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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi friends I can't find the old FF - SK Romance so, I am creating a new one:

Here is the third part, continuation of today's episode. As we all know that Ratan has been exposed... So, now the story will revolve around Summit and Kumkum more...
Omi: I am sorry Summit beta mene tumhe samjne mein galti kardi... Mujhe maaf kardo....
Summit: nahin papa... me to isi baat se khoosh hoon ke aap ko sachaai ka pata chal gaya...
Summit's mom: Aur yeh sachai kabhi bahar nahi aati, agar hamari bahu Kumkum summit ka saath nahin deti
Omi looks at Kumkum and walks towards her... All this while Summit is looking at her lovingly...
Omi: Kumkum beta mene tumhe bhi theek se treat nahin kiya... mujhe maaf kardo....
Kumkum: nahin uncleji.... aap to mere pita saman hai....aap aise mafi mange ke mujhe sharminda mat kijiye... aap ne jo kuch bhi kaha, woh to mein kabka bhula chuki hoon.... uncle ji
Omi: uncle ji nahin, papaji kaho beta, jaise summit kehta.... mein tumhara papa pehle or summit ka badme hoon...
Omi and kumkum hug....and
Omi: meri bahu se jyada tum meri beti banke rahogi is ghar me...
Kumkum and Summit look at each other....
Summit's mom : Ab jub sub theek ho gaya hai to mein chahti hoon ke Summit or Kumkum ki shaadi celebrate kijaye..
Omi: Woh kaise
Summit's mom: ek surprise de ke.....
Omi: Surprise???
Summit's mom whispers something in Omi''s ears and both smile....
Summit's mom, Komal and Dadi take Kumkum and dress her up in bridal outfit.... All this while, Kumkum is thinking in logo ko kuch pataa nahin hai... mein kya karu... or yeh Summit bhi na... kab se apna muh nahin dikhaya hai....
In the other room, Summit'sdad dresses Summit up in Groom outfit..... Summit is all wondering how to tell his dad about Summit and Kumkum's reality...
All this while, Kumkum is dressed up and all the ladies leave her in a fully decorated room and go to bring Summit.....
Both of Summit's parents get emotional seeing Summit in that outfit...
All the ladies take Summit to the room where Kumkum is and push him and lock the door from outside..
They go away laughing....
In the room:
Summit is all surprised to see Kumkum in Bridal outfit.... He just continuously stares at her in the mirror and Kumkum at Summit....
Both of them are hesitant to say anything to each other.....
Just then the power outage takes place and it becomes dark in the room...
Kumkum gets scared and runs and hugs Summit.....
Summit hugs her back as tightly as possible...and both embrace each other ever so lovingly....
After a while, Kumkum realisez what just happened and she frees herself from Summit's grip...and walks away from him.....
Summit: Kya huaa Kumkum??? (staring at Kumkum lovingly and passionately)
Kumkum all nervous, looking down at the floor: mein bahot thak gayi hoon or sona chahti hoon.....
(Summit gets an idea about scaring her and teasing her)
Summit: Kumkum yeh hamari suhaag raat hai or tum sona chahti ho.... kaisi biwi ho tum yaar...
Kumkum not expecting such a thing from Summit, gets scared and stares at him suprisingly...
Summit turns away from her and smiles while saying
Summit: are aaj to hamaraa samay hai or tum sona chati ho???
Kumkum: Summit.....
Before she could finish Summit starts to walk towards her.....
Kumkum starts to walk backwards.....staring at him in surprise....
Summit corners her to the wall and leans on her..... Scaring the hell out of her....
Summit pretends as if he is trying to kiss her and she looks the other way....
Summit smirks and : mein change karke aata hoon and goes into the washroom to change...
Meanwhile, Kumkum changes into her night dress...
Summit comes out of the washroom and looks in the direction of Kumkum.... She gets a bit uncomfortable....
Summit: Tum ab tak soyi nahin....
Kumkum: Par yahaan to ek hi bed hai.... mein kahaan soun...?
Summit: Bhai mein to bed par hi sone waala hoon.... tum chaho to yahaan aake so sakti ho...
Summit falls on the bed and lies down....
Kumkum: mein...........
as she looks towards Summit, Summit pretends to fall asleep...
Kumkum: kaisa ladka hai??? ek ladki yahaan pe khadi hai or ye janab aaraam se so rahe hain>>>
ab mein kya karoon papaji
