The jealous wife ( 7 shots) - Gitya 😡🤨😜

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The jealous wife


Shot one -


A few days after Ginni recovered, Aditya's friends from Canada flew to India to meet him . They found out about the tragedy involving the bullet taken by Ginni on behalf of him. They were all praises for her. Ginni was touched with the compliments received except for one in particular who literally pissed the wife with her dramatic dialogues and constant chipku ( stick) to her husband,. Her name was Shimona Niscal.


Ginni tagged her as 'shaitaan nautanki" (mischievous devil)


The latter was all over her handsome husband be it placing her hand on his at the dining table showing her concern that he almost lost his life to 'Aditya pls accompany me to the bedroom, i am so exhausted from the trip, pls massage my head ' and blah blah. Aditya this, aditya that..


So much so that one fine afternoon she packed her bags and left furiously leaving a note which puzzled him


" Ghar ka angan hain pyara.

( The house is beautiful)


Lekin aek chuha gusgeya nyara.

( But a strange?mouse broke in)


Pati parmeshwar ko hain khatra

( husband in danger).


Biwi cheli maika lanat hain tujhey kanjra

( wife returns to her parents place, a disgusting fellow u are)


Piche piche mat ana.

( Don't come after ne)


Nehin dungi aek bhi dana

( Won't give u any food)


Hath jodo yah benjau phir dewana

( Fold ur hands or be a Romeo)


Ab maika ho geya hain permanent thikana.

( Parents 's place is my permanent residence now).


The furious husband who couldn't get the meaning of the note,

" What the hell".

" How dare she took off like that".


He decided to ring her and she disconnected the line. He drove speedily and recklessly towards her home but surprisingly she wasn't there as well.

Where is she?

He contacted a few of her friends but no one knew her whereabouts.

Gulabo became terrified upon hearing about her missing beloved daughter and interrogated the already pissed son in law puzzled with his wife's decision.


" Aisa ki hogeya puttarji ki Ginni ghar chod ker cheligeyi?. Tum dono key bich koyi jagda hua hain kya??? Ginni ney itna beda kadam kaise uthaliya?. Kuch toh hua hoga??

(What happened son, why Ginni left ? Any arguments between both of u?? Why did Ginni took such a huge step. Something definitely occurred)


Aditya remained silent .

Why did she take such a huge step.

She left just like that.

I really hope she is fine.


Seconds later, a call came in and he got more annoyed.

" Adi baby, don't stress yourself too much. She will be fine. It was so irresponsible of her to do so. I mean she never even once thought how worried we all would be. Just come home sweetie"


He disconnected the line , frowning.

Baby baby bol bol ke dimaag kherab kerdeti hain. Uper sey yeh biwi ghaib hogeyi. Ginnii, kahan ho tum?? Arrrghhh, God, i am going crazy.

( She keeps saying baby baby and fry my brains. On top of that wife is missing. Where are u , Ginnii)


Another call came in .

Armaan became anxious enquiring about Ginni's absence. He was away visiting his sick grandma and wasn't aware of the events back home till Gulabo rang him and spilled the details.


The annoyed husband

" Tu aja yaar, mujhey kuch bhi samaj nehin a raha. Chitti chod ke geyi hain. Samaj nehin ata kya likha hain"

( Pls come . I don't understand what's going on. She left a letter. I didn't get it)



Where was Ginni???

Was she in danger??



To be continued

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful os Aniash. Loved it. 👏. Do continue. 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Looking forward to this jealous Ginni😎😆


Love it 💕💞💖

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Continue soon! It will be fun to watch jealous Ginni and Adi manofying her!

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lovely… waiting to see jealous Ginni🤪

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Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Wonderful os Aniash. Loved it. 👏. Do continue. 👍🏼


Tq all for liking it

This track is basically to make them realize their feelings for one another.

In itvs they don't do things normally.

Triggers are required.

And drama is for ratings.

This is a romantic comedy suspense thriller.

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Originally posted by: Aniash


Tq all for liking it

This track is basically to make them realize their feelings for one another.

In itvs they don't do things normally.

Triggers are required.

And drama is for ratings.

This is a romantic comedy suspense thriller.

Awaiting the next chapter

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Shot two.


The next few hours till midnight.

The restless husband searched almost all nearby temples , hospitals and nursing homes. But Ginni was nowhere in sight. Her phone was still switched off. Finally he decided to logde a missing report.


At the police station, 1 am.


The snoring officer on night duty woke up with the furious husband hitting his fist on the table.

" Abey kon sala is waqt disturb kar raha hain".

( Who is disturbing at this hour)


The angry reply while taking a seat facing the sleepy gentleman in uniform.

" Missing report likhvvani hain".

(To lodge a missing report )


The frustrated officer while rubbing his eyes to get a clearer vision of the intruder who disturbed his peaceful sleep taking a pen and register.

" Arey bhai, kiski",

( Brother, who's report?)


The angry reply once again.

" Biwiki! ". ( Wife)

" Dopaher sey ghaib hain". ( Missing since afternoon).


The teasing note with a shrewd smile enjoying the husband 's plight.

" Kehin Ali Baba churake toh nehin leygeya?".

( Maybe ali baba stole her)

Followed with giggles from a few constables standing nearby.


The furious voice.

" It's not funny. This is serious. Chitti chod ker geyi hain. Yeh dekho ".

( She left a letter. Pls read).


A few seconds later.


The smiling voice of the sub inspector as though he solved the puzzle.

