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Posted: 16 years ago
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good job ramusk and leaves.

i don't know why its so slow recently.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
hey someone plz write am waiting from the morning....its 7 pm here now... only 2 ppl wrote ....wat happened to all RM fans... If this is like thisthere vil probably be no wwrm next weekend i think so... plzzzzzzz guys make it a hit not a flop plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey someone plzzzz write more scenes on RM...waiting to read them!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys! ill continue now..
recap:
R: MUSKAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!
m: she turns around and says oyeee tujhe kya hua? tu uss pooja ko akele kyun chorke aya?
r: dekh muskaan, tujhe nahin pata lekin sangeet pal ji natak kar rahe hain, unke haaton mein koi dard vard nahin hai
m: rahul.. mujhe mera kaam karne de please, intefere mat kar
she didnt mean to say that, but she was really upset with rahul thats why she said that..
r: intefere? agar mein tujhse kuch kahun to mein intefere kar rahan hun?
m: rahul, please mera dimaag mat kha, aur tu yahan se jaa please!
r: without saying anything he jus walked angrily out of the door and asked keerti for a leave and went out of sanjeevani without telling anyone anything..
later in the locker room everyone was getting ready to go home when muskaan realized that rahul is not here
m: uhmm armaan, tune rahul ko kidhar dekha hai?
a: nahin to, kyun?
m: nahin woh bas pooch rahi thi...
she didnt know where he went, but she was getting worried.. she went out of the locker rooms and started asking every wardboy and nurse if they have seen rahul or not.
then she saw dr keerti
m: maam, kya apne dr rahul ko night duty di hai aaj?
k: nahin to muskaan kyun?
m: nahin kyunko woh mujhe mil nahin raha hai
k: haan woh usne leave mangi aur woh yahan se chala gaya
m: chala gaya??
k: haan, kyun koi problem dr muskaan?
m: nahin thanks maam
and she goes from there.. she tries calling him but hes not picking up
she goes back in the locker room
m: anji... woh tu mujhe ghar drop kar sakti hai please??
a: haan sure chal chale
they go to their car and drive home...
hope it was good.. someone can continue now please.. i know i din make it romantic.. but i had to keep the weekend going!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
hey namrata cool .. good that u wrote....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww good job. It is very good. I will try and write later after I come from work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a: haan sure chal chale
they go to their car and drive home...

continuation:

Anj:theek hain mujhe jaana hoga ab muskaan ... rahul ko mera bye keh dena(not knowing that rahul went away somewhere)

Mu: bye...

She got freshed up and changed into her pyjamas...

she lay down on the bed and just closed her eyes and goes into flash back...

this was the time after the big fight they had n rahul went away...

she turned to sangeet pal and said...

Mu: dekhiye sangeet pal ji aap marriage counsellor hain isiliye abhi tak mein aapko izzat deti rahi aur aapse kuch nahi keh paayi.... mujhe aapme koi interest nahi hain... aur mein jiske saath khush reh sakti hoon yeh mujhe bahut ache tareh se jaanti hoon.. isliye plz aap hamare beech taang mat adaiyega....

Mu: nurse aap inko davai de dijiye....

and she leaves....

and suddenly the clock strucks one and she comes to reality..

Rahul has not yet come.... now she's really worried abt him...All sorts of negative thoughts were coming into her mind...

she hears the sound of a car horn and runs outside to find rahul and runs and hugs him feeling a lot more relieved...
but rahul doesnt reciprocate it ...

after sometime releasing from the hug..and getting into their room

Mu: pata hain mein kabse tera intezaar kar rahi thi ... aur mein dar gayi thi tere liye.... Tu kam se kam kisiko batake jaana tha...

Rahul is silent and doing his own work...

Rahul throws a bag on the bed not wanting to speak...

Mu:yeh kya hain rahul???

Ra: still angry 😔 and in a stern voice ...open karke dekhle...

Muskaan opens it and finds a beautiful necklace set inside it and she opens the other item in the bag also and finds a beautiful saree

Mu: yeh sab kya hain rahul kiske liye...

Ra: (wondering how is she able to ask that question when she knows it well for whom he brought that forand still a bit angry n sternly) woh maine karwa chaut ko kuch gift nahi diya tha na isliye socha kuch de doon... aakhir tum mere liye paraiye thodi hi ho

hmm this is it guys ....sorry😔 i cudnt make it romantic and i am poor in writing intense ones so thot to write like thiss...if any mistakes r thr plz ignore am poor in hindi

plz read n comment

Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

editing....

