MG SS:Our Journey From Marriage To Divorce-Updated Part8-24Mar.pg15 - Page 7

Posted: 1 years ago

Hi thanks for the update


Part 2

Amazing update… greatly written

so a year has passed

now Maan and Geet get married

Geet was really happy during the rituals

but she asked Maan for the divorce

she revealed that she loves Dev and was forced to marry him

well Maan was calm and composed

Geet was shocked with his reaction

Maan recalls the past

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 3

Agonizing update… nicely written 

of cos Maan was happy seeing Sameera

but was shattered seeing that she is married 

feeling for Maan

she tells Maan she is happy and not to spoil her life

well she wants Maan to move on

Maan's comment was reasonable 

did Sameera love Maan? 

was she forced to get married?

Maan was shocked that Sameera's husband was the same Inspector that beat him up 

Maan's anger was expected


interesting precap

update soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 4:


Maan then has another flashback, that was around three months after he had met Sam... 

Which actually lead to what and where he is today!!

Three months ago...

"Amritsar chodkar, Delhi agayi. Aur dekho zara kudh ko kya kiya hai!! Chood do" Rajvender questioned his son who was standing infront of them busy putting sugar in their tea... 

"Aur kitne din uske bare mai sooch ti rahoge..ha?" asked a worried and concerned Savitri, seeing her once cheerful son, who was no longer like before. She felt like talking to some unknown person. 

"Mai kaha kuch sooch rahi hu Ma..Infact mai to rooz hazaro logo se bath kar ke apne dard ko bhul rahi hu.." Maan told with a smiling face, but that didn't reach his eyes. U can fool anyone but not your parents who can see you inside out... 

"Iska mathlab dard hai!! Aur iska solution ye hai ki hum dono ne tumhari liye ek ladki chuna hai aur tumhe usse shadhi karni hai.." Savitri calmly explained the solution. 

"Ma. Humari ek hi jeevan hai, aur pyar be sirf ek hi. If we get married to them life is set, we will be happy.*Pause* Agar aisa nahi huva, to wo sab humari liye nahi hai samaj kar uski bari mai soochna nahi chaye. That's my policy.."

" Hum yaha tumhari LIC ke policy ke bareme bath karne nahi aaye hai. Aur ye gyan tum ko kaha se mila? That's the fence that you have put around yourself...

Jinse tumne pyar kiya agar uska ek zindagi ho sakti hai to tumhara kyu nahi?" Savitri still calmly tried to put some sense into Maan that he has his life ahead, she could understand him and what he was going through, but this way things won't work he had taken enough time slowly loneliness would engulf him if he continues going this way. 

"Papa aap hi Ma ko samjaye na.. "

"Agar itne samjane ki badh be apna mann nahi badlogi to aab hum kuch nahi kar sakthe hai, aur na hi aise jage par rahenge."  Savitri felt suffocated being there, with Maan's changed behavior.

Was asking for her son to be happy, forget, move on and enjoy your life a sin? No it was not but Maan had made her feel it, her son who used to share everything with them had distanced himself. They had gave him the needed space to come out and gather himself. But now his this behavior and talks like life has only ended with the end of his so called love didn't go well with her. 

Picking up the envelope she had bought she turns to leave, Maan comes in front of them with his hands stretched blocking their way. 

"Ma aap kaha ja rahi ho?"

"Why do you care...*Her voice turns heavy, tears clogging her  burning throat* for the mistake of giving birth to children, hum to humare bache kar kar marange. Lakin bachae ke liye hum to hai nahi.* tears rolled down her eyes, Rajvender puts his hand on her shoulder for her to calm down.* 

Kabhi Raj ke tabet ke bhare mai sooch hai tum ne?"

With this Maan's attention goes to his dad, who looked very pale and stressed, which was not good for his health.. 

With out thinking for a second longer he directly looked into his mother's eyes.

"Agar mai shadhi karne keliye maan gayi, to aap logo kush honge?"

