Our Destined Love ft shivi ❤️ (Chapter 6 :- pg 3)

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INTRODUCTION



Hello beautiful readers.. I'm a newbie here.. I'm a writer on Wattpad..

Just thought to share my stories here too..

Do shower your love to this story..

So this story is totally different from actual story of our so called pandya store...


Main lead are ofcourse our shivi❤️..


Khushkhabar yeh h ki ismen bhabi nhii h🤣🤣 i mean bhabi ji h.. but role different h🤣 hence no bhabi mahanta will be there...


Characters


1. Shiva pandya:- first son of dhara pandya and gautam pandya.. he is a CEO of a renown company in mumbai.. he lives alone in Mumbai.. he is mumma's boy for his grandmother suman pandya..he is an arrogant and short tempered boy..


2. Krish Pandya:- younger sibling of shiva.. he is a college going student.. and very notorious boy... Loves his family and brother a lot...


3. Dhara pandya :- wife of gautam pandya and mother of shiva and krish pandya... Very down to earth women... Lives in somnath with her husband and mother in law..


4. Gautam pandya:- father of shiva pandya... He is an owner of pandya's restaurant in somnath...


5. Suman pandya:- wife of late. Dharshan pandya.. she loves her grandson shiva a lot... Her last wish is to see him married and having a beautiful family..


6. Raavi Narayan:- daughter of Prafulla and jagat Narayan.. very bubbly and cheerful girl.. currently a dance teacher in a school of somnath.. an aspiring contemporary dancer.. she wants to become a famous choreographer in mumbai.. she can do anything to achieve her goal...


7. Prafulla Narayan:- wife of jagat Narayan and mother of raavi... She is a house wife... Loves her daughter..


8. Jagat Narayan:- father of raavi narayan... And owner of Narayan's steel factory somnath... He is a very down to earth person..


9. Keerti Narayan:- younger sibling of raavi.. she is studying in college... She loves her sister a lot..


10. Rishita seth:- bff of raavi since childhood.. she is working in same school where raavi works..


11. Dev rathore :- bff of shiva... He is also working in same company where shiva works..


I hope u got some idea of the story through the introduction..


Story will start from next chapter..


So I'll meet u directly in first chapter 😉..


Byeeeeee

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hassh!!

You finally joined this platform, Simran!


Already read on wattpad.

Will support you here also.❤❤❤



P.s.- Remembered me?

Me- Aahana!

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Am sorry i didn't remember you 😔


But thnku for supporting me there& here also..

I'm glad that you like my content ❤️

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CHAPTER 1


Hello my beautiful readers.. so here I'm with the very first chapter of my new story...

I hope u will enjoy reading it ❣️🤗


So let's start..


Author's pov:- somewhere in somnath two girls were waiting for taxi or lift in middle of the road...


Raavi:- what the hell yaar!!!! Manhoos.. aaj hi mere scooter ne kharab hona tha.. Arghhhhhh..😬


Rishita:- cool down raavi... Chill kr yaar... Abhii koi na koi taxi ya auto aa jayegi...


Raavi:- yaar rish kya chill kru.... Ek toh upar se aaj khadoos principal ne faltu main daant diya and ab taxi nhiii mil rhi h... And ab upar se mom call krke ke paaglon ki tarah mujhe ghar bula rhe h... Ohhh goddd ek toh bta bhi nhii rhe ki kya kaam h.. bas keh rhe h jaldi aaa jaldi aaa...


Rishita:- areee yaar tu kyu tension le rhe h aunty ko koi urgent kaam hoga isiliye bula rhi hogi...


Raavi:- koi kaam nhiii hoga yaar... I'm telling you she might have fixed my meeting with a boy for my marriage... Main na thak gyi hu bol bol ke ki mujhe abhi nhiii krni shaadi... Par mom meri baat sune tab na..


Rishita:- achaa ek baat bta is ladke ka kya number h???


Raavi:- 50..


Rishita:- congratulations darling...(hugging her)


Raavi:- ehhh...tu kya pee ke aayi h ??? Kya ho gya tujhe???


Rishita:- areee meri don raavi narayan... Yeh 50th ladka aa rha h tujhe dekhne.. har baar ki tarah reject krdena aur teri half century puri... 🤣🥳


Raavi:- areey haan yaar yeh toh maine dhayan hi nhii diya... Waah kya cheez h tu rish...😘


Rishita:- abeee ooo main koi cheez nhii hu...( Angrily)


Raavi:- i know tu cheez nhiii h tu toh meri jaan h darling ... I love you...


Rishita:- i lov..( she stopped midway only)


Raavi:- i love u baad main bolna... voh dekh taxi aa rhi h... Side hat.. rokne de mujhe..


