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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel82

Part 11 was simply superb....

Thanks Anu for the really long update..that was really entertaining....
Loved all the family moments ...no negative characters or anything...all happy and sweet....
Loved the way the family is preparing for the marraige....and the family moment at the dinning table... that was soooooo sweet.....Aww poor Preet , he has to keep an eye on Prem and Heer....And Prem is becoming naughty day by day....Karan finding out abt Prem holding Heer's hand and saying it out loudly ๐Ÿ˜†
the preet- prem scenes were also soo cute...love the brother-brother bond...
Wow romantic Prem giving Heer a surprise outing...that was such a sweet surprise..And he personally arranged it all....and him giving heer the dress.๐Ÿ˜Š..and their dance and them feeding each other were all simply awesome, romantic....hehe the waiter had to interrupt them ๐Ÿ˜‰...Poor prem but he is lucky the car broke down๐Ÿ˜‰....The last part and preview are very very romantic ....
eagerly waiting for the next part......
Angie


i am in the 7th heaven by seeing all ur commnets........loved ur commnets ......loved ur opinion on each nad eavry part.......i am really very happy.....sorry for the long update if u feel bored or tired reading it.........i am really laughing and smiling when i am writing the didnig table scene......i am happy that u liked that scene......Veera is not a negative charcter in my FF ......only DJ is ultimate villian in my FF๐Ÿ˜ก......premand preet are too lovable brothers.......thank soo much for ur amazing commnts on the last part angie..........keep commenting on my FF like this only
loved ur commments๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 12345xxx

di true ga chepalante oka good producer should meet u ....not only ph scenes preet-prem scenes kuda excellent๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


neha e forum lo na kanti super ga FF rase vaalu challa mandi unaru.......thank q soo much..i am very happy that u liked my update
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello guys..i am back with my bada update ..first of all let me apolozise u for my bada update last time. But wat to do I am really hardly trying to reduce it'so guys start reading'..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Part 12 ' Passionate Night In Cottage

Prem slowly removes dust from Heer's head. Heer gets relieved. Suddenly Heer hears a Thunder sound. She quickly hugs Prem in fear. Prem is surprised by her sudden reaction, but he in return hugs and trying to pacify her. Heer is completely lost in Prem's soft arms. Prem is rubbing his hands on Heer's back. He hugs her more tightly. Heer nicely fits into his warm arms๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Then a passionate song plays in the background .

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein


Prem hugs her more tightly. They are completely lost in each other arms. Prem passionately kisses on Heer's neck๐Ÿ˜. She feels the warmth in Prem's soft kiss. He releases her from his tight hug
๐Ÿค— and takes her face in his hands.

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa
Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re

Prem is catching her water dripping face with his hands. Prem is kissing those water droplets passionately one by one. A small drop rests on Heer's lips that was seen by our naughty Prem. He comes close to her lips to kiss those water drops. She feels that she could not resist anymore, she turns her face away from Prem and tries to walk away from Prem. Naughty prem catches her hand๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Yuhi Baras Baras Kaali Ghata Barse
Hum Yaar Bheeg Jaaye Is Chaahat Ki Baarish Mein
Meri Khuyli Khuli Lato Ko Suljaaye
Tu Apni Ungliyon Se Main To Hoon Isi Khwaayish Mein
Sardi Ki Raaton Mein Hum Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Mein
Hum Dono Tanha Ho Na Koi Bhi Rahe Is Ghar Mein


He is kissing her hand all the way to her neck Heer's back is facing him.He slowly puts his arm around her neck and make her turn to his side. Now both are face to face. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†He slowly removes her wet hair strands from her face with his fingers. She feels that she could not resist it anymore, so she is making her steps backwards slowly looking into Prem's passionate eyes.๐Ÿ˜

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Aaja Re Aa Re


He is making his steps forwards looking into her eyes. Atlast he catches her arms with his hands and pushes her to a wall. Prem is adoring Heer's beauty
๐Ÿ˜. He feels that he could not control anymore and continusely kisses her from face to neck shamelessly. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† She is completely under the control of Prem.๐Ÿ˜›

