Bagging Trouble ~ ArShi OS

Looking forward to read the stories Mrina!

I will post my comments after reading them. Got busy with some clean up work.

Cheers..

Thanks for tagging me .. Will read araam se and comment.

reserving this one too!

This Banner is really funky! From the airplane in the background to the laughing pics in the foreground... topped with that jazzy font color, it all fits the story so aptly .

For the story, I'll say this - Despite this being an AU, the essence of the characters remains the same. Khushi is still a Sankadevi and it almost took me back to those detective Khushi (and Manorama Bond) days . Arnav is just roped into her pagal plans as always, trying to appease her outwardly while mentally questioning her sanity (and his ). Again, a little slice of life filled with silly shenanigans and I'm so glad we got to read this because of the contest .

Love,

Stuti

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

This Banner is really funky! From the airplane in the background to the laughing pics in the foreground... topped with that jazzy font color, it all fits the story so aptly .

For the story, I'll say this - Despite this being an AU, the essence of the characters remains the same. Khushi is still a Sankadevi and it almost took me back to those detective Khushi (and Manorama Bond) days . Arnav is just roped into her pagal plans as always, trying to appease her outwardly while mentally questioning her sanity (and his ). Again, a little slice of life filled with silly shenanigans and I'm so glad we got to read this because of the contest .

Love,

Stuti

Manorama Bond Days was my inspiration for this OS. I should have included Mami in this and it would have made the OS better but anyways… I’m so happy that you enjoyed reading the OS.

Wildy is a genius with book covers so I completely agree with you. It captures the plot of the OS really well.

Res. for now.

Beautiful cover, btw!

Edit - Loved the concept. Khushi, the ever vigilante, kind samaritan won my heart. And Arnav babua you should be happy you have such a keeper fiancé, kuch seekho!

I liked how it ended with them still going ahead and reporting an unattended bag. That's the right thing to do.

The cover does full justice to the story and loved the coloring and the other image used.

The OS is beautifully penned Mrina!

I could actually imagine Khushi and Arnav saying those dialogues 😅😅

The cover is also beautiful and apt for the story

They both were well and truly in their characters. Actually I was a bit apprehensive when Khushi found the second unattended bag.

Why weren't anyone bothered about the unattended bags damnit! I totally agree with Khushi. Better safe than sorry especially with unattended bags.

I can relate with this story with my own contrasting experiences with unattended bags at two different airports.

Nice story and the book cover depicted the story very well.

Thank you Mrina and Parm.

Cheers..

Lovely characterization. I must say. Khushi is being Khushi and Arnav is ASR. One thing was evident that She is becoming a bit ASR herself with her top-notch pagalpan when she find it weird seeing those unattended bagages.

Thanks for the tag.