ff sanjeevani:a medical boon

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hey friends,i am ridzzy and i am gonna star a new ff on our very own interns.i am no writer its just an attempt and pleasee read the whole part and then comment on it.so heres the 1st part its a small one as it is the introduction hope u like it.

SANJEEVANI:A MEDICAL BOON

INTRODUCTION

Dr.shashank gupta:he is now the dean of sanjeevani.he is a strict disciplined gentlemen but good hearted.he is a well-known surgeon and a good father of two.this year is going to be very special for him as his children are the new interns here.

Dr.padma gupta:wife of dr shashank and a a wellheart surgeon like her husband.a good,caring woman with a charmful personality,as well as as a proffessional senior and mother of three.

DR.armaan mallik:he has a personality of a greek god with those grey eyes,dimpled smile and morehe has the personality to make any woman fall for him.is a excessive but an ambitious an d passionate doc.

Dr.aryan gupta:son of dr.shshnk and pdma gupta he is an ambitious dr.he has the charms and everything but is very reserved and thinks that this proffession is male dominated and has a very diff. perspective of life.

Dr.anjali gupta:elder daughter of dr.sh &pd.shes a passionate girl passionate and has opinion about everythng shows,clothes,and her younger sister.shes a short tempered but good hearted girl.respects her bro and he in turn uses her so that he can be the head.

Dr.riddhimma gupta:younger daughter of sh&pd.shes their total combination sweet caring humble and caring like her mother as well as passionate ambitious dr. like her father.but shes todays woman and is self respective too.she has a weak spot for her family.

Dr.atul joshi:hes a very good guy handsome sweet down to earth and loves nature and afunny.talks and act weird at time but i well spoken hes armaans cousin.hes as well ambitious and passionate about his work.

Dr.aaliyah hassan:shes good and cannot take any wrong about her used to be a topper in her university and is funny too.

Dr.swini:shes a very cool and normal girl and is armys and atuls childhood friend very passionated about life and lives life to her end is funny and weird.

Dr.keerti mukherjee:a ver strict and honourable lady.she hates latecomers back answerable ppl and is wife of dr.shubs and kind hearted.

Dr.shubhankar banerjee:hes a great surgeon an a happy-go-lucky fellow not like his better half and amore kind.

so these are our senior residents and interns.every one has a different opinion on life different people with same purpose af making their hospital and proffession proud check them out if you like them. i atlest want three comments to move on.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Intro seems nice! Continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amang intro n charachter sketch.... really njoyed..... waitng 2 read more... update supersonnn... waitng 4 nxt prt 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG riddzy di

Amazing sweety

Loved the character list

And nice names and glad to see different varieties of character and views

Love it sweety

Too good

And it's good to see u and more people writing FF's

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and plzzzzz PM me the next part

Luv swanz

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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing intro
plz do continue
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
❤️Heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh thank you all for for ur comments i may give the 1st part asap. 😆 😆
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nce lkin it already sounds great do pst sooon
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Intro seems gud...Please PM me once u continue....n do continue soon!
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just an awwsome or we can say a perfect one
please continue it soon and send pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
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here the part



Sanjeevani-a medical boon 1

Its the first day of internship let see whether our will make it a boon for others or a curse for their senior co interns an obviosly patients.check thm out.

7.30 joggers park

we see breathing heavily while the other to trying to make her rest ."rids i told unot to come now bear the consequences"said anjali"girls,u both go at home i will come in half an hoyr""why should i go bro i am gonna stay here with u ok"actually the matter was rids had slipt from a puddle with her clothes muddy and angie wont have obviously went with her asit would have made a scene on road and she didnt want any one to point at her and pass comments attitude huh."its ok bhai i will manage it""as u wish"the said simultaneously.

"pure kapde kharab ho gaye subah subah problems "as she was murmuring some thing under her braet a cycle just went past her with all the muddy water spilling on her clothes"u idiot".he was surely not interested in making a scene an spoil his whle day and that too with this girl covered with mud and fighting with him"i am sorry madam""sorry who the hell u think are""heyplease its the last thing iwould do to fight with a bhikari on such a day an spoil it""bhikari kaun me ya tum bhad mein jao"completing her sentence as she sawanjies call leaving armaan in total confusion"kya zamana aa gaya hai bhikariyo ke pass bhi mobile and my my aur english fast than rajdhani prhaps she was not a beggar but why am i thinking of her mujhe khud late ho raha hain"

sanjeevani

dr.keerti checking her file when shubhankar enters"arre keerti aaj toh naya interns aanewale hain na?arre wah aaj toh bauhat khubsurat deekh rahi ho interns par impression jamane ki puri tayari ki hain bhulo mat tumhari shaadi ho gayye hain ""shubhankar mujhe achi tarah se yaad hai ki meri shaadi tumse hui hai aur rahi bat impression jamane ki woh unhe jamana padega toh abhi interns aa hi rahe honge mujhe rounds pe jana chahiyebye"

