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Posted: 3 years ago
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This marriage ka ghapla sounds really interesting .. agay jaake thoda romance mil sakta hai kya ? ☺️


Bada pyaara story hai yaar 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

This marriage ka ghapla sounds really interesting .. agay jaake thoda romance mil sakta hai kya ? ☺️


Bada pyaara story hai yaar 😳


Ofcourse romance ke bina toh shivi ffadhuri h 🤣

I'm glad that you loved it ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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CHAPTER 4



Hello my beautiful readers ❤️.. kaise ho aap sab?? So let's continue from the last chapter 😉


Recap:- shiva told Raavi to marry him..


In pandya niwas.


Suman:- aeee shiva dekh jab tak teri shaadi raavi se nhii ho jaati main kuch khaaungi nhi...( Determinedly)


Shiva:- yaar dadi aap ne dekha na voh nhii maan rhi ab ... Main kya karu???😒


Suman:- mujhe kuch nhii pta... Bas mujhe raavi chahiye is ghar main toh chahiye... Tu ab jo marji kar.. ( and she left from there)


Shiva:- dadi suno toh... Kyaa bhagwan kahan fasa diya....kaise manau us chudail ko.. kuch samaj nhii aa rha..

Abhi filhal toh ek hi kaam kr sakta hu.. aur voh h sona .. subah uthke dimag chlata hu thoda ki kaise manau use...

Maharani khud toh chain se so rhi hogi meri neend kharab krke.. huh..😒


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At Narayan's house in morning..


Raavi was continuously receiving calls from shiva and she was rejecting all his calls..


Prafulla:- aeee raavi beta kiska phone aa rha h tujhe kab se???


Raavi:- shiva ka..


Prafulla:- toh krle na baat kya pta kuch important baat krni ho..


Raavi:- haan ruko abhi krti hu..


Prafulla:- hmm kar kar..


Raavi:- kr diya block uska number 😏


Prafulla:- tera kuch nhii ho sakta 🤦


Raavi:- us khadoos ke saath kuch krna bhii nhii h..


Keerti:- di.. mumma ne kab kaha ki shiva ke saath kuch krna h🤭😏


Raavi:- vo.. vo..( nervously)


Keerti:- kyaa hua di???🤭


Raavi:- mom main jaa rhi hu studio practice krne... Shaam tak aa jaungi... Byee..( hurriedly)


Keerti:- bye 🤣


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In Paul's dance studio..


Raavi was beautifully dancing on sans main teri saans mili toh .. song..


Just then a boy entered the studio..


Girl 1:- hayeee kitna handsome h..


Girl 2:- yaar hot bhi kitna h.. dekh kya body bnai h bande ne.. hayee main toh flat ho gyi ispe..


Raavi turned to look towards the boy.. and she was shocked to see shiva there...


Raavi:-( thoughts) yeh khadoos kya kar rha h yahan... Arghhhh...he is stalking me..😬


Paul:- so now everyone can leave.. except raavi..


Raavi:- abeyy yaar kahan fasa diya..( murmuring)


Paul:- did you said anything??


Raavi:- no.. no sir..


Paul:- okay..


Raavi:- sir mujhe kyu rukna h??


Paul:- meet him he is shiva...


Raavi:- i already know him...😒


Paul:- oh that's great.. so raavi tumhe na shiva ko couple dance sikhana h.. uske yahan ek important function h aur use vahan perform krna h..


Raavi:- lier..( murmuring)


Paul:- kuch kaha tumne???


Raavi:- nhii toh.. but sir main hi kyu?? Yahan aur bhi toh kitne ache dancer h..


Paul:- but sab tumhari tarah ek successful choreographer toh nhii bn na chahte... Isliye tum ise choreograph krogi..


Raavi:- but..


Paul:- aur haan main aapne office main hi hu.. aur camera on h.. toh dhayan rakhna I'll watch you..


Raavi:- okay sir..


Paul left leaving shivi alone..


Raavi:- why the hell u are stalking me??😤


Shiva:- I'm not at all stalking u.. main toh bas yahan dance seekhne aaya hu....tumne suna nhii paul sir ne kya bola 😏


Raavi:- u liar... Main Paul sir ki tarah tumhari bewakoofi main nhii aane waale smjhe.. main koi dance wance nhii sikha rhe tumhe..go to hell...