Tadpaye Mujhe Teri Sabhi Baatein
Ek Baar Ay Deewani Jhootha Hi Sahi Pyaar To Kar
Main Bhooli Nahin Haseen Mulakaatein
Bechain Karke Mujhko Mujhse Yun Na Pher Nazar
Roothega Na Mujhse Mere Saathiyan Yeh Vaada Kar
Tere Bina Mushkil Hain Jeena Mera Mere Dil Mein

Prem thinks that there is one place which he wanted to fulfill his desire of kissing. He is coming closer to fulfill his wish of kissing those adorable lips.
๐Ÿ˜ Heer is also shamelessly staring at Prem's lips.โ˜บ๏ธ He comes closer to her. Her heart is racing.โ˜บ๏ธ Finally his pink lips touch her's adorable lips. At that moment both close their eyes. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain
Aaj To Mera Tan Badan
Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein
Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa
Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re
Aaja Re Aaja Re Aaja Re

Heer's one hand is stroking Prem's hand and the other hand is rubbing prem's back. Prem's both hands are rubbing Heer's back
๐Ÿ˜. Prem could not resist anymore and passionately hugs her๐Ÿค— and kisses her neck. Heer's lips are touching Prem's neck. They are completely lost in their own world unaware of the surroundings.

Then suddenly due to the force of air from the heavy rain, a water pot falls making a big noise in the cottage. Suddenly the silence of Prem-Heer romance breaks. They opens their eyes with a heavy jerk . They both recall the incidents that happen recently in the cottage. Suddenly both separate from each other.

(yayy I finally succeded in separating them''.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.warna hamara prem tho shaadi se pehle heer ke saath''' tauba tauba''๐Ÿคฃ..aisa mein kabhi nahi hoone dunga, atleast not in my FF, Mera prem pucca GENTLEMAN hain๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰)

They both move away slowly from each other (like cute hug scene in chawl wen Our prem gets nominated for BOY..got it guys). Prem is shyly rubbing his forehead. Heer is fixing her wet hair shyly.

Prem : Woh''.mein''..pa-pata'nahi''..kaise''..(tensed) (rubbing his hair sweetly)
Heer : (sweetly observing Prem's nervousness and gives a pale smile)
Prem : Heer'.(she sees him) zara mein'.mein dekh khe aatha hoon ki baarish rukh gaye ya nahi''..(immediately finds a reason to leave from that place)

Heer sweetly nods her head . He moves from there within no minute. He is standing near the door of the cottage and observing the rain. Heer stands in the middle of the room.

Prem : (thinks in his mind) OMG, yeh mein kya karne jarahatha Heer ke saath '' Woh bhi shaadi se pehle'..(feels tensed) (rubbing his silky hair) ..Pata nahi Heer kya sooch rahe hain mere bare mein '..ki'mein shaadi tak ka intezaar nahi karsaktha'..Yeh baarish kho bhi abhi aana tha aur upar se mere car problem (seeing the heavy rain)''Ghar mein maa intezaar karrahe hooge'.lekin yeh baarish tho tamne ke naam he nahi leere hain''..lagtha hain aaj mera kismet hi karrab hein'..(beating his forehead with his hand)

Heer : (thinks to herself) yeh kya hoogaya hain mujhe'.jab Prem mera kareeb aaya tho..mein ne usse rokha kyun nahi'.kya mein bhi uske saath''..yeh mein kya sooch rahe hoon'.(beating her forehead with her hand)'.pata nahi ghar mein saare log kya sooch rahe hoonge'''..(observing the rain from the window)


The scene shifts to Juneja's Mansion. Now time is 10.30. Gay3 sees the watch and says Preet to call him once. Preet is trying to call to Prem's cell, but everyone he hears only one message 'NOT REACHABLE'. Preet says the same thing to Gay3..Gay3 wonders that Prem left the home at 7.00 pm but now it is 10.30 pm. She remembers that prem promised her that he will be back within 3 hrs. She feels tensed that upto now why they both did not come home. ????

Prem slowly comes to Heer and says that rain is falling still more heavily . He also adds that they should spend the night here only. Heer says ok and asks him to try to call home. But Prem sweetly says that his cell battery is down.. Heer is rubbing her hands as she is feeling cold. Prem sees this and asks her to come and sit infront of fire. Heer says ok. Heer is sitting infront of the fire, he is sitting opposite to her. He is stealing glances from her face. He is adoring her wet face. Heer also steals glances from Prem๐Ÿ˜ .

