(FF)CID-The destiny of unfaithful

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Narrative voice:- Mujhe 20 saal ho gaye Bombay mein /a sunrise over the beach, with soft waves gently touching the shore in a calm, peaceful atmosphere.

Narrative:-Insan ki aankh mein jhaank ke uska kaleja maap sakte hain/a busy market in the evening, full of traffic and people, with lights glowing and a lively buzz in the air.

Narrative:- magar Neeyat Bhaanpna tum jaanti ho/ CID Inspector Asha, with her hair tied in a bun and dressed in a kurta and black pants, slowly opened the door, her face blushing as she did so, every movement in slow-motion.

Abhijit'Narrative voice:- Wo log bekasoor Logon ko maar rahe the or Kisi ko kuch malum nahi/Abhijit carefully examined a drop of blood through a magnifying glass, his eyes narrowing with focus. With precision, he took out a thin, long black hair from it,

Daya's Narrative voice:-Wo log Laashon Ko thikaane laga rahe the magar kisi ko malum nayi/Daya sat near the dead body, lost in thought, his posture reflecting deep concentration. Meanwhile, Freddy moved around, capturing shots with his camera with All focused look

Sudhakar's narrative voice/Un logo ko kisi ne maara lekin kisi ko kuch malum nayi:Sudhakar stood firm in the narrow hallway, his sharp eyes shifting between the two couples Nervously answering his questions. Around them, curious neighbors had gathered at the doors of their flats, whispering and peeking in.

In the dim, heavy darkness of the room, three figures stood.

The one in the center loomed larger than the others, his shadow stretching long across the floor.

On the right wall, a red cross glowed fiercely, framed by small white bulbs that blinked and shimmered like distant stars

"Tum Us ladki ki or Aakarshit ho rahe ho or Wo tumhe apne Jaal mein faansti jaa rahi hai" in a heavy voice

The bonnet of a car was visible, with a bottle of whisky placed on it. Meanwhile, Abhijit stood nearby, holding a glass in his hand and wearing a broad, smiling face ,he Shaked His Hand with someone And give introduction of him

"Asha ko kis Nazar se Dekhte ho tum?" Abhijit's smile convert into serious look

Narrative voice:-Saab Ek shehar Hai or ek bus hain or Hazaaron log hain jo paheli bante jaa rahe hain/A black bus was approaching the bus stop, and 15-20 people started entering it even though the bus never stopped

Acp Sitting Next to salunkhe in bureau

Acp:- kuch dino pehle Asha or Sudhakar mere paas aaye or bole humne ek Raid ke doraan 4 Manje hoye Criminals ko pakda or unhone sach mein unhe Arrest kiya tha

Salunkhe:- magar,Esme shakk karne wali konsi baat hai ?(With a light smile)

Acp:- Koi Asha ki madad kar raha hai salunkhe!(with Beleivable look)

Narrative voice:-maine Zindagi mein pta ni kitne galat kaam kiye Magar Ek Ladki ka peecha ni kar paya theek se/A boy in a black pant coat stormed into the bureau aggressively. Asha stood up from the bench, her face filled with shock as she saw him

Soooo this was the teaser....Lemme know how was it ?:)

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: Ranjha2.O

Narrative voice:- Mujhe 20 saal ho gaye Bombay mein /a sunrise over the beach, with soft waves gently touching the shore in a calm, peaceful atmosphere.

Narrative:-Insan ki aankh mein jhaank ke uska kaleja maap sakte hain/a busy market in the evening, full of traffic and people, with lights glowing and a lively buzz in the air.

Narrative:- magar Neeyat Bhaanpna tum jaanti ho/ CID Inspector Asha, with her hair tied in a bun and dressed in a kurta and black pants, slowly opened the door, her face blushing as she did so, every movement in slow-motion.

