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Ahh the saree romance, we never expected😍😍😍😍. Was hoping to see it today in the show but you fulfilled that wish of mine😘😘

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Ahh the saree romance, we never expected😍😍😍😍. Was hoping to see it today in the show but you fulfilled that wish of mine😘😘


Glad i could fulfill it🤗🤗

I am still hopeful to see it on screen😉

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Chapter 26


Next morning Abhimanyu calls Akshara but Aarohi recieves.

Aarohi: jiju its just 8. Why are you calling so early?

Abhimanyu: 8 is too late for your Di. Give her the phone.

Aarohi: that's when she is there but not here.

Abhimanyu: what do you mean?

Aarohi: I mean that she is still sleeping.

Abhimanyu: how is that possible? Is she feeling well?

Aarohi: yes she is perfectly fine. She had no work here so she is still sleeping.

Abhimanyu: ohhh. Ok. let her know I had called.

Aarohi: ok bye.

Abhimanyu: bye

Abhimanyu thinks he has never seen her sleeping peacefully. She is always so busy with him Or nimisha in this house that she hardly gets time for herself. He so wants to pamper her, look at her, observe her. He thinks of paying her a visit right now but then thinks what will his in laws think about him coming so early. Just then his phone rings.

Abhimanyu: hello papa, how are you? You called at this time, is everything fine.

Papa:yes all is well. Actually Akshara's mother was saying that since Akshara is here so why don't you also come and we will have breakfast together.

Abhimanyu(smiling to himself): yes Papa I will come.

He reaches their within 10 minutes.

Papa:beta aap aagaye??

Abhimanyu: no actually I thought then their is traffic and I might get late. So I didn't want to make you people wait.

Aarohi(laughing):what jiju at least you should have come up with some believable excuse.

Swarna: is this way to talk to your jiju, Aarohi?

Abhimanyu: mummy she is just joking. Why are you scolding her?

Mummy:go take him to Akshara’s room, till then breakfast will be ready as well.

Aarohi: ok mummy.

She takes him to the room and leaves. He bolts the door and heads to Akshara.

He sees she is sleeping peacefully with her hair messed all over her face. He removes the hair strands from her face.

Akshara: let me sleep Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu: how does she know I am here.

Akshara: please don't irritate me

Abhimanyu: ohh she is dreaming and smiles.

He sees its only 8:30 and thinks breakfast still has time, so he too can sleep with her. He takes of his shoes and his shirt too (he has his vest on). He goes to the other side and slips into the bed besides her. He puts his arm around her waist and pulls her closer to himself and then kisses her shoulder.

Akshara: You don't let me sleep even in my dreams Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu chuckles and continues his work of peppering her with kisses. She turns around and hugs him tight, sleeping on his chest. He kisses her hairs and then places her on the pillow and continues to observe every inch of her face. He holds her hand and drifts into sleep.

After an hour and half Akshara’s phone starts ringing and she recieves it.

Akshara: hello,

Aarohi: di its me

Akshara(opening her eyes fully): Aarohi if you are calling me, then who is with me in the room holding my hand.

Aarohi(laughing):breakfast is ready, you two also come and disconnects the call.

Akshara turns her head around (as she is still lying down) and spots him sleeping peacefully holding her hand. She raises herself from the bed on support of her elbow and ogles at his well toned body. As he is wearing only the vest so his muscles are clearly visible. Akshara bends down to kiss his chest and then proceeds to his neck.

Abhimanyu turns around in his sleep such that Akshara’s lips crash on his and he wakes up opening his eyes and Akshara is embarrassed and tries to get up but Abhimanyu stops her.

Akshara: what are you doing here early in the morning?

Abhimanyu: why?? Should I leave?

Akshara: I didn't mean that. I was saying why so suddenly.

Abhimanyu: actually papa called and invited me for the breakfast.

Akshara: okkk, that means you came just now.

Abhimanyu: no i thought later there is too much traffic on the roads so I came at 8:30 only.

Akshara: Abhimanyu and pulls his cheek.

Abhimanyu: what? Let's finish what you started.

Akshara blushes but complies to his demand and they have a long kiss which is broken by the ringing phone. Akshara receives it. Abhimanyu is above Akshara as she is talking.

Aarohi: di what are you two planning, to come down straight for lunch?

Abhimanyu slides her shirt down and kisses her just above the chest.

Akshara(Barely managing to say): no we are coming. What's the time?

Abhimanyu shifts to other side and kisses her.

