weekend wid rahul muskaan 9!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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here u ppl! we eached WWRM 8! 😛
if ny1 willing 2 chk d previous WWRMs then here u go:
note: hav fun reading WW! buh better don drag d story of previous WWRM further as these may get a reason of confusion wid d previous1 n d present1!
if u donno d rule plz check d weekend id rahul muskaan 1! dere r rules r given!
so here presenting
note: don need d story 2 b like they has 2 confess at d end or something like dat! keep it steady! n we can cont wid d current epi theme next week!
starting theme!:
i honestly nt finding ny starting theme dis time! 😕 same thing apening wid lottery n dat punjaabi man! k let's start frm where rahul was moving a strans of hair frm muski's face n suppose kirti didn't enter dat time....
so cont ppl! 😃
njoyyyyy!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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but we dint finish wwrm 8?? i think we should continue that one..?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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namrata.. that wwrm 8 was one dead thread! ahaha
waiting for that to be closed, will take until the end of DMG ahahhaha
hopefully this one is wayy more busy, and we get lots and lots of meaningful scenes!!
someone cont soon this time yaar!
i got midterms, so i really cant sit for an hour writing a scene, maybe i'll add after tuesday since my workload will lessen a bit (hopefully) ahaha
ps. can i make a suggestion? if this thread doesnt turn out to be very popular one again, can i suggest opening the next week's one in the FAN FICTIONS section? because this is a fanfiction about RM, so hopefully more people will add to it there!~
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy ohh ok if thats the thing then sure we can continue doing this.. sorry ive been a lil busy these days thats why i wasnt able to write anything in the last wwrm.. hopefully this wwrm will have a blast! all the people that are asleep, wake up now and lets rock the weekend!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ namrata: every WWRM gott finished by friday even if d story of previous WWRM don have ny ending, so ya cont dis1! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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where r the writers yaar. plz coutin..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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comeonn u guys! where is every one??
how about i write the scene we are continuing from:
Rahul comes out of the washroom seeing muskaan looking like a princess, with her elegant purple saree, which is see through revealing her tall, slim yet curvacious feminine figure, her light makeup enhancing her flawless complexion, and perfect matching jewelry finishing her look.
He is finding it hard to take his eyes off the angel standing infront him, HIS angel! He smiles inwardly.
"Tu saree mein bahut achi lag rahi hai". Her flirtatious remark brings a smile on her face.
"Tujhe saree kabse achi lagne lagi?" she continues the flirting, feeling like a teenager again who is being hit on by some random loverboy!
"Tujhpe sab kuch acha lagta hai!", this takes her aback, as she was only expecting him to give her one of his shy awkward shy smiles.But since he has spent quite some time with her recently, as they share the room, he now has become less shy to express himself to her.
Their eyes hold on to each other for quite some time....
ok so this is the thursday scene where we begin, i just decided to put it in words so its easier for the next person to continue... remember keerti doesnt walk in on them in our fic ;)
Edited by musicdiva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright guys even though I have assignments I will start the story but I will continue from when Muskaan says she was pretending...

Rahul: Woh sab natak tha?
Muskaan: Haan Rahul warna ab tak hum kya kar rahey they?
Rahul: right and walks away
Muskaan thinks is ko kya huwa"
Rahul is angry that all of this time spent together meant nothing to Muskaan so why should he be hurting each time. Why should he feel jealous and Why should he care anymore.
Rahul: theek hai Muskaan tumhein lagta hai ke humarey beech ab tak sub kuch natak tha. ab dektaein hein key tumhain kaisey lagta hai mujh se door rehna.
Rahul goes around the party and decides to enjoy himself. He meets a nice looking girl and starts chatting up with her. Muskaan sees him and comes over.
Muskaan: Rahul meri zara help karogey mujhe firecrackers nahin mil rahey.
Rahul: Sorry muskaan woh mein zara busy hoon. Atul ya armaan sey help mang lo. Rahul continues talking to the girl and turns his back on Muskaan.
Muskaan is left standing as she stares at Rahul and the girl
Muskaan: Is kameene ko itna time nahin hey key meri help kardey par larki key saath kehkahay laganey ki fursat hey. Dekh loongi isey.
Anyway througout the part Muskaan notices Rahul enjoying himself with one girl after the other and she doesn't know why it bothers her. She tries to enjoy but her eyes keep searching for Rahul.
