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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ramusk

haa leaves aap itne lambe lambe scenes kaise likh paate ho yaar.... mein bahut kuch sochti hoon par likhti thodi hoon... 😆

bahut acha tha... par phir se wahin laa kar khada kar diya dono ko...the same bickering...😉

Lol I have no idea bec I am not a writer at all but a science student. but once I get into Rahul Muskaan mode I just start writing and it gets soooo long. I wish someone else would write bec this weekend is again slow. and every one else writes so well. And as for bringing them back to the same spot, I am sorry ramusk I just cannot write romance. lol. that's not my thing. I am good at writing arguments 😃 bec I argue alot. heheh.
Hope someone else writes something.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: leaves45

Lol I have no idea bec I am not a writer at all but a science student. but once I get into Rahul Muskaan mode I just start writing and it gets soooo long. I wish someone else would write bec this weekend is again slow. and every one else writes so well. And as for bringing them back to the same spot, I am sorry ramusk I just cannot write romance. lol. that's not my thing. I am good at writing arguments 😃 bec I argue alot. heheh.
Hope someone else writes something.



The prob this time is i think everyone are busy with some work.... last week i was busy so cudnt write well... so am just thinking hard to set some of intense scenes but its ok i think all are capable enough to write intense scenes out of bickering also..... 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramusk



The prob this time is i think everyone are busy with some work.... last week i was busy so cudnt write well... so am just thinking hard to set some of intense scenes but its ok i think all are capable enough to write intense scenes out of bickering also..... 😉

You're right. I think its exam period or something. But the big procrastinator I am I have been wasting time instead. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Hey guys!
I don't know if any of you remember me much but I couldn't write last week because: a) I was applying to universities (arghhh) b) I couldn't find the inspiration!
I'm hoping to make more of a contribution this time round but I don't think I'll be able to do it soon!
But you guys can totally rock it I'm sure!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey shrina,
how can v forget u.... u rock dear.... hope u write very soon... am saturated this weekend not able to get ideas ...😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
dnt be sloww
cnt fast plsssssssssssssssssssss
its boring without wwrm
plssssssssss cnt fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
all of you guys are so creative... i enjoying reading your stories so much...hope y'all continue...weekends are such fun with out DMG when we have your great WEEKEND WITH RM to read..

thx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
@ Namrata, leaves45, and Ramusk - you guys are doing great.
@ Shrina1503 and muscidiva - please write soon.
I don't know if you are going to like it or not but I figured I should try to contribute as its going so slow once again this weekend.
Rahul doesnt know why Muskaan has suddenly gone all possessive, but he likes seeing her fighting over him. That indicates that as much as she might deny their relationship, she does feel something or she wouldnt be jealous. He smiles to himself and decides to enjoy this.

Muskaan finally takes care of Pooja and after countless attempts of flirting on Pooja's part with Rahul she drags Rahul to the car and they go back home. Rahul is still smirking during the car ride. Muskaan on the other hand is still fuming and muttering to herself but no longer in the mood to talk to him. They go back home and go to sleep for the few hoursthey have before going back to the hospital.
In the morning.. Rahul is taking a shower. Muskaan awakes and goes to look at the sari and jewelry Rahul
had brought for her last night. She was unable to fully admire the gifts as they were in the midst of
their argument. She was really touched by the benevolence. She thought that she had enough time to try on the clothes and jewelry before Rahul came out as he usually takes a long time in the shower and he had just gone in a few minutes ago. She definitely did not want him to know that she actually liked them.
She puts on the sparkling sheer sari and matching jewelry. Her hairs a curly mess but she still looks
mesmerizing. She thinks of what Rahul had said.. 'tujhpe sab kuch acha lagta ha.' Just then she hears the
water shut off in the bathroom and Rahul singing to himself. She starts fumbling to try to take off the
blouse and change quickly but its stuck and since shes all flustered its even harder to think clearly. She
hears the door open and she quickly grabs the blanket and puts it all around herself.
Rahul walks out and notices her standing there all flushed and with the whole comforter around her.
Rahul - Muskaan, tu theek to hai? Tabiyat karab hai? Fever hai?
He starts walking closer to her.
Muskaan - she yells RAHUL! Tu.. tu .. tu na.. wahin reh. Mujhe kuch nahin hua hai. Main to bas aise hi.
Thand lag rahi thi aur tune kitne dher lagadi bathroom mein.
Rahul - Nahin Muskaan... tere gal to chak se laal lag rahe hain. Main dekhta hoon.
Muskaan - Nahin!!! Tu mere paas nahin aa. Rahul, main keh rahi hoon.. tu yahan nahin aa.
Shes backing away as he is coming closer. Shes finding it hard to coordinate the sari and blanket.
He finally reaches her and just puts the back of his hand on her forehead to check if she has a temperature when she tries to jerk back. She doesn't realize that his foot is on the end of the comforter and she just falls back.

