power failure for an hour just now, and I was free thinking about raj and kranti, suddenly slowly slowly this poem formed in my head, I do write poems sometimes, so thought it is just made for my MRD forum friends, so here you go:

Sunye Rajveer ki prem kahani, usiki zubani:😊

Logo k bheed mein jab dekha tumhe pehli baar

Ankhon ki junoon bata raha tha desh keliye tera pyar

Achanak dil, dil se poochne laga

Kya yahi hain wo jiskeliye aya hain tu saat samundar paar😉

Kuch dil pe zor kar ke, kuch zimedari ka boj sehke

Nahin samaj paya tera dard, teri zakhmon se anjaan hoke

Socha yahi tak tha shayad mera tumhara saath

Door kardiya tumhe khud se, zalmon k haath chhod k

Par Qismat mein tha shayad humara phir se milna

Ek pavitr bandhan mein humara achanak se jurna

Kiya tu tha saath saath rehne ka vaada

Par do alag soch hone nahin diya use poora😕

Achanak jaise qudrat ko manzoor huwa humara rishta

Barsaat ka har boond le kar aya pyar ka anmol tohfa😃

Socha shayad is baar hojaye humari kahani poori

Par mera nasib phir se chhod diya use adhoori😭

Par ab baat pehle jaisa nahin raha

Dil pe ab mera koi zor nahin chala

Ab tu bas ek hi tamanna hain zindagi mein

Bhar do apna pyar tumhare dil ki har gali mein..........😳

Hope you guys like it, I'm sorry I'm not indian, my hindi might not be that good,and might have mistakes , still thought this to be only for you guys......ur valueable comments are badly awaited!😊

WELL DONE YAAR! vry sweet poem...........u sprd MAGIC wid ur words

Originally posted by: bhawna_dhunna

saba its great yaar.

the words are appropriate believe me yaar.

its awesome.

you know what its full of emotions yaar.

plz keep sending this kind of poetry.

thank u sooooooooooo much my lovely friends, I'm so happy u all liked it......