Rishita:- kaisi dost di h bhagwan... Ek pal main pyaar krti h dusre pal main hi bezaati...


Raavi:- taxi... Ruko.. ruko.. bhaiya...


Taxi driver:- kahan jaana h madam??


Raavi:- MG road...


Taxi driver:- theek h baithiye...


Raavi and Rishita were going to sit only... When a boy came and sit inside through another door..


Raavi:- oo hello mister.... kahan muh uthakar beth gye.. chlo bahar yeh taxi maine ruki thi...( Irritatingly)


Boy:- dekhiye miss meri bohat important meeting h toh plz mujhe jaane dijiye...


Raavi:- ese kaise jaane de du haan... Pichle aadhe ghante se hm yahan wait kr rhe h... Niklo tum yahan se dusri taxi lelo.. aur hme jaane do...


Boy dejectedly came out..


Boy:- acha suno kyu na hm taxi share krle???


Raavi:- not at all... Bhaiya aap chalo yeh toh bolta hi rahega...( Irritatingly)


Boy:- classless people..😒


Raavi:- whatever ( haughtily)


Raavi and rishita drove away from there....


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In Narayan's house.


Prafulla:- aa gyi meri dikri??


Raavi:- nhiii mera bhoot aaya h...


Prafulla:- ohhh bhai kabhi toh seedhe muh jawab diya kr...


Raavi:- aap kabhi seedhe muh sawal kiya kro toh main seedhe muh jawab de diya karungi🤭


Prafulla:- chal ab aapni bak bak band kr ... Aur ready hoja.. tujhe ladke waale dekhne aaye h..


Raavi:- for god's sake mom... Plz leave me yaar.. mujhe nhiii krni shaadi abhi... Mujhe ek famous choreographer bn na h...


Prafulla:- tu na aapne saapno ki duniyaa se bahar nikal aur ready ho jaa...


Raavi:- mom main na baaki 49 ladkon ki tarah ese bhii reject hi karungi... Aur aapni half century puri karungi 🤣.. fir jam ke krungi party... Hna keerti???


Keerti:- diii i must say ladka bada hot h...


Raavi:- ehh chutki ab tu mat shuru hoja...


Keerti:- nhii by god sachi bohat handsome aur hot h.. aur ek baat he is from Mumbai..


Raavi:- what??? 😲


Keerti:- hmm...


Keerti went out from her room..


Raavi:- he is from Mumbai...agar main Mumbai chli gyi toh vahan ache se training leke famous choreographer bn sakti hu... Ab toh ladka dekhna hi padega... 😏


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After a while raavi came out in the hall wearing a beautiful saree..


Raavi met everyone except that boy... Who was out busy in call..


Dhara:- beti toh bohat sundar h aapki.. Prafulla ji..


Prafulla and other passed her a smile...


Dhara:- lo shiva bhii aa gya...


Shivi looked at each other...


Shivi:- tum??????( Shocked)


The end ❣️


Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..

And kaisa laga first chapter?? Aur kya lagta h ho paayegi shivi ki shaadi?? Do let me know in comments..


Chlo ab milte h next chapter main very soon..


Till then


Enjoy and stay safe 💕

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Hey!!!!!!!!!

I have read this book on wattpad and i am really in love with it♥️♥️

And i Keep waiting for the updates.......

Welcome to IF❣️

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CHAPTER 2



Hello my beautiful readers.. finally I'm back with a new chapter 😉..

Start krne se pehle ek recap toh bnta h na boss...


Recap:- shivi shocked to see each other in raavi's home..


So let's start..


Shivi:- tum????? ( Shocked)


Dhara:- tum ek doosre ko jaante ho???


Shiva:- no..


Raavi:- yess..


Shiva was giving her questioning looks..


Dhara:- wait... What?? Shiva is saying no and you are saying yes..??? How??


Raavi:- actually aunty we both have a common friend...


Shiva was shocked with her lie..


Prafulla:- yeh toh achii baat h ki tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho...


Shivi were passing awkward glancing to each other..


Dhara:- kyu na tum dono akele main baat krlo.. u might feel uncomfortable here... Hna... What's say Prafulla jii???


Prafulla:- yess yess why not... Raavi jaa shiva beta ko lawn main le jaa.. aur vahan ek dusre se ache se baat krlo..


Raavi:- mom!??


Prafulla:- jaa na beta...


Raavi:- fine... Chalein??


Shiva obediently followed her..


Raavi:- tum yahan kya kr rhe ho???


Shiva:- tumhe nhiii lagta ki yeh sawaal mujhe puchna chahiye..