She started leaving.. but shiva hold her wrist and pulled her towards him in such a way that her back touched his front..


Raavi:- chodo mujhe..


He holds her tightly from her waist..


Shiva:- shayad tum bhul rhi ho ki paul sir ne kya bola.. camera on h.. 😏


Raavi:- arghhh...😖


Shiva:- chill down darling..


Raavi:- don't you dare to call me darling.. vrna muh tod dungi tumhara..😤


Shiva:- ohhh hoo itna gussa...chlo nhii bulata tumhe darling...😏( Emphasizing the word darling)


Raavi:- u..??


Shiva:- let's start the dance..


Raavi:- fine..


They started dancing..


While dancing only...


Shiva:- achaa suno..


Raavi:- agar main na bolungi toh nhii bologe??


Shiva:- yaar plz man jaao na mere se shaadi krne ke liye..


Raavi pushed him .. but shiva pulled her again and continued dancing..


Shiva:- yaar meri dadi kal raat se kuch nhii kha rhi.. voh chahti h ki tum hi meri biwi bno..


Raavi:- toh..😒


Shiva:- yaar how hear..( before he complete his sentence raavi interrupted him)


Raavi:- agar firse mujhe heartless bola na.. tu esa kaan ke niche lagaungi na.. saari saat pushte yaad aa jayegi tumhe..😤


Shiva:- acha acha nhii bolta..😧


Shiva:- kyaaa gundi ladki h .. baba re..( murmuring)


Raavi:- kyaa bola???


Shiva:- nhi nhii kuch nhii.. toh btao karogi na mere se shaadi?? for my grandma's sake please...


Raavi:- okkk fine..


Shiva hugged her tightly..raavi was shocked with his gesture..

Raavi awkwardly broke the hug.. while shiva was awkwardly looking here and there and was rubbing back of his hair..


Raavi:- but meri ek condition h..


Shiva:- ab kyaa??? (Tiredly)😩🤨


Raavi:- tumhe aapni puri family ke saath mere ghar aana hoga.. aur mujhse maafi mangni hogi.. kyuki tumne jo us din kiya voh kaafi disrespecting tha..


Shiva:- okk fine I'll do that too..( non interestingly)


And he started leaving..


Raavi:- ohhh hello dance??


Shiva:- mera kaam toh ho gya😉


Raavi:- but paul sir ka kya..??


Shiva:- Don't worry Paul mera childhood friend h.. aur usne yeh sab mere kehne par hi kiya h..


Raavi:- haww u bast***..😤


Shiva:- darling I'm not a bast***... I'm soon going to be your husband..😏


Raavi:- heyy.. don't forget that it's a contract marriage 😏


Shiva:- yaa.. i know..


Raavi:- that's good.. vrna faltu main pta nhii kya soch rhe the...


Shiva:- abeyy teri toh..


Raavi:- byeee..

And she left from there..


Shiva:- kyaa bawal ladki h yeh..ohh godd kaise nikalunga iske saath ek saal..

And he too left from there thanking his friend..


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At night in Narayan's house..


Raavi was surfing on her mobile phone.. when door bell rang..


Prafulla:- is waqt kon aaya hoga???


Raavi:- kyaa pta??


Prafulla:- ja zara dekh ke aa..


Raavi:- hmm..


Raavi opened the door and was shocked to see pandya's there..


Raavi:- uncle , aunty aur shiva tum bhii??


Shiva:- ( thoughts) dekho toh ab kaise overacting kar rhi h.. khud hi toh bulaya tha.. dramebaaz ... Huh..😒


Raavi:- ( thoughts) yeh kyaa maine toh mazaak kiya tha.. yeh khadoos toh sachi main sabko le aaya..


Dhara:- areee raavi kahan kho gyi??


Raavi:- nhii kahin nhii.. aaye na andar..


They came inside and settled themselves..


Dhara:- dekho raavi beta.. i know us din jo shiva ne kiya voh kaafi galat kiya...par ab ise samajh aa gya h ki sirf tum hi ho jo iske liye bni ho.. i know tumhare liye thoda difficult hoga.. but plz shiva se shaadi krne ke liye haan kehdo.. dekho main us din ke liye main maafi mangti hu shiva ki taraf se..


Raavi:- aunty plz aap maafi mat mangiye..


