Sirf Tum... pt. 27 pg. 40 LAST PART!!!!! - Page 21

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part !!!! but i agree wid gsoni too small part yaar
newayz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey bohot short part tha ......
But was goooood 👏 Plzzzz cont soooon


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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 24

Yuvi went back to where he left Ashi with a glass of water in his hand and Ranveer by his side. Sonia and Tia were trying to control Ashi as well as themselves.

Yuvi- (giving water to Ashi) Ashi, sweetheart, please apne aap ko control karo. It's okay.

Ashi- Yuvi... Yuvi I'm sorry. I'm sorry Yuvi.

Yuvi- For what sweetheart? Tumhaari koi ghalti nahi hai.

Sonia- I'm so sorry Shona. Yeh sab meri wajjah se ho raha hai. Maine tumhe bataaya nahi.

Ashi- Mumma... Mumma (hugs her and cries harder)

Tia- Mumma, Ashi ko andar leke chalte hain.

As soon as Ashi and Tia got up, they both started to feel dizzy, and all of a sudden they fell right back down. Ranveer and Yuvi got really tensed and worried. They picked up their wives and took them in the room. They called in a doctor, and soon after they called all of their friends, Sumeet, Meera Dev, and Sudha Sisodia over. They were all outside the room... Yuvi and Ranveer were pacing back and forth. Sonia told Sumeet the truth about Ashi and he was sitting with his face burried in his hands.

Sonia- Sumeet, please kuch bolo.

Sumeet- Kya boloon main... kya boloon Sonia??? Tumne jo boldiya hai usse sunne ke baad mere paas bolne ke liye kuch baaki nahi raha.

Sonia- Sumeet, main tumhe bataana chahti thi par...

Sumeet- Par kya Sonia???!!! Tumne kya sochke yeh... yeh baat...

Meera- Sumeetji, issme Soniaji ki koi ghalti nahi hai. Woh sirf Anvesha ko protect karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Maa hoon naa. Samajh sakti hoon ki iss waqt Soniaji pe kya beet rahi hogi. Mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga yeh jaan ke ki Soniaji ne yeh baat chupaayee. Kyunki, agar main unki jagaah hoti, toh shayad main bhi yehi karti.

Sonia- Sumeet, I'm sorry. (starts crying)

Sumeet- (feels bad seeing her cry and goes toward her) Sonia.. Sonia, stop crying. (wipes her tears and hugs her)

Sonia- (crying) I'm sorry Sumeet.

Sumeet- (still hugging her) Dekho, ghalti shayad meri hai. Maine tumhe kuch zyaada hi boldiya. I'm sorry. Main... main bohat tense hogayaa tha. (pours a glass of water for her) Tum... tum pani piyo.

MP- (to vrinda) Pata nahi Ashi kaisi hogi. I'm really worried about her. Usko kitna dukh hua hoga. I can't believe ki yeh sab Ashi ke saath ho raha hai.

Vrinda- Haan. Mujhe bhi Ashi ki bohat chinta ho rahi hai. Pata nahi andar kya chal raha hai. Doctor half hour se andar hai.

Meher- (to Pri) Oh god. Pata nahi Tia aur Ashi kaisi hain. Babes, i hope Tia is okay. Poor Ashi. I feel horrible for her.

Pri- Haan Meher. Mujhe experience toh nahi hai, but i could only imagine, ki Ashi kaise handle kar rahi hogi yeh news.

Sudha- (to Sonia, Sumeet, and Meera) Hosla rakhiye. Sab theek hojaayega. Anvesha humaari bhi beti jaisi hain. Hum prathna karenge. Unhe kuch nahi hoga.

Half hour later!!!!

The doctor came out.

Sumeet- Doctor, meri betiyaan. (doctor is silent) Kya baat hai doctor? Aap kuch bolti kyun nahi?

Doctor- (with a big smile) Aapki dono betiyaan bilkul theek hain. And... Congratulations. Woh dono hi expect kar rahi hain. (everyone cheers)

Sonia- (shocked) MUMMUM!!!!!

Yuvi- Mumma, agar yeh April Fools ka joke tha toh phir, you got me.

Doctor- Dekhiye Mrs. Ahuja, aapko jis doctor ne bhi yeh kaha tha ki Anvesha ko baby nahi ho sakta woh ghalat the. Anvesha bilkul theek hai. She's completely normal. I think shayad, uss time pe reports mixed up hogayee ho. Kyunki Anvehsa ki reports completely clear hain. Un mein aisa kuch nahi likha. Anyway, Congratulations to you Mr. Dev and Mr. Sisodia. (leaves)

Yuvi and Ranveer go in the room to see their wives.

Ranveer- (to Tia) Thank you Tia. Aap nahi jaanti ki aapne hume aaj kitna bada gift diya hai.

Tia- (smiles) Tia bohat khush hai Ranveer.

Ranveer- (kisses her forehead) Hum bhi bohat khush hain Tia.

Yuvi- (to Ashi. Kneels next to her) Hey sweetheart.

Ashi- (smiles) Hi.

Yuvi- (holds her hand) Thank you.

Ashi- (rolls her eyes) Hey Bhaggu. Tum kitne weird ho. You know, maine apni whole life mein itna cry nahi kiya itna aaj kiya hai.

Yuvi- I know. Aur phir kabhi karna bhi nahi padega.

Ashi- I know.

Yuvi- Ab humaari family complete hogayee.

Ashi- Not yet loser. Soon.

Everyone came in soon after and congratulated both Tia and Ashi. Ashi-Yuvi's and Tia-Ranveer's family was soon going to be complete.

COMMENTS!!!!!!

-aditi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWWW komal u continued my fav fic again...
part was more than awesome...cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
sweet part 😳 😳 do cont. soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hi komal

i read ur story after a long time!!!!!!

cool part continue soon

abha

Edited by rockingrebel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx alot guys! Hey bhaggu!! Adi and Abha, I'm going to kill you both! Adi, go and contiue your fic! Abha go and continue yours! I'm dying to read ahead in both of your fics, and tum dono... Araam se taking your precious time. Jaldi continue both of your!!!!!! I mean it!!! Hey, everybody that reads my fic, if I discontinue this fic, it will Aditi and Abha's fault! Btw, thank god tum dono wapas aagaye. I was missing you guys!!!! Now go continue!!!!!

Komal
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Posted: 18 years ago
its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
komal u naughty gal u r blackmailing me nd Abha..giving dhamki to discontinue ur fic...u dare not do da same...will cont my fic with a condition tht u'll cont urs tooo

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