Hearing this Savitri and Raj's face bloomed

"Ji, beta "

"Hmm...To teek hai"

Savitri wipes her tears with the back of her palm and says excitedly 

" Sach mai!... Ladki bohat pyari hai, tumhari liye perfect jodi, maine hi select kiya *points towards herself* . Agar tum usse shadhi karogi to zindagi bhar kush rahogi. Chaye to ladki ki photo dekho. * she takes the photo from the envelope she was holding*"

"Nahi Ma."

"Kyu " Raj jumps in worried if Maan changed his mind

"Jab mai aapne pyar ki bare mai aap logo ko bataya ta, aap bina kuch saval ki shadhi ke liye maan gaye ti. Mai be, aap ki kushi hi meri kushi hai."

To which he was rewarded with their happy faces and warm hugs.. 

Seeing them happy, Maan's heart felt in peace, which was filled with guilt seeing them upset and that too because of him. After a long time he smiled that was from his heart...

                      *******************

That was how he was here, today, married!! He comes back to present when he heard  people laughing. He goes to look as of what was happening, comes to an halt in the middle of the stairs while climbing down.

His parents and some close relatives were sitting around in the big hall, talking, laughing.. 

"Finally, without any hindrance you got your only son married Savitri."

"Iske liye mujhe Raj ko thanks ko kehna chaye."

"Ek hi beta hai, shaadi to sari reeti revaz ke sath hona chaye. Aab kush hu."

One of the relative "Purohit kaha se hai?"

"Raj ki friend hai. Unhone jitne be shadhiya karvai hai, sab log kush hai." Savitri

"Aur nahi to kya, achi muhurat nikal ke, undono ko ashirvad kiya hai to vo log kush hi honge." Raj 

Maan's lips curved into a sad smile hearing them... 

                              ***********

Next day...

The house was decorated with flowers and guests were filling up. 

"Mai khane ka arrangements karwa do?" Maan askes his mother, who was carrying a plate full of flowers for the Satya Narayan pooja, which they had kept for the happiness of the newly wed couple. 

"Wo to mai dekh lunga. Tum jao"

 "Ji"

Maan walks over to his father who was talking with his friends.

He greets them by shaking their hands 

One of them asks 

"Kya Maan, bohat serious lagriho? "

"Aur nahi to kya uncle. Abhi to shadhi hui hai, zimedari agayi hai, aab bachpana nahi." 

Raj excuses themselves, while he introduces Maan to one of his other friend whom they met 

"Hello Patil. Meet my son Maan."

"Hello uncle." Maan greets with a smile. 

Raj introduces Patil to Maan standing in between them. 

"Bohat bada financer hai, shaadi keliye nahi aapaya. *turns to Patil * Ye (pointing towards Maan)be tumhari tara ladki ko dekhe bina shaadi karli."

"Ho, saach mai sir?" Maan questioned surprised and happy that he was not the only one out there.. 

"Ha, jab gaddhe(pit) mein girana hi hai to gaharae(depth) dekhar kya karogi."

They had a heartly laugh 

"Mai aapne bete ko gaddhe mein giraya nahi hu. Tum chup raho."

While they were talking Mohinder approachs them. 

"Oh, aaye aaye Mohinder Ji.* they shake hands with each other * Nashta?"

"Sab hogaya hai."

"Beta, Geet kaha hai? "

"Upar room mai hai papa."

"Ha, mai dekhar aati hu."

"Ji"

                     ***************

Geet was sitting infront of the mirror, clad in a green color saree, getting ready for the pooja. 

Mohinder enters opening the door. 

"Geet"

She immediately gets up, looks that it was her father and turns her face to the other side  with anger.

"Kyu aaye ho aap?"

"Meri upar ke gussa aabi kam nahi huva?"

"Aur vo kabhi kam bi nahi hoga."

"Wo aise nahi hai Geet.." 

Geet raises her right hand indicating to stop 

"Please. U have already punished me for the mistake of being born as your daughter and I'm suffering from it. Jab meri shaadi hogai tabhi humara rishta katam hogaya. Aab mai iss ghar ko belong karti hu, aur meri responsibility aab inki hai.* Mohinder removes his glasses hurt by Geet's words, only if once Geet would listen to what he had to say.. * Aage kabhi mujko dekhne ya bath karne keliye aakar mujhe parishan math kijiye. Please do this one help for me, where ur daughter....If not happy, atleast will be alive somewhere."