Prem suddenly gets up from there as if he remembered something . He starts searching for something. Heer is confused .

Heer : What are you searching for?? (confused)๐Ÿ˜•
Prem : kya hum purre raat ek dusre kho dekthe rahenge. Soone (sleep) ke liye kuch tho intezaam karna padega na ???
Heer : (stands up ) Lekin yahan tho sirf wood aur grass kea lava kuch bhi nahi dekhraha hain
Prem : Yeh ek chota sa wooden cottage hain. Yahan sirf wahi dekhaye detha hain, double cot bed nahin??? (teases her)๐Ÿคฃ
Heer : Achha tho maine kab kahan ki yahan double cot bed milega (counters at his silly question , but prem is busy in searching..)
Prem : Milgaya (shouts loudly as if he saw gold)๐Ÿ˜‰
Heer : (shocked) kya'.?? Double cot bed ??? (teases)
๐Ÿคฃ
Prem : (gives an angry look๐Ÿ˜ก) nahi' bed sheet.. (looking at her)

He removes the bed sheet from a corner. It is filled with dust. Prem waves that old bed sheet hardly inorder to remove the dust. They both coughs due to dust. Prem brings some grass and places them on the floor. He makes two grass beds. He leaves nearly 10 inches gap between 2 beds.

Prem : Heer , tumara dupatta deena (give)'.
Heer : Mera dupatta??? Lekin kyun?? (confused)๐Ÿ˜•
Prem : don't ask any questions..only give ur dupatta .

Heer gives her dupatta to him. Prem spreads that dupatta on the heer's grass bed. He spreads that old bedsheet on his grass bed. Now the both beds are ready. They both sleep on their respective beds. Both are staring at each other. Heer shivers due to cold. Prem immediately gets up and puts his coat on her. He is rubbing her hands to make warm. Heer smiles. Heer assures him that she is fine and tells him to go and sleep. Prem denies saying that he will sleep after she sleeps. ๐Ÿ˜

He makes her close eyes by placing his hand on her eyes. He is patting on her forehead inorder to make her sleep
๐Ÿ˜. After sometime she sleeps. Suddenly she gets up to check Prem. She sees that he is standing near the window thinking something. She slowly gets up from the bed. He is lost in some thoughts. She slowly places her hand on his shoulder. Prem turns to her side

Heer : What happen Prem ?? tum abhi tak sooye nahi???
Prem : Woh heer I am unable to sleep. So I thought of standing near window. why did you get up??? I will sleep after sometime. You just go and sleep
Heer : no prem, I will not sleep and how can I sleep leaving you alone?? (smiles)
Prem : ok..you can't sleep leaving me alone..so we will do onething (heer looks at him confusingly) chalo hum bait kar bathe karthe hain thodi dher (time) ke liye
Heer : ok'..

They both sit down. Prem sits down leans his back on the wall. Heer first leans her back on the wall beside Prem. After sometime Prem is adoring her mehendi. Heer feels shy and puts her head on Prem's shoulder
๐Ÿ˜. They both become silent.

Heer : Prem tum itne khamosh kyun hoo.., kuch bolo na (getting up from his shoulder and facing him) (Prem is looking at her continusely) aur'.aur tum mujhe aisa kyun dekhrahe hoon'(he is staring at her)
Prem : Dekh raha hoon ki kahe yeh mera sapna tho nahi
Heer : Sapna???? .mein kuch samje nahi (confused)

Prem : Mein jis ladki se beintehah mohabbat karraha hoon aaj wohi ladki mere samne baite hain'..mein jis ladki ke liye purre duniya se lada (fight) hoon, parso mein usse ladki ke haath purre duniya ke samne hemesha hamesha ke liya damne wala hoon'(taking her hand into his hand). Soochraha hoon ki kahi mein sapna tho nahi dekhraha hoon.(looking into her beautiful eyes
๐Ÿ˜)

Heer : (touched by his words and thinks that he is becoming emotional. So she cutely pinches him)
Prem : oouch..(feeling little pain)๐Ÿคฃ
Heer : ab yakeen hua, ki tum koi sapna nahi dekhrahe hoon. Yeh sach hain ki mein tumare samne hoon

