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Oh crap! I missed this before, maybe I always felt nauseated to read about La and Shyam too...

But just realized La deserves every bit of shit from Arnav, in chapter -> Interlude 1 : Lavanya’s House of Cards

Lavanya thinking -> She had Manali find out every thing about him. He had an arranged marriage when he was a struggling engineer. To a dehati from a village no less. No wonder he had troubles in his marriage now that he was a fairly successful businessman. Manali’s sources told her he lived in a rented penthouse, alone and his wife was nowhere in picture. He was now going to be a producer and be introduced to the liberating and glamorous world of Bollywood, where a broken marriage wasn’t a taboo like the rest of this oppressive country. And she didn’t even care that he was married. She knew the pull was physical. That once she gets this over with, she will be able to move on.

So she dressed accordingly. Arnav Singh Raizada was coming home with her tonight.

Wow... just wow... This woman is worst than I ever imagined...

I really want to see how Arnav takes revenge from La and Manali for hurting Khushi in the process tough...

Originally posted by: SwatStar_Arshi

Oh crap! I missed this before, maybe I always felt nauseated to read about La and Shyam too...

But just realized La deserves every bit of shit from Arnav, in chapter -> Interlude 1 : Lavanya’s House of Cards

Lavanya thinking -> She had Manali find out every thing about him. He had an arranged marriage when he was a struggling engineer. To a dehati from a village no less. No wonder he had troubles in his marriage now that he was a fairly successful businessman. Manali’s sources told her he lived in a rented penthouse, alone and his wife was nowhere in picture. He was now going to be a producer and be introduced to the liberating and glamorous world of Bollywood, where a broken marriage wasn’t a taboo like the rest of this oppressive country. And she didn’t even care that he was married. She knew the pull was physical. That once she gets this over with, she will be able to move on.

So she dressed accordingly. Arnav Singh Raizada was coming home with her tonight.

Wow... just wow... This woman is worst than I ever imagined...

I really want to see how Arnav takes revenge from La and Manali for hurting Khushi in the process tough...

GOD you are E N R A G E D 😂😂😂😂

Why do you think, i said he dragged khushi to her level, to her dirty pit and why do you think i don't even take her name with arnav and just stick to L. I feel like throwing up.

If khushi know how L is, in all her reality then imagine what must it have done to her self esteem. I mean the amount of DISRESPECT she must have felt. Ideally she should be disgusted with arnav that he touched and was touched by a woman like L and should not ever let him put a finger on her, neither she should.

I have imagined so many of such scenes in my damned mind.

Originally posted by: Pujakrishna

GOD you are E N R A G E D 😂😂😂😂

Why do you think, i said he dragged khushi to her level, to her dirty pit and why do you think i don't even take her name with arnav and just stick to L. I feel like throwing up.

If khushi know how L is, in all her reality then imagine what must it have done to her self esteem. I mean the amount of DISRESPECT she must have felt. Ideally she should be disgusted with arnav that he touched and was touched by a woman like L and should not ever let him put a finger on her, neither she should.

I have imagined so many of such scenes in my damned mind.

I am not enraged at all 😂😂😂😂

Khushi is just unfortunate here but nothing more... She did realize the new Arnav in Nov 2015 was someone else, not her husband she knew for years... That says it a lot...

Khushi can simply disregard Arnav like dirt if he has stooped so low to continue affair with Lavanya; he deserve every bit of it... Excuses are bullshit...

A man is known by the company he keeps; so Arnav here has adopted similar character (read characterless) and moral standards (read moralless) as Lavanya! No wonder he was enjoying spending time with her or talking to her while still being maried to Khushi... It doesn't matter he is astute businessman, went from rag to riches, he is a big ZERO as a person in real life!

I have learnt one thing hard way in life, if someone close to us behaves crass or cheats, we don't need to take it upon us and ask ourselves why or what we did wrong... No blame or shame should come to us; it's they who wronged, failed, became different and so the onus is on them to acknoledge, apologize and act to fix it permanently or just get lost..

I think Bollybabe and I have been pointing certain changes, shallow behavior and the character traits in Arnav aka ASR right from the beginneing debunking his bluff of loneliness, companionship etc...