Raavi:- excuse me!!! Yeh mera ghar hai....


Shiva:- haan toh maine kab kaha ki mera ghar h..( non interestingly)


Raavi:- whatever... Okk just listen to me... Mujhe koi shaadi vaadi nhii krne tumse...😒


Shiva:- haan jaise main toh mara jaa rha hu na tujh jaisi classless ladki se shaadi krne ke liye 😏


Raavi:- toh fir yahan kyu aaye ho???


Shiva:- pehle tum mujhe btao ki tum ne meeting ke liye haan kyu ki???


Raavi:- ofcourse ladka reject krne ke liye 😏🤭


Shiva:- how heartless plus emotionless girl u are... Chiii..


Raavi:- ohhh helloo... first of all naa... Stop using these stupid words like classless, emotionless, heartless... Esa lag rha h pta nhii kitni baar reject ho chuke ho tum aur uska gussa mujh par nikaal rhe ho..


Shiva:- ohhh tumhe kya lagta h mujh jaise hot ladke ko koi reject kr sakta h ???😏🤨(coming closer to her)


Raavi:- hot aur tum...🤣🤣🤣 Ab jara btane ka kasht kroge ki agar shaadi karni nhii h toh kyu aaye ho yahan???


Shiva:- aapni dadi ki last wish puri krne...


Raavi:- what????


Shiva:- yay... She want to see me married before she dies..


Raavi:- 🤣🤣🤣


Shiva:- kitni heartless ladki ho yaar... Esi baat par has rhi ho tum..


Raavi:- ohh mister mujhe heartless toh ese bol rhe ho jaise tum agar mujhse ya kisi aur se shaadi kroge toh pyaar hi barsaoge..(angrily)


Shiva:- main is pyar ki jhamele nhii padunga... I'll do a contract marriage for my grandma's sake...


Raavi was shocked listening about contact marriage..


Raavi:- iska matlab tum is shaadi se kuch expect nhii krte???


Shiva:- not at all.. sirf ek saal ke liye shaadi krunga and then divorce..


Raavi:-( thoughts) contract marriage ka idea bhii acha h... Ek saal main toh main ache se training krke choreographer bn jaaungi...fir yeh aapne raaste main aapne raste..


Shiva:-(waving at her) ohhh hello kahan kho gyi???


Raavi:- main kya keh rhi thi... Kyu na yeh contract marriage tum mere saath krlo..???( Nervously)


Shiva started coughing...


Raavi:- lo paani peo...


Shiva drank the water...


Shiva:- i would love to marry a chudail instead of u... 😒


Raavi:- just shut up and think wisely...see hamare parents hmari shaadi krvana chahte h ... Par hm nhii krna chahte kisi se bhii shaadi filhal..

Toh kyu na hm dono yeh contract marriage krle... Ek saal main toh main ek achi aur famous choreographer bhii ban jaungi... (Excitingly)


Shiva:- kitni chaalak ladki ho tum... Itni lalchi..😒


Raavi:- ohh hello sirf mera fayda nhii ho rha .... Tumhara bhi ho rha h ismein...


Shiva:- mera..( before shiva can complete his sentence keerti came there)


Keerti:- ho gya tum dono ka ya u need more privacy??( Teasingly)


Raavi:- shut up keerti... Aur tum( shiva) think wisely...


Raavi and keerti left from there..


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In hall..


Prafulla:- haan toh kaisa laga baat krke???


Raavi:- acha laga mom..


Prafulla:- toh fir kya faisla h???


Raavi:- I'm ready for this marriage..( shyly)


Narayan's:- kyaaa?????( Shocked)


Raavi:- hmm ... It's yess from me..( innocently)


Raavi:-(thoughts) bechare kaise shocked ho gye mom dad.. unhe toh laga tha main is baar bhii naa krungi..🤭 par is baar ulta ho gya...


Dhara:- areey waah.. main toh yeh hi chahti thi ki tum hi mere shiva ki Gauri bano...


Raavi was passing sweet smile while shiva was just looking at her..


Gautam:- toh shiva tu bhi bta de ab... Tu kya chahta h ????


Dhara:- haan bol shiva...


Shiva was taking a lot time to respond...


Raavi:-(thoughts) yeh mr.khadoos itna time kyu le rha h??? Kahin yeh mujhe reject na krde.. ohh godd... Plz esa mat krna... Finally maine aapne sapne ki taraf ek kadam badha rhi hun... Plzz yeh shiva mujhe reject na kre...plz...


Dhara:- bol na shiva... Kya socha rha h???


Shiva:- vo..vo..



