Creative One Shot Surprises #2

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naina's spot sexy spot!πŸ˜‰

My Boo - I'm commenting on my story, because I think It is soo cute. ::sighs:: U-know would probably be such a hot dad. Don't you think?

Rekindled Love: Way to go Baji!πŸ‘ Had to have U-know flirting in his head with you huh? Hai! Soo Romantic.

KC leaves with Micky and Jouty in the ambulance...

U-know: yes you have yet to fall... (smiles) for me...

The story is awesome! Micky doesn't even take care of our Juoty jaan! I would have gone and slapped him a hundred times!😑 But then Juoty might have killed me! πŸ˜† How much Jouty wants to be in Micky's arms. If that's the case Juoty, then I shall have Akashdeep on Tuesdays and Thursdays. πŸ˜‰ U-know Wednesdays and Fridays. And My Baby Jaan, Xiah on the Weekends and all nights.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜› Wow, and what a declaration of love!πŸ‘πŸ‘ Hai Rabba! Mein toh sach mein, that was a wonderful story! But next time, Micky better take care of Juoty, or else!!!😑😑

A Bit Different: Why in every story I get hit? πŸ˜• U so copied this idea from Sara's Birthday Oneshot! Errrr!! I'm like everyone's punching bag huh? I bet if we met each other in real life Juoty. We would always have a pillow fight!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† O I love you brought Yampai into the story, I throughly enjoy this! Muhahahahaha! (ok back to my commenting) It's so funny! How Sara's charcter keeps telling herself that Yamapi is a good guy, but then she starts going with Hero's attitude. πŸ˜‰(their so meant for eachother) I don't know how Sara's hair smells like, we should ask her what shampoo she uses.πŸ˜‰ I really want to know. How sad, I don't know how to whistle. But I would have said, Oh Hot Kiss! Keep it going sista!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† And again, the throwing pillows! Oh how I want to throw a pillow at you currently!! OMG! Ok, now we are both devils! Protection is needed! Do you know how shocked I was for like 10 minutes when I read that!😲 I'm such a bad a*s in the story.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Excellent Job Juoty! BRAVO!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

70 Minutes: You know who's the real poet Salma, You are! By God!πŸ‘πŸ‘ So many beautiful words in such a young and beautiful person's mind.😭 It is beautiful! I love your poems! I'm giving you the best poet award right now! I love it! Love IT! Love IT!πŸ‘πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ O you know what, Baji will thank you, because of you I have fell in love with my Xiah Baby again. I want to thank you because your story made me come to a important realization on life.πŸ‘ Thanks so much! Sometimes I really think I'm a useless piece of junk! Especially these last couple of days. So Really thank you, thank you, thank you! What a poetic couple me and Xiah are! Mashallah! I want to give you a big hug and kiss rite now!!!!!! Excellente!!πŸ‘

Unexcepted Miracle: Sara, first of all, my hands are tired, their dead! Ow! The Pain! 🀒 O and my baby jaan, would look so hot driving, I would ruffle his hear as he is driving!😳 *DayDreams about Xiah driving*😍 O and of course I would never take my eyes of my Baby Jaan!πŸ˜‰ But, I probably took a glance at U-know as well!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Saut joh ho! πŸ˜‰ Omg! Who wouldn't want to share a room with Xiah! Hey! Hey!! I'm not offering you guys to share my baby jaan though!😑 Such flirting, Salma! Tu abhi bachi hai! Control those teenage hormones!! By gosh!! Kidding!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Excellente Sara! I love the style of writing!πŸ‘

To all sisters: You are all creative and so wonderful!

I love you and now my hand is in so much pain, ow, ow, ow!

But it was so worth it to comment! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Muhaz my Se*y Sisters!❀️❀️





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Posted: 17 years ago
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MY BOO

Naina what can i say about this. Its just mind blowing. I love the way u captured the essence of the story. It was cute sweet and heart warming at the same time. My fave part was when Danyal tells U-know that u and xiah are on ur 5th honeymoon. Lol... anyways that was amazing and it was well worth the wait. You are forgive for torturing me with 3 lines.... love you nani ben... mwahs...

