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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

goood job guyssss please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kashish

@goodkashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: musicdiva
ok can i please me a suggestion? i think picking the current show track every week is too repetitive for this FF, beause RM track hasnt changed in the past 3 weeks, and we're still stuck with the whole LOTTERY thing...

so my suggestion is that we should come up with our own track to write on every week... it can be as different as we want it.. so for every WWRM, we can come up with our own theme, and continue on from there...

that way, we'll have something better to write every week, rather than the repetitive scenes of RM flirting and not knowing how to confess to each other..

what do u guys think?

I completly agree with u.........i mean by the time the track changees, we can move the story further but right now why not enjoy our own this story...........i think it is mindblowing idea

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ramusk

@ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

hey all,

i read all the parts and all are superb donno whether we get to c these kinda stuff on screen but all u writers out thr rock!!!!!!!!!!!

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CHLOE2901

@CHLOE2901

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

update was great!!😉 i'll cont but wif a short one..

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back in sanjeevani....evryone was gatherin where they alwaes do waitin for dr keerti to give their duties...

R[he pushed muski by surprise] : tum kaise ho?after wat happened last wk at the place i brought u to?

M: main kuch nahin...bakhi saab theek hai...abb suno dun u dare tel the others wat happened na!

R: nahin main bevekuf nahin hoon..i wont do tat...[but he jus might go back on his words😆]

Wen they were assigned their duties rahul walked bside armi n told him tat muski had confessed her love...

A: haha tats great!now move on to intimate moments😆its the right time b4 she changes her mind again...

Back in the locker rm...muski was jus checkin rahul ki locker wen she unexpectedly found.......

M: ye saab kya hai??!hes goin to get it!

jus then rahul came...his face was smiling wide then nvr b4..

R: hi muskaan...kya baat hai?ur face look reali red!😆

M: u start explainin then then i'll talk....she showed him some old photos wif a girl.. kind of preetier than muski n was veri close to one another....😛

R: [hes getin restless] ye to baas old 'chemistry'....

som1 plz cont.......

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kashish

@goodkashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

R: [hes getin restless] ye to baas old 'chemistry'....

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Muskaan: kya bola tu..............old chemistry ke bache..........bata kaun hai warna main tera khoon pi jaungi........

Rahul: chill muskaan............meri college ki GF ki hai..........shayad abhi tak reh gayi hogi........

Muskaan: oye kameene.......tu kitni ladkiyon ko janta hai...........kahi tu mere saath bhi........

Rahul: oye muskaan tu muje galat samah rahi hai........

Muskaan: chup kar..........sare munde ek se hote hai........anji thik hi kehti hai boys bahot hi giri huyi harkate karte hai..........

Rahul; lekin meri baat to sun/////////

Muskaan" muje kuch nahi sunna.........mujse baat mat karna aur mere piche aane ki koshish bhi mat karna..........samaj gaya...........

Muskaan jane lagti hai lekin Rahul uska haath pakad ke use locker ke khone me khadi karke dono aur se side bandh kar deta hai taki woh kahi se nikal na sake.........

Muskaan: chod kameene............yeh hospital hai......

Rahul: pehle tum meri baat sun.........

Muskaan: abe sunne ko ab kuch raha hi nahi.......

Rahul: sunnnnnn/.............haa meri bahot si GF thi college me..........lekin puri zindagi saath bitane ka vaada maine sirf tujse hi kiya hai..........haa main kahi ladkiyon ko janta tha lekin aaj mere liye sirf tum hi ho........main tumhe vaada deta hoon ki main aaj ke bad tumhare alawa kisi aur ke bare me sochunga bhi nahi............

Muskaan; teri baat pe kaise yakeen kar loon/////////////pehle muje koi saboot de ki tu zindagi bahr muje akele hi pyaar karega............

(someone continue)

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MOONA

@luvingRM

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

gud continuiationz !!!!!

but i guess abb WWRN 10 start ho jana chayai....

moOna

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kashish

@goodkashish

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Muskaan; teri baat pe kaise yakeen kar loon/////////////pehle muje koi saboot de ki tu zindagi bahr muje akele hi pyaar karega...........

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Muskaan yeh kehke apna coat leke general ward me chali jati hai.......jaha pe ridz aur atul hote hai........

Atul: hey muskaan...........kya hua bata na............tera chehra aise podhe ki tarah ki murza gaya hai........tujpe pani dalu.....

Muskaan: Atul.......tu chup ho.......mera dimaag pehle garam hai..tu ja yaha se.....

Ridz: calm down muskaan...........bata kya hua.........rahul se zagda hua.......

Muskaan: us kameene ka naam bhi mat lo.........fite muh samajta kya hai apne aap ko................

jab Rahul aata hai..........

Rahul: tera pati.........

Muskaan: rahul tu ja yaha se.........main tere ko aakhri bar keh rahi hoon...........jana.......

Ridz: rahul ...........kya hua tum dono ke beech.........

Rahul: ridhima kuch nahi.............woh mere locker me se kuch purani GF ke photo dekh li.........

Ridz+atul: KYA...........

Rahul: oye ab tum dono ko kya hua..................

Muskaan: are tujme koi akal hai ki nahi............koi shaadi ke bad aisi tasveere rakhta hai.........ridz tu bata koi aisa karta hai.........

Atul: rahul.....this is very bad........muskaan is right..........

Rahul: pehle meri baat to suno........muskaan tune aur kuch dekha mere locker me........

Muskaan: aur kuch dekhne layak ho to na...........

Rahul; tu dekhe bina mat keh...........pehle chal.........aaj tuje main sab batata hoon...........

Muskaan: ridz.........atul tum dono bhi mere saath chalo.............agar yeh jooth bola to main ise aaj bhartha banake kha jaungi..........

sab wapas locker me aate hai........

Rahul: yeh dekh,..........tera scarf........yeh teri pen jise tu her waqt muh me dal ke bethi rehti hai..........yeh tera jumka.........aur yeh yeh holi ke din wali shirt meri jispe tune rang lagaya tha..............aur yeh ab tak ki teri tasvire jo maine chup chup ke khichi thi...........ab kuch bolna hai.............

muskaan ki aankhein sharam se zuk jati hai.................ridz atul ko leke bahar chali jati hai aur rahul bhi jane lagta hai.............lekin muskaan uska haath pakadti hai............

muskaan: sorry rahul.........galti ho gayi.........

rahul; muskaan...........pyaar me sorry ki jagah nahi hoti........

muskaan; tune muje maff kiya..........

rahul; haa kiya lekin....................

maskaan; lekin kya..........

rahul; tumhe sabko sach batana hoga ki hamari shaadi joothi thi.............

(someone continue)