Dhara:- haayee kitni pyari bachi h tu.. tujhe pta maine aur gaumbi ne jabse tumhe dekha h na.. tabse hi tujhe aapni beti maan liya h..

Aur toh aur tum pehli ladki ho jis main shiva ne interest dikhaya h.. vrna toh kisi ladki ki taraf aankh utha ke nhii dekhta mera shiva..


Shivi shared an eyelock..


Gaumbi:- raavi beta ... Toh kya faisla h tera??


Raavi:- I'm ready..


Narayan's gave a shocking look to raavi..


Dhara:- sach main??


Raavi shyly nodded..


Everyone congratulate each other..


And after sometime pandya's left from there...


Keerti:- bola tha na maine.. ki aapka tanka shiva jeeju se hi bhidega...


Raavi was giving her are u serious wala look...


Prafulla:- toh raavi beta ab toh mere kasam tut gyi na..??


Jagat:- yeh bhi kya sawal kr rhi h tu Prafulla... Raavi ne bola toh tha ki jab voh khud kahegi tab hi shaadi ki baat hogi is ghar main.. toh ab toh usne khud haan ki h.. toh teri kasam khatam..😉


Prafulla:- haash.. acha hua.. bas ab meri beti ki jaldi se shaadi ho jaaye.. aur voh aapne pariwar main khush rhe .. ( hugging raavi)


Raavi:- main jaau sone??


Keerti:- haan haan jao.. shiva jeeju ke sapne jo dekhne h..( teasing)


Raavi:- toh bachle mere se keerti.. bohat pitegi..😒


Raavi irritatingly went to sleep..


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In pandya niwas..


Gaura has shared the good news of raavi's approval with suman and krish.. and they were happy too...


Suman:- thnku shiva tune mere aakhri wish puri krdi..


Shiva:- kyaaa dadi aap thnku bol rhi h.. aap sirf hukum kiya kro...( Hugging her)


Suman:- aww mera bacha.. hmesha khush reh ese hi..


Shiva:- khushiyon pe toh aapne us chudail ka grehan lgva diya..😒( murmuring)


Krish:- chudail kya??


Shiva:- kyaa??


Krish:- nhii tu hi toh bola...


Shiva:- m..ma.. main kab bola.. tere kaan baj rhe h..


Krish:- nhii maine suna..


Shiva:- maa main jaa rha hu sone.. bohat thak gya..


Krish:- aeee chal na.. jhooth kyu bol rha h.. esa bol na ki raavi bhabi ke haseen sapne dekhne jaa rha h..( teasing)


Shiva:- tu zara idhar aa main dikhata hu tujhe haseen sapne😤😏


Krish:- nhii nhii ... So jaa.. good night..( he ran towards his room)


Shiva to went to his room to get some sleep..


The end ❣️


Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..


So how was it?? Finally shaadi ke liye maan hi gye dono... Ab kya hogi inki aage ki life..for that u have to wait for the next chapter 💗


Barkhaa_tpm ( i don't know how to tag people on india forums so i just mention your name) finally gave you some romantic scene..how was it?? 🤭🙈



Chlo fir milte h next chapter very soon..


Till then..

Enjoy ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shiva finally using tricks to get Raavi to agree .. their siblings cousins teasing them about the other .. haye kitna pyara chapter tha .. I cant wait to see their story unravel and shaadi ke baad ka story☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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CHAPTER 5



Hello my beautiful readers.. finally I'm back with a new chapter.. I hope u will enjoy reading it ❣️


Recap:- Raavi agreed to marry shiva.


Let's continue..


In school..


Rishita:- dude this is not done..


Raavi:- whatt rish???


Rishita:- yaar tu shaadi kr rhi h.. aur tune mujhe btaya bhiii nhiii..😒


Raavi:- yaar rish tu puch hi mat pichle ek hafte se na us khadoos ne mere dimag ki lassi karke rakhi h.. ( frustrated)


Rishita:- kon khadoos???


Raavi:- areee voh hi jis se shaadi honi waali h... Ek mint.. maine toh tujhe nhii btaya shaadi ke baare main.. toh tujhe kaise pta chla??


Rishita:- keerti ne btaya tha..


Raavi:- achaa..


Rishita:- yaar tu sachi main shaadi kr rhi h.. ???


Raavi:- yaar contract marriage h...


Rishita:- whattt??!!


Raavi:- chill rish.. sab btati hu..