Then again we have characters like Shyam too in fanfic or real world who are beyond repair.. They are not worth even walking next to by my stadards.. I have always refrained myself from commenting on Shyam or his mom; for me Khushi meeting them itself was her biggest mistake... Such people never change and keeping away from them is the only way to go.. One has to trust their insticts, it never lets us down...

Originally posted by: SwatStar_Arshi

I am not enraged at all 😂😂😂😂

Khushi is just unfortunate here but nothing more... She did realize the new Arnav in Nov 2015 was someone else, not her husband she knew for years... That says it a lot...

Khushi can simply disregard Arnav like dirt if he has stooped so low to continue affair with Lavanya; he deserve every bit of it... Excuses are bullshit...

A man is known by the company he keeps; so Arnav here has adopted similar character (read characterless) and moral standards (read moralless) as Lavanya! No wonder he was enjoying spending time with her or talking to her while still being maried to Khushi... It doesn't matter he is astute businessman, went from rag to riches, he is a big ZERO as a person in real life!

I have learnt one thing hard way in life, if someone close to us behaves crass or cheats, we don't need to take it upon us and ask ourselves why or what we did wrong... No blame or shame should come to us; it's they who wronged, failed, became different and so the onus is on them to acknoledge, apologize and act to fix it permanently or just get lost..

I think Bollybabe and I have been pointing certain changes, shallow behavior and the character traits in Arnav aka ASR right from the beginneing debunking his bluff of loneliness, companionship etc...

Then again we have characters like Shyam too in fanfic or real world who are beyond repair.. They are not worth even walking next to by my stadards.. I have always refrained myself from commenting on Shyam or his mom; for me Khushi meeting them itself was her biggest mistake... Such people never change and keeping away from them is the only way to go.. One has to trust their insticts, it never lets us down...

I also refuse to believe in this notion, because Khushi loved Arnav unconditionally she can never love someone else. Knowing the extent of Arnav's involvement in La from his own mouth, it's gonna open can of worms for her.. She will never be able to trust him or love him the same way is given...

But the moment she realizes, it's him who is the sinner, he chose to go away from her, he has stooped the lowest if he had full fledged affair or was sleeping with La while she was in Mumbair etc. or when she was in Lucknow to take care of HIS family (this time his mom was sick and nurse was giving her massage), she will not even look at him, forget love or any other feelings.. which she did it once when she left for Lucknow in just 2 days after divorce news, she didn't find him worth confronting or talking to... Now also she is doing the same..

The realization phase will be worst but it will help her heal too and move on..

Adding one more point here - Khushi does not know how she and her family got played between Arnav, Lavanya's obsession & Manali's vile attempts to bring him back to Lavanya... She and her family had to face after effects of divorce news being leaked, she being permanently labled as "infertile" by her own family / whispers in village, marriage discussions getting pushed on fast track with Shyam and Khushi being forced to meet Shyam, panchayat hearing... Khushi is not going to take this lightly and will hate Arnav for sure as if she doesn't already...

Khushi too has personality traits, if she adds new person to her brood, she gives her 200% to them and unconditional love is her virtue.. She will equally love the new man in her life...

Only thing I didn't like about her was she didn't learn looking at the surrounding and her husband's virue to honor independence, study further and be secure, financially and emotionally independent.

We already have one clue from Yoda herself. The climax will not see them together. But of course that does not indicate what the ending will be.

We can easily see them being apart at this time. She will need time to find herself. If she is to find her footing, be independent, gain confidence in herself, it is not happening overnight.

Originally posted by: coderlady

We already have one clue from Yoda herself. The climax will not see them together. But of course that does not indicate what the ending will be.

We can easily see them being apart at this time. She will need time to find herself. If she is to find her footing, be independent, gain confidence in herself, it is not happening overnight.

But it is better late than never! And when hit the lowest, only way is come back up... Khushi is fast learner or situation teaches one I guess.