locker room

a guy huddling a tulsi a neem plant a money plant in his locker."oy atul tu kya kar raha hain ye locker hain nursery nahi.""armaan tune mujhe kya pagal smjha hai mujhe pata haipar mere plants mujhe bauhat miss karte hai pat hain na hum jab picnic ke liye..................................""haan buskar men puchne aaya tha tune hamare kisi co intern ko dekha hai""nai yaar abhi tak toh nahi""pata hai na usme se teen interns dean ke bache hai family parade""nai yaar par mane suna hai ki dr.shshnk bauhat ache hainpata hain unhone isbar do interns jada liye hai jabki sirf char panch interns hote hain""matlab us budddhe ne man liya na ki uske kuch jada hi bache hain""han armaan agar ache ho toh acha hai agar apne bap ka hospital samjhenge toh....."there enters riddhimma and armaan once again recognizes her"bap ka hospital bhi thaeek kuch logoko toh road hi apne bap ka lagta hain aur bhokne lag jate hain "rids turns she desnt recognize amy as she was not interestedin looking at hisface the mon.earler arman understand this that she has not recognized him.atul"kya road,bap connection?""chod na woh dekh nayi intern""oh,helloji mein atl joshi aur ye armaan mallik""hye mein riddhimma""riddhima kya"there comes anjali and rids moves as toavoid the quest."hello nay interns han"she was specially interestedin amyand moves her hand towards him but atul puts his hand"hye me atul jshi,ye armn mllik ""hye mein anjali anjali gupta"amys eyes gleamed as he heard the surname he had found one gupta siblingatul went on intr"ye armn mllik aur yee ri""ridhimma mein janti hu""oh pehle mile ho""nahi bachpan se janti hun meri hi behen hai"rids was quite upset she had revealed all out on thir first meeting, armaan was shocked to hear that rids was shsnks daughter,anjali also fel guilty as she had revealed a too much whilst atul understood why rids had avoided the surname part she wanted to be normal.all of suden came swini and hugged atul and amytogether with all her force,amy was suddenly pulled to the present shouted "oy svincy chod "angie who was quite till now shouted at the top of lungs"rids shayad ,patient chodo unhe shayad pagalpan ka daura pada hai rids""pagal?patient oy patien tu"leaving amy and atul she rushed towards angi with a blow whilst amy and atul stopped her "svince dear cool down aur ye patient nahi hamari dost hai swini aur nayi intern""oy amy mujhe chod me dikati hu isse ki patient kun hain""swi swini please gussa mat karo galti ha gayi sorry now friends"said rids holding her ears on behalf of angali"theek hin "and then entered aaaliyah she once again checked if she was on the right place or she must have entered some ward as amy an atul held swini in agrip so as she would not jump on anjie,swini in her angry and guilty expression which was total weird,rids the holding her ears,anjie in a total mixed expression.when they saw aaliyah they all stood prpoerly and swii.angie dragged by rids turned to their lockers whilst armaan and atul went to greet her.aryan had seen all this and was confident that they would no be is competitors but as al ittle curious about aaiyah as she had not reacted at all she seemed confused but then he thought that she was a girl and would not be such a competitor after all he sighed as he saw all things were going his way he also now entered the room."hi iam atul jshi and he is armn mllik""hi i am aaliyah hassan"and the 3 girls too went to greet aaliya"hi"introducing themselves aryan entered as wellreserved and not interested in any intro."hi "said armaan and introduced everyone who greeted him with a hi."i am aryan gupta""nice to meet u""well i wa informed that ther were 8 interns and i see thera are only 7 here""this gupta kiddos are well-informed huh"said amy to atul"well we should leave dr.keerti hates late comers and well we dont want that impression onour first day so lets go i thint that last intern is gonna greeted with dr.keertis the btiful red face with some sweet doses"said rids with a others giggling except aryu.

reception desk

dr.keert "i am glad that ur on time " "i am sorry to interrupt u madam but one intern is not her"aryan didnt want to avoid the chance of getting the last intern to be punished never know he or she may be a tough compe."dr.aryan mujhe pata hai ki is hosp.me kya ho raha hain aapko mujhe kuch batane ki jarurat nahi hai rahi us last intern ki toh woh jaldi hospital meie dakhila de denge filhal to woh snjevni punjab min hain kyunki unhe punj. mein personal prob tha isliye woh sanjeevni punj.mein hai do u understnd."she walked of giving duties.

i know its alittle boring as its a starting but i will try my level best for some comedy.weel the last intern is kept in little suspense check him out for the next post.till then adieu.please comment whether its good or evenbad so that we can make it better.so please comment.


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