Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- love or marriage?

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Agarwal Family:

    Sunil- Father (deceased) Uma- Mother Vedika- Youngest Daughter
  • Niharika- Eldest Daughter

Raizada Family:

    Virendra- Father Kavita- Mother Titli- Kavita's sister-in-law Rudra- Eldest Son Niharika- Rudra's Wife. Antariksh- 2nd Eldest Son Aarti- Antariksh's Wife. Rahul- 3rd Eldest Son Dhruv- Youngest Son
  • Tara- Youngest Daughter

Children:

    Aditya (Adi)- Rudra & Niharika's 4 year old Son Aryan- Antariksh & Aarti's 3 year old Son.
  • Muskaan- Antariksh & Aarti's 1 year old Daughter.

Extra Characters:

    Suraj- Tara's Boyfriend. Manshaa- Uma's sister's daughter and Vedika & Niharika's cousin Angad- Dhruv's best friend and Vedika's childhood friend. (Both Vedika and Angad studied together but then Angad came and settled down in India) Akash- Vedika's best friend.
  • Karan- Vedika's best friend.

Pictures of the Character:

Adi

Vedika

Dhruv

Kavita

Niharika

Rudra

Aarti

Virendra

Angad

Karan

Akash

Suraj

Titli Mami

Manshaa

Aryan

Uma

Sunil (deceased)

Tara -----sorry guys i changed actress playing Tara-- i jus fought Aamna Sharif wud luk better with Suraj than Tara would

Rahul

These are all the characters, who will be in the story. I'm not thinking of introducing new characters, but if necessary then I will. The extra characters will only be in the fan fiction for a couple of scenes. Hope you all enjoy reading this fan fiction.

Synopsis- Sindoor Tere Naam Ka.

Virendra and Kavita Raizada are a very happily married couple, their marriage has lasted for 30 years and have been blessed with 5 children, 4 boys and one girl. Virendra Raizada owns Raizada industries. He is a very well-known person not only in India but in many foreign countries. Being the eldest son of the family, Rudra is in charge of Raizada industries in India. He is 28 years old and is married to Niharika, the eldest daughter of Agarwal family. It has been 5 years since they got married and Niharika is now 26 years old. Both are very happy together as their marriage was a love marriage. They have a cute son called Aditya, (but is known as Adi, as Vedika has given Aditya this nickname). Antariksh is 26 years old and is married to Aarti (25 years old), and they have 2 children, Aryan (3 years old) and Muskaan (1 year old). They are both happily settled in America., but come to India to visit their family very often. Rahul (23 years old)and Dhruv (21 years old) are at university, both didn't want to live away from their family, so turned down offers from world's most toughest universities such as Oxford (London) and Boston (America). Tara is 18 years old, she is at college and has a boyfriend called Suraj (18 years old). Tara and Suraj are both very intelligent and bright students, and their parents have very high hopes with them. Being the only daughter and youngest child in Raizada family, Tara is spoilt big time, but she does know her limits and is always polite. So basically Raizada household is one big happy family. Niharika has a sister, called Vedika, who lives in London. Niharika's late father (Sunil Agarwal) had wished both his daughter's study abroad. Niharika studied Business and Fashion Designing in Boston University in America, and then came back to India and settled down. Vedika (20 years old) was sent to study in London. She has just started studying Business and Management in Oxford University. Vedika has lived in London for the past 8 years, after her father's death, Vedika became very sad, she didn't wish to stay in India, as she each place would remind her of her father. Vedika was very close to her father, as Niharika was very close to Uma. Vedika then decided to go live with her cousin called Manshaa in London. This way Vedika was able to overcome her father's death. Sunil died with kidney cancer. Uma lives in Mumbai and takes care of Kanaka Empire. Kanaka Empire is another very popular industry. It is one of the world's top Empires. So both families are entirely rich and wealthy, but they are still very traditional and very well mannered. The children from both families have been bought up in a very strict disciplined manner, where they are expected to respect the older people and love the younger ones. Surprisingly, Raizada family have never met Vedika. She doesn't wish to visit India as she is afraid that all her father's memories will haunt her and she will go back into the sorrow, which took her many years to overcome. Niharika, Rudra and Adi, however have met her quite a few times thanks to Rudra's abroad business trips, and Adi's stubbornness in meeting his only aunty. Vedika and Rudra are very close friends, more like best friends. They share a lot in common and never hide anything from each other. Rudra is very open in front of Vedika and tells her a lot, things which he would hesitate in telling Niharika. Niharika doesn't mind, as she knows that in the end, Vedika will blackmail Rudra into telling her. So there are no grudges or jealousy amongst them. So all are very happy and leading their lives peacefully BUT how long will this happiness and peace last??????????????