Then raavi share everything with her..


Rishita:- vaise Mr. Khadoos h kon??


Raavi:- yaad hai kuch din pehle ek ladke ke sath taxi ke liye fight hui thi... voh hi mr.khadoos..


Rishita:- you mean that hottie?!!!


Raavi:- shut up !!!


Rishita:- ummm jealous..( teasing)


Raavi:- not at all yaar..hottie aur voh bhii voh khadoos.. huh..😏


Rishita:- achaa baba theek h.. chal lecture lagane chlte h..


Raavi:- hmm..


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In Paul's dance studio..


Raavi was practicing with a guy..when shiva entered there.. and he fumes in anger watching them dancing so close..


He stopped the music right there.. and grabbed raavi's wrist and dragged her outside the studio in a lonely place..


Raavi:- what the hell you are doing??? Leave me.. damit!! ( Struggling in his hold)


Shiva holds her from her shoulder and pulled her closer to him..


Shiva:- yeh tum kya kr rhi thi andar???😤


Raavi:- dance ki practice kr rhi thi.. tumhe dikhai nhii deta kyaa??? 😡


Shiva realised that it was just a dance practice nothing else.. in embarrassment he leaves her and he rubbed his face in frustration..


Shiva:- am sorry..


Raavi:- what sorry haan??? Vahan jo itna raita faila ke aaye ho uska kya haan??


Shiva:- don't worry main Paul se baat krlunga..


Raavi:- pehle tum mujhe yeh btao ki tum yahan kya krne aaye ho??


Shiva:- vohh parso hmari engagement h toh mom ne bola ki tumhare saath jaake ring select kr aau..


Raavi:- whatt?? Itni jldi engagement.. par mumma ne toh mujhe kuch btaya hi nhiii..


Shiva:- sirf engagement nhiii.. shaadi bhii next week h..


Raavi:- whattttt??!!! 😲


Shiva:- itna shock kyu ho rhi ho tum???


Raavi:- yeh sab itni jldi kyu???


Shiva:- Actually mujhe mere office se call aa gyi h.. toh mujhe next week se hi rejoin krna jaruri h.. so isiliye..


Raavi:- agar tumhe rejoin krna h toh kro na...shaadi thodi der baad bhi toh ho skti h..


Shiva:- I know.. but dadi nhii maan rhii..


Raavi:- yaar tumhari dadi bhi..( she stopped midway as shiva gave her an angry look)


Raavi:- sorry..


Shiva:- toh chale??


Raavi:- hmm..


They were about to go.. when a boy came towards raavi..


Shakti:- heyy raavi.. aaj raat aogi na club main..


Raavi:- ofco..( she was cut by shiva)


Shiva:- no... She won't come..


Raavi was giving him a shocking look..


Shakti:- excuse me.. who are u ???


Shiva:- Mr. Shiva pandya.. raavi ka to be husband... Any problem?? 😏


Shakti quietly went from there..


Raavi:- what was that???


Shiva:- dekho i know ki yeh contract marriage h.. but u have to follow some rules..


Raavi:- what rules????


Shiva started stepping towards her while raavi was stepping backward..

Her back hit a wall.. and shiva caged her between him and the wall..

Raavi was getting affected by the proximity while shiva was enjoying his effect on her..


Shiva:- ( thoughts) iska matlab tujhe mere kareeb aane se kuch toh farak padta h.. waah ab dekh raavi main kaise badla pura karunga mujhe tadpane kaa.. let the game begin..😏


Raavi:- wh.. what.. r..rules?? ( Stuttering)


Shiva came out of thoughts..


Shiva:- yess.. toh rule number 1.. yeh contract marriage waali baat tum kisi ko nhi btaogi..


Raavi gave him a O- shit wala look..


Shiva:- hnjji bolo mohtarma kisko btaya??


Raavi:- voh aapni bff ko.. but i promise voh kisi ko kuch nhii btayegi... Even mujhe bhii nhii btayegi kuch.. ( she bite her tongue on her comment that rish will not tell to her too)


Raavi:-( thoughts) yeh kyaa boli jaa rhi h gadhedi.. kuch toh soch samjh ke bol.. upar se shiva itna kareeb khada h mere... Pta nhiii kyu ajeeb lag rha h.. butterflies kyu feel ho rhi h mujhe mere stomach main.. oh god.. kya ho rha h yeh..