Abhijit'Narrative voice:- Wo log bekasoor Logon ko maar rahe the or Kisi ko kuch malum nahi/Abhijit carefully examined a drop of blood through a magnifying glass, his eyes narrowing with focus. With precision, he took out a thin, long black hair from it,

Daya's Narrative voice:-Wo log Laashon Ko thikaane laga rahe the magar kisi ko malum nayi/Daya sat near the dead body, lost in thought, his posture reflecting deep concentration. Meanwhile, Freddy moved around, capturing shots with his camera with All focused look

Sudhakar's narrative voice/Un logo ko kisi ne maara lekin kisi ko kuch malum nayi:Sudhakar stood firm in the narrow hallway, his sharp eyes shifting between the two couples Nervously answering his questions. Around them, curious neighbors had gathered at the doors of their flats, whispering and peeking in.

In the dim, heavy darkness of the room, three figures stood.

The one in the center loomed larger than the others, his shadow stretching long across the floor.

On the right wall, a red cross glowed fiercely, framed by small white bulbs that blinked and shimmered like distant stars

"Tum Us ladki ki or Aakarshit ho rahe ho or Wo tumhe apne Jaal mein faansti jaa rahi hai" in a heavy voice

The bonnet of a car was visible, with a bottle of whisky placed on it. Meanwhile, Abhijit stood nearby, holding a glass in his hand and wearing a broad, smiling face ,he Shaked His Hand with someone And give introduction of him

"Asha ko kis Nazar se Dekhte ho tum?" Abhijit's smile convert into serious look

Narrative voice:-Saab Ek shehar Hai or ek bus hain or Hazaaron log hain jo paheli bante jaa rahe hain/A black bus was approaching the bus stop, and 15-20 people started entering it even though the bus never stopped

Acp Sitting Next to salunkhe in bureau

Acp:- kuch dino pehle Asha or Sudhakar mere paas aaye or bole humne ek Raid ke doraan 4 Manje hoye Criminals ko pakda or unhone sach mein unhe Arrest kiya tha

Salunkhe:- magar,Esme shakk karne wali konsi baat hai ?(With a light smile)

Acp:- Koi Asha ki madad kar raha hai salunkhe!(with Beleivable look)

Narrative voice:-maine Zindagi mein pta ni kitne galat kaam kiye Magar Ek Ladki ka peecha ni kar paya theek se/A boy in a black pant coat stormed into the bureau aggressively. Asha stood up from the bench, her face filled with shock as she saw him

Soooo this was the teaser....Lemme know how was it ?:)

I Enjoyed The Teaser

Waiting For You To Update The Story

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: SilverBell

I Enjoyed The Teaser

Waiting For You To Update The Story

Thanks my dear........smiley31

I will update the first part soon ,in the couple of days

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: Ranjha2.O

Thanks my dear........smiley31

I will update the first part soon ,in the couple of days

Alright Take Your Time

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Posted: 3 months ago
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It was a bit confusing.....why is ACP doubting Asha's detection skills? I'm loving it tho , waiting for the first chapter

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Posted: 3 months ago
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Originally posted by: CID-fan-394

It was a bit confusing.....why is ACP doubting Asha's detection skills? I'm loving it tho , waiting for the first chapter

Some more incident Will be happen to made Asha Suspecious(sab teaser mein nhi na daal skte)smiley20

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Posted: 1 months ago
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CHAPTER:-1

Tip And Deal

A narrative voice on radio:-tou main shalini Pawar vyavsayak ishtihar Ki es jamabandi ke baad ek baar phir se kaar-e-karam Gunaah-e-bambai mein aap sabhi shavotaon ka ugarmay sawagat karti hoon/ "A wet, rainy road with small puddles scattered across it, as one ambassador and maruti pass by, splashing water

N.V:- Tou Aaj Hamare saath hain CID ke hon-haar officer yaani Acp Pradyuman jinke saath Hum Charcha kar rahe hain ke aaj ke Badalte yug mein ye Kaise apne Adarsho par kayam hai or desh ke liye Inka hriday kis kadar sewa-grahast hai/Two fair-skinned hands with big yellow nails and thick black hair on the wrists and knuckles are ripping the neck of a hen with a sharp knife. Meanwhile, white salt is being sprinkled on her neck as she blinks her eyes innocently

N.v:- sabse pehle tou main Shalini jee or Radio gyaan bhaarti ki puri programming team ka abhaar pragat karta hoon jihnone mujhe Es kaabil samjha or Sarhaya ---Shalini giggle

"On a public bench, a beardless boy is sitting next to a girl in a yellow kameez and pajama. The boy is smoking a cigarette when suddenly, she takes it from him.