REKINDLED LOVE

That story had been in my head for awhile and i thout why not use it in the one shots. Sara helped alil as usual. Thank you sara. Anyways that story didn't take me long to write although i wanted to make it longer but i thought we don want a whole book. Anyways Jouty i hope you love it as much as i do.

A BIT DIFFERENT

Jouty that story was amazing... you did a good job... there was comedy and romance together. I especially love the last bit... i'm thinking if Sara and Hero move away i'll give them that gift put it'll be punctured.... lol back to the story... that was just amazing well done i love u mwah

Sattar minute

Salma i have to say that story was amazing. Welcome to our crazy crew i know u'll fit right in. I love the emotion in the story it really made me feel. I am speechless its that amazing. those poems really make your heart beat. Great job. Love you loads mwah

UNEXPECTED MIRACLE

Sara that was wow. I loved the way you wrote it. The detail was brilliant and i am truely speechless. That story touched my heart litereally. Amazing work i can't even express how much i love it. Great job i love it. Love u loads mwah

Girls that was a brill. You guys have done a great job and u deserve to pat ur selfs on the back. These stories have really made my day. Sara you are forgiven for posting them late. Great work guys and i am looking forward to the next oneshots. I love you my little sisters.

Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Not my spot! feel free to use it!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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kya kahoo.. the stories are just brilliant! each and every a different plot... really interesting!... full of love and some suspence just the way i like em!

naina ben well done hats off to ya...
your story was plain brill just gna be greedy and say i want more of it! sho cute!...hmm can imagine baji wid two pairs of twins!

baji your one shot was awesome .. i loved the plot..the fact that one heart (couple) can have a big space.

jouty great oneshot dear...
i love the way you wrote it! like looking from two ppls views in one... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ hehe= me worried about my furniture..overall brill!

myn about naina...took alot of timeon it as its my first oneshot! but im proud! hope u liek it naina ben and SARA di ..thanks for editing!! love ya...!

aab aayi tumhaari baari = sara di!
well what can i say excellent!
i loved the way u wrote it especially..! im happy dat i saved my max and was his miracle...

****oooh ppz must listen to dat song by the super junior!****

anyhow back to sara di... weldone on da pix aswell! and over all i loved all da storys..they have so much flavour..!

hatts off to ya guys!
love yu sisters!


people comment! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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***ok dumb me! I quoted instead of editing!!***

My question why is everyone taking so much time to comment??? And I am here commenting leaving my hot detective show NCIS!!! ::sigh:: one of agent is sooo sexy!!!😳

Now.....

KC and U-know-----

yay that was fun!!I love the kids. But twins both times?? Whoa! What is the Jai and Bani from Kasamh se???

But what a sweet cute romantic story! awwwww Good job Naina Jaan!

ps: Naina and Xiah on their 5th honeymoon??? LMAO!

Jouty and Micky-----

Oh man! I was so close to crying. Only if my sis wasn't here I would've cried. That was really sweet!! Thank you Baji!! Mwah I love you!

But sheesh I never get a fever. I get sick so often but I never ever get a fever! The last time I got a fever was 6 years ago. No exaggeration involved!

And wow! As I said before I am scared my life might actually turned out that way. I always seem to put work before relationship. And I know I will be a workaholic in the future!!

The one shot was really great and scary! What if this happens to me in real life. Well I hope atleast I will have maids who can call 911.

oh oh!!! But If I marry Akashdeep I won't put work before him...well maybe just a tiny bit. I do need my production house!

But Thank you Baji once again. That was sweet ( AND HEARTBREAKING) I felt choked up reading it!

Sara and Hero----

I am not having too much fin writing these days. That's why I stopped. But I had lots of fun writing this. So I really hope you like it. I even dragged my little brother from his game to come help me with the car parts!

Naina and Xiah----

Ooooh! wow! Salma sweety really wasn't kidding when she said her oneshot was long! But awwww that was really good!

And sweeeeeeeet! I think it was the sweetest story!

Salma and Max----

Sara jaan that was amazing. I loved it! I Really loved it! It was so good! you are brilliant! I think I loved this the most!! It was superb!!!!!

