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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 25

It's been 5 years since Ashi-Yuvi and Tia-Ranveer got married. In the past 5 years, their lives have been filled with so much happiness. More happiness than anyone can imagine. It's been 5 years and now everyone has settled down in their lives. Sid-Meher have now been married for 4 and-a-half years and have 2 kids. MP-Aman and Vrinda-Varun were married on the same day and have been married for 4 years. MP-Aman have 2 kids and Vrinda Varun have 3. Pri got married to a nice guy she met at a restaurant. Pri-Sanjay have been married for 3 years and 9 months and have 3 kids as well. Latty was married to Nakul. Surprise surprise. Nakul attended all of his friends' weddings and through these weddings he got really close to Latty. Latty-Nakul have been married for 3-and-a-half years and have 1 kid so far.๐Ÿ˜‰ As planned, everyone bought houses next to their friends' houses. Meher and Pri's houses were on each side of Tia's. Vrinda and MP's houses were on each side of Ashi's, and Latty's house was right next to MP's.

It was beautiful day in May and all of the friends were having a picnic with their kids.

Ananya- HEY BHAGGU!!!!!! Mumma!!! I did it!!!!!! Mom did you see that??? Mera shot dekho aapne???

Ashi- That was awsome!!! See? Maine kahaa tha naa. Practice karogi toh you'll get it. Alright. Let's go. Abhi game khatam nahi hui.

Scene Change!!!!!

Parth- (to himself) Ok, you can do it. Come on dude. You can do it. (kicks... and goal!!!) YESSSSS!!!!!!

Yuvi- Whoaaa!!!! No way dude!!!! What a shot!

Parth- DAAADDDDD!!!!!!!

Yuvi- (pats his back and bend down on one knee) Hey big man! Kya shot maara tumne dude. I see you've been practicing.

Parth- Dad, maine aapke saare tips use kiye. You rock Dad!!! And you just lost too.

Yuvi- I know, I know. Lekin, that was out of luck. Main football champion hoon. Baar baar nahi jeet sakte.

Parth- You wanna bet?

Yuvi- Itne confident ho toh fine. Bet. Tum yeh ball score kar ke dikha do aur main tumhe eik nahi do icecream leke doonga. But main tumhe abhi warn kar raha hoon, this ball isn't getting past me. Go ahead. Try your best.

Parth- (makes a few moves and kicks the ball. SCOREEE!!!!) YEEAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! WHHHOOOOO-HOOOOOO!!! Dad, now what???

Yuvi- (standing there confused) God!!! I can't believe I just lost to a 4-year-old. Roz practice karta hoon ur eik bachhe se haar gaya. How the hell does that work???

Parth- Chalein Dad???

Yuvi- Kahaan???

Parth- Meri do icecream lene.

Yuvi- Ab aaye na line pe. Chalo. Tumhaari Mom ko bhi dekhte hain.

Both Yuvi and Parth go to Ashi and Ananya to see how they were doing with their tennis.

Ashi- (Bending over her daughter to help her hold the racket.) Okay Shona. You ready. Last shot.

Ananya- Yeah mom.(they it the ball) YAAAYYY!!!!!

Ashi- (bends down to her daughter's level) Awsome!!!! (they give each other a high five) See. You're geting better. Ab chalein? Tumhaare Dad ke paas???

Ananya- Haan.

Ashi- (takes the racket from her daughter and puts it in the bag) Okay. Let's go.

Yuvi- (walks in) Kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai. We're right here.

Ananya- DADDDDDDD!!!! (runs to Yuvi)

Yuvi- (quickly bends down, picks her up, and kisses her on the cheek) What a shot sweetheart! Thodi practice aur karogi toh apni Mom se bhi achha khelne lagogi.

Parth- But main toh already Dad se zyaada achha khelta hoon. (goes to Ashi) Mom!!!! You should've seen it. Maine Dad ko football mein haraa diya!!!!

Ashi- Hey Bhaggu!!! Yuvi tum Parth se haar gaaye??? Parth, I'm sooooo proud of you!!! At least kisi ne toh tumhaare Dad ko haraaya. (give each other a high five)

Yuvi- Whatever Wacko.

Ananya- Parth, mera shot dekha???

Parth- Yeah! It was totally sufi!!!

Ananya- Duh-uh!!! Shot kisne maara tha???

Parth- Listen you wacko, shot mein mumma ne tumhaari help ki thi.

Ananya- You know what psycho, shayad tumhe dad ne khud win karne diya ho. Dad TUMSE thodi haarenge. Woh toh Sid chaachoo ko bhi haraa dete hain.

Ashi- (interrupts before either one could say more) Uh... guys, chalein. Tumhaare Ranveer chaachoo awit kar rahe hain. Cricket khelna hai naa.

Both kids- Yeah!!!!

Ananya- Main pehle batting karoongi!!!

Parth- No way!!! I'm older!!! Me first!

Ananya- Hey loser, 1 year older hone se kuch nahi hota. I'm 3 and I'm cuter!!!

Yuvi- Okay okay. Guys, baad mein fight karna. Pehle jaake cricket khelein?

Both kids- Yeah. Chalo.

Yuvi- (Ashi was about to go, but Yuvi grabbed her hand) Tum kahaan jaa rahi ho???

Ashi- Duh-uh!!! Where do you think???

Yuvi- (puts his arms around her from the back) Ashi, humaari family complete hogaayi.

Ashi- I know. Perfect family... nahi. Crazy family.

Yuvi- Crazy? Normal nahi?

Ashi- Yeah right. We're not even close to normal. Aur tumhaare hote hue toh kabhi normal nahi ho sakte.

Yuvi- (getting romantic) Oh really?

Ashi- Duh-uh. Baad mein romantic hona. Abhi chalein?

Yuvi- Fine. Let's go.

COMMENTS!!!

-aditi- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww komal finally u updated...wow tht was a real gr8 part...(dey make a perfect family...) ๐Ÿ‘ nd plz dis time jaldi cont karna...
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Posted: 18 years ago
aewsum ๐Ÿ˜Š
yes they make a perfect family
though i love ur part u have to continue quickly
u have to rite one part after 2 days and so on ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
please bhul mat jaana ๐Ÿ˜• and con't soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnplease ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 18 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww..................................... this was awesome komal!!!!!

๐Ÿ‘

i just loved it re...........it was really very sweet nd cute part......

their family is actually perfect nd normal too.......๐Ÿ˜†

i liked the way both the kids were fighiting......u made it a real scene nd i seriouly got into it........ this was really very nice

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i ll be waiting

love ya sooooooooooooooooooooooo nd soooooooooooooooo much

sonam......๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome job Wacko!

finally you continued...

loved how the kids were fighting...
now how ashi says "shona" like sonia
Edited by gsoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sonam1509

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww..................................... this was awesome komal!!!!!

๐Ÿ‘

i just loved it re...........it was really very sweet nd cute part......

their family is actually perfect nd normal too.......๐Ÿ˜†

i liked the way both the kids were fighiting......u made it a real scene nd i seriouly got into it........ this was really very nice

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i ll be waiting

love ya sooooooooooooooooooooooo nd soooooooooooooooo much

sonam......๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks alot rockstar!!!!! Waise tum kahaan disappear hogaayee thin?

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks alot for the comments guys!!! Don't worry, I'll continue jaldi!!!! Thanks Adi and congrats for your rockstar of the week. Love ya!!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue with tia-ranny part soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part !!! (loved it cute n crazy family) abhi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
komal beta when r u going to continue??

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