Atul: Muskaan tumhari party amazing hei. Woh tumhara pati kahan hai.
Muskaan (angry): Mujhey kya pata. Waisey bhi mujhe koi farak nahi parta ke woh kya kar raha hai ye kis larki sey baat kar raha hai. and she walks away.
Atul: larki? he looks around and sees Rahul talking to a girl. he goes up to her.
Atul: Oi Rahul tumari biwi wahan hai or tum yahan?
Girl to Rahul: Aap ki shaadi ho chuki hai?
Rahul: Woh.....
Atul: Haan woh...(pointing at Muskaan) woh isi ki biwi hai.
Girl: Kya....walks away in anger
Rahul: oi Atul tumhari problem kya hai. Mein jisse baat karoon?
Atul: Problem mujhey nahin tumhari biwi ko hai.
Rahul suddenly turns around and asks: Kyun us ney kuch kaha tujh se. he really hopes that Muskaan is anry because he is talking to another girl.
Athul: nahin par woh ghussey mein thi or chali gayee.
Rahul (disapponited): Ghussey mein to wo har waqt rehti hai. Aur waisey bhi agar use koi fark nahin parta to tujhe kyun parta hai? and he walks away angry as well
Atul: In donon ko kya huwa? lagta jhagra huwa hai.
next day at Sanjeevni. Dr keerti assigning duties.
Dr. Keerti: Dr. Rahul Aaj aap ke liye special assignment hai. Ek nai patient abhi transfer hui hai hamarey hospital mein. Aap ko agley chand dinon ke liye Aap un ko monitor karengi. Dr. Muskaan aap bhi in ki help karengi.
M + R: okay maam
They both go in to meet the patient and Rahul is more than pleased to see that the new patient is very pretty. He has deciced that if Muskaan doesnt care for their relationship then he should move on in life too.
R: So aap ka naam pooja hai? correct?
P: Yes and aap hain?
R: Main Dr. Rahul.
Muskaan looks over and is angry to see that Rahul is staring at pooja and not even introducing her.
M: Aur mein Dr. Muskaan she rushes forward and glares at Rahul
R: Mein el minute mein aata hoon aap key charts leke.
P: ofcourse Rahul.
Muskaan is angry when she hears this. How dare she call Rahul just Rahul. For her it was Dr. Rahul. The girl just met him and. ughhh
P to Muskaan: Wow kaafi cute doctor hain. Yahan par stay acha hoga.
M: uhhh.....tum wait karo main abhi aati hoon. She goes after Rahul who is in the locker room getting pooja's file.
M: abhey kaminey yeh kya chal raha tha?
R: Kya? tujhey kya huwa?
M: yeh tu flirting kyun kar raha tha?
R: Meine kab flirting ki?
M: Abhi. mein andhi nahin hoon Rahul. Tu Pooja ko itna ghoor ghoor key kyoun dekh raha tha? Aur woh bhi merey samney?
R: Pehli baat to yeh hai Muskaan ke agar woh itni khoobsurat hai to is mein mera kya kasoor. Dekh hi to rah tha na kha to nahin raha tha usey He uses the same dialogue on Muskaan which she had used on him for Sangeet Parl. Muskaan looks taken back
R: Aur doosri baat. Tumhain kyoun jalan ho rahi hai. Kal raat tumhi ney kaha tha key yeh sab natak hai. Aur mere or tumharey beech kuch nahin to agar mein Pooja sey baat karoon ye kisi aur sey tumhain koi farak nahin parna chahiyey.Aur haan Pooja ko bataney ki koi zaroorat nahin key hamari shaadi ho chuki hai kyoun key again Muskaan tum ney hi kaha tha wo sab jhoot tha. Tumhain lottery ke liye proof mil gaya to khel khattam.Waisi bhi Muskaan mein tang agaya hoon tum yeh NATAK karte karte.
And he walks out of the locker room leaving an upset Muskaan behind.
I hope you guys liked it. it's my second time. Hopefully someone will continue......
edited: u guys sorry I didn't realize that Dr. Keerti never walks in but um is it okay if I started from here. I just wanted the thread to coninue.
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahah rahul. It is very well writen. Muski is so awful yaar. itni darti hai yaar.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Why isn't anyone continuing. Come on guys there have to be more rahul muskaan fans

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