meanwhile, Summit is enjoying Kumkum's state....
Kumkum looks around for a pillow and a blanket so she can sleep on the floor.... but finds nothing...
She looks towards where Summit is sleeping and see a spare blanket and a pillow....
As she leans to grab it, Summit throws his hand on them pretending to sleep.... Kumkum manages to get the pillow but, the blanket was under Summit so she decides to sleep on floor....
Kumkum sleeps on the floor, turns here and there.... At last she falls asleep...
It is midnight and it gets a little cold..... Summmit looks at Kumkum sleeping..... The wind blows and Kumkum starts to shiver.....
Summit realizes this and goes to close the window but Kumkum is still shivering....her face is covered by her hair....
Summit walks up to where she is and moves the hair from her face and carries her in his arms....
He places her on the bed... and covers her with a comforter.....kisses her forehead
He himself stands by the window and sees Kumkum sleeping and the moon light shining on her.... He just stares at her from distance....
Its morning and Kumkum turns around..... Summit just to scare the hell out of her..... pretends to sleep beside her....
He puts her lipstick all over his face...
Kumkum wakes up and seeing Summit beside him.... gets scared about what happened....
She gets up from the bed and is breathing heavily....
Summit wakes up: good morning and stretches ....
Kumkum: Summit mein yahaan kaise????
Summit: Tumhe yaad nahin Kumkum??? Raat ko...
Kumkum: Raat ko kya Summit???/ Kya hua tha yahaan....
Summit: I am sorry Kumkum...hum apne aap rok nahin paye????
Kumkum: Aisa nahin ho sakta (Summit smiles).....
Kumkum falls down on the floor and starts to cry
Kumkum: Aisa nahin ho sakta Summit???? Shadi ke bina, mein apne bauji ko kya moon dikhaungi???
Summit: Mat ro Kumkum.....please mat ro....
Kumkum: Kumkum cries.... mein zinda nahin reh sakti..... and she starts to walk towards the door...
Summit grabs her hand....
Summit: Tum aisa kuch nahin karo gi......
Kumkum: mein aisa hi karoongi....mein kisiko mun dikhane ke kabil nahin rahi...
Summit: Aisa kuch nahin hua hai..... yeh to ek mazaak tha...
Kumkum: mazaak tha??/ to mein yahaan bed pe kaise???
Summit naraates the whole thing to her...
Kumkum starts to hit Summit with the pillow...
Summit grabs the pillow from her hand and bring her closer with one hand and stops her other hand from hitting him...
Summit: Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho??? Mein apni jaan de doonga par tum par kabhi bhi aanch nahin aane doonga?? Tum ne aisa soch kaise liya ke mein tumhare saath aisa karoonga??
Kumkum: mein bahot dar gayi thi Summit... Aainda aisa mazaak bilkul mat karna...
Summit kisses her forehead and the scene fades..
take care everyone....
best wishes,
ridhi
hi friends some of it came true in today's episode.... I was so surprised...
like the lights going off and everyone giving summit and Kumkum a surprise....
it was weird.....
Edited by sweetchilly1234 - 17 years ago

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Pavitra thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic wonderful please conti soooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks pavitra, will do as soon as I can
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ridhi i just hope that your predict will come true it will be reallyfum to watch thta
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yes Aimen is right i hope it comes true in real thanks a lot it is the great story awesome ,fabulous,fantstic,excellent,welldone,marvellousand so much more it was really fabulous
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kash aisa ho oh i just wish ut that was amazing good job
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awessssome part dear..!! luvd it..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 start dear..U real write well..šŸ‘i loved each n every word..Do continue soon...😳mari tara slow mat hona.🤣🤣..I sure u won't..😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sumit don't say papa to his dad he say dad!!
anyway nice !!
Edited by jalak-ji - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i love romantic scene good work

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