N.v:-dekhiye ab Mumbai Bhi pehle Jaisa nyi hai Offcourse Shehrikaran Or Pashchimi parbhaav Bahut badh gaya hai har jagah or Log bhi badh gaye hain or jab Log badhenge crime rate bhi definitely badhega /A white dog is barking aggressively in the middle of the road, while a teenager watches it Without any Expression from behind a pole.

N.v:- aap ko Ab asaan lagta hai Apna kaam Ya pehle lagta tha:- Na pehle lagta tha na aaj lagta hai or na kabhi lagega or Mujhe Esse Koi Pareshani nahi kyuki Duty is Duty After all :----Tou ye the CID ke Diggaj Acp Pradyuman jinse aaj ke kaar-e-karam mein humne baat ki or jaana Ki Jurm or Mumbai ke zameeni halaato ke bare mein Ab main shalini Pawar Gyan bharti ke kaksh se aapse Vida leti hoon Ye pyara sa geet tab Takk Aapke liye khidmat hai

Asha switched off the radio placed in the window of her room and take a sip from her tea Just then, the doorbell rang. She set the cup near the radio on the windowsill and went to open the door. As she opened it, Daya was standing there with a smile on his face, greeting her with a wave

Asha:- arrey daya! Aaj yahan?

Asha Walk back to her cup of tea in busy Manner

Daya:- haan Wo Acp Sir Radio station ki liye gaye hain tou socha kyu na Aaj sari Team ke saath chlu bureau...bass karli tumse shuruaat

(placing is Hand On wall while standing at door)

Asha:- hmmm, bahar kyu khade ho ander aao Na

While taking sip of tea

Daya Comes in

Daya:- Maine disturb tou Ni kar diya kahin?(He Laugh With Embrassing face)

Asha:- Kiya na, Saara Sansad leke bethi thi Tum aaye sab uth gaye

She Said while Swallowing and Settling a swirl on her ear

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Abhijit's Home

Abhijit sat at the dining table with a newspaper spread before him and the landline receiver pressed to his ear. As he listened intently, he wasing rubbing his thumb along his chin

Abhijit:- Jee Vaishali Jee bolri hain? (WhileLooking at newspaper)

Abhijit's POV:- "

Abhijit:- Main Senior Insp. Abhijit CID ,wo Aapka maine Article Padha Newspaper mein(He start looking around)

Abhijit:- haan Jee jee!!(He blink his Eyes Continuously thrice)

Abhijit:- Haan tou Wo Jo aadmi Ko Luta gaya hai jiske 20,000 rupe chori huye hain Kya aap ko uska naam malum hai?

He was Sliding lightly his Index finger On paper

Abhijit:- nahi dekhiye mujhe aisa lagta hai Jaise main bahut ache se jaanta hoon usey Par mujhe yaad nhi aara Tou agar aap Uska naam mujhe bta dengi Tou ho sakta hai Ke main kuch....U know madad kr sku uski

He swallow his bottom lip as complete the sentence

Landline start Beeping Abhijit Look at Receiver

Abhijit:- Kya??! Ek minute,ek minute Mujhe Dusra Call Aara hai abhi Main baad mein Karta hoon

He press A button on landline with arrogance

Abhijit:- hello senior inspector Abhijit Here

He Clear his throat looking at Other side from Scene

Abhijit:- arrey Acp Saab Aap!