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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice start
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cont...a lovely intro...waiting to read the 1st part...
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Scene 1-Raizada House.
Kavita, Viren, Rudra, Rahul, Dhruv and Tara are at the breakfast table having their breakfast. Niharika is serving them their breakfast.
Dhruv: ari babhi Adi kaha hai?
Niharika: vo…(Rudra interrupts)
Rudra: vo apni Girlfriend se baat karaha hai.
Rahul: girl friend?
Tara: girl friend matlab babhi's sister Vedika.
Rahul: ohhhhh
Niharika: (shouts upstairs) Adi!!!!!!!!!!! Adi come down and have your breakfast!!!!!
Adi: (coming down the stairs with phone in his hand) ya ya coming mom.
Rudra: (picks him up and sits him on his lap) tumhari haath mein phone kyun hai? Abhi thak aunty ka phone nahi aya?
Adi: aunty nahi girlfriend bolo. 😆
Rudra: sorry..my mistake acha abhi thak girlfriend ka phone nahi aya.
Adi: nahi, don't know why she didn't call me, she knows I must be waiting for her call.
Niharika: Adi, ab kal he to baat ke thi tumne apni aunty se. (Adi pulls a face 😆 ) sorry sorry sorry teekh hai girl friend, happy? (Adi smiles 😃 and Niharika laughs 😆 ) abhi kal he to tumne girl friend se baat ke thi, so…(Adi interrupts)
Adi: mom kal shaam ko, 6 bajh kar 5 mintue par uska phone aya tha, aur hum dun one 3 ghante (hours) baat ki thi, aur 9.05 par humari baat katam huwe thi, aur ab, ab subha ke 7 bajrahe hai, it's been 9 hours and 55 minutes since I last spoke to here.
Tara: my god, tumhe time ka itna pata hai??? 😕
Adi: nahi to, bas mujhe us time ka pata hota hai jab mein girlfriend se baat karta hoon. 😉
Dhruv: acha Adi ye batao tum Vedika ko girlfriend kyun bolthe ho, vo to tumhari aunty haina 😉
Adi: aunty kaha, she's my girlfriend. 😆
Rahul: ya we know that but why do you call her girlfriend??
Adi: because she calls me boyfriend. 😆 And we both love each other. 😳
All laugh. 😆 😆 😆
Niharika: acha bohat karle girlfriend ke baatein, come on get ready, aaj school jana haina.
Adi: (gets off Rudra's lap) jab thak girlfriend ka phone nahi ata mein school nahi jaonga.
Adi runs to his room. Niharika calls after him, but he doesn't listen.
Rudra: mein baat karta hoon.
Kavita: nahi Rudra, tumhari baat nahi manega. Adi ko tum jaante hoon, vo Vedika ko likar bohat zidi hai. Don't worri, Vedika ka phone aate he vo tyaar hojayega.
Rudra: magar Vedika phone kaise karegi…vo to plane par..(suddenly shuts up)
Niharika: plane par kya???
Rudra: kya plane par kya??
Dhruv: bhaiya aapne abhi plane par kaha
Rudra: maine???
Kavita: haan tumne.
Rudra: haan vo mein Rahul ke plane ke baat karaha tha. (to Rahul) tumhari flight kitne bajhe ke hai? (All look suspicious but don't say anything)
Rahul: shaam ko 7 bajhe ki.
Tara: thank god!!! bhaiya aap mujhse mile beghair math jana ok?
Rahul: pagal ho kya, tumse mile begair mein kaise jaonga??
Tara: vo to hai. 😛
Dhruv: babhi, kya Vedika ab kabhi bhi India nahi ayegi?
Niharika: mushqil hai. 😕
Rahul: magar babhi, hum loogh to kabhi Vedika se mile bhi nahi.
Niharika: jaanti hoon, even mom is worried. Itne saal hogaye mom ko Vedika se mile huwe, Mom ko kaam se fursath he kahan, aur Vedika.. Vedika darr thi hai ke kahen papa ke yaadein ushi us gham ke yaad na karaden jisi bhoolne kiliye Vedika ko itne saal laghe.
All look sad. 😔
Rudra: vo darr thi nahi hai Niharika, because im sure Vedika London mein bhi papa ko yaad karti hogi. London mein bhi ushi papa ke yaad ati hoge, bas baat ye hai ke yahan papa ki yaadein basi hain, yahan par loogh hai, jo ushi har baat mein papa ke yaad delayengi.
Niharika: rudra, ye hum sab yahan jaante hai ke tum Vedika ke bari mein koi bhi negative baat nahi sun sakthe.
All laugh. 😆
Rudra: ari nahi aba baat vo nahi hai.
Kavita: baat vohi hai Rudra. 😆
Rudra just keeps quiet as he knows he won't be able to win this one.All finish with their breakfast and Viren and Rudra go office. Adi doesn't go school, he is still expecting Vedika's call but she hasn't phoned as yet. Dhruv leaves for university and Tara goes off to college. Niharika is helping Kavita do Rahul's packing.