Prem : Haan baba maangaya hoon ki yeh saach hain ki tum mere samne hoo'.yeh saach hain ki tum mere saath dinner par aye thi'..yeh saach hain ki tumne mere diya hua dress pehnethe..(heer is sweetly nodding her head resting on Prem's chest)'yeh saach hain ki 2 din mein hamare shaadi honewali hain..(Heer feels shy)'Yeh saach hain ki shaadi ke baad hamare suhaag raat hooge'(Prem tightens his grip on her arms)'Yeh saach hain ki hamko 2 bachhe hoonge'(Prem blushes)'Yeh saach hain ...

Heer : (cuts him in the middle) rukho..rukho..Kya kaha tumne??? (surprised)
Prem : Maine'Maine kya kaha???? (confused)๐Ÿ˜•
Heer : Wahi tum jo ab keh rahe hoon'.
Prem : Yeh saach hain ki tum mere samne hoo.. Yeh saach hain ki'(repeats the whole sentence childishly)

Heer : Prem ''Yeh sab nahi , jo tumne aakri line kaha hain na woh'bacche ke bare mein'(reminding him)
Prem : Woh'(recollecting) maine kaha hain ki humko cute cute si 2 bacche hoonge. Ek tumare tarah aur ek mere tarah'(says by hugging her tightly๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : Tumara matlab kya hain ki humko 2 baache hoonge'.(gets out from his tight grip and seeing him with a shock)

Prem : Haan, kya koi problem hain??? (little bit shocked)
Heer : Lekin Prem, mujhe tho ek hi baccha chahiye..woh bhi bilkul tumare tarah'(pinching his both chubby cheeks
๐Ÿ˜)
Prem : Lekin Heer, aise kaise hoo saktha hain '(removing her hands with a shock)
Heer : Aisa kyun nahi hoo saktha'..(again resting her head on Prem's chest)

Prem : Heer tum baath ko nahi samajrahe hoon'(again bringing her face to face with him and catching her arms with his hands)'Heer hamare baby ke saath khelne ke liye koi tho hoona chahiye'.ab mujhe hi dekho, hum paanch hain'hamesha ek dusre ke madad karthe hain aur tumko..tumko bhi ek behen hain, usse tum apne saare baatein share karte hoon'.main bhi yehi chahtha hoon ki hamare baby ke saath koi tho hoona chahiye jisse saath woh khelega, masti karega aur apni saare baatein share karega. Issliye mujhe kuch nahi suuna(listen), mujhe 2 bacche chahiye and that's final'..(he sweetly explains to her about the advantages of having 2 childs as if he is explaining a business deal'.Heer is making diff expressions and pretends that she is not listening to him๐Ÿคฃ)

Heer : Kya final??? (she lost her patience๐Ÿ˜ก) Maine kahana mujhe 2 bacche nahi chahiye, tho nahi chahiye'.mujhe sirf ek hi baccha chahiye aur woh bhi bilkul tumare tarah cute hoona chahiye'aur mein iss bare mein aur behes nahi karna chahthe'(gives a stubborn look)

Prem : Heer'.. tum bhi na kitne ziddi hogaye hoo'(gives a restless look) mein bhi koi kam nahi hoon'mujhe 2 bachhe chahiye tho chahiye 'that's all (gives a stubborn look)

Heer : Prem'..tum kisko ziddi kehrahe hoon mujhe'zidd tho tum karrahe hoon. Maine kaha na mujhe ek hi bachha chahiye, tho tum mere baath kyun nahi maanrahe hoon'.(keeps a chidish face๐Ÿ˜†)

Prem : Iss bare mein kisika baath nahi sununga (listen)'tumare bhi nahi'hamare 2 bacche hoonge'''.(says confidently)
Heer : Nahi'.hamare ek hi baby hooga'(she too says confidently)
Prem : dho
Heer : ek
Prem : dho....(shouts sweetly๐Ÿ˜ก)
Heer : ek......(she too shouts sweetly๐Ÿ˜ก)
Prem : Heer.....(says restlessly)
Heer : Prem.....(says angrily)

(I know guys it is really hard to imagine Premeer fighting, but just imagine the SBS wala baarsih scene of Harshiti fighting'.and imagine Harshiti in this above scene'it will be really funny guys..........)

