KaViaan OS Ek rang pyaar ka - Page 2

Originally posted by: kshitu_20

Loved loved this OS.. it is so beautiful ❤️

Thank you dear and pls write more 🤗

Thank you so much.

Will try to write more if i get any interesting idea on kaviaan.

Hayee kya os likha hai behen... Bohot khoobsurat 😍... I wish your os comes true in the show isbar toh nehi but hope next year tak yeh show rahe and this scene plays out in real💝

And your shaayari is also very surkh... I too am obsessed with the word surkh now🤗. Not only surkh, all the urdu words spoken in the show gives a different feel to the whole scene and feels eternally romantic...

I think I am obsessing with urdu now more so when viaan says it😍

Please aage bhi aese hi likhte rehna🙏.. You write very beautifully just like a screenplay is being played💫

And thankz for the tag dear💖... And a very Happy Holi to u too💐♥

Ur shayari has my ❤️❤️🤩💕

Originally posted by: Ritzzee23

Hayee kya os likha hai behen... Bohot khoobsurat 😍... I wish your os comes true in the show isbar toh nehi but hope next year tak yeh show rahe and this scene plays out in real💝

And your shaayari is also very surkh... I too am obsessed with the word surkh now🤗. Not only surkh, all the urdu words spoken in the show gives a different feel to the whole scene and feels eternally romantic...

I think I am obsessing with urdu now more so when viaan says it😍

Please aage bhi aese hi likhte rehna🙏.. You write very beautifully just like a screenplay is being played💫

And thankz for the tag dear💖... And a very Happy Holi to u too💐♥

Bada wala thank you for such a lovely comment.🤗❤️

Haan kaviaan ko ek dusre ke sath holi manate dekhne ki ichha thi lekin is bar to ye possible nahi hai aur agle saal tak pata nahi show rahe na rahe...so wrote os on it😆

Urdu is a language of love kuch bhi urdu mein bolo to jyada impactful aur intense lagta hai😆

Likhungi bilkul aise kuch interesting ideas aate rahe to jarur likhungi.

Originally posted by: Prateeksha19

Ur shayari has my ❤️❤️🤩💕

Aww thats such a sweet thing to say.😳

Thank you very much🤗

Such a beautiful OS! The dialogues, emotions were so perfect, so in line with their characters..I could visualize the entire scene as I was reading.

No words for the poetry at the end, it's simply awesome 😊

Keep writing! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Such a beautiful OS! The dialogues, emotions were so perfect, so in line with their characters..I could visualize the entire scene as I was reading.

No words for the poetry at the end, it's simply awesome 😊

Keep writing! 👍🏼

Thank you so much

Poetry was amateurish 😆

Glad you liked the OS❤️

Will write more if get any idea.

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

KaViaan OS Ek rang pyaar ka

Note- Ok, its a holi special from me to all kaviaan shippers. Its a bit filmy and cliche, please dont mind, actually I am like that only😆 and please forgive my sub standard shayri at the end.😆 I am not as talented as Viaan.😳

Rang barse beehge chunar waali

Rang barse…Ho rang barse bheege chunar wali

Rang barse…

Viaan shut his eyes in irritation as the song reached his ears. This was the fifth time the song was playing in the party, seemed like someone from the guests was really a big fan of this song. It was a holi party thrown at Raghuvanshi mansion. Everyone was invited from friends to relative to employees to neighbours and clients and business associates. Teji had left no stone unturned to make this party a grand celebration. She was not a fan of holi but Viraj was, hence Teji liked to celebrate this festival every year like it was mandatory for her existence.

If it would have been any other time then Viaan wouldn’t have mind listening the song on repeat but today he was not his cool calm, composed self. He was agitated. Every 5 minutes he would look at the entrance in a hope to see the face he was longing to see since morning. But every time he is disappointed as some or other person walks in.

Farah walked towards Viaan with her hands full of blue dry holi color. Viaan just stopped her before she could have applied it on his face. “Arre Viaan, ye kya baat hui ? Aaj holi ke din tu aise saada sa khada hai? Tujhe bhi aaj rang lagwana hoga.” Farah chided him as she tried to apply color again.

“Farah aunty! Please, I don’t like colors you know it,right?” Viaan requested again.

His mom Teji came to his defense, “Let it go Farah. Tujhe to pata hai na kaisa hai ye bachpan se. Har saal main hamare ghar pe itni badi holi party throw karti hoon aur ye ladka bas sabse bachke ghumta rehta hai ki kahi koi ise rang na laga de.”