His expression change into Amuse and he Stand up from his chair

Abhijit:- nahi nahi Bass aise hee

He Go two Step forward while carrying landline with him and Take hand into pocket of pant

Abhijit:- ye tou barhi khushi ki baat hai hain,acha kitne Baje,kitne baje?

Abhijit Smiled Lightly

Abhijit:- hmm hmmm (he Nodded his head Twice with buzzing)

Abhijit:- haan Tou theek hai na hum sab pohnch jayenge

Abhijit Get obvious look

Abhijit:- okay okay (he said With pressurized way)

Call Hang up

Abhijit:-Daya Ko phone Kar deta hoon (he start dailing number on landline while helding receiver with same hand)

After Pressing some bunch of keys On landline Abhijit stopped

Abhijit:- arrey yaar Number tou yaad hee nhi (while looking down at phone)

Asha's residence

Daya giggles with Cup of tea in his hand

Daya:-aaaaaa.... Kitna Time lagega Main Baahar wait kr leta hoon

He Took a Very vulnerable sip

Asha:- Nhi Koi zarurat nahi hai Ghar kaafi barha hai Mera

She gets frank

Daya:- Wo tou hai

Asha started tangling with the blank cup by inserting her thumb into the grip hole.

Daya:- Tumne suna kya waise wo radio Programe?

Asha:- offcourse Abhi khatam huya

Daya:- maine pura nhi suna Advertisement bahut aate hain beech mein

Asha:- Radio par Advertisement mein gaane tou aate hain kabhi tv par dekhna Sir-dard Se mar jaaye aadmi

With A sigh of Disappointment she shook her head slowly

Daya: dekho Asha, yahan jo dikhta hai wahi bikta hai Or ye cheez har Feild mein hai har Feild mein (he Pressurized his voice in last)

Asha:- Hota hoga par Main eske khilaaf hee hoon or tum itni tarafdari Kyu kar rahe ho

She Lifted her Eyebrows

Daya:- Main kisi ki tarafdari Ni kar raha

He took again a sip

Daya:-Tv par baat alag hai Kum se kum Tasveer tou aati hai Or radio par Kuch ni ekdum blank

Asha:- Aisi Tasweer ka Karna Jisme Koi Company Apne product ki sirf mu-boli achayiyan bta kar Usey bechne ki koshish kar rahi ho

Daya:- Buisness har jagah hai Asha Aakhir-kaar unhe bhi apna pet paalna hai

Asha Mimics daya's word in funny way and Goes to kitchen

Asha:- jab chai pee lo Bta dena main cup le jayungi

She said while going to kitchen

Abhijit's home

Abhijit was sitting on the floor in his bedroom, surrounded by a mess of books. He held a thick book in his hands, studying it with a careful eye

Abhijit:- dr salunkhe

He mumbled and turn the page

Abhijit:- Daya CID,Sudhakar CID

He Hit Book page With Finger

Asha's residence

The clatter of pots and dishes came to a stop, leaving only the sound of water trickling—until that too faded into silence. The soft hum of the refrigerator became audible. Asha emerged from the kitchen, her hair loose, a black clip clenched between her teeth. Without glancing at Daya, she walked straight into the bedroom. Meanwhile, Daya stole a brief glance at her before shifting his gaze around the room

Asha:- or Aaj ka Kya plan hai (her voice Echoed from bedroom)

Daya:- bass wahi Sab kal Woh vasayi wale case ki file tyyar kar di hai or aaj Ek Khaas Khabri Jaag gaya Hai Abhi usi ko milte huye Chalenge Bureau

Asha comes from bedroom in Dark blue shirt with Black pants meanwhile she was Combing her Black hairs

Asha:- tumhara acha hai Sara din Bethe Rehte ho or ek hum hain kabhi panvel kabhi Mud (While combing her hair over her shoulders and looking to the other side)

She gathered her hair behind her head like a thick rope, tightened her grip, and twisted it into a bun. While adjusting it, she walked over to the drawer, took something from it, and then headed to the bedroom