Niharika: mummy mujhe nahi lagta Rahul America jana chata hai
Kavita: jaanti hoon magar phir bhi Niharika, Rahul ko itna acha mokah mil raha hai business karne ka aur mujhe lagta hai ke ushi ye mokah haath se nahi jane dena chaheye.
Niharika: haan magar phir bhi Rahul kuch khush nahi lagraha. 😕
Kavita: kaise khush rahega, itne saalon mein kabhi bhi hum se ghar dhoor nahi raha, ab jar aha hai, ajeeb to lage ga na.
Niharika: haan mummy.
Both finish doing Rahul's packing. In the evening, Adi is still at home, he didn't go school today as Vedika hasn't phoned 😕 . Viren, Dhruv, Tara, and Rudra arrive back home. All meet Rahul before leaving and Rudra goes to drop Rahul off. Rudra phones home from the airport informing everyone at home that Rahul's flight has taken off and strictly informs everyone at home to stay home as he has a surprise for them. All are waiting at home for the surprise. Door bell rings, Dhruv goes to answer the door. He opens it and there's someone standing behind there but Dhruv can't see the face as they have a bouquet of flowers in front of their face.
Dhruv: yes???
Person: (moves the bouquet down so Dhruv can see the face) hi. (Dhruv is shocked and amazed at looking at the person) Niharika is shocked and others are surprised.
Dhruv: (speechless and amazed)hi, you are….
Niharika: (loudly with so much happiness in her voice) Vedika!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vedika: (looks at Niharika and smiles) Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dhruv: (watch Vedika as she runs in to hug Niharika) vedika???
Rudra: haan Vedika. 😃 (smiles)
Vedika and Niharika hug each other. 🤗
Niharika: kaise hai tu??? India kab aye??? Aur bataya kyun nahi??? Pata hai Adi tumhe kitna yaad karaha tha??? Vo school bhi nahi gaya kyun ki tumhara phone nahi aya??? Vedika tum yahan kaise???
Vedika: god Di, itne sari savaal. (laughs) main bilkul teekh hoon, India aaj he aye, Adi ko maine isliye phone nahi kiya kyunki plane par vo phone par baat nahi karne deti, main yahan sabh se milne aye hoon aur agar bata deti to aap ke chehre par ye surprise kaise dekhti.
Niharika hugs her again. 🤗 🤗
Niharika: im soo happy you're here.
Vedika: ya me 2.
All are surprised and happy to see Vedika. Vedika one by one is introduced to the family. All are happy to meet her. Adi is in his room and hears some noise, he comes out his room and looks down in the hall from top of stairs, he is surprised to see Vedika.
Adi: GIRLFRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vedika who has her back facing Adi turns around. Adi comes running down and Vedika runs to the stairs. Both hug. 🤗
Vedika: hows my boyfriend???
Adi: very angry!!!! 😡 (Crosses his arms and others laugh 😆 )
Vedika: hmmm acha??? Vo kyun???
Adi: vo isliye ke main subha se aap ke phone ka intezaar karaha tha aur aapne mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya.
Vedika: ohhh im soo sorry, but it's not my fault. Flight par phone kahan karne dite hai? (holds her ears) sorry.
Adi: (looks at Vedika and finally smiles 😃 and hugs her 🤗 ) awww I missed u.
Vedika: I missed u 2.
Vedika picks him up and walks to Niharika.
Vedika: acha mein chalte hoon mama ko bhi surprise dena hai.
Niharika: abhi to aye ho, kuch dheer rukh jati.
Vedika: nahi phir kabhi,teekh hai? 😃 and kisses Adi.
Adi: tum ja rahe ho?
Vedika: haan
Adi: kahan?
Vedika: nani ke ghar
Adi: main bhi chalonga.
Vedika: teekh hai, magar pehle mom se to poochlo
Adi: mom kuch nahi kahegi, kisi himmat nahi hai ke vo Adi ko na kahe.
All laugh. 😆 Vedika hugs everyone and leaves with Adi. Rudra goes to drop her off and comes back home.
Rudra: so everyone kaisa lagha mera surprise???
Niharika: bohat acha!!! Magar tumhe kaise pata chala ke Vedika aaj India ane wali thi??
Rudra: Niharika, Vedika is my best friend, jaise mein usi koi baat nahi chupata vaise vo bhi mujhse koi baat nahi chupati. Aur vaise bhi maine usi kaha tha ke vo India aye. Kasam de tab ja kar mani.
Niharika: thanks Rudra, aaj tumhari wajah se Vedika… ab Vedika us sach ka saamna kar payegi jisi vo itne saalon thak baakte aye hai.
Rudra hugs her as she has tears in her eyes. 😭
Rudra: don't worri Niharika, Vedika will be fine. Im sure.