She doesn't fall gracefully but it is an awkward fall but lucky for her the bed is behind her. Ofcourse the comforter is no longer on her. She is so embarrassed that she can't even open her eyes.
Rahul has a big smile on his face. Shes really looking stunning. He leans on the bed and just stares at her for a while. Muskaan doesn't hear anything and there is no movement so she peeks her eye open. She sees him towering over her with his gaze on her. He finally moves but to her dismay now he is even closer to her. He is leaning over her with both his arms on either side of her.
Rahul - (whispering into her ear) Muskaan lagta hai ke tujhe mere tofha pasand aaya. Vaise tu isme bahot
khoobsurat lag rahi hai.
She has a faint smile on her face. His hair was still wet and drops are falling on her face as she trembles slightly. He is so close to her and besides himself. He doesn't realize what he is doing when he leans in and kisses the drops off her cheek.
Just then she opens her eyes and gasps slightly.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
OMG!!! that was awesome sonia! as usual!

everybdy did great! sorry i couldnt write last time...

continuing!

She opens her eyes and sees that she was just imagining the whole thing (the kiss part and not the fall part) Rahul was up, his hands on his waist and his head slightly tilted, looking towards her. She felt stupid and got up.

M: wo...main..dekh..rahi..thi...ki...sari barabar fit ho rahi hai ya nahi.
R: Muskaan, sari hai.! ek hi size ki aati hain.
M: (realizing and then making a stern face): Tuje kya maloom sari ke bare mein. Bahut different different sizes ki sari aati hain. (She couldnt act silly anymore, so she took her towel and stormed inside the bathroom) hmmpph!
Rahul is standing there, with a smile on his face.

--Sanjivani Nurse Station--

Keerti assignes duties to the rest of the interns.
K: Dr. Rahul..aap Pooja ke case par kaam karenge..aur phir path lab. Aur muje pata chala ki aap kal raat ko aaye the..very good.
R: Thank you mam.
K: Dr. Muskaan..aap ... Dr. Muskaan?
Muskaan is lost in her thoughts imagining Pooja holding his hand and then they both laughing and giggling. and then Pooja fakes to fall and Rahul catches her. Rahul taking pictures of her...Dr. MUSKAAAAN!.. oh! )
She looks towards keerti.
K: Agar aapka man yaha nahi lag raha to ghar jaake so jaye.
M: Nahi mam..wo..
K: Aap Sangeetpal Singh ka case sambhalengi lekin pehle aap ER mein ek naya case aaya hain..use handle karengi..
M: ok mam.

Muskaan goes to ER to see a guy in his mid twenties bleeding all over his leg. She slips into panic mode.
She is just standing there staring at the blood.
A doctor: Aap inhe jaldi OT mein shift kara de...
Muskaan is still staring..tears forming in her eyes.
Doc: Muskaan! Muskaan!

She is still standing there.

Next scene:
Rahul is talking to Pooja.
A ward boy comes running.. "Dr. Rahul."

Next scene:
Rahul running in the hallway..
He reaches the general ward to see Muskaan lying on the bed with her eyes closed.
Ward boy: pata nahi kya hua..woh kuch bol hi nahi hain.

Rahul slowly walking towards her bed and sitting on the edge of the bed. He puts his hand on her forehead and says softly.." Muskaaan?"
Without opening her eyes, she hides her face in his lap and cries her eyes out.

ok....i know i made it so weird..but i wrote as i was thinking..
hope we can discover something new about them



Edited by mits002 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
wowwwww that was such a good part! atleast this weekend is a little better than the one before!

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