Creative One Shot Surprises #2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: suganain

My BOO ~ what can i say?? I love that title😆I love the title too, it's from my favorite song and is soo sweet and romantic!😳 Naina you did an awesome job creating a small fluffy lovely story.I don't think that it is fluffy😕 It's about a love being shared amongest to souls.😃😃 I love the two kids they are adorable.. and yunho makes an awesome dad...I know I bet Yunho would make a hot dad!😉😉 and baji loll what can i say.. outstanding character... Hello! Earth to Sara! Baji is always outstanding!I guess i didn't finish my thought there.. it was meant to be outstanding characterization the way you captured baji's persona in there.... 😃This story just brought a smile onto my face when i read it. Excellent job Naina I love you mwahs...You better love me missy!YOu know i do...😉 Four kids whoa baji good luck..She will be fine, she has us!. me and hero are moving out so we don't end up babysitting four whirlwinds Fine Go! I will help Baji with the kids! Xiah Jaan loves kids..😡😡.... j/k j/k j/k don't take me seriously.Well I did, you and Hero can go to Dubai! gosh naina i was joking... y would you take it so seriosuly...😛. Thank you for such a beautiful lovely story naina=]Of course it was beautiful, because it had the best herione, our Dearest Fatemah Baji! True that
😊

👏

I LOVE YOU GUYS 😳You better love US Missy!!You know i do...

Originally posted by: suganain

Unexcepted Miracle: Sara, first of all, my hands are tired, their dead! does that mean ur not going to write me a long comment? Ow! The Pain! 🤢 O and my baby jaan, would look so hot driving, I would ruffle his hear as he is driving!😳 *DayDreams about Xiah driving*😍 O and of course I would never take my eyes of my Baby Jaan!😉 But, I probably took a glance at U-know as well!yea most likely..😆😆 Saut joh ho! 😉 Omg! Who wouldn't want to share a room with Xiah! Hey! Hey!! I'm not offering you guys to share my baby jaan though!😡 Such flirting, Salma! Tu abhi bachi hai! Control those teenage hormones!! By gosh!! Kidding!😆😆 Excellente Sara! I love the style of writing! Naina out of all this there is only one sentence about my story... everything else is u going on abt xiah **shakes head**👏

Originally posted by: KC294

MY BOO

Naina what can i say about this. Its just mind blowing.Thank You so much! I love the way u captured the essence of the story. What kind of essence was it? Herbal essence?!😆😆It was cute sweet and heart warming at the same time. My fave part was when Danyal tells U-know that u and xiah are on ur 5^th honeymoon. Lol... Yeah, me and Xiah like to spend time with each other, we aren't like the boring couple U-know and you used to be. Xiah and I shall be going on our 10th Honeymoon soo!😉anyways that was amazing and it was well worth the wait. You are forgive for torturing me with 3 lines.... What three lines??😕😕love you nani ben... mwahs...Mucho Pyar tooo u to our "Queen Baji❤️"

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

***ok dumb me! I quoted instead of editing!!***

My question why is everyone taking so much time to comment??? And I am here commenting leaving my hot detective show NCIS!!!If your so busy with your hot detective then who will be their for Akashdeep?? Muahahahaha! ME!😉😉 ::sigh:: one of agent is sooo sexy!!!😳

Now.....

KC and U-know-----

yay that was fun!!I love the kids. But twins both times?? Whoa! What is the Jai and Bani from Kasamh se???No, Jai and Bani, Jai had a kid with two women. This is from one couple. Do you like the kids names?

But what a sweet cute romantic story! awwwww Good job Naina Jaan!Glad you liked it!😃

ps: Naina and Xiah on their 5th honeymoon??? LMAO!We are a very romantic couple. Xiah is not like Micky who makes their loved ones sick, and does not take care of them😆😆 Jokes! Did you read that you are a creative head for Ekta.😆😆 And I think one of the kids say that you should open your production house.

THANX Juoty!

god I am so mad and sad today! So I will come back later to comment on you Naina ki bacchi! In the mean time keep your EYES of my MAN

your one shot was awesome!