Daya:- aisi baat nahi hai parso hee main Jaa ke aya Ek visit par Or Jo dimag ka bhaaji-paala huya pucho mat

Asha:- oh,ho! Aisa bhi kya hogya(she sounds very Frank)

Daya;-ek landlord lady thi or uski ek Naukraani thi Kamla toh uski Naukraani Kehti hai ke mere 10 bache hain or unme se ek mil ni raha Hai Kisi ne Apaharan kar liya hai uska

Asha Giggled loudly

Asha:- 10 bache?

Daya:- Wayi tou Maine kaha logo mein itni Himmat aa kahan se jaati hai

Asha:- Bache karne ki?

Daya:- nahiii bacho ko kidnap karne ki

She comes out from bedroom and stopped at daya

Asha:- kaisi lag ri hoon (she move her eyebrows up as she asked)

Daya start Smiling

Asha's expression Abruptly change Into strange

Daya Start laughing more broad

Asha:- Hass kayu rahe ho tum ?

He Shake is hand In gesture of No while controlling is laugh with Putting his Hands on mouth

Daya:- I am sorry , I am sorry

He finally stopped His laugh

Asha Did Lip splitting And goes Near Sofa

Daya:- tou main keh raha tha aaaaaa,maine tou enquiry nikaal di Phir pata chale Kamla Ko bhulne ki bimari hai or dasva bacha abhi hone wala hai magar usey lag ra hai Hogya hai par mil ni raha (he giggle at last)

Asha didn't respond To daya And start wearing Shoes while sitting at sofa Silently

Daya's phone start ringing And He took his phone from pocket

Daya:-hello Insp.daya CID se

Daya Said With confidence

Daya:- Haan Main Or Asha Nikal hee rahe hain bass

Asha Slightly look at daya meanwhile Wearing Shoes and she Again start looking down

Daya:- jee....Okay

Daya Hang up the Call meanwhile Asha Was Sitting At sofa Looking at daya

Daya:- Lo karlo baat (while Coming to Asha)

Asha:- kya hua?

Asha Stood up From there and Took a Lock in her hand And goes out from house

Daya:- Abhijit Ka Phone tha Acp sir Ka interview Badhya Gaya or Ab wo Chaahte hain Hum unhe wahan se pick Karne ayen(with amused face)

Asha:- haan tou problem kya hai esme?(while looking at Neibour flat)

Daya Come out From house And Asha start locking out it

Daya:- look mera Bahut Khaas Khabri wahan intezar kar raha hai

Asha:- tou Ab(While Finishing lock of her house)

Daya:- Abhijit Ko pehle Pick krenge fir ussey baat krenge Jaise usey theek lage Kar lenge

Asha:- tou...chalein? (Giving gesture towards Lift)

Daya:- haan,sure!

Both start walking towards The lift

Abhijit was walking hurriedly through every room in his house. He went to the hall, opened drawers, and then quickly closed them again. He started looking on the floor behind the sofa. Then he went to the bedroom and looked at a picture of his mother. He gazed at it and slowly moved closer. As he stared at the picture, he noticed something—there was a reflection in his mother's eyes in the photo. Curious, he looked to his left, bent down, and glanced toward the bed

Abhijit's pov

A gun was Placed under the bed meanwhile a reflection was reflecting on the Barrel which was Half Outside of the bed

Abhijit looked to the right—the window glass was reflecting the room’s light. He reached for his gun from there, stood up straight, and turned to look at his mother’s picture once more

Abhijit:- lagta hai Kal raat Safaayi karte wakt Acp Sir ka jab phone aya tab Chut gyi hogi

he looked down and smiled faintly, and shook his head.