Khushi has crossed a major bridge towards self realization without realizing it fully.. I had mentioned this long time go -

But now Khushi has matured to the next level in just three months and come a long way! She was blunt with Shyam and rejected his proposal on his face, resented her parents decision to send her with Arnav and dared to ask her mother “When will I have a say in these decisions then?”... She clearly called a spade a spade when showing Arnav how her immense love and trust in him had reduced her to nothing. I was in fact taken aback by brilliant aproach of Arpita, Khushi's sarcasm about feeling pathetic to be back with him at his will, asking Arnav to inform her first when he is ready to kick her out the next time, suggesting him to lead his cheating lifestyle alienating Arnav with her indifference, cross questioning his fake claim that he can't live without her when he was having the best time with other woman without giving a damn about her, shooting down his hollow apology and counselling suggestion by showing him the mirror about his infidility.. Khushi called Lucknow family his family first time and not our family...

So if she is determined to move away from him, there is no stopping her.. She can choose to further study, start some small business or something on her own without Arnav interfering in her life, she is the girl who dotes on family and has been craving for babies for so long so she still getting married again and having babies in crucial here, we can not simply expect her to be independent modern woman and give up her roots or basic family oriented personality..

Hi Appy/arpita/veiled words

Idk what to call you. You used to be our Appy Di. But love the new username too.

Before I go on a very lengthy rant about this ff just like so many of your other poor, helpless readers, I need to introduce myself. Hi I’m Isha. remember me from your SH Fanfic days? We once sent your OS as gift to parsh? Our little SH group was happy you were active again 😚

I wanna say to everyone who’s been affected by this FF, I was there nine years ago, and she was still making me dance to her tunes and words. I will come to resurgence later , but I have so much to say Appy Di. So many years worth of messages for you. I tried reaching on wattpad so many times.

I read one of your comments in this thread . How dare you call your old FFs cringe di? We used to live for those stories. I’m sure the comments were nowhere as close to what resurgence is doing, but in case you’ve forgotten, please scroll back to your scrapbook all the way or revisit the old pages. People were still writing PARAGRAPHS for you in comments.

I understand that you’ve grown as a writer and you felt your first stories were not up to the mark but Appy Di you always had this talent. Your writing is more beautiful now, but your storytelling was marvellous even back then. You were and still are the most famous FF writer SH community has ever seen. There’s not a single fan I know who hasn’t read love is in the air.

You nailed the enemies to lovers trope. Perfect heartbreak before a much needed happily ever after. That is still the one ff we talk about when we revisit SH days. I was heartbroken when I realized just now that it was gone. I’m pretty sure it was available till quite some time at least on wattpad because I have read it 100 times.

And even I am forgetting things, but when you posted the OS ‘forever’, that was my first introduction to this tragic kind of a fanfic. I started darmiyaan just now. It evoked the same feelings in me as forever. I don’t remember the other OS names but I know I had read and enjoyed them just as much. Idk why you discontinued TML because you had me hooked within 2 chapters. I was looking forward for a fantasy romance series. 😣

And don’t even get me started on DCT. People, you think she’s making you cry with resurgence? DCT had us on the ground with pain. Here she started the first chapter with infidelity. There She started the FF with heroine gone and no chance of repenting for hero. And like idiots, we were still breaking our hearts in hopes that it gets better. Spoiler alert - it didn’t. I’m still angry about DCT btw 💔

Alright, that is nine years worth of love hate relationships with your ff. Coming to resurgence now.

Do you want me to die of a heartbreak?Why would you do this to me? Back then I used to dream for my favourite writer to join ARHI fandom. Years later you fulfil my wish and then send me into a deep dark pit?

I’ve cried so much for this Khushi, and then you make me cry when Arnav started weeping in front of their old house too? I’m so conflicted that I am losing my mind. I literally have a headache with all the crying since the whole day. I don’t think I had dry eyes in a single chapter since Khushi’s interlude. There is this constant dread.

I have so much anxiety in my heart. Of this FF’s end breaking my heart more than the whole story somehow. I know your love for troublesome endings, and the direction this story and your comments have headed to, I have no hope for a happy end. DCT’s last chapter has scarred me. I went through the whole fic thinking you will bring our heroine back. Even if you give me hope in this story, I will not let my heart dream of a happy ending unless I read the epilogue. At this moment, I’m just afraid of all possible endings my mind can imagine.

This is your best work till date arpita di, have no doubts about it. It’s so hauntingly beautiful in a way that I can’t describe. It’s near impossible to put down once you start.

