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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Namrata and Mits!
Waiting for your part Mits... can you put it in a new reply.. so I know you posted.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was great. I was actually laughing out loud when she was imagining Pooja with Rahul...😆
I like the twist.. lets see what happens..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww Suhanisonia and mits, those parts were soooo good. I hope someone else writes too, I will try later but right now I have to go warm up dinner and study. sigh

the life of a brown girl. lol

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Posted: 16 years ago
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suhani - that was amazing. I can see her doing something so silly. and muskaan is thinking about some naughty things huh?

mits - that was cute and funny about her being embarrassed and imaging pooja.
finally the thread is picking up a little.
someone continue please.
Edited by stellarwind - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright u guys so I will continue instead of doing my assignment. lol. here goes....
Rahul lets muskaan cry and waits till she stops her hiccups. Muskaan stops and all of a sudden is embarassed.
M: Woh...um sorry. mujhe pata nahin kya hogaya
R: Kya huwa. mujhe batao.
M: Kuch nahin. bas. um mein theek hoon. tum jao.
R: Actually jab tak tum mujhe yeh nahin batao gi ke kya huwa mein yahan se jaane wala nahin
Muskaan sees that he has that stubborn look on his face again and has no choice
M: Pata nahin rahul...woh mein ward mein thi...or phir itna khoon dekh kar ghabra gayee....aur pata nahin mujhe kya ho jaata hai.....mein bhi na kitni darpok hoon...
R: tum aur darpok? Comeon Muskaan Garewaal jo bhi ho darpok nahin hai....He doesnt realize it that he has called her by his name but this makes Muskaan very happy. She has a goofy smile on her face
R: kya huwa? has kyun rahi ho? Rahul doesnt know what he said that made Muskaan smile but he is happy that her mood has turned better. To be honest he doesn't want to fight with her..
R: Muskaan woh....
M: Tumhein kis ne bulaya?
R: Woh mein Pooja ka check up kar raha tha key ward boy.....he stops when he sees the angry expression on her face
R: Kya huwa?
M: Kuch nahin. ab meri tabyat theek hai. Tum jake pooja ki khidmat karo. woh gir rahi hogi to use uthana hoga...ya phir us ki tasveerein leni hogi.
R: Tum baar baar us ko beech mein kyun la rahi ho. Aur bhi to doctors hain us ka khyal rakhne ke liye. Is waqt mein tumhare saath hoon.
M: Mujhe sirf thore chakar arahe the. Ab mein theek hoon. and she slowly gets off the bed.
R: Paagal ho gaye ho kya? waapas let jao. he grabs her hand and pulls her back
M: shayed tum bhool rahe ho ke mein bhi doctor hoon. Aur is waqt mujhe doctor ki zaroorat nahin hai.
rahul is now getting angry.
R: Mein yahan docotor ki haisyat se nahin hoon, yeh tum bhi jaanti ho aur mein bhi.
M: To phir tum kis haisyat se aye ho yahan par?
R: tumhare pati ke haisyat se.....rahul yells
M: Oho to aaj mere husband ho lekin kal tak tum us chureil se flirting kar rahe the.
R: Kyunki tum ne hi hamare rishtey ko eik mazak bana ke rakha huwa hai. Kabhi asli to kabhi natak. Aur agar yeh sab tumhare liye natak hai to phir Pooja se kya problem hai??
M: woh mein....She doesnt know what to say.
R: Kya? Aaj bol kyun nahi deti? Mein jab tujh se baat karoon to tu larna shuru kar deti hai. Magar mein jab kisi aur larki se baat karoon to tujhe acha nahin lagta. Akir tum chahti kya ho?
M: TUM.....She doesn't realize that she has blurted this out. But its too late and she realizes that those are her feelings. Rahul meanewhile is taken a back. But then he starts grinning.
R: Kya kaha tun ne?
