Poem - Michi’s life journey

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Michi's life journey

Destiny brought them together

In a marriage devoid of love

Yet this union was unique and special

For it was blest by the one above.

If his lover had not betrayed him

He never would have taken the step

Of seeking the hand of the damsel in need

As reciprocation for all his help.

Little did he know then that this indeed

Was the defining moment of their lives

The courses of which changed forever

As in each other's love they thrived.

But it wasn't smooth sailing at the start

As her past haunted him relentlessly

It did not help that his ex-lover did her best

To whip up the flames of his jealousy.

Over time she tamed the raging beast in him

Playing the dutiful wife to the hilt;

Her patience and care were the bedrock on which

Their pure love was slowly built .

Even before the base could be strengthened

His sister's past shook it to the core.

Ensnared in his wife's web of lies

He tortured her and she silently bore.

Thus, each ended up hurting the other,

And in turn were in greater pain

As they resided in each other's being

They were left feeling tortured and drained

After months of pain they finally found peace

When all misgivings were put to rest

By the innocent action of the babe who was

The cause of all their stress.

Having found their way back to each other,

Their union they wished to consecrate

By renewing the vows they had taken earlier

Under the duress of fate.

But the cruel fate intervened yet again

In the form of his half crazed ex-lover

They say hell hath no fury as a woman scorned

These words were just apt for her.

In trying to save his wife from her wrath

He fell prey to her dastardly act

Thus, they were once again driven apart

Before they could seal their pact.

His wife's prayers ensured he lived and breathed

But, alas, his memory of her is gone

Leaving him confused about their relationship

One moment he's happy, the other, forlorn.

Although he feels drawn towards her

He's unsure whether this is right;

Hazy images haunt him, which he tries to piece

Together, with all his might .

His wife is trying to do her best

By recreating the past for him

But nothing seems to work right now

The chances of his recovery seem slim.

Meanwhile we're told someone's after his life

Three attempts he has already met;

Although the finger of doubt points to her ex-lover

Nothing is certain as yet.

As the plot thickens we continue to wait

For our dear Jodi to reunite again;

All we can do is hope and pray

That we are spared of further pain.

P.S: Edited it to make it sound less like prose, though may not have been completely successful in this.

Edited by optimist - 17 years ago

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Shabz. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow opti take a bow, i love ur poem 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow opti superma,keep it up.but i dont think neev is the culprit,bcoz all these someone trying to kill milsi begins when he got engaged to ayesha rite,if neev is the culprit why did he do that on that day,i think it will be some mad lover of ayesha who is yet to be introduced, 😆 😆 😆
Edited by michiparadise - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg dis is brillant as. U da best yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Opti 👏 👏 👏 really loved it !
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW!! WONDERFUL PIECE OF WORK OPTI DI 👏
may snakalien here our prayer. 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Couldnt have put it in better words. This poem is awesome. I keep reading it again and again, not one verse is better than the other. They're amazing!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Beautiful 👏 👏 👏

U described Michi's life journey so beautifully 👏

Amazing hun
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks, gals for those encouraging and appreciative words!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😭very touching Opti!!!!!!!!

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