Both the moms laughed and Ehsan also joined them to make some fun of his friend. “Arre Teji auntie, mujhe to lagta hai ye kisi khaas insaan ka intezar kar raha hai. Ho sakta hai ye sabse pehle usi se rang lagwana chahta ho.” Ehsan winked as he looked at Viaan and earned an angry glare in return.

“Mujhse jyada special kaun ho sakta hai iski life mein.Viraj ke jane ke baad hum dono maa bête hi to ek dusre ka sahara hai..right Viaan?” Teji asked getting a little doubtful and even jealous on the prospective of losing that special position in Viaan’s life.

“Ofcourse mom, Ehsan toh majaak kar raha hai. You know him na? You are very special to me. But I don’t like colors…aapko toh pata hi hai..so..” Viaan made an excuse giving his innocent cute half smile to his mother which assured Teji and she left with Farah to attend other guests.

“Aunty se toh chuppa liya lekin mujhse nahi chhupa sakta Viaan. You are waiting for Katha right?” Ehsan commented. Viaan looked at him and a hint of pity couldn’t be missed in Ehsan’s eyes for him.

“Mujhe vishwaas hai wo aayegi.” Viaan replied confidently not wavering his faith.

“Stop it yaar Viaan. Katha will not come. I don’t get it why you are wasting your time over her? You were the one who used to tell me that Katha is not like other girls, she has no interest in a romantic relationship.Maine teri baat nahi maani aur karta raha try aur ek din Katha ko real feelings ke bare mein bata diya. Yaad hai na kya hua tha? She said no and mera dil toot gaya sath hi she accused me of breaking her trust.” Ehsan tried to make Viaan understand about the futility of his efforts to win Katha’s love as he remembered his own failed attempt.

When Ehsan had proposed Katha, he had expected her angry outburst at the worst but what he got was just a wordless disappointment on her face. It had shaken him to the core. He understood that he is nobody to her, not even worthy of receiving her anger. What followed later was just numerous apologies on his part for stepping out of his line and lots of persuasion to again be in her “just friends” list.

Ehsan thought that Viaan was a wise man, at least wiser than him not to commit the same mistake but he was shocked as sometime later Viaan told him about his feelings for Katha and that he had proposed her. At first he had fought with Viaan but then realized its not worth it. Anyways, Katha is going to say no to Viaan also. So why to drag the matter unnecessarily. Ehsan thought Viaan will soon face the heartbreak but he was now worried and also jealous. That same Katha who hadn’t taken a second more to give him her disappointed look back, has not yet broken Viaan’s heart. Its been 3 months, she hasn’t said yes till now but also not have said no clearly.

“I know…I know she is not like other girls but don’t compare your situation with mine. Its different. I have seen same feelings in her eyes too.” Viaan defended his optimism.

“Different really? Fine! Tumhe ye kabhi na khatam hone wala intezaar karna hai to karo. I cant waste my time with you here.” Ehsan was angry now at Viaan’s audacity to subtly point out his feelings are more genuine than Ehsan’s. He kind of called Ehsan’s love superficial, which was true in a way but no one dares to say it on his face. He left from there seeing there is no point to argue with Viaan right now as he is living in delusion.

“Ehsan kehta hain tum nahi aaogi Katha phir bhi na jane kyu mera dil haar nahi manta. Mujhe kyu lagta hai ki jitna pyar main tumse kartahoon utna hi pyar tum bhi mujhse karti ho. Main samajh sakta hoon tumhare liye aasaan nahi hai Aadi ki yaadon ko bhula paana, Aarav ke hisse ka waqt aur pyar kisi aur se baantna lekin tum samajhti kyu nahi, main tumse ye sab kuch chheenna nahi chahta balki main to tumhe is sab ke sath apnana chahta hoon. Main khud tumhari duniya ka hissa banna chahta hoon Katha.” Viaan thought as he kept looking at the entrance longingly.

Meanwhile Katha was struggling with her emotions in her house. She knew something is happening between him and Viaan, their feelings were changing but she was not ready to give name to those feelings. The day Viaan confessed his love, she was nervous, shocked and even guilty. She wasn't expecting this part to come between them so soon. She was unprepared and she didn’t know how to handle it.

She didn’t say yes to Viaan but when she looked into his eyes, she just couldn’t say no also. The thought that Viaan would be heartbroken if she says no was enough in itself to make her run from there without giving any answer. After that she has been avoiding him as much as possible. She thought he would soon give up waiting for her but everytime she wanted to talk him out of it, he said he is ready to wait for her for lifetime. Its been three months and slowly her resolve is crumbling. She wants nothing more than to run in Viaan’s arms and never let him go but her past,her fears are stopping her.

