Originally posted by: dellzcreationz
Their first meet with the books flying and the girl not getting intimated by his words, uff the classic college first meet cannot go wrong impressing the readers and keeping them hooked
>> ikr. First meets are always magical in their chaos.. It’s those raw, unexpected moments that often spark the strongest connections 
The way he proposed to her was so breathtaking, love the way you have written his proposal scene, each line so beautifully written that I could feel that these words are said for m ...ahhh
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>> yesss...It’s not just about the words, but the truth behind them 
The wedding scene , the detailing, everything in between , loved every bit of it.
Oh no, his late night arrivals at home has brought a crack onto their relationship, that has distanced them, since there is no proper heart to heart conversation about how they work this marriage out, rather than giving up, with no hopes she was forced to sign the deed of the end.
>> sucha painful truth, isn’t it? how distance doesn’t always come from physical separation but from the silence and unspoken things left hanging in the air. That space of misunderstanding can be the hardest part of love
He hasn't signed the divorce papers thats a plus point, when he questioned her “Then tell me. Is this what you really want?” ohhh myy, seeda dil pe...She didnt have an answer and he asked her to just give them a day.
>> To me, that’s the crux of it all 
He didn’t want a ‘yes’ or ‘no’...he wanted her truth
Ek din mein bohot kuch hosakta hai 
The book store, the cafe, the streets, and the question which she has to yet answer “Tell me you don’t love me anymore, and I’ll sign the papers....” but before she could, while trying to save her, he got hurt.
The hospital scene 
all the moments of doubt and fear, had led her back to this - to HIM.
He didn’t answer with words, for none were needed. Instead, he pressed his lips to her hair, a silent vow, a promise spoken in the language of the heart.
these lines Anu...
no matter how much they been through, but when there is love, longingness and the desire to be one, everything just falls into place and this story truly sets this as a example for the song
>> These lines are my favourite too ... Love isn’t about perfection...it’s about choosing to return, over and over, even after you've stumbled 
Kitne Durr Durr Ho Unn Dono Ke Raaste
Mil Jaate Hain Jo Bane
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste
Beautiful story Anu , loved it
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Ishaani
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