Shiva:- rule number 2.. you are not allowed to get close aur date any guy..( huskily in her ears)


Raavi:- whattt???!!!


Shiva:- see i don't want ki koi confusion ho.. isliye tumhe yeh rule bhii follow krna hoga..


Raavi:- okay fine..( frustrated)


Shiva:- And rule number 3.. vahan mumbai main mera 2BHK flat h.. vahan hum dono turn wise kaam karenge.. i mean sab kaam share krke karenge.. jaise mon- wed main.. thur- sat tum.. and Sunday ko saath main krlenge..okay??


Raavi:- fine...


Shiva:- and..


Raavi:- abhii aur bhi h kyaa???


Shiva:- noo..


Raavi:- haash!!


Shiva came more close to her and whispered in her ear..


Shiva:- just remember all the rules.. especially rule number 2.. ( giving a gentle bite on her earlobe)


Shiva went from there leaving a shocked raavi..


Raavi:- yeh kyaa kiya isne.. but main itna affect kyu ho rhi hu.. arghh🙄


Shiva:- darling chlna nhii h.. ( shouting where his car was parked)


Raavi saw around and realised people were looking at them now..


Raavi angrily went towards him and sit in the car..

Shiva too came in the car..


Raavi:- i already warned you.. to not call me darling.. aur aaj toh tumne sab ke saamne hi bol diya.. 😒


Shiva:- ab hmari shaadi hone waali h toh.. aesi acting toh krni padegi na.. ( huskily)


Raavi:- par..


Shiva:- ssshhh..


And then Shiva went close to her right ear.. and glanced towards her lips..


( A/N :- Imagine shivi's car scene during jeera kaand, when he leaned towards her to make her wear the seat belt 😚🤭)


Raavi:- yeh.. tum.. kya.. kr..rhe.. ho?? ( Nervously)


Shiva:- seat belt laga rha hu.. protection toh jaroori h na... ( Innocently)


Raavi:- hmm..😳


Shiva:- chle??


Raavi:- hmm..


And then they went to choose rings for engagement.. and after that shiva dropped raavi at her home..


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At night in shiva's room..


Shiva was talking with dev on the phone..and he has shared everything that happened today.. except how he is taking revenge from raavi 😉


Dev:- bhaii tu toh jealous ho gya.. ( fake cough)


Shiva:- aeee tu kya bol rha h??


Dev:- sach hi toh bol rha hu.. ab tu hi bta tmbhabi ko kisi aur ladke ke saath dance krte dekhke tu itna gussa kyu hua fir?


Shiva:- voh hi toh nhii pta yaar.. ki kyu gussa aaya mujhe.. use kise aur ke saath dekhke..


Dev:- bhai tujhe kahin..??


Shiva:- kahin kyaaa???


Dev:- mera matlab.. tu kuch feel toh nhii krne lag gya bhabi ke liye??


Shiva:- abeey tu yeh kya bakwas kr rha h??


Dev:- bakwas nhii h yaar..mujhe jo laga voh bta diya..


Shiva:- mujhe us chudail ke saath kabhi pyaar nhii ho skta.. samjha.. aur ab tu bhii yeh khayal aapne dimag se nikal de..


Dev:- voh toh theek h.. par ek baat bta?? Bhabi ka toh profession hi dance h.. toh dance main toh ese partner ke sath dance toh voh karegi hi.. toh kya tu har baar ese raita failayega jaisa aaj failaya??


Shiva:- ptaa nhii yaar.. ab tu alag dimag kharab mat kr mera.. so jaa.. good night.. ( irritatingly)


Dev:- good night..


Dev cuts the call..


Shiva's pov:- vaise dev theek hi toh bol rha h.. raavi ka jo profession h usmein toh yeh sab hona common h.. toh kya sach main har baar ese react karunga??? Acha agar kiya bhii ese react.. toh reason kya hoga ese react krne ka... Arghhh.. 😬 kya ho rha h mujhe..

Abhi filhal us chudail ko tadpane pe focus krta hu .. baaki ka baad main dekhenge..😏


At last he slept thinking how to tease his chudail..🤭



The end ❣️


So kaisa laga aaj ka chapter??? Maza aaya shiva ka badla dekh ke.. abhii toh shuruwat h.. Aaage dekho hota h kyaa 😅

Any idea ki ab aage kya hone waala h 🤭??


