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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey leaves very well written.... u hav just introduced the jealousy in their relation ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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editing.

Oh man I had Sooooo much written and stupid computer decided to delete it all. I had to start over.

Alright so basically Rahul and Muskaan both go to check up on Pooja.

R: So aaj aap ka pehla din hai yahan aur mein aap ka check up shuru karta hoon . Agar aap ko koi problem ho to mujhe zaroor batayey ga.

P: Ofcourse Rahul. so sweet.
M: In ka naam Dr. Rahul hai.
R: Par aap mujhey Rahul bula sakti hain. He throws Muskaan a challenging look.
Muskaan just glares back and says
M: Aap ko abhi injection lagana hai. please apni sleeve roll kardijiye.
P: Alright par yeh injection Rahul lage dein to acha hoga.
M: Actually Dr. Rahul busy hain to main laga deti hoon.
R: Actually mein busy nahin hoon. Koi baat nahin mein laga deta hoon.
P: Yes actually mein Rahul ke saath zyada comfortable hoon.
M: DR.RAHUL ke saath aap ki abhi abhi mulaqaat hui hai to phir aap un ke saath kaise zyada comfortable hain?
P: Kuch rishtey bananey mein zyada deir nahin lagti.
M: Aur kuch moon torney mein bhi zyada deir nahi lagti....she steps forward, but Rahul grabs her.
R: eik Minute Miss pooja....
P: Aap ke liye sirf pooja....
R: um.. alright pooja, mein zara Dr. Muskaan se baat kar ke aata hoon. un ki aaj tabyat zara kharab hai....and he grabs Muskaan and pulls her to the side.
R: tujhe aaj ho kya gaya hai? paagl ho kya? is tarah behave karetein hein patient ke saath. bechari ne kuch kaha bhi nahin aur tu ulajh pari us ke saath.
M: bechari? Us chureil ko to bechari bula raha hai?
R: Chureil nahin, mujhe to kaafi cute lagto hai?
M: Andha hai kya, teri choice ko kya huwa? Aur tujhe us sey itni humdardi kyun hai?
R: Tujhe itni jalan kyun ho rahi hai?
M: Jalan or mujhey? US chureil sey? Wo to meir jooti key baraber bhi nahin.
R: whatever...mujhey jake pooja ko injection lagana hai.
M: Rahul tum pooja ko injection nahin laga saktey. Log kya sochein gey? Woh larki hai
R: Actually Muskaan mein pehley larkiyon ka ilaj kar chuka hoon. To ab kya different hai?
M: Ab tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai Muskaan cant beleive she just said that
R: acha? kis key saath? He glares at her
M: mere saath......she stops because she cant think straight when he is staring at her like that.
Rahul is really angry, he gras her and pulls her forward.
R: Wow Muskaan . tum ne acha khel shuru kiya hai. Jab chaho meri biwi ban jati ho aur jab chaho parai. jab tumhein zaroorat hoti hai to mera sahara leti ho, aur jab zaroorat khatam to bhula deti ho.
M: rahul tum itna bigar kyun rahey ho.
R: Kyunki aaj sey natak khatam
M: Par meine kiya kya. Tumhari problem kya hai?
R: Meri problem kya hai? Tumhain abhi tak yeh nahi pata keh mujhe problem kya hai. itney dinon sey hum saath reh rahein hain aur tum yeh nahin jaan saki key mere dill mein kya hai? Actually Muskaan is dafa mein tumhari madad nahin kar sakta. Jab tum yeh jaan lo key tumharey dil mein kya hai, to aake mujhey bata dena. Meanwhile mujhe Pooja ka check up karna hai. he walks away leaving behind Muskaan on the verge of tears.
They both go back to the ward without speaking to each other and ignoring each other completely. Once in the ward they see that Dr. Keerti is standing beside what appears to be a new patient. She turns around, sees Muskaan and Rahul and walks towards them.
Keerti: Dr. Muskaan hamarey new patient ko abhi admit kiya hai aur unhoon ney specially request ki hai key un key doctor aap hin hon, Agar aap ko koi problem nahin to yeh case aap ley sakti hain.
Muskaan turns around to look who it is......
Sandeep pal Singh: OHHHH muskaan please mera case ley lo. bohot dard ho raha hai.
She turns around and sees rahul staring at her and cleching his fists. Muskaan is so angry with him about his attitude from earlier that she turns to Dr. Keerti
M: ofcouse maam. yeh case mein lene sey mujhey koi problem nahin. and she throws Rahul a challenging look as she hears Sandeep yelling in the background, "OI BALLE BALLE BALLE"
I hope you guys like it. I am sorry it took so long, it deleted it twice and I was going to go insane typing it all up again. but here you go.
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey leaves i'll write after u...

hey nice work work actually i also got an idea to intro sangeet pal but u did it... now i'll continue plzzzzzzz
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hhehhe leaves.. awesome part! ramusk, cont soon! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys. I hope u guys write too because this is just the third time I am posting my writing and that too bec I got inspired by all of you guys and I wanted to make sure Muskaan got jealous too.
@ramusk...please continue...u write very well
@Musicdiva...I hope u will be writing this time because your stuff is always full of PASSION.
And what happened to all the other regular writers that I love to read? The weekend before last weekend was awesome...hope others will write.
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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She turns around and sees rahul staring at her and cleching his fists. Muskaan is so angry with him about his attitude from earlier that she turns to Dr. Keerti
M: ofcouse maam. yeh case mein lene sey mujhey koi problem nahin. and she throws Rahul a challenging look as she hears Sandeep yelling in the background, "OI BALLE BALLE BALLE"


continuation:

Muskaan was still sad rahul's words were just ringing in her mind....
She half heartedly accepts sangeet pal's case...

She starts treating him...

Rahul on the other hand is biting his teeth...

Mu: (to sangeet) acha bataiye ke aapko dard kahan hain exactly...

Sa: ouchh!! ahh ohhh muskaan ji mere haathon mein bahut dard ho raha hain...

Mu:Muskaan holds his hand as to check up without knowing that all that is fake n he's trying to flirt with her...

Sa: aha ha ha muskaan aapke haathon mein kuch jaado hain ... mere haath mat chodiyegaa

Rahul is becoming red on the other hand... 😡he cant do anything coz it was a hospital after all .. he want to rip that sangeet pal into pieces ..

Sa:Muskaan ji aap to bohut acche doctor hain....aap us rahul ke saath kabhie khush nahin rahengi... mein abhi bhi keh rahan hoon aap chahe toh mein tayyar hoon....😈

Rahul on other hand is tearing up all the papers of the case file..

Mu: not paying attention to sangeets words... aur kahan dard ho raha hain aapko

Sa: woh kya hain na kabhie haathon mein aata hain... ab toh mere dil mein bhi dard hone laga hain....

this was it.. this was the limit ....

As muskaan was heading towards sangeet to treat him....

Ra: MUSKAAAAAAANNN!!!!!!!😡

just a small one ....do plz comment
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was very well writen........ someone plzz continues.... we r wait for it!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SOOOO cute. I love seeing Rahul jealous. good job

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: leaves45

SOOOO cute. I love seeing Rahul jealous. good job



actually he's more than jealous this time.... a complete mixture of anger,frustration,jealousy,deep inside somewhere a distress that she's not able to understand him,angry on himsef as to how he's allowing sangeet to flirt with her in front of him.... insecured and having a fear that he may lose her again.....
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey anyone writing...plz someone cont plzzz
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago

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