Aarohi: it's 10:30

Akshara: itna late. We are coming just now and disconnects the call.

Abhimanyu: what happened (in between kissing her)

Akshara: Abhimanyu we are late for the breakfast. What will Papa think?

Abhimanyu: relax he won't think anything, let's continue and winks at her

Akshara: you let it be its all because of you and turns her face around.

Abhimanyu takes it as an opportunity and bites her earlobe and kisses the nape of her neck.

Akshara(pushing him): you won't let me go and gets up from the bed.

Abhimanyu holds her hand and looks her from head to toe. Akshara is wearing a shirt ending just above her knees.

Akshara: whattt????

Abhimanyu: whatever you are wearing is looking good on you. Why don't you wear this at home?

Akshara: its Aarohi's not mine.

Abhimanyu: you should get it too. You look beautiful while licking his lips.

Akshara: kitne, matlab kitne besharam hogaye hain aap. Leave me.

Abhimanyu: you know what I was saying is we are already late and Papa will also not feelgood.

Akshara: what are you trying to say?

Abhimanyu: let's save time as well as water.

Akshara: what do you mean?

Abhimanyu: let's shower together.

Akshara: Abhimanyuuuu

Abhimanyu: I am being genuinely logical (passing her a flying kiss).

Akshara: no and Do not lie to me, I know you have already showered at home.

Abhimanyu pouts and leaves her hand. Akshara kisses his pout and rushes to the washroom. Abhimanyu gets ready and goes out.

Aarohi: finally you are here.

Abhimanyu: I was awake. It's your sister who wasn't waking up.

Mummy: kya hoga is ladki ka. Let her come I will talk to her.

Abhimanyu chuckles and winks at Aarohi. Just then Akshara calls Aarohi from the washroom.

Aarohi: what happened Di?

Akshara: give me something to wear.

Aarohi: wait a second and after sometime hands her the clothes.

Akshara: what is this Aarohi? You know I don't wear such clothes now.

Aarohi: I know but I don't have anything else. Also whose here its only Jiju. I don't think he will have a problem.

Akshara wears the clothes and comes out in the Hall. Abhimanyu looks at her as she is looking totally different. He has never seen her like this. She is wearing a jeans and a short top. She comes and sits besides him.

Swarna: Akshara why didn't you wake up when Abhimanyu asked you to?

Anokni: mummy what did I do?

Swarna: Abhimanyu told me that he tried to wake you up many times but you were just sleeping like a log.

Akshara: whatttt (glaring at Abhimanyu).

Papa:let it be now. Let's have breakfast.

Akshara(whispering to Abhimanyu): you will pay for this.

Abhimanyu: btw why don't you wear such clothes at home.

Akshara: just like that.

Post breakfast they are sitting and chit chatting.

Aarohi: jiju you had told me that you want to watch that documentary

Abhimanyu: yes the one about that business start up.

Aarohi: I have two tickets of it. Do you want one?

Abhimanyu: why one give me both. I will take Akshara along.

Aarohi: didi and documentary. No chance

Abhimanyu: who's going to tell her it's a documentary and gives her a high five.

Aarohi: di, jiju is calling you.

Akshara: hmmm

Abhimanyu: i was thinking let's go watch a movie.

Akshara: suddenly?

Aarohi: I had two tickets but my friends are busy so I thought you two can go.

Akshara: let me change

Abhimanyu: no you are looking fine.

Akshara: sure?

Abhimanyu: yes.

They reach the theater.

Akshara: why does the theater look so empty? Which movie is it?

Abhimanyu: guess we are late. Let's go inside. You will get to know the movie inside only.Also I get very engrossed in a movie so don't feel bad.

Akshara: ok.

They enter and see that it's almost empty with 5 or 8 people only.

Akshara: what is this?

Abhimanyu: i don't know let's sit.

They sit and Akshara sees the title of the documentary and Is annoyed.

Akshara: what is this Abhimanyu? I am leaving.

Abhimanyu: please sit Akshara. I have been waiting for this movie since quite sometime.

Halfway through the documentary and Akshara sees Abhimanyu is so engrossed in the movie and is actually watching it with utmost interest. Akshara thinks mummy se daant lagwayi thi inhone ab dikhati hoon.

Akshara looks around and sees there is a lady sitting 2 seats away from her. She gets up and exchanges seat with her and then Akshara leaves for home as she is hell bored. She drops Abhimanyu a text. After some time Abhimanyu holds the hand of the lady sitting next to him thinking it's Akshara and plays with her fingers.This happens till the movie ends.