I'll meet you soon in next chapter..

Byeeeeee 🤗

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CHAPTER 6


Hello my beautiful readers.. I'm back with a new chapter..

I hope u will enjoy reading the update..

So let's continue ☺️


In shivi's room..


Raavi was standing near a window and staring at moon..


Raavi's pov:- kyaa zindagi bn chuki h yaar meri.. itni jldi toh ekta kapoor ke nagin serial ka sequel nhii aata jitni jldi meri life main nyi cheezein ho rhi h..

Sirf 4 dino main itne updates ho gye h na meri life ki mobile tak dekhne ki fursat nhii mili..

Upar se us khadoos ke company vaale h ya loan waale jo iske piche hi pad gye rejoining ke liye.. kitne sapne dekhe the main ne aapni shaadi ke.. ek bhi pura nhii hua.. itni jldi shaadi ho gyi..

Shaadi toh ho gyi par ab kahin ghumne bhi nhii jaa rhe.. parso hi mumbai jaana h.. hayeee yeh kyaa ho rha h yaar itna fast forward kyu..🥺

Bhagwaan jii plz thodi speed kam kro..yeh sab kuch jyada jldi ho rha hai..


Raavi's ❤️:- tujhe honeymoon pe jaana h ?? 🤭


Raavi's 🧠:- oyee tu kya kuch bhi bol rha h.. maine sirf ghumne ka socha h.. honeymoon ka nhii..


Raavi's ❤️:- haan toh shaadi ke baad jo ghumne jaate h na... Use honeymoon hi bolte hai..🤭


Raavi's 🧠:- abeyy tu chup reh na.. raavi us khadoos ke saath kyu jaayegi??


Raavi's ❤️:- kyuu nhii jaayegi.. kitna hot aur handsome h.. vaise bhii toh raavi ko esa hi husband chahiye tha na..


Raavi's 🧠:- haan esa hi chahiye tha but voh esa nhii h..


Raavi's ❤️:- kaisa nhii h??


Raavi's 🧠:- dekh tu tang mat kr..


Raavi's ❤️:- aree main bhul gya.. tang krne ka copyright toh ab shiva ke pass h na🤭


Raavi's 🧠:- tu kyaa bakwas kr rha h?? 😡


Raavi's ❤️:- bakwas nhii sach bol rha hu.. tu khud puchle raavi se.. jab jab bhi shiva iske nazdeek aata h toh ese acha lagta h ke nhii?


Raavi's 🧠:- esa kuch nhii h samjha..


Raavi's ❤️:- toh tu puch le..


Raavi:- acha nhi lagta mujhe.. bas thodi butterflies feel hoti h stomach main..( innocently)


Raavi's ❤️:- gadhedi use acha lagna hi kehte h..


Raavi's 🧠:- tu gadheda h.. kuch bhi ulta sidha bol rha h..


Raavi's ❤️:- main ta fact state kr rha hu..


Raavi:- tum dono plz shant ho jaao..


And then raavi's ❤️ & 🧠 started fighting..

Just then shiva entered the room..


Raavi:- chuppppp!!!! ( Shouts)


Shiva:- ayeee gadhedi kyu chilla rhi h??


Raavi came to her senses..


Raavi:- tu.. tu yahan kya kr rha h??


Shiva:- mujra kar rha hu?? Dikh nhii rha😒


Raavi:- tu seedha jawab nhii de sakta??


Shiva:- tune sidha sawal pucha??


Raavi:- bta naa tu yahan kyu aaya h ?? 😬


Shiva:- yeh mera kamra h..


Raavi:- aaj se mera bhii h..


Shiva:- jaanta hu..( non interestingly)


Raavi just nodded..


Shiva:- dekh mujhe bilkul tang mat krna.. main already boht thak chuka hu.. pichle 4 din se thang se nhii soya.. ab chain ki neend sone dena plzz..


Saying this he went towards the bed..


Raavi:- tu yahan nhii soyega... ( Literally shouting)


Shiva:- pehle toh na tu aaram se bol.. pta nhii konsa speaker lagake paida hui h..( frustrated)


Raavi:- huh!!


Shiva:- agar main yahan nhii sounga toh kahan sounga??


Raavi:- mujhe nhii pta.. bas tu mere saath bed share nhiii karega..