It was very nice. Alright well I will continue but I can't write romance so I will be going with the angry RAhul
Muskaan: Mere liye? par kyun Rahul?
R: Woh kya hai na Muskaan ke sab tumhari tarah nahin sochte. Tum ne vrat rakha such mein to gift to mujhe dena parta na SUCH mein. Tumhare liye sab natak hoga par mere liye nahin.
M: Rahul magar humarey pas to paisey nahin hai na
R: Muskaan paisey sub kuch nahin hotey. Kuch cheezein...kuch rishtey...aur kuch log....paison sey zyada important hotey hain. Magar tumhein yeh sub kaisey sumjhaoon? Tumhain to sirf lottery kai pasion ki pari hai.
M: Rahul tum phir ghussa ho rahey ho.Waisey bhi lottery ka ticket tum hi ney khareeda tha na? Idea bhi tumhara tha, to mujh se kyun ulajh rahey ho?
R: Shopping mein kar raha tha kya?
M: To agar apne huband key paisey se nahin karoongi to parosi key paison se karoongi kya?......Then she realizes what she has said and looks up to see Rahul staring at her. (RM music.)
R: Kya kaha tu ne?
M: stuttering.....woh mein....mera matlab hai
R: Kya? he wants her to admit it. mein kaun hoon Muskaan? Aur hamara rishta kya hai?
M: Hum.....hum dost hain.....aur kya?
Rahul keeps staring at her........
R: dost? right? pehle 'natak' ab 'dost'. Actually Muskaan tum se baat karne ka faida hi nahin. Jo kuch tumhare dil mein hai woh ya tum jaanti nahin ya phir jaanney ki koshish nahi kar rahi. Par aakhir mein kab tak intezaar karoon tumhara. Mein ne har tareekey se to sumjhaney ki koshish ki hai tumhain. Achi tarah soch lo ke hamarey beech kya hai....
M: Rahul agar tum pahelion me baatein karoge to mein kaise sumjhoongi. Jo kuch kehna hai bol kyun nahi detay?
R: Bolne ki koshish hi to kar raha hoon pichley kitney dinon sey, par tum ho key samajh hi nahin rahi. Har baat pe lar deti ho.....har baat pe naraaz..
His pager beeps letting him know that his patient needs him
R: mujhe hospital jaane hai..
M: Abhi?
R: Haan shayed tum bhool gayi mein wahan kaam karta hoon. Tumharey saath 'natak' ke ilava meri actual job bhi hai.
Muskaan looks guilty for saying that. Rahul seems to be really upset by her use of words and she doesn't know what to say to make it better. But she does not want for him to go vist Pooja alone.So she decides to go with him.
M: Rahul mein bhi saath chaloon?
R: Kyun 'tumharey Sangeet' ko bohot zaroorat hai kya tumhari?
Now muskaan is getting angry. she is getting tired of Rahul's hurtful words.
M: Haan agar 'tumhari pooja' ko tumhari zaroorat hai to mere patient ko meri.
R: Tujhe koi zyada hi fikr nahin ho rahi, us kameeney ki?
M: Tujhey kya farak parta hai. Tu to kaafi busy hai us chureil ke saath fliritng karney mein.
R: Woh Chureil nahin hai.
M: Theek hai....woh bhootni hai.
R: nahin Hai
M: Hai
R: Muskaan naam bulana band karo. Hum hospital agaye hain.
They have reached the hospital and they make their way to the ward where sangeet and Pooja are admitted.
Pooja: Oh thank god Rahul tum agaye. Meri tabyat kuch kharab si mehsoos ho rahi hai. Meri help karogey.
R: Ofcourse Pooja.
M: Kyun aap ko heart attack ho raha tha kay? She glares at Pooja.
R: Um Muskaan emergency hogi na.
P: Yes Dr. Muskaan. Mein theek nahi feel kar rahi thi is liye mein ne inhein page karvaya.
M: Acha aur aisi kaun si musibat a parree thi key forun Rahul ko bulana para?
P: Woh...mere sir mein dard ho raha tha. lekin I am sure ab Rahul agaye hain to theek kar deinge
R: Ofcourse. he starts to feel her forhead.
Pooja grabs his hand
P: Tunharey haathon mein jaado hai Rahul
Muskaan grabs rahul's hands and pushes him behind her.
M: Mein dekh leti hoon aap ko Miss Pooja. Dikhaye kahan dard ho raha hai? Rahul tum jaake kisi aur patient ko dekho.
Rahul doesnt know why Muskaan has suddenly gone all possessive, but he likes seeing her fighting over him. That indicates that as much as she might deny their relationship, she does feel something or she wouldnt be jealous.He smiles to himself and decides to enjoy this.
Alright that's it for now. I hope someone else continues......hope u liked it.
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
haa leaves aap itne lambe lambe scenes kaise likh paate ho yaar.... mein bahut kuch sochti hoon par likhti thodi hoon... 😆

bahut acha tha... par phir se wahin laa kar khada kar diya dono ko...the same bickering...😉
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys!!! You are doing a superb job! It is a lot of back and forth bickering but I do love their fights. I have a mental block right now. Maybe if I think of something good I will write later.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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