The characters are as real to me as they could be on a screen. I’ve been hooked on it and I finished all the chapters in one go. I’m not even exaggerating. I was reading this obsessively after years. I read up general chapters and ended up making an account for members only chapters. This story is that addictive and heartbreaking at the same time.

And after this, pleaseeee reconsider uploading your old ones. Rewrite them if you want to work on the language. At least love is in the air. That fic introduced me to the world of fanfics. It’s always going to be extra special. I still remember choking with tears with the whole coma and letter confession scene when I read it for the first time. I see glimpses of both your stories in here. The love note from love is in the air, the snippets of past and future from DCT. the complexity and beauty of an ordinary looking relationship. And if you’re ever feeling generous, please revisit TML too.

Thank you for blessing us with your writing once more Appy Di. Dreading yet dying for the next chapter! 😭

Just please please please don’t ever leave this ff in between. This time it’ll be too much to bear 😭

Originally posted by: SwatStar_Arshi

I am not enraged at all 😂😂😂😂

Khushi is just unfortunate here but nothing more... She did realize the new Arnav in Nov 2015 was someone else, not her husband she knew for years... That says it a lot...

Khushi can simply disregard Arnav like dirt if he has stooped so low to continue affair with Lavanya; he deserve every bit of it... Excuses are bullshit...

A man is known by the company he keeps; so Arnav here has adopted similar character (read characterless) and moral standards (read moralless) as Lavanya! No wonder he was enjoying spending time with her or talking to her while still being maried to Khushi... It doesn't matter he is astute businessman, went from rag to riches, he is a big ZERO as a person in real life!

I have learnt one thing hard way in life, if someone close to us behaves crass or cheats, we don't need to take it upon us and ask ourselves why or what we did wrong... No blame or shame should come to us; it's they who wronged, failed, became different and so the onus is on them to acknoledge, apologize and act to fix it permanently or just get lost..

I think Bollybabe and I have been pointing certain changes, shallow behavior and the character traits in Arnav aka ASR right from the beginneing debunking his bluff of loneliness, companionship etc...

Then again we have characters like Shyam too in fanfic or real world who are beyond repair.. They are not worth even walking next to by my stadards.. I have always refrained myself from commenting on Shyam or his mom; for me Khushi meeting them itself was her biggest mistake... Such people never change and keeping away from them is the only way to go.. One has to trust their insticts, it never lets us down...

Arpita,

You have my respect girl. 👏This is a very strong story, which actually highlights so many social issues in its own way.

It is not easy to write a story where the main leads have their actions questioned by readers at every step. 😊

In Khushi, you have written a character who is perhaps weak while facing the society or her people but strong in so many other ways, a woman who is total grace.

In Arnav you have written a character that has multitude of flaws such that with whatever facts we have right now, we have passed judgements on him , beaten him left, right and centre with our words and condemned him for his wrong choices and infidelity.

NOT ONCE HAVE YOU THROWN ANY TANTRUM. You have let us all have our individual opinions with all honesty and not gone miles to defend him or her.

This speaks a lot about your commitment to your characters and the story telling, and your confidence in us readers. Trust me, when I say this, not all writers have the same grace.

You have let your readers be an active part of this journey (which I am sure still has miles to go) taking in all the strong opinions.

Hats off to you....

Originally posted by: Learrntowrite

Hi Appy/arpita/veiled words

Idk what to call you. You used to be our Appy Di. But love the new username too.

Before I go on a very lengthy rant about this ff just like so many of your other poor, helpless readers, I need to introduce myself. Hi I’m Isha. remember me from your SH Fanfic days? We once sent your OS as gift to parsh? Our little SH group was happy you were active again 😚

I wanna say to everyone who’s been affected by this FF, I was there nine years ago, and she was still making me dance to her tunes and words. I will come to resurgence later , but I have so much to say Appy Di. So many years worth of messages for you. I tried reaching on wattpad so many times.

I read one of your comments in this thread . How dare you call your old FFs cringe di? We used to live for those stories. I’m sure the comments were nowhere as close to what resurgence is doing, but in case you’ve forgotten, please scroll back to your scrapbook all the way or revisit the old pages. People were still writing PARAGRAPHS for you in comments.