M: Mein ne? ...um kuch nahin.....
R: Muskaan......phir se kaho
M: Acha baba...mujhe tum chahiye ho. Kitne dinon se mein samjh nahin payee ke ye feelings kya hain par ab samajh mein aya. Aur haan mere liye yeh sab natak nahi tha. Par mein samjhi tumhare liye hoga. Pata nahin yeh sab kab huwa lekin such yeh hai mujhe sirf tum chahiye ho. Par kameene tumhain kya farak parta hai...Tujhe to wo chureil chahiye na....
R: Tujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ke mujhe pooja chahiye....Chal mere saath...he grabs her hand and starts pulling her after him.
M: Rahul kya kar raha hai?
R: Chup Muskaan. Aaj tujhe kuch prove karna hai.
They reach the ward
Pooja: Rahul tum finally agaye.
R: Hi Pooja tumhein kisi se milana hai. He pulls Muskaan forward
R: yeh hai Dr. Muskaan Garewaal. Meri biwi. Both Muskaan and Pooja are open mouthed staring at Rahul.
P: Kya Rahul? Tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai?
R: Yep. Aur yeh khoobsoorat larki meri biwi hai. Kitna luck hoon na mein.
Rahul grabs Muskaan and drags her to the bed with Sangeet Pal.
R: HI Mr. Sangeet Pal. Yeh hai meri biwi. Dr. Muskaan Garewal. I hope yahan par aap ka stay acha ho. Bas aap ko batana bhool gaya tha ke agar meri biwi ko galat nazron se dekha....ya phir haath lagan ke koheesh ki.....ya us ke barey mein socha.....us ke kya...kisi Muskaan nami larki key barey mein socha tuo mein aap ko itna toroon ga...itna toroon ga ke...Sanjeevni kya....koi bhi hospital aap ke ilaj nahin kar paye ga.
M: rahul yeh kar rahe ho...But she cant help but smile...Acha Rahul ab bas hi karo
R: Nahin Muskaan jab tak tumhara shak nahin utar deta key mujhe sirf tum chahiye ho mein yahan se jaane wala nahin
Rahul stands on an empty bed in the ward and yells.
R: Attention patients...aap shayed jaante nahin...yeh hai Muskaan Garewaal He points at Muskaan......Meri biwi. Aur mein hoon Rahul garwewal....is ka husband.
Muskaan grabs his hand. And tries to get him to come down before Dr. Keerti comes
M: Rahul maan liya na. please neeche aajao.
R: nahin muskaan jab tak tumhein poora poora yakeen nahi ho jata
he starts yelling again
R: Aur patients mein is ke liya bana hoon...aur yeh mere liye.
M: Rahul maan liya na..
R: Aur mujhe sirf yeh hi chahiye...hamesha hamesha ke liye....
and he takes a bow. The patients all start clapping except pooja and Sangeet.Muskaan can't help but smile. Rahul gets down and picks up Muskaan
M: Kya kar raha hai Rahul?
R: apni biwi ko break par le kar ja raha hoon
and he carries her out with the patients clapping in the background.
.....................just another crazy day at Sanjeevni
I hope u guys liked it. It got soooo long again. oh man now i have to go do my assignment. I made it so if someone wants to continue they still can. sorry for all the mistakes.
Edited by leaves45 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
Com'nnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! plzzz yaar upload... we r waiting for itt.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
that was crazy I wish he actually does that in sanjeevani. it would be musch fun I was lmao when he was on bed yelling.🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavini570

that was crazy I wish he actually does that in sanjeevani. it would be musch fun I was lmao when he was on bed yelling.🤣🤣🤣

Aww thanks. I am all about grand gestures. Sigh I am waiting for someone to do that for me. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ leaves45 - That was sooo cute!
If Muski doesn't understand now, there is no hope for her.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great job yaaar....waiting to see same scenes happening in the serial...i hope this happpens...anyways waiting to read next post!!!!!

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