Raj n Kranti (kahani mein twist)-Rap song...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy guyz....m here with a new topic again...buh dis tym...m tried 2 do sumthin' diff...4m ma earlier posts...
i hope yew guyz like it...
I created a rap song on raj-kranti inspired by balcony scene by famous shakespearian play romeo n juliet...i hope u ol' have read romeo n juliet...as u'll not get ma point of view...unless u have read it.. :
Note: its js imaginary story n plot...so plz dont compare it with d actual story line...
In ma story raj n kranti meet in a party.....n dey hv luv @ first sight😆😆(well i noe inoe..its anotha' crazii idea...)
SONGS GOES LIKE DIS..
Here is d story of a real kewl dude
raj iz his label...whos in very sad mood
he went 2 a party where he wasnt supposed to
he fell 4 a gal ,he danced really close 2...
He fell in luv
not knowin' who she wuz
Her name wuz churikumari
who wuz a krantikaari😆😆
He went 2 the mension
to meet his chick
whom he loved really quick..
while hidin' in d garden he hear sum1
dat tym he knew dat she wuz d 1...
(krantii dint knew bout raj's presence)
here she talk 2 herself....
O raj ! raj...where yew b
Said kranti in d balcony
Deny ur title
n' refuse ur name
as accordin' 2 me
it is ol' lame...
(meanwhile raj iz hearin' wot kranti iz sayin' while hidin)
on hearin' dis raj replied
i'll do watchya wan',buh b ma bride(luk dis guy iz sooooooo desperate)😆😆
(now kranti comes 2 noe dat sum1 iz eardroppin)'😆😆
Kranti freaked while hearin' d noice
n den she asked in a sqeaky voice
"who is dere at dis tym in d night?"
said kranti n' switched on d light.
On hearin' dis raj replied
call me love n' i'll b baptized.
Kranti now knew ,who dat might
its non other den her love @ first sight
"Leave dis place a soon as you can
before you can be seen by my kinsmen"
Raj refused 2 listen her obliged
n den asked her in a decent voice
"o kranti,kranti answer me
if ya love me as i luv thee"
kranti nodded ..assurin' him
n promised raj to marry him
goodnite ,goodnite den each one said
n den went 2 sleep on their saperate bed....
i noe it wuz quite random...n sum of d linez may not make sense 2 ya...but as d show iz not airin' i wuz gettin' bored...so thot of writin' a rap song on ma fav characterzzzzzzzzzz..
do comment guyz...even if ya dont like it.,..😃
luv
Neha...😳
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skeptical thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh that was a cute piece of poetic work. Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: skeptical

Oh that was a cute piece of poetic work. Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

thx specti..😃...well js gave it a try....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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one more poet after skippy and dawn
great neha i was singing along with music
believe me its really nice.
you can go to the picture gallery of this forum for raj kranti pic
it will help in further poems and dramatic scenes.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww....Neha this is so sweet ...yaar.....
this awesome,outstanding, marvellous, superb and so on dear.........and honestly each and every line made sense and made me laugh.....can't believe....this people appeared to worst enemy can b so romantic in someone's poem....really..
...One more addition to poet's list of MRD parivaar...yaar..
keep it up..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great job Neha ..........
I was imagining the whole Romeo-Juliet scene .......
It was romantic as well as humourous .........
I wish someone would compose music for this .............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woww so now Dawn,Skepti and Nupur has some tough competition in the form of Cool Neha😎...This was a superb piece of work Neha👏..Talent seems to b overflowing in MRD forum👏😳...
Neha u really impressed me with both your posts👏..grt job👏
Loved the part where Raj dances with the girl and falls for her at one go😆😳...do write some more..its really interesting to read..in fact even I was singing it while reading😆😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Interesting one Neha--I wouldcall it "FUNKY ONE" ! We should rename this forum as Poetic/Lyrical hub... whoever comes either is a poet or becomes one.

If you remove R and K from the rap... and add some other names, it will work then also. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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neha!!!!!!! a good one dear 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thx a million frenzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...*hugs*...m really thrilled dat yew guyz liked ma work....i swear...😃😳
luv
neha😳

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