Sara if you come back here check out my siggy!!!!! I made it this morning!!!God he is awesome....and they are so awesome! The belong together!!!!

Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

Originally posted by: suganain

Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

my spot😉 hehe what can i say but once again an AWESOME JOB baji, Fatima, Naina and Salma... GREAT JOB everyone... Mindblowing stories in my point of view. a big round of applause to you guys 👏 now times this with infinity to the infinity power. ~ Thank you sara. You did a great job too.

A new tradition between us five has been started and i hope we keep it up for a long time to come. I really love this tradition. also I love the 5 guys❤️... they are awesome😳... hehe... I also love these stories because in them i can be anyone i want to be. Things don't hold us back and let us be who we want without feeling pressured. A way to get away from society. 😃😆😆 It is always fun😆 ~ i love this tradition too. i looks forward to reading what everyone writes. Sara is right we can be whoever we want to be in our stories. I hope this traditions lives long.

My BOO ~ what can i say?? I love that title😆 ~ i loved it too. Naina you did an awesome job creating a small fluffy lovely story. ~ it was so cute and sweet yet short and simple... jus like me. I love the two kids they are adorable.. ~ well ofcourse your baji's kids will be adorable jus like her. and yunho makes an awesome dad... ~ and ofcourse he'll make a great appa. and baji loll what can i say.. outstanding character... ~ thank you. This story just brought a smile onto my face when i read it. Excellent job Naina I love you mwahs... 😳 Four kids whoa baji good luck... me and hero are moving out so we don't end up babysitting four whirlwinds.... ~ ab tu dekh.. meri shaadi new york mei hogi aur babysitting tu hi karegi. j/k j/k j/k don't take me seriosuly.. ~ i kno i kno... love u too.Thank you for such a beautiful lovely story naina=]


Rekindled Love😳😳 ~ whoa what a sweet, sad story with such a cute ending. Baji.. i am speechless baji.. I remember when you were writing this.. i remember the first time i heard the idea.. i was very excited becuase it was just so sweet. Finding your love again is always something really precious and sometimes something happens to make us realize what we have lost. Lovely capturing of this scenario. I hope Jouty you love it as much as i did. I love you baji.. mwahs😳 Thank you for such a touching story =]~ thank you dearie... i worked hard on that....


A Bit Different😃~ Whoa what a story.. I LOVED IT.... THANK You Fatima.....haha i loved my character in it... I was so worried that you were going to make me choose between yamapi and jaejoong and i was just like omg nooo i can't decide... and Fatima ki bachi... u just love to torture me na... showing me half the story and then threatening to leave me with no guy at all😡..... so mean na.... but i still love you mwahs...😳I really really loved this story becuase it allowed me to be someone... half of the character was totally me and then some other parts were a bit out there but thats what i loved about it The ending sorta left me so shocked but i couldn't stop laughing when i read it.... Thank you for a wonderful story =]

Sattar Minutes~ 😳whoa what a long story... I know it inside it out by now.. Salma excellent job with this story... I hope you don't mind my editing and correcting a few things.. I am sorry if i took anything away from your style of writing.. but this story was awesome Excellent job Salma.. Naina i hope you love this story as much as i loved it... It was a bit different and quite touching. I think Naina's character came through very well. I love you Salma mwahs😊 The poetry was excellently done and it really touched my heart. Thank you for an awesome story =]

An Unexpected Miracle😛 ~ Wow this story has quite a story behind it... the original story i wrote was a lot shorter and since it was written during my course days.. i really didn't like it so i rewrote it.. half of it was inspired by that song Miracle... by super junior... I hope you like it.. I tried out a new style of writing so i hope it wasn't too confusing... I also think i wrote a bit too much about the guys only and only wrote about you for a little part of the story I am sorry about that but I really really really hope that you like it.. i enjoyed writing it very much.. Well welcome to the tradition i must say Salma.. sorry about last time ... and if Changmin ah ever comes across this.. I am so sorry about making your relationship with your parents and the first girl u like really bad.. so so sorry about that.. but we still love you =] 😊


A big round of applause to my sisters for writing such wonderful stories 👏

I LOVE YOU GUYS 😳

i'll come back and comment more