HIGHWAY

Daya was sitting in the driver's seat with Asha beside him. meanwhile Car was Going on a Clean Road

Daya:- Khuda na khaasta agar aaj Baarish aaye

He said While Lifting the gear

Asha:- Baarish Aaye m tou Bolti hoon ,I like rains

She was looking Towards window

Daya Look at asha And then Look In front

Daya:- pta Ni aaj Din kaisa Jaane wala hai

He Free a sigh

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A landline echoed in a hall full of darkness Just TV's light and sunshine from window was Glittering

"Hallo" a Deep voice Said in polite way

"haan haan sab Set hai" focus on a crushed cigerate on table

"nyi ,nyi,akha Japaan Khaali hai" A Very clean Stylish laugh

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Near Abhijit's Home

Daya:- Aage tou band lag ra hai (While looking here and there)

Asha:- hmm band hai Aage tou raasta

Daya:- band hee rahe tou acha Ab

Daya's pov:- Abhijit was running Towards car

Abhijit:- wo main bhool hee gaya bataana yaar Kaam chl raha hai thoda (Standing at daya's window in short of breath)

Asha Get out From car and Sitted on back

Abhijit:- Arrey asha beth jao aage agar bethna hai tou

Asha:- nyi sir I am fine

Abhijit get in car meanwhile daya switch off the engine and

Abhijit:- arrey gaadi band kyu kar di?

Daya:- Jhanjat hai Boss!!!(with disappointed face)

Abhijit Look At daya and then Look At Asha On back

Asha:- daya Ko Apne ek khaas Khabri se milne jna hai

Abhijit:- Tou Khabri ko baad mein mil lena na

Daya:- Nhi yaar purana Or khaas Khabri hai agar ab mana kiya tou Fir Malum nyi Registan Mein baarish Kab hogi

Abhijit:- 12 bje Hume Acp sir Ke paas Pohnchnda hai Yaar Daya

He Gave a gesture Towards his watch with hand

Asha:- Daya tum apne khabri ko phone karke pucho na agar timing mein kuch...

Abhijit look at asha with Tense Look and then at daya

Abhijit:- haan Yaar Phone karo na tum usko

Daya:- haan main phone krke dekhta hoon usey agar kuch upper neeche rakh le(while Tooking phone from packet and dialing)

Abhijit:- karo karo yaar

All eyes on daya

Daya:- hello haan Daya Baat kar raha hoon (while taking phone to his ear)

Daya:- Kuch time ka aaj Upper neeche ho jta tou ...Acha?(he look at Abhijit

Daya:- okay okay Main aa rha hoon

Abhijit grasp His forehead with Disappoint face

Meanwhile asha Was Looking at daya

Daya:- wo pohnch gaya hai Or mera intezar kar raha hai

Abhijit:- Address kya btaya?

Daya:- Koi purana passport office bola

Asha:-tou ab ?

Daya:- yaar Es wale khabri ne jab jab Khabar di hai Kuch na kuch haath laga hee hai

He said while looking At abhijit

Asha:- Tou Kya karna hai ab ?

Daya:- Acp sir ko pick krne jaana m bhi chaahta hoon magar ye bhi zaruri hai

Abhijit and daya looking into each other's eyes

Abhijit Took his cell from pocket of shirt and start dialing

Abhijit:- ek kaam karte hain main Sudhakar ko phone kar deta hoon Wo aur fredricks Acp sir ko lene chle jayenge Or waise Tou hum tab Takk pohnch hee jayenge magar agar na bhi huya tou wo sambhaal lenge

Hee took phone to his ear

Daya's Face spark with smile

Daya:- arrey haan ye tou maine socha hee nhi

Abhijit Touch his coller Meanwhile smiling Looking At daya

Asha:- Maan gaye sir

She giggle lightly

Daya:- tou chalein?