Agarwal House.
Uma comes home from work to find Adi there. She is shocked and happy to see him. She hugs him and asks who dropped him off.
Adi: papa hum duno ko choor kar ghar chalegaye?
Uma: duno??? (confused) oh tumhara matlab Niharika, kahan hai meri bachi.
Vedika: Niharika nahi mom, Vedika!
Uma turns around and is shocked to see Vedika.
Uma: Vedika????????
Vedika: (knods her head) Vedika
Both have tears in their eyes. 😭Uma hugs Vedika and cries on her shoulder.
Uma: itne saalon tahk ma ki yaad nahi aye??
Vedika: aye thi mama, bohat aye thi magar India ane se darr lagta tha.
Uma: jaanti hoon beta. Tere papa ke yaadein hain India mein isliye to..magar phir bhi ek baar bhi apni maa se milne nahi aye.
Vedika cries. 😭 😭
Uma: tere begair main kaise jete ayen hoon, ye bas mujhe pata hai.
Vedika: jaanti hoon ma, magar aap to jaanti hai, mein papa se bohat pyar karti thi, ab bhi karti hoon, aur papa ke achanak maut ka sadmah mein bardaash nahi karpaye. Itne saal laghe mujhe maa, itne saal. Abhi bhi kahan ubhar paye hoon us gham se. 😭 😭
Uma: to fikar mat kar main hoon na, tujhe tumhari papa ke kamii mehsoos nahi hone doongi.
Vedika: promise mama??
Uma: promise.
Both cry on each other's shoulder 😭 and Adi stands watching them.

The End

Edited by Yuvika_15 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOME fan fic can tw8 2 read da next scenes 😃
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awwwwwwwww...such a nice story yaar....continue soon 👏
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awww...wht a start..loved the 1st part...pls continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww what a wonderful start!!!
adi is cute and funny!
please write soon!
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wow, continue soon. really good. 👏 👏

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