I understand that you’ve grown as a writer and you felt your first stories were not up to the mark but Appy Di you always had this talent. Your writing is more beautiful now, but your storytelling was marvellous even back then. You were and still are the most famous FF writer SH community has ever seen. There’s not a single fan I know who hasn’t read love is in the air.

You nailed the enemies to lovers trope. Perfect heartbreak before a much needed happily ever after. That is still the one ff we talk about when we revisit SH days. I was heartbroken when I realized just now that it was gone. I’m pretty sure it was available till quite some time at least on wattpad because I have read it 100 times.

And even I am forgetting things, but when you posted the OS ‘forever’, that was my first introduction to this tragic kind of a fanfic. I started darmiyaan just now. It evoked the same feelings in me as forever. I don’t remember the other OS names but I know I had read and enjoyed them just as much. Idk why you discontinued TML because you had me hooked within 2 chapters. I was looking forward for a fantasy romance series. 😣

And don’t even get me started on DCT. People, you think she’s making you cry with resurgence? DCT had us on the ground with pain. Here she started the first chapter with infidelity. There She started the FF with heroine gone and no chance of repenting for hero. And like idiots, we were still breaking our hearts in hopes that it gets better. Spoiler alert - it didn’t. I’m still angry about DCT btw 💔

Alright, that is nine years worth of love hate relationships with your ff. Coming to resurgence now.

Do you want me to die of a heartbreak?Why would you do this to me? Back then I used to dream for my favourite writer to join ARHI fandom. Years later you fulfil my wish and then send me into a deep dark pit?

I’ve cried so much for this Khushi, and then you make me cry when Arnav started weeping in front of their old house too? I’m so conflicted that I am losing my mind. I literally have a headache with all the crying since the whole day. I don’t think I had dry eyes in a single chapter since Khushi’s interlude. There is this constant dread.

I have so much anxiety in my heart. Of this FF’s end breaking my heart more than the whole story somehow. I know your love for troublesome endings, and the direction this story and your comments have headed to, I have no hope for a happy end. DCT’s last chapter has scarred me. I went through the whole fic thinking you will bring our heroine back. Even if you give me hope in this story, I will not let my heart dream of a happy ending unless I read the epilogue. At this moment, I’m just afraid of all possible endings my mind can imagine.

This is your best work till date arpita di, have no doubts about it. It’s so hauntingly beautiful in a way that I can’t describe. It’s near impossible to put down once you start.

The characters are as real to me as they could be on a screen. I’ve been hooked on it and I finished all the chapters in one go. I’m not even exaggerating. I was reading this obsessively after years. I read up general chapters and ended up making an account for members only chapters. This story is that addictive and heartbreaking at the same time.

And after this, pleaseeee reconsider uploading your old ones. Rewrite them if you want to work on the language. At least love is in the air. That fic introduced me to the world of fanfics. It’s always going to be extra special. I still remember choking with tears with the whole coma and letter confession scene when I read it for the first time. I see glimpses of both your stories in here. The love note from love is in the air, the snippets of past and future from DCT. the complexity and beauty of an ordinary looking relationship. And if you’re ever feeling generous, please revisit TML too.

Thank you for blessing us with your writing once more Appy Di. Dreading yet dying for the next chapter! 😭

Just please please please don’t ever leave this ff in between. This time it’ll be too much to bear 😭

Oh wow Isha!! I’m so flattered!! And happy. Thank you for saying this 😊😊😊

I knew it was a matter of time before a DCT reader comes up 😀. I apologies for that. Just that in my head it was getting dragged beyond a point. I still think there was enough info to deduct just what had happened. But i understand anyway :)

And yeah, sorry I don’t mean cringe in that way :)

I should have been specific. It’s the language that I had the most problem with. Some plot lines too because I was very naive and did not see the issue in what I was writing. But you’re right. Rewrite is a good idea. I won’t promise anything now since upcoming months are going to be all resurgence. But it is a great idea nonetheless:)

Thank you for taking out the time to write about this story too. I liked the adjective hauntingly beautiful. You have your own style with words :)

Also I understand your dread for the ending. Believe me when I say I’m worried too.😂

Don’t worry about leaving or changing it. I have told many readers. I am already done and dusted with the last two chapters. :)