Both became silent for sometime. He sees her face and remembers that he is hurting her'..She too remembers that she is hurting him๐Ÿ˜ญ)

Prem : chalo koi baath nahi'agar tumhe 2 bacche nahi chahiye tho koi baath nahi ''hamara ek hi bachha hooga (catching her cheeks with his both hands
๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : Nahi..nahi..Prem. Mein tumara dil dukana nahi chahthe'agar tumhe 2 bachhe chahiye tho mujhe bhi 2 bacche chahiye'.

(just remember the heer's expressions when Prem says that he is going to delhi and he may not be for her B'Day'.They both are having the same childish expressions at this situation)

Prem : Nahi..Heer, mujhe ek hi baby chahiye (confronts her)
Heer : Nahi..Prem humko 2 bacche hoonge (catching his cheeks)
Prem : (removes his hands from her cheeks) Maine kahana Ek'.
Heer : (removes her hands from his cheeks) Maine bhi kaha tha na dho'.
Prem : Ek
Heer : Dho
Prem : Ek....(sweetly shouts again) (hay rabba yeh dono phir se surru hogaye๐Ÿคฃ)
Heer : Dho...(she too shouts sweetly๐Ÿ˜ก)

Prem immediately feels that this argument is getting heated. He quickly closes her mouth by putting his hand on her mouth. Heer is shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Prem : Heer'tum bhi na, abhi tak hamare shaadi bhi nahi hue aur tum tho abhi se bacche ke bare mein sooch rahe hoon'.(teases cutely๐Ÿ˜ƒ)
Heer : (shocked๐Ÿ˜•) Kaun' mein???? (keeping her hand on her mouth)
Prem : aur nahi tho kya mein??? Pehle hamare shaadi tho ho jaane do heer, phir hum decide karenge bacche ke bare mein'tum tho abhi se jagada (fight) karrahe hoo bacche ke bare mein''..(sweetly scolds her)

Heer : Kya ??? (surprised) mein tumse jagada karrahe hoo''..mein''..yeh topic pehle tumne suuru kiya, tumne aage badaya (forwarded) hain, aur upar se mujhe daant rahe hoon''tumse baat karne tho accha hain ki mein chup chap sojao (gets angry๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก)

Saying this she tries to get up from there to sleep. But our naughty prem catches her hand
๐Ÿ˜. Heer turns to him.

Prem : Sorry Heer'I am really very sorry, Pls mujhe maaf kardona '''(catching her chin
๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : Tum bhi na prem, pehle daant the (scolds๐Ÿ˜ก) hoo. '. Aur upar se maafi maangthe hoon'lekin issbaar tumhe koi maafi nahi mileghi''.(says confidently)
Prem : Heer'..you know one thing''''if a person scolds you more, then that person loves you and cares for you more than anything in the world''..
Heer : bahut achha saying hain''lekin yeh sab tum apne paas hi rakho, tumhe koi maafi nahi milne wali''..samje (gives a angry look๐Ÿ˜ก)

Prem : mujhe tumko maanana bahut khoob aatha hain''..(smiles naughtily
๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : Accha kya iss bar ki koi surprise plan kiya hain'..mujhe maanaane ke liye
Prem : Surprise'..tho nahi plan kiya hain''..lekin mein tumhe maanaunga, woh bhi bahut aasani se''.(smiles cutely
๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : ohhhhh'..tho phir dheeri (late) kis baath ki'.surru karo na'..

He comes closer to her. She is thinking wat will he do????Prem comes more closer to her
๐Ÿ˜, but she purposely turns her face away from his face as she understood his naughty intensions. Prem slightly smirks. Then suddenly he starts tickling her with his one hand on her waist. Heer is shocked by Prem's naughtiness๐Ÿ˜.