The end ❣️


Sorry for the cliffhanger and for grammatical mistakes too...

Kya lagta h shiva ka kya jawab kya hoga???

Aur haan kaisi lagi hmari bindaas raavi???

Do let me know in comments..


I'll meet you in next chapter..


Till then..


Enjoy and stay safe 😘

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Good read. Cannot wait for Shiva to say yes to Raavi

Eagerly awaiting your next update.

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Originally posted by: Seja1

Good read. Cannot wait for Shiva to say yes to Raavi

Eagerly awaiting your next update.


Thnku so much dear ❤️

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CHAPTER 3


Hello mere beautiful readers.. kaise ho aap sab??? Finally I'm back with a new chapter... I hope u will enjoy reading it ❣️


Recap:- raavi said yes for marriage while Shiva was taking time..


So let's continue..


Suman:- bol na dikra... Kiska intzaar kr rha h???


Krish:- bolde bhai... Kuch toh bol ... Haan ya naa??


Shiva:- nhiii.. mujhe nhii krni yeh shaadi..


Raavi was shocked 😲..


Dhara:- shayad shiva ko thoda time chahiye.. hm hmara final decision kuch dino main btate h...


Prafulla:- koi baat nhii..


Shiva:- let's go mom...


Dhara:- hmm chal.. jai somnath..


Narayan's:- Jai somnath..


Pandya's departs from there..


Raavi:- how dare he??? Mujhe reject kiya us khadoos ne...arghh.. 😤


Prafulla:- sorry beta...


Raavi:- sorry se kaam nhi chalega mom..


Prafulla:- toh???


Raavi:- promise kro ab... Jab tak main ready nhii hu and jab tak main nhii kehti aap mere shaadi ki baat nhi karengi...


Prafulla:- par!!!


Raavi:- dad aap mom ko plz samjhado...


Jagat:- maan ja na Prafulla...


Prafulla:- theek che... Nhii karungi.. par agar shiva ki decision badal gya toh???


Raavi:- toh kya?? Use toh main dekhaungi ki usne kise reject krke panga le liya h.. 😏


Jagat:- ohhh bhai plz kuch esa vaisa mat krna..


Raavi:- chill dad.. kuch nhi karungi...


Jagat and Prafulla:- haash!!!


After few days..


Raavi was doing shopping in a mall..


Where she finds an old lady struggling to get packets from shelves..


Raavi came and helped her..


Suman:- thnku beta...


Raavi:- ur wel..( she stopped midway remembering her )


Raavi:- ohhh hello.. i mean jai somnath aunty..


Suman:- jai somnath raavi beta... Kaisi h tu??


Raavi:- main ekdum badiya aap btao aapki sehat kaisi h ???


Suman:- main bhi ekdum theek hu..


Raavi:- aap akele kaise aa gyi yahan???


Suman:- areee nhii main akeli nhi hu.. mere saath Krish aur.. ( she stopped in between as shiva came there)


Shivi:- tum?? Yahan kya kr rhi / rhe ho??


Krish:- yeh fir shuru ho gye 🤦


Raavi:- Yeh kya tumhara private mall h jo tumhare elawa koi nhii aa sakta???


Shiva:- ohh..


Raavi:- ek minute... pehle yeh bta tune mujhe reject krne ki himmat kaise ki haan???


Shiva:- kyu jali tumhari??😏


Raavi:- main kyu jalungi bhala???


Shiva:- kyunki itne hot ladke ne tujhe reject kr diya..🤭


Raavi:- u????😤


Shiva:- tumhe isliye reject kiya kyunki mujhe tujh jaisi ladki se shaadi nhii krni thi ...


Raavi:- heyyy... Tujh jaisi matlab???


Shiva:- should i elaborate it here only..😉🤨


Suman:- areee bas kro tum dono.. aur tu shiva kyu pyari se bachi ko ese daant rha h???


Shiva:-( murmuring) pyari aur yeh... Ek dum khunkaar ladki h...


Suman and raavi:- kyaa bola???


Shiva:- kuch nhii.. chlo dadi yahan se... mujhe iski shakal bhi nhii dekhni.. jab se aai jindagi main toofan laakar rakh diya h...


Raavi:- jaise tum ne aake toh bade mere jhand jindagi main chaar chaand laga diye..huh!!😒


Shiva:- chal hatt!!!


Raavi:- tu hatt!!!


Krish:- abey tum log hatt hatt krte rahoge ya chaloge bhii...🤦


Shiva:- hmm... Chal..


They both left from there..


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At night in raavi's room..


Raavi was surfing on her phone when she received a call from an unknown number..


Raavi:- who is calling me right now???


Raavi picked that call..