Btw Sara I forgive you for the delay!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Only because I am drooling over the agent from NCIS right now to hold a grudge (even a fake one) and you updated TP. anddddd I was too busy with soccer to think about the oneshots! But I did think of it!!πŸ˜†

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi!
all stories were AMAZING!!!!!!! πŸ‘
they were touchin and cute!
ur all gr8 writers!!
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A Bit Different: Why in every story I get hit? πŸ˜• U so copied this idea from Sara's Birthday Oneshot! Errrr!! I'm like everyone's punching bag huh? I bet if we met each other in real life Juoty. We would always have a pillow fight!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† O I love you brought Yampai into the story, I throughly enjoy this! Muhahahahaha! (ok back to my commenting) It's so funny! How Sara's charcter keeps telling herself that Yamapi is a good guy, but then she starts going with Hero's attitude. πŸ˜‰(their so meant for eachother) I don't know how Sara's hair smells like, we should ask her what shampoo she uses.πŸ˜‰ I really want to know. How sad, I don't know how to whistle. But I would have said, Oh Hot Kiss! Keep it going sista!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† And again, the throwing pillows! Oh how I want to throw a pillow at you currently!! OMG! Ok, now we are both devils! Protection is needed! Do you know how shocked I was for like 10 minutes when I read that!😲 I'm such a bad a*s in the story.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Excellent Job Juoty! BRAVO!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ [/QOUTE]

hah!!! except my dear jaan I wrote and SENT officially "sent" the oneshot to both Sara and Baji before Sara's bday! way before Sara's bday! But when I read your one-shot I noticed the similarities too!!

God I can't even watch tv in peace today!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfangel5655



I better get a longer comment than this Miss. Addicted to TV! My hands hurt from the long comment I wrote on everyone's story!😑😑

I have Xiah and Akashdeep to massage my hands though!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Muahahahahaha!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

my spotπŸ˜‰ hehe what can i say but once again an AWESOME JOB baji, Fatima, Naina and Salma... GREAT JOB everyone... Mindblowing stories in my point of view. a big round of applause to you guys πŸ‘ now times this with infinity to the infinity power. The Stories were def. mindblowing! We are all very talented.πŸ˜ƒ

A new tradition between us five has been started and i hope we keep it up for a long time to come. I really love this tradition. also I love the 5 guys❀️... they are awesome😳... hehe... I also love these stories because in them i can be anyone i want to be. Things don't hold us back and let us be who we want without feeling pressured. A way to get away from society. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†πŸ˜† It is always funπŸ˜†

My BOO ~ what can i say?? I love that titleπŸ˜†I love the title too, it's from my favorite song and is soo sweet and romantic!😳 Naina you did an awesome job creating a small fluffy lovely story.I don't think that it is fluffyπŸ˜• It's about a love being shared amongest to souls.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ I love the two kids they are adorable.. and yunho makes an awesome dad...I know I bet Yunho would make a hot dad!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ and baji loll what can i say.. outstanding character... Hello! Earth to Sara! Baji is always outstanding! πŸ˜ƒThis story just brought a smile onto my face when i read it. Excellent job Naina I love you mwahs...You better love me missy!πŸ˜‰ Four kids whoa baji good luck..She will be fine, she has us!. me and hero are moving out so we don't end up babysitting four whirlwinds Fine Go! I will help Baji with the kids! Xiah Jaan loves kids..😑😑.... j/k j/k j/k don't take me seriously.Well I did, you and Hero can go to Dubai!πŸ˜›. Thank you for such a beautiful lovely story naina=]Of course it was beautiful, because it had the best herione, our Dearest Fatemah Baji!
😊


A big round of applause to my sisters for writing such wonderful stories πŸ‘My hands are not alive, who will bring them back alive!!!! But literally we sisters rock!!!!πŸ‘

I LOVE YOU GUYS 😳You better love US Missy!!

Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: suganain


I better get a longer comment than this Miss. Addicted to TV! My hands hurt from the long comment I wrote on everyone's story!😑😑 [[lmao]]

I have Xiah and Akashdeep to massage my hands though!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Muahahahahaha! [[what did you do devil? threaten them to open a massage parlour? Even dream about touching my Akashdeep I will cut your hands off]]

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