Poem - Michi’s life journey

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crazy4amrit

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

the poem was soooooo BEAUTIFUL 👏

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Quietude

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Optimist hun do write a FF when you get some good amount of free time

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fatima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

yes dii please do because I will really love to read an FF for Michi by u😳cause I'm sure that it will be just as wonderful as this one is👏

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Panache

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Opti..beautifully written... 😳
I would call this more of a poetic prose than poem..i found the last bit sarcastically funny! 😆 (I hope u get what i mean!)
But, this prose delivers the whole story line so concisely... Good Job! Sweets! 😳

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Thanks Sangs for that frank comment. Yes, I too felt that the meter was not right in many places but if I had to stick to the meter then I may have had to sacrifice the content and that was an absolute no-no for me. As I basically wanted the narration to flow, I had compromised on the meter and retained the content which must be making it sound more like a prose. I guess I am still an amateur at the job and have still not found a way to keep the content intact while also ensuring the rhthym and meter are not disturbed. I have modifed a few lines to make it sound less like prose.

Edited by optimist - 17 years ago

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