Maan Geet 3S : The Returning love[Part 3 & epi on Pg 2] - Page 2

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Posted: 2 days ago
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This part is dedicated to @ khwaishfan and coderlady



Part 2

Maan looked at her straight through the glass.


No hesitation in his gaze. No flicker of shock. No fracture of memory reaching for her name. Just stillness. As if Sameera was not a return, not a wound reopened, not even a past he had to wrestle with anymore. Only someone standing outside a life she no longer belonged to.


His arms tightened around the girl instinctively—subtle, protective. Not possessive in a way that hurt, but in a way that simply… claimed comfort without asking permission from anything else.The girl shifted slightly against him, still faintly tearful, still delicate in that newly mended way.


And then Maan looked at her again, the girl in his arms. And everything changed.His face softened—not cautiously, not guarded like it once had been with Sameera—but openly. Effortlessly.It was the kind of tenderness that did not carry fear of loss anymore.The kind that did not hesitate.The kind that did not remember how it used to hurt.


He brushed a stray tear from the girl’s cheek with his thumb, steady and warm.And when she smiled—small, uncertain, but real—he smiled back.Not restrained.Free.


Sameera felt her breath catch without permission.Because she remembered.She remembered the version of Maan who used to love like he was holding something fragile in his hands. The version who measured every word, every touch, every silence around her like he was afraid she might disappear if he held too tightly.


Sameera remembered him looking at her in white once, saying softly—

“You look like the moon in that saree.”

With Reverence.Like she had been something he was careful not to break even while loving.And she had run from that care.


Because Dev had taught her that love always came with a hidden cost. That softness always turned. That staying always ended in loss.Maan had never been Dev.He had been the opposite of Dev in every way that mattered.And yet she had treated him like the same ending was inevitable.Now she stood outside his glass wall, watching him laugh softly at something the girl whispered in his arms.


Watching him lean closer—not out of need, but out of ease.Watching him exist inside a warmth that did not feel borrowed or restrained.It was not the Maan sameera had left behind.It was the Maan who had moved forward without her shadow slowing him down.


Sameera’s fingers went cold.Her white saree suddenly felt heavier than grief.She had come here prepared to beg, to kneel.Prepared to take whatever anger he would give her, because anger still meant she mattered.But there was none.No anger.No pain she could name.Only distance so complete it did not even feel like rejection anymore.


It felt like completion.The girl in his arms laughed properly now—bright, unguarded—and Maan looked at her like that sound belonged in his life.Like it always had


That look…That was what broke something in Sameera.Not cruelty.Not betrayal.But recognition.This was love without hesitation.Love without history dragging behind it.Love without wounds needing constant tending.Open.Carefree.Alive.The kind of love she had once thought she could build with him, but never truly reached.


And now it existed—but not with her inside it.Sameera's throat tightened painfully.Because she finally understood what she had been refusing to see even in her return.She had not come back to find him waiting.She had come back to find him living.


And Sameera realized, with a quiet finality that stole the air from her chest, that she had not just lost Maan in the past—She had lost the version of him that once would have looked at her the way he was now looking at someone else.Without fear.Without doubt.Without her.



Note: did you guys like the twist? The woman in white saree who had returned was sameera all along. Should she be forgiven now. Everybody wanted Maan ro forgive her. What about now?

Edited by TangledThoughts - 2 days ago
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Posted: a day ago
#12

You had us there.

So it was Sameera who returned. But this Sameera can still be forgiven. She made a mistake out of her own fears and her past trauma. She was not mean and selfish. She was scared. That person can be forgiven.

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Posted: a day ago
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Maan can forgive Sameera when he talks to her and realizes why she did what she did. She just does not get him back because he found his love.

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Posted: a day ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Maan can forgive Sameera when he talks to her and realizes why she did what she did. She just does not get him back because he found his love.


What if it had been geet instead of sameera? Should he have taken geet back?

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Posted: a day ago
#15

What a twist!!