Heer : Prem'.Yeh tum kya kararhe hoon (laughing and feeling shyโ˜บ๏ธ)
Prem : maine kaha na '.ki mein tumko bahut aasani se maanaunga (tickling with one hand
๐Ÿ˜)
Heer : Pr-prem'pls mujhe cho'chooddho na'..i am unable to laugh (laughing continusely and Prem is smiling
โ˜บ๏ธ)

Prem : Achha pehle'yeh accept karo ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya (tickling her cutely๐Ÿคฃ)
Heer : nay''.(blushing
โ˜บ๏ธ and tries to get up from there but prem catches her hand with his other hand) '.na-nahi'maaf karunga (laughing so much)
Prem : Accha '.ab dekho mein kya kartha hoon

Prem places his both hands on her waist and starts to tickle her more. Heer is trying to escape but Prem is catching her

Prem : kya abb bhi tum mujhe maaf nahi karoge

Heer feels that she could not laugh anymore'.as she is really unable to take her breaths due to laughing

Heer : Ma-maine maa-maaf kiya (unable to control her laugh) pls..mujhe choo-chooddho maine tumhe ma-maaf kiya (finaaly speaks)

At the moment prem listens those words from Heer's mouth, he stopped tickling and again leans on the wall laughing whole-heartedly. She is hardly taking her breaths after a non-stop laughing session. Prem pulls her with his hand
โ˜บ๏ธ. She falls on Prem's chest and trying to stop her laugh. Prem cutely stroking her hair with his hand๐Ÿ˜. She finaaly manages to talk

Heer : Prem..tum bhi na (sweetly punches him on the other side of the chest๐Ÿ˜)
Prem : Kya tumare naarazghi dhoor hogaye hain ya mein phir se surru karoon????
Heer : (getsup from his chest and puts her both hands together) pls '.i really hardly manged to control my laugh for the first time. If you start again then due to laughing I will die'
Prem : (puts his hand on her mouth ) have u gone mad'wat are u speaking??? (angrily๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก)
Heer : Prem who aachank mere mu (mouth) se nikal gaya tha''.
Prem : Achanak nikal gaya ya kisi bhi wajah ho mein yeh sab nahi jaantha, Lekin mere samne yeh shabd kabhi mat kehna''..mujse bardaash nahi hooga (angrily)
Heer : Aacha baba I am really very sorry (catching her ears with her hands๐Ÿคฃ)

Prem smiles for her innocence
๐Ÿ˜ and signals Heer with his eyes to come into his soft arms๐Ÿค—. Heer sweetly rests her head on his chest and puts her arms around Prem's neck๐Ÿ˜. Prem also hugs her and kisses on her forehead.โ˜บ๏ธ

Heer : Prem'
Prem : umm'''
Heer : mujhe kabhi kabhi ek baath sooch kar haase aathe hain
Prem : haase aathi hain??? For what???

She removes her hand from his neck and leans her back on his chest. She takes his one hand into her hand and his other hand is surrounding Heer's waist
๐Ÿ˜.

Heer : Purri duniya ke nazar mein tum ek daring and dynamic business man ho , jisne choti umar mein BOY award mila, lekin agar duniya meri nazar se dekthe hain na, tho usse dikaye detha hain ki tum kitna naughty and shitaani karthe hoo
๐Ÿ˜ bilkul ek chote bachhe ke tarah (placing her hand on his cute cheek๐Ÿ˜)

Prem : woh tho main hoon (says sweetly) (they both laugh๐Ÿคฃ)
Heer : Prem'.Prem'.
Prem : ab kya hain'
Heer : Woh dekho falling star (showing him as they both can see the sky through the other window), Jaldi se apne aankhen bandh karlo aur koi wish maanglo (excitedly)

Prem : (hugging her tightly
๐Ÿ˜) mere sabse badi wish tho mere samne hain, ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
Heer : Yeh sab chood dho , aur apne aankhen bandh karo..pls mere liye (she puts her hand on his eyes inorder to close his eyes)
They both wish and slowly opens their eyes
Heer : Kya wish maange hain tumne ???
Prem : Mera choodo, pehle tum batao, tumne kya wish maange hain'phir main bataunga.
Heer : Achha tho thek hain, pehle mein hi bata dethi hoon, maine yeh maanga kit um hamesha mere saath hi raho, aur hamari zindagi mein judaai naam ke liye koi bhi place nahi hoona chahiye. Chalo ab tum batao.

