FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 33

One month ho gaya update de ke.

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Mera response to tune padha bhi nahi. And awaiting Jo’s response

Padhaa naa

React bhi toh kiya

Originally posted by: manu_ak

One month ho gaya update de ke.

17 Dinn huye na

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

17 Dinn huye na

Pata nahi mere liye to 1st july ko hi 1 month ho gaya

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Padhaa naa

React bhi toh kiya

Nahi to koi react nahi kiya tune na di ne.

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

It was not the midnight rendezvous that we had envisioned but what was served was the crème de la crème of rendezvous-a drive-in tour of the majestic Four Wheels plant and revelations that were utterly riveting.

>>Since everyone says its not the rendezvous they had envisioned, I'd love to hear from everyone their imaginations. That'd fill the time while I write next part too

And Rose... do you mind sharing your name here? If not, will you PM me? My bad if you had mentioned and I forgot.

It mattered not that she was under-dressed nor not people-presentable. The urgency of the situation Jodha would face soon enough, overrode all other considerations.

>> Isn't it? We put lot of emphasis on appearances... only to find in the end how meaningless that effort was

Jalal bared his soul to Jodha to make her understand that she had to have her wits about her and to be well- armoured to face the looming battle that was unavoidable when the topic of her marriage came up.

>> The ever perceptive man... wasn't he?

It was fascinating to read about the history of the realization of their dream - Four Wheels-; and how the four boys forged a formidable friendship that would stand the test of time.

>> Glad you didn't find it boring

The way he illustrated why she was way beyond his league was top-notch.

His sincere admission that he is not the man who married Aliya was a stirring read.

>> Thank you..

Here he was, the egoistic, macho boss, pleading his case to his beloved employee. A man whose head and heart are finally in sync as regards his soulmate, which led him to brazenly challenge her to be “his” that would lead to an “us” and together they would be able to stand up to the battalion of naysayers and prove to everyone that no one can put asunder their union.

>> such beautiful words strewn together

The worries of a father are plentiful but all the inner turmoil is suppressed to project a stoic front to the family. Saradhi’s earlier misgivings that were threatening his sleep were put to rest when he looked at the picture not from what he had lost but by what he stood to gain in the long run.

>> Yes... if not for the hopes of a better, brighter future what'd we humans hang on to?

Thank you, Jahnu, for the brilliantly-written Chapter 44 Part 2. Every update leaves us hankering for the next one which can’t come soon enough.

>> Thanks to you for picking up PBD and giving it not only your time to read but to pen these heartfelt reviews. Couldn't ask for more

P.S.

BTW, what was the scene that you were not able to include in the update which would have required another 10 days, Jahnu? We would love to read it. Can’t it be posted on its own for us to enjoy until the next update?

BTW, what was the scene that you were not able to include in the update which would have required another 10 days

>> Its the climax of the tour... I should have waited and posted after finishing it. Usually I have a pre-set finishing junctures to each part. The girls made me sappy with their anniversary posts and I rushed to post without the proper climax for part2... or may its bound to happen this way!

Now I'm stuck on how to blend the climax of this with the beginning of the new one! The things these girls make me do

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

Thank you so much for responding to my post, Jahnu.

I understand a smattering of Hindi. I am a fan of Hindi movies from the 1950s and 1960s and later on, movies of Madhuri Dixit. I have enjoyed the films with the aid of subtitles, of course.

The occasional Hindi words used in the story, I am able to understand. Those that I don’t, I Google them. So, it’s not a problem at all unless they are long phrases or sentences. But, please, I don’t want to trouble you for a glossary. I will manage somehow.

>> Hindi is not my first language either. In my starting chapters I used more because we used to have lot of Hindi readers. I reduced it later and stuck to English. I add some occasional words to convey the intention better. Like Manu said, local languages have a depth to them that English lacks sometimes.

Thanks a lot for the video clip of the Aaja Mahiya song. Now I understand why Jalal was so besotted with Jodha’s appearance in the song.

>> That was one popular song amongst Hrithik Roshan fans. And Jodha is one, if you remember her saying so in one chapter

I am from Malaysia. Apart from English, I know Tamil and the Malay Language.

Are you born in Malaysia? Looking forward to travel together with you on this PBD journey

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Nahi to koi react nahi kiya tune na di ne.

Arey check karo

Recent comment na? 2nd part? Maine kiya hai react.

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Pata nahi mere liye to 1st july ko hi 1 month ho gaya

Time hai abhi 😂

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Time hai abhi 😂

Koi time nahi hai. July kab ka start ho gaya pure 8 days ho gaye start ho ke