Originally posted by: RiyaA123
I get that. Every story has its needs. This Riya needed to become Riya and accept that her identity is botched. I noticed that. But didn't understand the significance. That was so good of a depiction.
Of course all good words were needed to describe this beautiful of a story. It really hit my heart. I read alot. Hence my speed. I'm on Wattpad too. Mind sharing your profile my shy friend? I'd love to read.
Yes so many lost so much. I didn't know why this story made me cry. Like ugly sobs and snotty mess and all. It wasn't until I took a break and watched a series or so when I realized that the pain triggered my own. Losing so much and to realize your existence is vain. Chotu lost his life. Shree and Riya lost their best friend, who was basically the light in their life. Shree lost himself. Rathod lost his team and his wife is an unrecognizable woman. Ayesha lost herself. Arjun. Well I wouldn't know yet. I stopped reading for a while. I'll go back to it once I've gathered myself enough.
And you know I read so many stories and to see this being one of those that made me stop and take a break because I couldn't handle the pain. It shows how good of a writer you are.
Imperial affliction? I think I've read that. Don't remember tho. Let me read it again in case I missed. Sarcastic, idgaf Riya is best.
I like my FL witty, smart, sarcastic and one who knows how to show men their place. Doesn't need to be femme fatale but darn If she doesn't know how to cut people with words more than katanas.
Write more and do keep me posted.
Loved it truly even if it gave me pain ❤️❤️
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Damn now I feel bad about taking this route 🥶in my writer head it made sense back then. The contrast of a big towering powerful person like chotu lifeless. It's morbid but yeah
I hadn't thought of writing etf story after the entire Sikandar/ sakshi trying to kill them. I knew i wanted all of them to lose something in that, and as I wrote a death came up. And I felt post a death, how the team can still be a team and be a found family, ties in next generation, can only happen if this person goes and not anyone else
All of them to lose something because it's only fair in a sense that they all can grieve their losses individually and together as a team. If only shree lost something, or sameer, it didn't feel fair to me. Also it ties them all together, hence the reason they return. Shree, Sam arjun, even Aisha.
Shree can't go because he was the first man who taught Riya how to live her life. His influence is only second to Arjun imo. If he was gone I think Riya would be halfway gone from life.
Same reason Aisha liza couldn't go. Also killing off women is sexist unnecessary.
I tried to think Sameer to go but that was a different damage and not fair to Arjun imo. Also they both deserved to come out of that , and live a fulfilling life once Sikandar drama was done.
I don't think Arjun lost anything. Dude was damaged since beginning and everyone else got damaged to catch upto him 🤣😕 kidding kidding. Sorry for the tears..I hope you feel well. Watch something comedic like modern family maybe?
It's odd but I read this story too after your comments and it's so interesting to see these characters have 180 degree change, how decades goes and their lives goes on, their roots are still there and the end of it. But also the beginning. Like a clock. There is pain, there is death, there are tears. But there is hope. That's quite nice to feel that after everything you can have that life.
Imperial affliction is like... I wrote it as a gender bender fic..Riya as Arjun and Arjun as Riya. But as I wrote it wasn't exactly like the show. I would like to think Riya had more heart in that fic. She tried to stay away but she couldn't. And arjun isn't a saint too. He feels irritated, he feels undermined, but he's also drawn to her flame like a moth. And there is, imo, interesting relationship between Riya and Aisha and riya and sameer.
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