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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anwaya

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Thanks a lot dear..but kuch likh v to dia hota😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Jaise aap ki aagya..............................

yeh kiski hai poem.....

Yeh kiski hai thinking...........

Hue dil mein dhak dhak..........

Kahan chupe the ab tak................

Hum pe yeh kisne Poem-jadu kiya...........

khushi me hume........................mar dala............................

happy???????????????????????????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
While you were sleeping I gave to you my heart.
I LOVE dis linnee.
it's da best part in da poeemm.. 👏
i liked da poem overall tho !
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^ call me Ridz ! or Ridzy ! =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
gr8 poem
loved ur creaivity😊
*~vasundhara~*
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: piya2025

Hey guys this poen dedicated to thrusday night..sajan scenes..😛☺️

❤️
While You Were Sleeping
While you were sleeping I felt your heart beating.
While you were sleeping in my head love was repeating.
While you were sleeping all I could do was smile.

While you were sleeping I watched you for a while.
While you were sleeping I always held your hand.

While you were sleeping I knew where my heart would land.
While you were sleeping you would hold me near.
While you were sleeping I would cry all my tears.
While you were sleeping from you I knew I wouldn't part.
While you were sleeping I gave to you my heart.
☺️
Hey its preety short 😳i know but i guess its not that bad..whats say..plzzzzz comment..😳
love
piya..

Piyaaa u made my day i love you for this its really good and romantic....aawww i wish Samrat was thinking this way for Gunjan....OMG its really good...love you for this....😃😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely piya ,while u were sleeping i watched u for a while,i hope this happens,gunjan is so cute while she was sleeping,may be in near future,again yaar superb poem

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