Part 2

well Maan saw her and remained unaffected

of cos he was protected of the girl in his arms

Sameera's thoughts were reasonable

liked that she realised that Maan has moved forward

glad that she saw that Maan is happy and in love

Edited by khwaishfan - a day ago
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Posted: 22 hours ago
#16

Whoever it is, any one can deserve forgiveness if they genuinely made a mistake.

For love to happen, it needs two. Coming back does not mean love will return. If the other does not feel it, there is no helping it.

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Posted: 9 hours ago
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Part 3


Sameera did not wait for another second. The moment she saw the way Maan looked at the girl in his arms—*that* softness, that unguarded warmth—something inside her gave up pretending.Her hand slipped from the glass.Her breath broke once, sharply, like something tearing loose in her chest.


And then she turned.Fast.Almost stumbling in her hurry to leave, as if staying even a moment longer would force her to witness something she could never unsee in peace.


The white saree brushed against her legs as she walked away, but it no longer felt like something sacred.It felt like something mistaken.A memory she had dressed herself in, too late to matter.


Behind her, the office remained lit.Alive.Unaware of the way it had just ended a chapter without a single word spoken.


Sameera didn’t look back.Not once.


---


Inside the cabin, the air was different.Warmer.More fragile.


The girl in Maan’s arms—Geet—was no longer crying hard, but her eyes still held the faint redness of disappointment, like a storm that had already passed but left its weight behind.


Maan held her carefully, one arm around her waist, the other gently brushing her hair back from her face.

“I’m sorry,” he said again, softer this time.


Not distracted.Not defensive.Genuinely apologetic.

“I really forgot. I got stuck in meetings and—Geet, I know. I know today mattered.”

Geet huffed lightly, still upset, but not pulling away.

“You always say that,” she muttered, though her voice lacked real anger now.


That was the thing about them.Even her complaints carried trust underneath them.


Maan let out a small breath, almost guilty at himself.

“I know,” he admitted. “And I hate that I do.”


He shifted slightly, adjusting her in his arms like she was the most important thing in his world—which, to him, she was.Then, quieter:

“Come here.”


Geet frowned, but didn’t resist as he pulled her closer again, resting his forehead briefly against hers.A grounding gesture.A habit of love.


“I’ll make it up to you properly,” he said. “No work. No excuses. Just you and me.”


Her expression softened despite herself.


“You better,” she said, but there was warmth in it now.


A small, reluctant smile tugged at her lips.Maan noticed it immediately.


And something in his face changed—not dramatically, but deeply.Like relief.Like he had found air again.


He kissed her forehead, slow and lingering.Then her temple.


Then, almost instinctively, the corner of her hairline as if apologizing through touch for every moment he hadn’t been present.


“I love you,” he said simply.


No performance in it.No hesitation.Just fact.

Geet finally exhaled, leaning into him properly now, her anger dissolving into familiarity.

“I know,” she whispered back.

And that was enough.Maan tightened his hold slightly, his expression soft in a way that never looked practiced.


Like love wasn’t something he performed for her—it was something he lived in.


Outside the glass, the corridor was empty.


Sameera was already gone.

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Posted: 9 hours ago
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Epilogue

A few days later, the city felt different in their home.


Not quieter—never quiet with Geet around—but softer, as if even time had learned to adjust itself around her moods.


Maan had cleared his schedule.


Not partially. Not reluctantly.


Completely.


It had taken Geet exactly three minutes to notice.


“You cancelled *everything*?” she asked, standing in the kitchen doorway, arms crossed, pretending not to be pleased.


Maan looked up from the counter where he was attempting—unsuccessfully—to follow a recipe he had absolutely no business attempting alone.


“I did,” he said simply.


Geet narrowed her eyes. “Because of me?”


A pause.


Then, honestly, “Yes.”


That softened her… but only a little.


She walked closer, peering at the mess he was making. “You’re going to burn that.”


