Ok so I marathoned the Mindf*ck series. Good thing I had all 5 books downloaded cos I just couldn't not read the next one. I give it 4 stars overall. Compelling read. Finished it in 2 days but these are more like short novellas. Plus they got me closer to my reading goal for the year so yayy!
That said, I did have some tiny niggles with it.
*** WARNING! SPOILERS AHEAD!!!
1. The language and the prose as such. I'm no purist but this book had too many grammar mistakes to ignore: "You would have went after her"? "I would saw what she did?" I mean these are just the tip of the iceberg. There were several others - missing conjunctions, articles not being the least of them.
2. Too much suspension of disbelief - especially once they get to Delaney and all the town terrorizing happens. I get it. Jake is a genius. But it's all tell rather than show. The time-delay paint, the hidden cameras so they can watch the whole town without anyone finding out... it was all a bit much given that he's just one techie. It's good entertainment because ofc Lana's path to her revenge has to be smooth given the number of people she has lined up to kill but still ... after a point I was eyerolling so hard.
3. Logan. I get that he's the light to her darkness but when he finds out the truth - HOW COULD HE? I hated him at that point. Even if he thought she's a proxy killer that was a horrible way to deal with it instead of just having a conversation. And he did not even grovel. Also, I did not feel he did enough to show he's on her side. That last act fell flat because that was a foregone conclusion anyway. I expected him to show up more for her especially after seeing the evidence on videotape. How could he not want revenge on her behalf after that? How could he not be burning like Jake was burning for Marcus? At least he could have saved her from that shootout in the end!
P.S. I also figured out who the original killer was. It was pretty obvious from all the hints.
And lbr, Logan was pretty dim. I mean he couldn’t figure out a thing about Lana on his own. Even that guy on his team knew before him.
I ended up liking Jake more than Logan. I wish there were chapters from Jake's PoV. And more from Hadley's PoV. They were more badass than Logan any day.
Also, that ending with Jake and Hadley left a bad taste and felt like borderline queerphobia. Like come on, they're bi, sure but that's not what bi's do!
But before it seems like all I'm doing is complaining, I did really enjoy this.
It made me tear up- especially Book 2 and 4. I think I rated Book 2 the highest. The storyline with Hadley's stepfather and the little girl made me wanna retch and tore up my insides. Lana was a true hero there.
The descriptions were graphic - yes but somehow the way the author built it up made it easier to take. Like right from the start you know Lana has been a victim of rape. So you have time to condition your mind before she lets out the details. And I did not find those as graphic as the ones where the actual kills take place and what happens to the perpetrators. The torture scenes were more graphic imo. I found the smut to be pretty tame compared to what I was expecting given that I'd been warned about the explicitness of the writing in this book.
The Dark humour was delicious. Starting right from the author's pen name.
I laughed. The last bit in the epilogue made me laugh too. "She has special needs" indeed! The references to slasher movies and their ‘inspired’ aliases was a fun homage.
Edited by LizzieBennet - 11 months ago
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