ff: lovebug.. CH 5 on pg 5. NEWW!!!!!

hey. ima new to the forums. aye have read many ff's and decided to write one of my own. so bare with me please.


MAIN CHARACTERS
*jai walia: young business man. very good-looking. most eligible bachelor. he loves to party. He can be somewhat impatient. His best friend is Pushkar. Pushkar's parents died at very young age so Uday Walia has taken him in as his soon when he was young. Jai and Pushkar are practically brothers. Uday Walia (Jai's dad) is very close with Mr. Dixit ( Bani's dad). They grew up together.


*bani dixit: young, ambitious model in london. is a romantic. she's optimistic and lives are live to the fullest. loves to have fun. very sympathetic and friendly. Her family is shifting back to India because her dad really wants to go back to his homeland. Bani thinks this will be a great opportunity. She is very open-minded. Has one sibling; Rano. Rano is a bookworm. She loves to read but does not believe in love at first sight.




other characters will be indroduced as the story proceeds!

its gud...well waiting for the first part....
moon=)

hi.. welcome to the forum.. i love the intro.. cant wait for the 1st part..

good start...looking forward to read this..continue soon..

the intro sounds good

the intro sounds very interestin...

hey...welcome to the forum...

pls post the first part soon cant wait

hey.
i'll post the first part up this week.
thanks to everyone that commented.

Chapter One

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"now i'm speechless over the edge and just breathless, i never thought that i'd get hit by this lovebug again.....". Bani pressed the stop button on her radio and stepped out of her red Porsche onto her rocky pavement with her black stilettos. She tried to balance herself with her shopping bags in her hand. She managed to get herself inside without trampling anyone or anything. "Daddy" she chimed. As she turned the corner she bumped into a peculiar figure. The files from his hand scattered around.
"You always seem to know how to make my life harder," Kevin taunted.

"Oh thanks. I'll take that as a compliment," replied Bani. "You should be thankful you have me in your life," she laughed. "I can see that Ban" he answered back. Kevin was Bani's best friend since kindergarten and their parents were also business partners.

Kevin: "Now Miss Drama Queen I'll have to admit you're amazing, but could daddy's little princess please help me pick up the mess she has created?"

Bani: "I'm sorry Kev"

With that said they both got down on their knees and started picking up all the papers.

Kevin: (With the smile gone from his face) "Ban I'm really gunna miss you. You've always been there for me and now……" He stopped midway in his sentence, realizing she hadn't known anything yet.

Bani: Um what are you talking about?

Trying to cover up his teary eyes, "Um nothing, nothing at all". "I got to go, I'll see you tomorrow". At that he got up quickly taking the papers from her hand.

Bani: "Um tomorrow? Kev aren't you coming with me to Mona's party?"

Kevin: "Ah I really got to go. I'll call you later. Okay."

And with that he walked out the door leaving puzzled a Bani behind.

* aye know chapter one was short but aye promise the next chapter will be longer. please comment if aye should continue:)