A TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch 7 on pg 13: Bees Din - Page 9

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Hey,, I was waiting eagerly for your review! Thank you again the lovely review!!

Wow that song is really perfectly apt for my story!! Thank you for putting this here!!

Yes true! Mihir is drowning in his guilt and Tulsi is way too scared she’ll get hurt one more time, if she decides to trust him again! Tulsi doesn’t even deny to herself that she ever stopped loving him!

Mihir’s exhaustion - you got it exactly right!!

Subconsciously they’re still connected - that’s why they’re so aware of each other. Mihir is waiting for tulsi to voluntarily (without any kind of pressure or obligation) take just one step towards him and he’ll walk the rest of the way to her, no matter what it costs him!!

Thank you so much! So glad you are enjoying my writing. Writing ki baat aayi hi hai toh let me share a secret:

If you notice, the beginning and end of every chapter is almost always the same or similar - starting with morning and ending with Mihir walking up the stairs to his room! It’s a deliberate thing - planned! Why it is significant, you will understand in future chapters😊

Thank you again! Writing this FF in exchange for such reviews is such a pleasure!!🤩

The song is one of my favourites both Rekhaji n Arijit did sing so well. ❤️

Yes i noticed, every chapter started with morning and ended with night. Nights are hardest, when you are alone your subconscious mind will be reminiscing, the one which bothers or troubles you the most.

But if you have planned something, definitely it must be a good read. I will wait until you reveal.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Nice to see a tulsi timsy scene.It was so cute.Mitali did not say anything. But I think she will happy that tulsi is bonding well with Timsy. Because tulsi will look after Timsy and mitali doesn't have to do anything.mihir saying that Angad's choice was right was nice.Nice scene on mihir vrinda and mihir akshay.

Hey thank you for your comments/review! Tulsi Timsy scene is my personal fave too! Mitali here is more complicated than that!

Glad you liked those scenes!

Have you read chapter 5 yet? Eagerly awaiting your review on that one!!
thanks a lot

Mitali is seeing her last control going to tulsi. Slowly she will melt towards her - out of agenda or her actual love towards the beti /husband

That choking scene was very normal or sensuous . Nothing in between ❤️

The story is about tulsi's brain and heart catching upto her hands

Hey thank you!!

Mitali - you will see in next chapter, what She’s been doing all this while!!

I’m glad you liked the coughing scene!!

Yes, more than heart, her brain is blocking her from mihir! It happens- when a woman is betrayed not just once but twice.. the second time at this stage of life.. the brain works overtime to protect from another heartbreak!!

Thanks again

Hi all, when do you want the next chapter - let me tell you it’s a dhamaka chapter - a totally different tone from chapters 2 to 5!

I’m just asking because I’m very busy till 8th or 9th! So next (chapter 7) will be only on 10th probably! So you want a gap before chapter 6 or after?

Please tell me - when do I post it? chapter 6 is almost ready

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Hi all, when do you want the next chapter - let me tell you it’s a dhamaka chapter - a totally different tone from chapters 2 to 5!

I’m just asking because I’m very busy till 8th or 9th! So next (chapter 7) will be only on 10th probably! So you want a gap before chapter 6 or after?

Please tell me - when do I post it? chapter 6 is almost ready

Minus Noina plssss......

Pls post as per your convenience. I'm excited. only request is pls do not have long gaps between two updates.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Minus Noina plssss......

Pls post as per your convenience. I'm excited. only request is pls do not have long gaps between two updates.

of course! My ff is TuHir centric! Noina even if there, is hardly there!

I m trying my best to give frequent updates! But have an exhibition coming up so will be busy with that! Tabhi toh pooch rahi hoon - chapter 7 shayad 10th ke pahle nahi de paaoongi! Chapter 6 jab Aap sab bolenge, de doongi!

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

of course! My ff is TuHir centric! Noina even if there, is hardly there!

I m trying my best to give frequent updates! But have an exhibition coming up so will be busy with that! Tabhi toh pooch rahi hoon - chapter 7 shayad 10th ke pahle nahi de paaoongi! Chapter 6 jab Aap sab bolenge, de doongi!

Ok fine

Whatever suits you the best.

Pls concentrate on your work, you can post next chapter(7) after 10th.

I'm glad you took it in right spirit to post the updates regularly. Thank you.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ok fine

Whatever suits you the best.

Pls concentrate on your work, you can post next chapter(7) after 10th.

I'm glad you took it in right spirit to post the updates regularly. Thank you.

Arrre you are not getting what I am saying - chapter 6 is the next chapter which is almost ready - I can post it whenever you say!

All I am saying is that chapter 7 may not be ready till 9th or 10th or maybe even 11th - so my question is do you want the gap now or between chapters 6 and 7?

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Arrre you are not getting what I am saying - chapter 6 is the next chapter which is almost ready - I can post it whenever you say!

All I am saying is that chapter 7 may not be ready till 9th or 10th or maybe even 11th - so my question is do you want the gap now or between chapters 6 and 7?

I got it dear, pls post chapter 6 by tomorrow if ready. Then you can post 7 by 10 or 11th.

Your work is also important know..