Prem : Maine bhagwan se sirf ek hi wish maange (keeping his hand on her check
๐Ÿ˜) ki tumhe duniye ke saare khushi mile, agar tum khush rahogi, tho muskaan mere chehre pe kabhi nahi hatega (goes). Agar mein dil hoon, tho tum iss dil ki dhadkan hoo. Dil se dhadkan ko koi nahi judaa karsaktha hain ( sorry I copied prem's dialogue as I like this dialogue and it best suits this situation)

She feels emotional and rests her head on Prem's chest
๐Ÿ˜. Prem is carenessing her by stroking her hairโ˜บ๏ธ

Heer : Pata hain Prem, mein tumse bahut kuch kehna chahthe thi lekin kabhi nahi karpaye. Ab mein apne dil ki saare baatein kehdoonge

Prem : (Prem is listening to her words silently by carenessing her cheeks๐Ÿ˜ with his hands like'.umm..rremember prem fought with DJ on his marriage day and consoles Heer by hugging her sweetly๐Ÿ˜)

Heer : Yaad hain Prem, jab hum pehle baar mile the uss andhere raath mein (Premeer bump into each other in the house ' april 7) shayad tumne mere chehra nahi dekha hain, lekin maine pehle baar tumhe dekha hain aur jab mujhe pata chala ki tumhi prem woh prem ho, jiske liye maine 20 yrs intezaar kiya, I am surprised , but that happiness lasted for only 2 seconds, then immediately I remembered DJ chachi's joothe (wrong) words and I ran from there๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ. Aur phir jab mujhe pata chala ki tumare aur Ash ki shaadi hoone wali hain. Tho mein bahut rooyi thi'๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.aur apne saare dard ko share karne ke liye mein shiv mandir par gaye thi'.aur wahan tumne mujhe pehle baar dekhe hain'
๐Ÿ˜

Heer's eyes are filled with tears when remembering all those incidents.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Prem feels sad by remembering all those incidents๐Ÿ˜ณ. Heer tightly hugs him๐Ÿค— as if he is leaving her. Prem is stroking her hair
๐Ÿ˜

Heer : And when I saw you putting ring to Ash infront my eyes I could not control my tears.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Uss waqt mein chila chilake bhagwan se poochna chahthe thi ki ussne mere saath aisa kyun kiya, akhir maine aisa koun sa paap kiya hain jiske liye ussne mujhe itne bada saaja di''.(she stops and cries badly๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ)

Prem could not control his tears by feeling Heer's pain. He gets anger๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก on DJ first as she is the cause for all Heer's pain and tears. Then he too cries with heer and tries to console heer. He then quickly wipes off his tears and makes her get up from his chest.

Prem : Bas..ab tum aur ek shabd bhi nahi kahoghi'''.mein tumhe iss tarah rothe hue nahi dekh saktha''.(in a sad and determined voice)

Heer : Lekin Prem ..mein ????

Prem : maine kaha na heer ab tum kuch nahi bologhi'mujhe pata hain tum mujse kitna pyaar karthi hoon'.issliye tumhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hain''.agar tumne ek shabd bhi kaha tho tumhe meri kasam''

Heer : Prem'

She quickly hugs him and cries. He is trying to console her. Then a song plays in the back ground (from woh lamhe)


Ummmm hummm humm ummmmmmmm
ummmm hummm humm ummmmmmmm

Prem is hugging her . They both are crying.

Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena


Prem kisses her forehead and hugging her tightly to console her

Meri Dil Ki Rani Tum
Meri Khushiyon ka Mausam
Mere Khwabon Ki Taabeer
Mere Sapno Ki Tasveer
Bin Tere Kaisi Aar


As the song plays all the Flash backs of premeer scenes are shown one by one. Prem puts his hand on a lit candle after knowing abt her engagement, Prem carries an unconscious Heer in his arms, Prem catching Heer's hand in jail, Premeer eyelock session while dancing to ' Bol na Halke ', Prem's confession scene, Premeer break down , Prem talking to Heer before sitting in the mandap, Premeer magical hug after awards ceremony, Prem proposing heer for marriage.

Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar
Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuchh, Tu Naa Ho To Bekaar
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena
Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena'''''..