He look at asha from rear mirror

Abhijit:- haan haan Chlo

Abhijit gave gesture with hand

Daya on the engine and Run the car

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Sudhakar was Trying to start his bike While kicking off it again and again With frustrated look and Then his phone beep and he took out his phone While Focusing on Bike

Sudhkar:- Hello

He Closed kicking off bike and Straighten his Body

Sudhakar:- haan Main Nikal hee raha tha

He Slowly walk some steps ahead of bike

Sudhakar:- theek hai Main fredy ko le jayunga saath mein

He Took his phone back into pocket and come back to bike to Start kicking off again

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Highway

Daya Abhijit and Asha was going in the car

Abhijit:- aise Khabri Marva dete hain kabhi kabhi

He paas a disgusting look

Daya :- Aisa nahi hai Kaam ki baat hogi Koi pakka(while Rounding steering And taking turn)

Asha:- Andheri Mein Kahan Hai Band passport office?

She ask with sus face

Abhijit:- hai Dekha hai maine Ander ko jaa ke Hai thoda

He said while looking At daya

Asha:- Mujhe Tou Pedo ke ilawa Or ek do gharo ke ilawa koi Office dikhayi ni pad raha

Daya:- bahut Baareek See Jagah Hai ,Ek baar Kisi Case ke Kaam se aya tha tab Dekha tha or tab Saanp Bhi dekhe the ek do Wahan

Abhijit:-mujhe lagta hai tum Galat jaa re ho Daya (while Looking at back)

Daya breifly look at Abhijit And Again start Looking in front

Abhijit:- wahan peeche right lena Tha

He Does thumb towards backside

Asha:- main tou bolti hoon pooch lena chahiye kisi se

She was looking at window

Abhijit:- ye saamne hee Aadmi Chala Aa ra hai Esse poochte hain roko zara

Daya stopped the car

Abhijit Took his head outiside in window

Abhijit:- suniye purana passport office kahan hai ?

Daya exercise his Hand meanwhile asha Was looking Surroundings

Abhijit:- saamne lelo daya wahan Wo dukaan ke paas

Abhijit didn't Complete his words

Daya:- samjh gaya boss

Car stopped near the a Shop

Daya :- main aata hoon jaa ke

He said while looking at Abhijit And Tooking his gun from a Compartment box

Abhijit:- main or asha Yahin rukte hain

Abhijit and asha Share a Eye contact

Daya:- Bass koi buri khabar Na ho

He said while getting out from car and Hitting the door of car with force

Daya Walk towards Shop meanwhile Abhijit and asha was watching him silently from car

Pov:- Daya Was Talking With shop keeper and then He goes towards a thin staircase in the Right side of show

The Stairs were Sounds like Rusting bycycle While he was Going upand He glanced around cautiously. Along the old cemented walls, strings were fastened tightly, and down below, two large iron rods formed an “X” shape—anchored firmly into the wall.He climbed further until he came to a stop in front of two large black glass doors. On one of them, a sticker read “Closed.” Daya looked around. There were only cold, silent walls on either side.He knocked gently with his knuckles and, in an exaggerated tone, said, “Ramzaan Mubarak.”After speaking, he slowly stepped away from the door, still observing his surroundings.Suddenly, the sound of a lock clicking echoed through the narrow space. One of the doors creaked open


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Posted: 1 months ago
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Bookmarked. Will read and review later

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Posted: 1 months ago
#9

Hope Daya Doesn't Fall Into Trouble

Should Have Taken Asha And Abhijeet With Him

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Posted: 1 months ago
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Imagine the door opens and usme se acp comes out saying " mujhe pick up karne aane wale the na" 🤣

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Posted by: Ranjha2.O

1 months ago

Airing Schedule of CID On tv

So guys This topic is created to Acknowledge all the forum members about What is Nowdays happening on tv with CID First of all I hate sony to...

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Posted by: Nikita_99503

28 days ago

CID Episode 55 - 28th June

Alright people... I'm back on duty. 🫡 Thread for today's episode... Kya lagta hai, aaj Daya waale track ka conclusion hoga? Ya abhi isko aur...

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Posted by: Chocolava5

29 days ago

Best couple in Cid

Here are some official and fan made couples of CID I have only included those fan made couples which were very famous And I have NOT included...

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