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Posted: a day ago
#41

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 5

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she was indeed unsettled

of cos the message Maan discovered still lingered on his mind

now he discovered a hidden wall

finally Geet is in front of KM

as expected the place feels familiar

her reaction was justified

Maan was clearly astounded seeing the strange symbols

oh all the portraits of the dead Khurana brides are there

he saw Meera's pic

Gosh the candles lit and a voice called out and then the candles extinguished

so Geet was drawn towards KM


update soon

Thanks a lot for your detailed response on the story till now…
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Posted: a day ago
#42

Nice update. Both Geet and Maan are trying their own way on getting to the truth both seemed to be guided by the woman behind the veil.

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Posted: a day ago
#43

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. Both Geet and Maan are trying their own way on getting to the truth both seemed to be guided by the woman behind the veil.

Thanks a lot for loving the update. And sharing your thoughts on the same.
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Posted: a day ago
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Posted: a day ago
#45
It's getting more than interesting
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Posted: 22 hours ago
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After long time visited this forum and your story was like a jackpot 😁

Though I am not big fan of horror stories but this one is very interesting and you left us all wondering what happens next and the suspense is really killing me can't wait to read more😀

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Posted: 21 hours ago
#47

Originally posted by: Tejaswini1996

It's getting more than interesting

Thanks a lot for loving g this genre.

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Posted: 21 hours ago
#48

Originally posted by: Avenging_Angel

After long time visited this forum and your story was like a jackpot 😁

Though I am not big fan of horror stories but this one is very interesting and you left us all wondering what happens next and the suspense is really killing me can't wait to read more😀

Thanks a lot for loving this genre. This is my first time writing this type of content. Let’s hope I can do justice to this story.
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Posted: 20 hours ago
#49

Chapter 6

of cos Geet felt recognition when she entered KM

the silence said so much

now she is in KM

her thoughts were reasonable

finally she saw Maan

Maan's reaction was reasonable

Geet was clearly annoyed with his question

at least she introduced herself

as expected he knows her surname

after all its related to the land dispute

his thoughts were justified

Maan;'s question was anticipated

oh the scream alerted them

of cos Geet saw the veiled woman

but Maan cannot see her

the lady told her to find the diary before he could

Gosh Maan saw the veiled lady

glad that he realised that Geet was called there

she is the chosen one


update soon

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Posted: 14 hours ago
#50

The woman in black veil killed Meera? Because she found the truth?

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