Heer wipes her tears and gets up from Prem's chest. Prem also wipes his tears. Heer gives a smile by seeing him. Prem sweetly wipes her tears and catches her face in his hands. Heer pretends that she is fine. To change Prem's mood she starts to talk

Heer : chalo, agar tum mujhe nahi bolne dooge ki mein tumhe kitna pyaar karthi hoon tho koi baath nahi mein tumhe dekathi hoon ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karthi hoon (smiles cutely)
Prem : dekaoghe ??? (surprised) lekin woh kaise ??(confused๐Ÿ˜•)
Heer : chalo apne aankhen bandh karlo
Prem : But why???
Heer : Prem'..(sweetly shouts)
Prem : ok ok I will close my eyes'..

He closes his eyes. Heer comes closer to him.๐Ÿ˜ Prem can hear her heartbeats. Heer caringly kisses him on his foreheadโ˜บ๏ธ. A cute smile appears on Prem's face. Heer feels shy by seeing his smile. Then she kisses on his both eyes passionately๐Ÿ˜. Prem is enjoying each and every moment of Heer's naughtiness. Heer then kisses on his cheeks. Prem feels that he is in the heaven. He is surprised to see heer's other side. Heer then finaaly reaches to his pink lips to say him how much she loves him. Prem can feel her breathing . But he did not dare to utter a single word from his mouth as he knows that even his breathing can spoil the passionate situation.

Heer finally kisses those pinky lips.
๐Ÿ˜ At the moment when Heer's lips touched Prem's lips, they both are completely out of the world. Prem is stroking her hair passionately and rests his other hand on her waist. Prem and Heer are closing their eyes. Heer slowly comes near Prem's ears and whispers ' I LOVE YOU PREM '.

Prem slowly opens his eyes. His eyes are filled with tears of joy. Seeing prem's teary eyes'she smiles and wipes his tears. Prem hugs Heer. Heer inreturn hugs Prem. After sometime they both slept not knowing when they slept. Heer is resting her head on Prem's chest. Prem is leaning on the wall and puts his head on her head . They both are sleeping silently'''''..


PRECAP : Prem and Heer are siting in the car. A truck is pulling the car with the help of the rope. Atlast they comes home early in the morning. Gay3 looks at them angrily. Prem-heer are putting their heads down. Gay3 makes her steps towards them angrily. All the others are watching them.

Hope u all liked it. It is complete premeer episode. i apolozise you all for the bigger update. But seriously guys I deleted nearly 15-20 dialogues of premeer to shorten the update. Lekin kya karu yeh tho abb bhi bada hain. Sorry guys I can't do anything. But take your own time to read it and comments are must. As you all know that your comments make my day.



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tnx for adding me in yr pm list
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thanx for adding me in the pm list and your update is superb, do continue soon๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ eagerly waiting
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awesomneeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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add me on the list too pls. anyways graet update. the pre heer scene was rocking!!!๐Ÿ‘
though the best part was the other side of heer, i never imagined her to be so freaking passionate!!โ˜บ๏ธ
pls dont make gullu to mad at them !!
get them married real soon
update asap
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wow!what a long update!oh my i god im so happy that nearly whole part is about preemer! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณn prem uffu naughty as usual๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†i love our naughty heer๐Ÿ˜†when she was moving forward prem's lip i was like๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒis that our heer๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†n the precap is quite funny for me maybe she will pull their ears๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†but my prediction never get right๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†n i m very very very happy!that there is no silly n damb ullu in this part๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†very good hope u never show him in this ff๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†i m feeling like heaven when i read preemer scence n didnt saw ullu today!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†so whens ur next part do tell!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†hint hint hint!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
hmmm anu....again with dhamaka part.....gr888 job dudez.... comng to part.... Premeer scenes are really too romantic yar...u again made ur readers blushed again....Prem is vvvvvvv naughty in ur FF....and made heer also naughty....they are crazy in love...
Somtimes through Pain we grow....as premeer are suffered a lot in their life, the pain the feel earlier....was now changed to happiness in ur FF....And we are waiting for Premeer marriage yar...hope we expect in ur next next part....and in next part....whats gaya3 maa is going to do???hmm have to see...
Keep it up buddy...thanks for such a big part...
~silpa

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