Raavi:- hello!!!


Shiva:- hiii.. raavi.. shiva here..


Raavi:- how dare u to call me??? U idiot... Nhii.. u are a gadheda fool... Sharam nhiii aai mujhe call krte huye...


Shiva:- ohhh hello... Main koi mara nhii ja rha tha tumse baat krne ke liye... It was a compulsion for me...


Raavi:- what compulsion??? Wait.. I'm not at all interested to know ur reason... Byeee..


She cuts the call..

But shiva was continuously calling her..


Raavi:- u literally have no shame!!!! Kya kab se call kiye jaa rhe ho... Maina bola na nhii baat krni tumse.. toh kyu tang kr rhe ho..???


Shiva:- marry me!!!


Raavi:- what???😮


Shiva:- yess marry me...


Raavi:- what kind of joke is this haan??? 😤


Shiva:- just listen to me once yaar..


Raavi:- kyuu sunu???


Shiva:- plzzz..


Raavi:- okk fine... Bolo..


Shiva:- yaar mere daadi kaafi zid kr rhe h...She wants u only to become my wife... So let's do this marriage for her sake... I'm ready..


Raavi:- whatt??? U are ready?? U khadoos.. how dare u???


Shiva:- areee suno toh??


Raavi:- just shut up .. I'm not at all interested in u now!!!! Go to hell!!!!😒


And she cuts the call..


Shiva's pov:- kyaaa ladki h yeh... Bohat papad belne padenge ab... Lag jaa beta shiva ab us chudail ko manane ke liye.. kahan phasa diya bhagwan..🙃


Raavi's pov:- how shameless he is... Pehle muh pe mujhe reject kr diya ab khud ready ho gya shaadi ke liye ... Samjh ke kya rakha h usne mujhe... Jaisa voh kahega main vaisa karungi.... Not at all.. ab tum dekho mr. Shiva pandya kaise tumhe maza chakati hu... Mujhe reject krne ki saza tumhe milegi hi..😏


Just then Prafulla and keerti entered her room..


Prafulla:- itni raat ko kiske saath jhagad rhi thi????


Raavi:- tha koi khadoos!!


Keerti:- kahin shiva jiju toh nhiii???


Raavi:- tujhe kaise pta??? Wait... Kya boli tu shiva Jiju??? Are you out of ur mind keerti???


Keerti:- di aap sara din toh unhe hi koste rehte ho.. toh i thought ki kya pta unke saath hi lad rhi ho aap.. aur guess what mere tuka theek nikla... 😅 Aur rhi baat shiva ko jiju ko bulane ki toh.. i don't know but mera man unhe jiju bolane ka hi krta h.. kya pta voh sach main mere jiju ban jaaye..🤭


Raavi:- mumma aap ise tikalo vrna bohat peetegi mujhse ab... vaise bhii us khadoos ne already mera matha garam kr rakha h... Ab upar se yeh shuru ho gyi..( irritatingly)


Prafulla:- ohh bhai tu Zara shanti se btayegi kya baat h..


Raavi narrates her the whole incident..


Prafulla:- aree yeh toh bohat achi baat h... toh krlena shaadi..


Raavi:- mumma shayad aap bhul rhi h ki aapne kuch promise kiya tha 😏 toh better hoga ki aap ab kuch mat bolu..


Prafulla:- theek h bhai.. aapni maa ki chinta mat hi kr tu.. chal keerti yahan se.. mujhse toh koi pyaar hi nhii krta..🥺


Raavi:- ohh god mom.. stop it.. itni gandi acting mat kiya kro aap.. aur rhi baat aapse koi pyaar nhii krta.. toh zara papa se puchu ki kitna pyaar krte h aapse 😘


Prafulla:- hatt besharam 😳


Raavi:- aaye haaye mom u are blushing 😅


Prafulla shyly ran from there..


Keerti:- diii aap sach main nhii karoge shaadi shiva se???


Raavi:- nhiii.. karungi... Ab toh bilkul nhii.. samjhta kya h voh khudko.. khadoos kahinka..😒


Keerti:- okkk jaise aapki marzi..


Keerti too went out from there..


And raavi peacefully slept ruining Shiva's sleep 😅🤣


The end ❣️


So how was it??? And Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..


Ab kyaa lagta h ho paayegi inki shaadi ya nhii??

Aur Kaisi lag rhi h hmari savage raavi?? Bechare shiva ka kya haal hoga ab?? Any guesses 🤣🤣


Do comments so that i get to know whether you are enjoying this story or not??


I'll meet you soon in next chapter

Byeeee 🤗

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Prafulla or sharmana saath saath?😂

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