“I’m not,” he said.


“It’s literally smoking.”


“I’m fixing it.”


“You’re making it worse.”


Maan sighed, turning slightly to look at her. His expression wasn’t irritated. If anything, it was fond in a way that made her irritation feel like it had nowhere to land properly.


“Geet,” he said gently, “sit.”


“I don’t want to sit.”


“You’re angry.”


“I’m not angry.”


A beat.


Maan raised a brow.


Geet huffed. “Fine. I’m a *little* angry.”


He nodded as if that was completely fair. “Okay.”


That calm acceptance only made her more annoyed.


“I had planned the whole evening,” she continued, voice rising slightly. “I dressed up, I waited, and you forgot—again.”


Maan’s face shifted immediately at that.


Not defensive.


Regretful.


“I know,” he said quietly, stepping closer. “And I’m sorry.”


Geet opened her mouth to continue, but he gently took the ladle from her hand before she could start gesturing dramatically with it.


Then, without breaking eye contact, he said, “Come here.”


“I’m not done being mad.”


“I know,” he repeated, softer now. “Come here anyway.”


That was the thing with him.


He never fought her anger.


He just… held space for it until it ran out of strength.


Geet glared at him for exactly five seconds.


Then walked into his arms anyway.


“Stupid,” she muttered against his chest.


“I know,” he said, smiling faintly.


“You forgot me.”


“I didn’t forget you,” he corrected gently, tightening his arms around her. “I lost track of time. That’s different.”


“Same thing.”


“It’s not.”


She pulled back just enough to look at him. “You’re arguing now?”


“I’m agreeing carefully,” he said.


That made her snort despite herself.


A small victory.


Maan noticed immediately.


His thumb brushed her cheek slowly, almost absent-mindedly, like it was the most natural thing in the world to calm her like this.


“I’ll make it up to you,” he said again.


“You always say that,” she muttered.


“And I always do,” he replied.


That quiet certainty made her expression soften a little more.


But she still tilted her chin up stubbornly. “I want a proper date.”


“You’ll get it.”


“No phones.”


“No phones.”


“And you cook dinner.”


Maan blinked. “That’s dangerous.”


“That’s the price.”


A pause.


Then, very seriously, “Done.”


Geet narrowed her eyes. “You agreed too fast.”


“I’m in love with you,” he said simply.


That shut her up for a second.


Not because it was new.


But because he said it like it was the most obvious truth in the world.


Like it didn’t require negotiation.


Like it didn’t change depending on her mood.


Her anger melted a little at the edges.


“…you’re still in trouble,” she said weakly.


“I know.”


“And I’m still mad.”


“I know that too.”


He leaned forward and kissed her forehead—slow, careful, apologetic in a way that felt more like devotion than guilt.


Geet sighed dramatically, but her hands stayed on his shirt, not letting go.


“I’m going to make you suffer tonight,” she warned.


Maan’s lips curved slightly. “I’ll survive.”


“You won’t.”


“I will,” he said, brushing her hair back again. “Because you’ll eventually forgive me.”


Geet squinted. “You’re very confident.”


“I’ve had practice,” he said softly.


That made her go quiet for a second.


Then she huffed again, but this time it was softer. Less anger. More affection pretending to be irritation.


“Fine,” she said. “But I’m still not helping you with that disaster you’re cooking.”


Maan glanced at the pan.


Then back at her.


“…fair.”


And Geet finally smiled.


Properly this time.


Bright, unguarded, a little bratty still—but safe.


Maan watched her like that smile was the only thing in the room that mattered.


And for him, it was.

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Posted: 4 hours ago
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1,2,3,epi

read in one go

very soft n truthful love between maan n geet

love the story very much

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Posted: an hour ago
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Part 3

Sameera was shattered

of cos Maan apologised to Geet

Geet's anger was reasonable

liked that he will make it up to her

glad that he managed to pacify her

he really loves her

all that matters is that she knows and they are together

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