"Geet, beta meri bath.."

"Please" she joins her hands asking him to stop, fighting back the tears that were forming in her eyes..

Hurt that her father didn't support her, her love. Anger, pain, agony of being forced to marry someone when she loved someone else. She just doesn't belong to this happy family, she had to be rude without her will to the person she got married, all thanks to her dad. She walks out of the room frustrated, angry and pained. 

                   *************** 

Geet walks downstairs, only to be stopped by Maan, who had walked up to her seeing her climbing down. He catches hold of her right arm smiling at her 

"Kitna time laga liya tumne. Neeche sab intazar kar rahi hai. Chalo."

Geet is again surprised, she hadn't seen Maan from the time he left the room last night and now he is behaving as if nothing happened.. 

He pulls her along with him, they met his parents who was near the stairs. He leaves Geet infront them and bends down to take their blessings and asks her to do the same, which she does. 

"Dono kush raho." they blessed with smiling faces. 

"Ek minute."

"Nahi, suno to.. " Savitri

Then he again held Geet's hand and dragged her along with him, talking with the guests and introducing Geet to them. While Geet went along with him. 

While seeing Maaneet like that Maan's parents were happy. 

Shaam, Raj's friend come Dr.

"Medicine liya tumne?"

For which Raj nods his head negatively making a baby face. 

"Brainless fellow, tume jitni bar be kaho akal  nahi ayega."

"No medicine keeps you healthy I say, except happiness. Zara dekho waha."

He points towards maaneet, who were taking blessings from a very old couple who were most probably in their 90's.

"Hazaro sal kush raho tum dono." blessed the old couple, 

"Jab aapne kehdiya hai, to wo be hojaye ga dadu, aap befikar rahye." Maan answered with a smile holding the old man's hand in his... 

Back to Maan's parents and Shaam who were watching this 

"If you always have to see this happiness means, you both should better shift to Delhi along with your son and daughter in law."

Hearing this Raj jumped as if someone had poured ice cold water into his shirt. 

"Nahi, nahi, nahi, nahi. Hum aur Delhi, bilkul nahi. Humhari liye Amritsar he kaafi hai. Aur to aur naye naye shadhi hogai hai, undono ke beech humara kya kam hai re, haddi ki tara."

Which was followed by their laughter 

"Teek hai, tumhari marzi."


"Hi, doctor uncle." Maan greets Shaam who was on his way to meet them. 

"Hello. *both greet each other, Geet was tagging beside Maan.* To honeymoon keliye kaha plan kiya ho? Waise family planning..ya aise kuch..??" 

"Family planning?* Maan reacts as if he had heard this word for the first time.* Nahi nahi, sal ko ek, aisa ginkar total bara(12) bache hona chaye."

With this Geet who was seeing elsewhere snaps her head towards Maan, giving him a deadly glare which meant like have you lost your mind.. 

Shocked and surprised with Maan's reply, Shaam asks 

"Kya?Ek dozen!!"

"Indian cricket team das saalo mai retire hojaye ga. Tab poore team humari ghar ki he hogi.."

"Hahaha, super planning man." Maan also laughs along, while Geet leaves from there seething in anger, she somewhere felt he was taking advantage of her...  

"Wo tooda sharma ti hai." Maan answered smiling. 

                         ************

The pooja had finally came to an ending, 

"Aab aarti hojai?" pandit 

"Ji" Savitri

"Aapke bahu kaha hai ma?"

"Geet!" Savitri turns back, searching her. Upon not finding her Maan answered

"Aa..upar room mai hogi, mai usse apne sath lekar aati hu."

"Ha" Savitri

"Jaldhi karo" Raj 

                **************

Maan finds Geet leaning on the pillar looking outside, in the big open corridor infront of their room. Maan approaches her with a smile, that had never left his face seeing his parents happy. 

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Neeche sab aarti ke liye wait kar raha hai, chalo." 

Geet was startled for a second but composes herself and then realising it was Maan the anger was back, she turns around to face Maan.