Katha was lost in her thoughts, radio playing in the background was disturbing her. She marched angrily towards it to throw it away when Neerja ji snatched it from her hands and lowered its volume. “Arre apna gussa is bechare par kyu nikal rahi ho?”

“Main koi gussa nahi nikaal rahi.” Katha said as she turned around deliberately to avoid facing Neerja ji. Ever since she had shared her plight with Neerja ji, the lady was hell bent on changing her mind about it.

“Toh phir frustration hoga zarur. Bhai ho bhi kyu na? Aakhir apne angry young man boss ka dil jo tod rahi ho dheere dheere. Us bechare ki ummeed ko kuchal rahi ho.” Neerja ji talked in her filmy manner.

“Ye dialogue bazi band kijiye please. Aap samajhti nahi hain…” Katha tried to continue but Neerja stopped her between.

“Samajhti tum nahi ho Katha. Viaan tumse itna pyar karta hai, tumhare jawab ka kabse intezar kar raha hai and you are trying his patience.”

“Wo mujhse pyar karte honge lekin main Aadi se pyar….” Katha tried to avoid Neerja yet again.

“….karti thi…tum Aadi se pyar karti thi Katha. Ab Aadi nahi hai lekin tum ho.” Neerja ji was not in a mood to let her go this time.

“Toh kya kisi ke mar jane se pyar bhi mar jata hai?” Katha asked as tears started falling down her cheeks thinking about betrayal she is doing by developing feelings for someone else.

“Pyar nahi marta Katha. Aadi ka pyar toh tumhara sahara raha hai hamesha se jisne tumhe mushkil haalaato se ladna sikhaya hai. Aadi ki jeeti jaagti nishani, tumhara Aarav, wo hai tumhare sath aur hamesha rahega toh phir Aadi ke liye tumhara pyar kaise mar sakta hai? Lekin iska matlab ye to nahi kitum kisi aur se pyar nahi kar sakti. Aadi chala gaya to tum jeena to nahi chhod sakti. Arre sachha pyar badi mushkil se ek bar kisi ko milta aur tumhe to zindagi mein dusri bar ye mauka mil raha hai. Phir isse kyu bhaag rahi ho?”Neerja tried to explain.

“Aur Aarav ka kya? Kya wo apna payega kisi aur ko apne papa ki jagah?” Katha now tried to take another escape root.

“Aarav kya sochta hai ye to usko sab kuch bata kar hi pata chalega na. Abhi tum pehle apni khud ki feelings to accept karo.” Neerja answered.

“Lekin main Aadi ko kaise bhul jaun?” Katha repeated again not finding any more excuse.

“Bhulne ko kaun kehta hai? Aadi ki jagah jo tumhare dil mein thi wo hamesha rahegi bas Viaan ko to tum thodi si jagah apne dil mein de do. Pyar bahut dheet hota hai. Dekhna wo dheere dheere apni jagah khud mukammal kar lega.” Neerja smiled as she saw finally Katha was losing this argument.

“Par….” Katha was about to say something when a song started playing on radio and both of them looked at its direction as it was their favorite song.

Ae zindagi gale laga le

Ae zindagi gale laga le

Humne bhi tere har ek gham ko

Gale se lagaya hai…hai na?

“Lo, tumhare har par, lekin, kaise, kyu kya ka jawab milgaya.” Neerja said as she smiled while listening to the song. Katha was just silent at that moment as if processing all their arguments. She knew Neerja jiwas right. She knew she loved Viaan now. She was just having difficult time to convince herself that she is really ready to move on.

“Itna mat socho Katha. Zindagi har kisi pe meherban nahi hoti. Zindagi tumhe gale lagane ko bekarar hai aur tum ho ki apne dil ka darwaza itni zor se band kiye baithi ho. Darwza kholo Katha, aage badho aur dono haatho se samet lo zindagi ko apni baahon mein.” Neerja encouraged her to take a final decision.

Viaan was tired now. His hope was dwindling down, his eyes were moistening and telling him to add this day to his seemingly limitless wait. He was about to turn around and go just then his eyes fell on a tall slender figure coming in from the main entrance in a white salwar kurti. At first he rubbed his eyes to be sure its not his elusion. As the figure came nearer, Viaan was getting assured that finally God has decided to smile on him and play holi with him.

As Katha walked in straight towards Viaan, her smile kept widening and her heart getting full of emotions. She picked up fist full of pink gulal from nearby tray and kept walking towards Viaan with firm steps. She had decided now. She will not hide her feelings anymore. She loves Viaan and she will declare her love in a colorful way.