" Pest control ko phone karo. Vo apki problem ko solve kardenge".

( Contact the pest control. They will solve ur problem).


The shocked husband.

" Kya!" ( What)


The officer showed the letter, replying casually.

" Apki wife ney is Chitti mein likha.

Ghar ka angan hain pyara

Lekin gusgeya aek chuha nyara.

Toh sari fesad ki jad hain vo chuha. Apki wife ko chuhe sey dar legta hain. Pest control ko bulalo aur chuhe ko mardo. Apki wife wapas aa jaiyegi. Simple ".

( Ur wife wrote in the letter about ur beautiful hse and how a mouse broke in. So, the culprit is the mouse. Ur wife got frightened. Contact the pest control and kill the rat. Ur wife will return).


The distraught soul shook his head in disbelief at the Idiocracy of the police man

" Apko kisne officer benaya??"( Who made u an officer)


The proud reply

" Sarkar ney". ( The government)


The sarcastic remark.

" Chaprasi sey bhi ziada gey guzre ho . Apka IQ level kitna hain??

(U are worse than an office peon. What is ur IQ level?)


The irritated gentleman in the uniform closing the register harshly tossing it to the corner of the wide table, glaring at the teasing annoyed husband.

" Dekho saab, apki wife apni merzi sey geyi hain chuhe ka bahana dekar. Yeh pest control ka mamla hain , police ka nehin. Aur agar missing report likhvvani hain to chobis genton ke baad ana. Ab niklo yahan sey".

( Look sir, ur wife took off willingly giving rat as an excuse. This matter is to be handled by the pest control not the police. To lodge a missing report, u need to do it only after 24 hours. Now get going).


The furious husband snatched the letter from the officer's hand and left silently determined to search his wife all by himself. Armaan would be reaching by 9 am. He has already booked his flight from New Delhi. The friend consoled that she would be fine.

Was she??


In his bedroom

An hour later, he surrendered to s small quantity of alcohol upon reaching the mansion, to soothe his anxiety and to stay sober. Aditya needed a clear mind to search for his missing wife Getting drunk was not a good idea The rest of the family and his guests were fast asleep.


A knock , he turned to look and


Gasped!


Standing at the door was Shimona wearing a short pink nightie exposing her feminine as though inviting him for an intimate night in wife's absence.

Finally he understood

She was the reason Ginni left out of sudden.

The past few days the Canadian friend was being chipku ( stick) to him and his wife was offended.

And her sugary talks could have annoyed Ginni more.

God, how could i be so foolish and blind.

She was affected badly. That's why she took off


" Adi baby, a rough day isn't it".

A sweet female voice interrupted his thoughts, massaging his neck and shoulders softly. She moved her hands towards unbuttoning his shirt, whispering in his left ear

" Ur wife is not here. Let's play dirty".


Furiously, he pushed her away.

" Get off me!!For God Sake Shimona ,I am a married man!!"


The persistence trying to get closer putting her arms around his neck

" Come on just chill, it's just u and me. She won't find out. Moreover it was a forced marriage. We all know how she tricked u. Now she could be enjoying out there with another male. That's why she took off. Who knows she loves someone else "


He grabbed her hand shoved her out of the room closing the door on her face. Not being able to tolerate her remarks.

" Enough. Get lost. Leave this house rite away. U don't know her. She is a loyal and sweet wife."


No sound heard from the outside.

Shimona left angrily.


He drank two glasses of red wine in a go

The sting from the horny friend was unbearable.

Does Ginni love someone else.??

The marriage was forced

He never dig into her past


The thought crushed him deeply. It was unbearable. The emotions in him were unexplainable.

Why do i feel hurt and dejected with those words

God, i will kill myself if she ever cheated me


Seconds later,


A text message from a credit card call centre.


An amount of rs 3 lakhs were utilised from his Standard Chartered account. The transaction details involved hotel accomodations, food in a few dine ins and purchase of items in shopping malls


The shocked and confused husband

I didn't spend on all these. My sister will ask my permission if she wanted to use my card. Akash is too young to utilize it. He is mischievous but he won't steal. Who could it be ???


Ginni!!!


She didn't return to her mother's place. She needed accomodation food and money!

The disturbed husband rummaged his wallet at the bedside and found out that one of his credit card was missing.

He was pretty sure it was his wife.


Ginni would never steal and spend his money lavishly. Could it be that Shimona was right?

Ginnii was cheating on him??


Arrrghhh!!

He broke the furniture in his room and took off instantly towards the venue as per the details given by the call centre.


The hotel she resided!


A few minutes later in the lonely streets of Amritsar 3 am , in the car, driving speedily and recklessly while drinking from a beer bottle.


" Ginni, mein aaraha hun. Tujhe jewab dena padega. Agar pyar kisi aur sey karti thi toh phir mujsey shadi kyun ki. Mera dil kyun toda".

(Ginni, i am coming. U owe me an explanation. If u love someone else why did u marry me?. Why break my heart?



To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww Adi boy is going mad😅🤣...moi loving it 🥰😜💞


Looking for to their respective feelings realisation and confession too☺


Thks for the beautiful chanter dear🤗


That canadian chipkali😡🤬...good Adi could connect the dots and finally understand the reason behind Ginni departure😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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jealous wife or jelous husband smiley2 seems aag dono jagah lagi hain…

wo shimona wala scene ginni ne dekhna chahiye tha yar fir maza ata smiley37smiley37 shimona seducing him and ginni at door haye bichara jutte khata smiley37

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