He turns around to leave thinking that she would follow him. 

"Hello, excuse me. Rath ko maine kya kaha ta, aur aab aap kar kya rahi ho? Ha?" Maan stops in his track and turns around to face her 

Now both of them are facing each other, with smile gone from Maan's face, Geet's eyes shooting draggers at him.. 

"U are behaving as if I'm crazily into you infront everyone.*pause* Dekhye mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai." with that she folds her hands across her chest turning sideways angrily. 

"Oo Hello. Mujhe be koi shock nahi hai tumhari sath meri ghar basane ka. Jaise tumhe aapna divorce ki padi hai, waise he mujhe be aapne log jinse mai pyar karti hu ussko kush dekhana hai." 

Geet roles her eyes turning sideways 

Maan laughs slightly which was more of like mocking her. 

"Waise ek bath pooch na hai tume, shaadi ke pehli rath ko he divorce mangne ki saahas kiye te. To tum aapne pasand ki ladke ki sath bagh be sakti ti naa? Itne sab kyu.."

" Agar hum kahi bagh gai hoti, mujhe vishwas nahi ti ki meri papa hum dono ko zinda choodte. Aise kuch mera halat ti".

"Ha, wahi halat yaha ke bi hai. Unki pasand ki bahu, shaadi ke pehli dinhe divorce mangahe, ye sunkar usko kitna dukh hoga. Meri papa to zinda hi nahi hote. Yesab natak ussi kiliye hai. Beta hokar unki ichchha, insaan hokar tumhara ichcha be puri karungi. That's once we reach Delhi."

Maan cleared his side, of what had made him to act that way, hoping that she would believe. 

Geet was convinced with Maan's explaination, her face was calm now. With all these talks they had she understood one thing, and that was he loved his parents above everything, their happiness was all that mattered to him. 

"Tume ek bath kahu? Maine be pyar kiya taa."

Well that piece of information came as a shocker for Geet, 

Maan walks out saying this, hoping atleast for her bitterness to reduce to some extent, so that he could atleast be in peace instead of arguing with her all the time they meet, well that's what they have been doing whenever they were alone. 

                        ****************


Thank you everyone for reading this❤

The update went lengthy so couldn't add the Precap..

Apologies for the grammatical errors. 

Hope you like this update...


                                Part 5

Edited by ShashtiJMG - 11 months ago
Posted: 1 years ago

4

geet hurt her father with her bitter words n dint listen what he wants to say

geet shows her anger to maan when he behave very normally in front of guest who come for pooja next day of wedding.

maan clear his point to geet shocking her by saying he also loved someone 

Posted: 1 years ago

Nice update 

Geet hurted her father, like the way maan make her understand that why he is acting like this hope for family they try to make marriage work and eventually fall in love with each other 

Update next part soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 4


Awesome and Fantastic Update 


Geet been in love with Dev should not make her so rude 

all the time with Maan 

she should try and understand the situation before her 

but no,she needs Maan to explain everything to her 

but I'm glad that he also tells her that he too was in love with someone 

Geet truly has no respect for her father , no matter what her situation with Dev is

she could have spoken to her father 

Posted: 1 years ago

awesome one

iam really liking maan n how he is handling everythingon the other side geet not so much

she seems impulsive ...why did her dad marry her off to maan if he knew she was already in love

also maans gonna divorce her once they reach delhi?

hope not

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 4

Great update….amazingly written

Past well incorporated

Maan's parents concern for him was reasonable

of cos his mom wants him to be happy and move on

at least they gave him space to come out of all this

she tells him about his dad's health

so that's how he agreed to get married

good seeing Maan smile

he can do anything for his parents

present 

well a puja is taking place

hate how Geet behaves with her dad

she was really rude

surely there is a reason why her dad did not approve of Dev?

admire how Maan manages everything

Geet was indeed angry with Maan's comment

Maan's question was justified

Maan cleared everything with Geet

all that matters is his parents happiness

glad that he told that he also was in love with someone 


update soon 

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Wonderful update superb read all in a go hope to see maaneet moments more



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