FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#261

Hey Anu , Wow another long update...Cool....we really enjoy reading long updates so plz dont reduce it...

Haila , Prem is soo naughty 😉....hey love both the songs you chose .....

I'm sure you must have had a blast writing this part...😉😆the scenes are so well written....

Thank god this time the wind stopped them😆😆 Prem putting Heer to sleep was soo sweet and caring...

the way they were fighting over the kids thing was so cute.. loved the dialogues between them👏the tickling part was funny😆absolutely loved the whole part...very sweet with an emotional scene in between...

and haila, heer's naughty side..😉...that was interesting...

OMG the precap, me eagerly waiting for the next part...Wonder what gayathri mom's going to do...

All in all , awesome update...👏

Edited by angel82 - 16 years ago

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Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#262

aww anu...sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful marvelous..fantastic...superb...very nice.... i m dying to read how gaya3 mom reacts....she is such a sweet mom...but i noe she ll b angry...but still hope she dint scold them..hehe...dont make her to scold them plz...i noe i m not gud in appreciating as u r....but still i loved every bit of it..the way prem made the bed if grass n asked her to sleep b4 he sleeps waz very caring...

n then there fight....n ur marvelous writing is making me crazy sis..u have such a hidden talent..u shud explore it more n more...i must say this is more better then me....hehe...as i said i m not very gud in appreciating but still i ll say that u r very terrific writor yaar..me just love it....its superb...me dont have words yaar...tooooooooooooooo gud...i m fallen in love wid ur ff...

its sooo gud..n the scenes were very well written...so nicely...n the songs u choosed were perfectly suiting the situation....just awsum....me dont have words lemme se my dictionary.....hehe

ok now lemme tell u that i m just tooooooooo much eager n excited to noe what happen when they cum back home....plz plz....update soon...here are sum stars for ur ff...just wish they cud tell how gud u write..lolz

⭐️ X 99999999999999999999⭐️

hope u noe now,....

wid love
PARTH

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fj08

@fj08

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#263

ab gaya3 say shamat aayay ge dono ke...

prem had all the opportunity he was too much of a gentleman :(

well he is still the perfect prem, what will they do the day before the wedding? looking forward to the wedding details, :)

gr8 update

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sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#264

hi tht waz so good plz add me on pm

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Thapanee

@Thapanee

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#265

it was awesome i really like it, the naughty side of both prem and heer. I really dont mind if it is longer than this 😃 . I enjoy reading it.

eagerly waiting for next part. Pls add me on pm. thanx

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#266

Hey

👏 👏tooo awsome. wow soo cutee, whole thing was premeer, loved their kiss,sweet convo, fighting on bache aww☺️, tickling & remembering there past & both of their naughty sides! wow rlly loved readin it! sooo romantic ☺️😳 thanks for pm. & Rlly dunt mind it long u kno lol :) & cant wait for next update! cont soon plz