OneShot - प्यार की वापसी - Updated 18/02/2025 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Mouser1

Superb i think sometimes we take it granted of what we have and when that granted becomes lost we ultimately know that what we have taken granted is how important to you in ur life

True that. I'm glad you captured the essence of it :)

Originally posted by: aparna3011

lovely story

very emotional

geet rediscover her love for maan again

Thank you for your kind words Aparna.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi there

hope you are well.

thanks for posting this OS

Splendid OS..... Magnificently written

their first meeting did not start on a good note

enjoyed their banter

of cos they fell in love

liked his simple heartfelt proposal

beautiful wedding

finally they are together forever

but things changed

dismayed seeing them arguing

sad that she wanted to divorce him

her heart was not in this

however she was helpless

oh she even sent the signed divorce papers

at least this gave him a reality check

so he did not sign the papers

his question was justified

alas she had no response

well he agreed to sign on one condition that shespend the day with him

great that she agreed

his question was expected

not surprised that he protected Geet

Geet was really worried about Maan

Thank God Maan was fine

Fate gave them another chance

that incident brought them closer

It’s a new beginning for them

All ends well

Yes. All ends well thank you for your kind words

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful and Emotional OS

Maan and Geet meet by accident and their journey began

until Marriage

but slowly Maan took his marriage and wife for granted until Geet

served him divorce papers but he never signed them

and now both spending the day reminiscing older days

until Maan saves Geet from an accident but he gets injured

and this led to Geet bringing her emotions out

now both started all over again in love

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it :)

Its so lovely

And touching shot

Just little misunderstanding create the barrier

But one day changed everything

Originally posted by: priya_21

Its so lovely

And touching shot

Just little misunderstanding create the barrier

But one day changed everything

Thanks a lot dear Priya

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Pyaar ki vaapsi

hindi hi toh h ??

I cant read Hindi. But this was your best work IMO. I was so immersed in the story that I didnt even notice ke the leads names were never mentioned. I imagined MG the whole time.

I thought she lost him forever, but glad it was a happy ending.

very emotional

love never dies or end

love may take little back step but never fed away

They started off well but grew apart. So much that they almost finished it all. But he came back to fight.

Their first meet with the books flying and the girl not getting intimated by his words, uff the classic college first meet cannot go wrong impressing the readers and keeping them hooked

The way he proposed to her was so breathtaking, love the way you have written his proposal scene, each line so beautifully written that I could feel that these words are said for m ...ahhh.

The wedding scene , the detailing, everything in between , loved every bit of it.

Oh no, his late night arrivals at home has brought a crack onto their relationship, that has distanced them, since there is no proper heart to heart conversation about how they work this marriage out, rather than giving up, with no hopes she was forced to sign the deed of the end.

He hasn't signed the divorce papers thats a plus point, when he questioned her “Then tell me. Is this what you really want?” ohhh myy, seeda dil pe...She didnt have an answer and he asked her to just give them a day.

Ek din mein bohot kuch hosakta hai

The book store, the cafe, the streets, and the question which she has to yet answer “Tell me you don’t love me anymore, and I’ll sign the papers....” but before she could, while trying to save her, he got hurt.

The hospital scene

all the moments of doubt and fear, had led her back to this - to HIM.

He didn’t answer with words, for none were needed. Instead, he pressed his lips to her hair, a silent vow, a promise spoken in the language of the heart.

these lines Anu...

no matter how much they been through, but when there is love, longingness and the desire to be one, everything just falls into place and this story truly sets this as a example for the song

Kitne Durr Durr Ho Unn Dono Ke Raaste

Mil Jaate Hain Jo Bane

Ek Duje Ke Vaaste

Ek Duje Ke Vaaste

Beautiful story Anu , loved it.