A poem 4 Samrat !Do read & comment plzz!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heyaa gyz..whatzz up?😊

Today when i was in college that time i wrote something & its made like a poem..so thought to share wid u..😛
Man !What was a boring lecture🥱But thanks to my boring proff..widout him i'll not get any time to write this😆😆😆
So here it is..Hope u all..like it😳


As we sit in the snow white sand,
And the waves crash upon the shore,
I stare to the sky trying to understand,
Why the stars seem brighter then ever before.

Is it because the sky is so clear,
That the stars are shining bright?
Or could it be that love is near,
On this perfect summer night?

We laugh, we stare, we talk,
Draw pictures in the sand.
Along the ocean we walk,
Just him and I, Hand in Hand.

Our night is almost finished,
As the moon is fading fast,
Another day will be diminished,
Put with the others in the past.

Everything seems to melt away,
Faster then the drop of a dime,
As night dissolves to day,
We lose more precious time.

Surely soon the sun will rise,
As this is Gods command,
I know he can see the twinkle in my eyes,
As we walk Hand in Hand.
Hmm but now i want 2say that what a dreamer im
sitinng in d classroom but dreaming these abt u all d time..



Hey my buddies hope u liked it..Do comment plzz..😳

Love u all😊

Piya.



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sam n gun's 1st date yaad dila di!

hope aisa dekhane ko mile1

piya wonderfull job!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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piyaaa...its beautifull...😍😍

me has read ur poems before evn...
n i must say bacha...u're jus suuuuperbbbb...!!!
i can feel hooow bored u were during ur class..😛😆
as u were so engrossed wid writing dis wonderful poemm...😳
amazingg job done siss..🤗
loved each n every bit of it...
u rokkk...!!..👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anwaya

Sam n gun's 1st date yaad dila di!

hope aisa dekhane ko mile1

piya wonderfull job!

Aww Thanks darling🤗
Thankz a ton😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow!!!!!amazing poem.......jst luv it......i hope v get 2 c sumthyn lyk dis 2!!!!
gr8 job!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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piya
ur a great poet, i didn't know before
the last lines were more true n happens sometimes 2 me too
but sajan together come in my mind n never i can write such a good poem like this
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabo0

piyaaa...its beautifull...😍😍

me has read ur poems before evn...
n i must say bacha...u're jus suuuuperbbbb...!!!
i can feel hooow bored u were during ur class..😛😆
as u were so engrossed wid writing dis wonderful poemm...😳
amazingg job done siss..🤗
loved each n every bit of it...
u rokkk...!!..👍🏼

Aww Thnks so much di..🤗Really i was so much bored that time & u know whst what is my thatproffs name..?
Mr.Kalicharan dasghupta😆
Relly di his name remain me more of sammy all time time like Sammy's dialouges..-Kail ghala k tale😆😆😆
Thanks 4ur lovely comment di..Glad that u liked it..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well piya aap class room mein yeh karti ho???????????😡

Accha hai, sahi track pe jaa rahi ho!!!

N seriously it was gr8!

well i kind of write poems so i feel it was gr8!

Simple yet effective!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤗Thanks a ton di..glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: kavya.b

piya

ur a great poet, i didn't know before
the last lines were more true n happens sometimes 2 me too
but sajan together come in my mind n never i can write such a good poem like this

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anwaya

well piya aap class room mein yeh karti ho???????????😡

Accha hai, sahi track pe jaa rahi ho!!!

N seriously it was gr8!

well i kind of write poems so i feel it was gr8!

Simple yet effective!


😳Sorry my dear per aghar class utna boring ho to student vagh jate hai main to fir v kuch likh lia😆😆
& thanks..😊

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