Viaan who dislike color saw the love of her life walking probably to paint his face and inspite of running or frowning he just opened his arms for her with wide smile on his face. He knew in that moment, he just knew his wait was over. Finally the day has come when his love will be completed, his life will be full of colors.

Katha saw Viaan standing with open arms and she almost ran to him. She stopped in the enclosure of his arms, gave him a shy look and brought up both her hands upto his face.

“Happy holi Viaan” she almost whispered as her hands colored his face from both sides with pink gulal.

“Rang aur pyar, aaj dono ka shagun ek sath hi ho gaya. Happy holi Katha.” Viaan whished her as he caught her hands and rubbed his face on her cheeks one by one as he colored her with the same gulal.

“How do you know?” Katha was surprised he understood that she has made her decision and came to confess her love.

“Jo pyar karte hain wo chehra padhna jante hain.” Viaan replied as he took her hand in his and knotted their fingers signifying now nothing can separate them.

“Achha to phir padh lijiye mera chehra, main jo bolna chahti thi wo nahi bolti.” Katha teased him.

“Tumhare jawab ke intezar mein jo din kaate hain wo ek ek din ek ek saal ki tarah beeta hai ab aur kitna sataogi mujhe?” Viaan complaint.

Katha smiled as she found him cute, complaining like that. “I love you Viaan. Pata hi nahi chala tum kab meri aankhon se meri rooh mein utar gaye….bilkul pata nahi chala.” She smiled amidst tears whereas for Viaan time stopped there only. The moment got freeze and he kept looking at the sea of love in her eyes for him. He wanted to get drown in them today. This holi had really made his life colorful.

The two lovers were oblivious to some prying eyes witnessing their special moment. One pair was of Teji who was shocked to see Viaan letting someone apply color on him, something which she couldn’t do all her life and that someone was very same person she hates with passion, Katha.

And another pair of eyes were of Ehsan which were shining with green color of jealousy and heart was burning with hatred. How could this happen. What does Viaan have which he doesn’t have? Whats so special about Viaan that Katha chose him. How can he be okay with their relationship?

But the two souls in love were not at all bothered by any of that. For them, world has just become more beautiful, all the negativity just vanished, their journey had just started and they were hopelessly in love.Katha knew they have to fight a long battle ahead, Garewal’s reaction, Aarav’sacceptance and society’s perception etc. but everything can wait. This momentis entirely belongs to Viaan, to their love and she just wanted to bask in that.

Viaan couldn’t believe love had graced his life. He was holding Katha in his arms and his eyes were narrating his feelings-

Surkh, safed, syaah, sunehri

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka.

Logo ki bheed se ghira rehta tha

Tumhara aana hua zindagi mein to jana

Kitna tanha tha main pehle

Har lamha, har pal bekarar sa

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka.

Dost mile, yaar mile, mile humdard bhi bahut

Tumhara aana hua zindagi mein to jana

Humsafar ki kami kya hoti hai

Chubhta rehta tha har pal tere intezaar ka

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka.

Daulat mili, shohrat mili, mili zamane ki khushiya

Tumhara aana hua zindagi mein to jana

pyar nahi toh kuch nahi

Bin tere sab bekaar tha

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka

Ye kiski dua lagi mujhe, jaise khuda has pada ho

Tumhara aana hua zindagi mein to jana

muskurane ke liye wajah zaruri nahi hoti

Ye teri mohabbat ka ikraar tha

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka

Ab jo mile ho to dur mat jana

Har bar tum mujhe ishq ka rang lagana

Main bhi rang dunga tumhe apne safaa jazbaton mein

Yuhi manegi holi ek duje ki baahon mein

Kabhi na utre nasha is khumaar ka

Rang to bahut se hain lekin sabse khaas jo hai,

Wo ek rang hai pyar ka

Viaan and Katha were lost in each others’ eyes when someone from the guests shouted and threw colors on them, “Holi hai!”

And again for the umpteenth time, on people’s request, the song started playing-

Rang barse beehge chunar waali

Rang barse…Ho rang barse bheege chunar wali

Rang barse…

But instead of getting annoyed, Viaan put his hands up in the air as he started copying hero’s dance steps on this and Katha started laughing seeing him. He pulled her with him and she also joined him, dancing to celebrate their love.

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The end.

HAPPY HOLI 🤗

My god, how beautiful is this!!

Absolutely loved it!

Originally posted by: RatiPandey615

My god, how beautiful is this!!

Absolutely loved it!

Thank you so much❤️