Abhimanyu: it was fun na Akshara (still holding hand).

Lady:yes too much but it's not Akshara.

Abhimanyu(immediately leaving her hand): I am extremely sorry mam. I thought it's my wife.

Lady:I know. She exchanged the seat with me and left.

Abhimanyu takes out his phone to call her and sees her text.

Akshara: Enjoyed the movie. Happy driving. I am already home 😘😘😘

Abhimanyu(thinks):you didn't do this right Akshara and heads home.

He reaches home and sees all are sitting in Hall. Nimisha is oiling Neil's hair and his mother is oiling Akshara’s hair. They are all watching some movie on TV.

Manjari: you are back, come sit.

Neil: bhai where were you?

Abhimanyu: nothing I had some work (with an irritated face) and goes upstairs.

Manjari: what happened to him?

Akshara: I will see.

She makes coffee for him and goes to the room.

Akshara: coffee??

Abhimanyu: i am not talking to you.

Akshara: you know what, you look so cute when you are angry (pulling his cheeks).

Abhimanyu: you think this is some joke

Akshara: nope not at all. In the morning you played a prank on me and now I did the same. We are even Mr. Birla.

Abhimanyu: so it's all about being even Mrs. Birla? (Putting his arms around her neck).

Anisha: bhaiya, bhAbhi and rushes to hug themboth.

Abhimanyu: when did you come?

Anisha: just now. Come downstairs, I have got something for you.

She has got color coordinated suits and sarees for both the couples and saree for her mother. They are talking about her camp.

Manjari: come lets have dinner. We are already late.

Anisha: yes maa, I am hungry.

Abhimanyu: where is Akshara?

Akshara(coming from kitchen): I was in the kitchen. Come lets have dinner.

Akshara serves dinner to all.

Manjari: you also sit Akshara. We will serve ourselves.

Akshara: will come just now.

Sh ebrings a bowl from the kitchen and places it in front of Anisha.

Anisha: what is this bhAbhi?

Akshara: check it out.

Anisha: wow butter chicken. I love you bhAbhi and stands to hug Akshara.

Nimisha: di when did you make this? Had she informed you?

Akshara: no she hadn't informed at all. Luckily there was chicken in the fridge so I made it quickly when you all were talking.

Anisha: thank you so much.

Akshara: ok now eat everyone.

Post dinner everyone goes to their room. Abhimanyu has changed and is ready to sleep. Akshara comes and goes to change.She comes out wearing a shirt ending above her knees.

Abhimanyu: not bad Mrs. Birla.

Akshara: now Mr. Birla had demanded something, so I had to fulfill it( while putting lotion on her arms).

Abhimanyu: but when did you buy it.

Akshara: when you were busy in that movie of yours.

In the meantime Abhimanyu gets up from the bed and stands behind her near the dressing table and picks up the lotion bottle.

Abhimanyu(ask sthrough the mirror): may I?

Akshara nods her head in a yes. He puts the lotion on his hand and rubs along one arm while he starts kissing her in the nape of neck. He takes more lotion in his hands and and rubs another arm while still kissing her constantly and now Akshara is breathing heavily.

Abhimanyu closes the lotion and puts it back. He then lifts her and places her delicately on the bed.

Abhimanyu: sleep now.

Abhimanyu comes and sleeps on his side kissing her forehead. Akshara comes to him and places her head on his chest.

Akshara: thanks.

Abhimanyu: what for?

Akshara: just like that.

Abhimanyu: still, why so suddenly.

Akshara: for understanding me always.

Abhimanyu(kissing her hairs): btw I also want to say thank you.

Akshara: why?

Abhimanyu: for coming into my life, for understanding my family like it's own.

Akshara: it is my own.

Abhimanyu: come now let's sleep and engulfs her in his arms.

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Chapter 27

Edited by shaylini - 3 years ago
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Loved the naughty Abhimanyu

please update soon

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Ahh such a lovely amd long update😍😍😍I don't know how i m gonna pass the OPD hours duty after reading this 🥵🥵

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Originally posted by: amita5

Loved the naughty Abhimanyu

please update soon

Glad you loved it❤️

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Originally posted by: chremma

Ahh such a lovely amd long update😍😍😍I don't know how i m gonna pass the OPD hours duty after reading this 🥵🥵


Thanks a lot

BTW i didnt know we have our own docwoman in the forum🤗

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😅😅Right now i m completing my internship

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