Shiva's:- ( thought) chal shiva dikha thoda jalwa tabhi yeh chudail shaanti se sone degi..


With this he started taking step towards raavi.. and raavi was stepping backward..


Shiva:- kyu nhii sounga main tere saath..?? ( Teasingly)


Raavi:- mujhe nhii pta.. but mujhe tere saath nhii sona matlab nhii sona..


Shiva:- kyuu dar gyi?? 😏


Raavi:- m..ma..main kyu darungi bhala..( nervously)


Shiva:- fir kyu nhii krna bed share mere saath.. 😏


At last shiva pinned her to the wall..


Raavi:- ky.. kya kr rha h shiva?? ( Nervously)


Shiva:- baat..( innocently)


Raavi:- hatt mujhe sona h..


Saying this she pushed him aside..but shiva grabbed her wrist and again pinned her to the wall..


Shiva:- kuch btana tha..


Raavi:- kyaa?? ( Nervously)


Shiva:- voh kya h na mumbai main bhii ek hi room h aur vahan bhii ek hi bed h.. toh vahan main compromise nhii karunga..😏


Raavi:- kyuu tumne toh bola tha 2BHK flat. hai??


Shiva:- yess i know darling..but kya h na dusre room main maine aapna chota sa gym khol rakha h.. so that main workout kr saku fit rehne ke liye..


Raavi saw him from top to bottom.. he was wearing a vest with a track pant..


Raavi:- already itna fit toh h.. achi khasi body bhii bnai h.. ( murmured)


Shiva:- kya boli kya boli??


Raavi:- nhii kuch nhii..


Shiva:- toh bta vahan kaise soyenge?? 😏


Raavi suddenly jumped over shiva and tightly hugged him.. due to her jump shiva loses his balance and they fall on the bed.. raavi on top of shiva..


Shiva:- aeee chudail kya kar rhi h??? ( Startled) 😮


Raavi:- shiva plz voh chipkali bhaga na.. mujhe dar lagta h..😨


Shiva laughed...


Raavi:- tu hass kyu rha h??


Shiva:- nhii matlab ek chudail ko ek chipkali se dar lagta h.. gajab 🤣


Raavi:- plz bhaga na..


Shiva:- aee dinosour ki chati aulad upar se uth toh pehle.. fir hi bhagaunga na.. 😒


Raavi hurriedly moved aside..

And shiva remove that lizard from the room..


Shiva:- chipkali..


Raavi:- kahan..( shouts)


Shiva:- tu h chipkali..🤭


Raavi:- arghh.. khadoos kahinka..


Shiva:- khadoos boli tu mujhe.. ruk abhi vaapis room main leke aata hu chipkali ko..


Raavi:- achaa sorry.. nhii bulati..


Shiva:- theek h.. chal soja chup chap..


Raavi:- khadoos..( murmured)


Shiva:- lau??


Raavi:- good night..


So shivi slept on same bed on their sides..


In morning..


Raavi woke up first and saw her sleeping hugging shiva..


Raavi:- yeh😬acha hua pehle main uthi.. vrna agar ese yeh khadoos dekhta na.. toh mujhe kacha chba jaata..

Chal fatafat raavi uthja aur nahale..


Raavi was going to leave the bed but shiva holds her wrist..


Shiva:- main toh tujhe chidane ke liye chipkali bula rha tha.. par tune toh prove krdiya ki tu chipkali hi h.. kaise chipak ke soyi thi..


Raavi:- sorry..neend main pta nhii chla..😬


Shiva:- kyaaa sorry mujhe toh laga aaj meri izzat gyi haath se..


Raavi:- kyaa kuch bhii bakwas kr rha h tu?? Main aur teri izzat lut ti.. what a lame joke 🤣


Shiva:- kyuu itna hot aur handsome ladka dekh ke kisi ki bhi niyat fisal sakti h..


Raavi:- tu aur handsome.. 🤣 ek dum Bhootnath h tu.. Bhootnath..


Shiva:- ruk teri toh..


But raavi already slipped inside the bathroom 🤭


Shiva:- koi baat nhii chudail bahar aayegi hi.. tab dekh lunga..😏

Kyaa item di h bhagwan 😅


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In kitchen..


Raavi:- jai somnath aunty..


Dhara:- raavi beta ab aunty nhii hu..


Raavi:- oops.. sorry au..maa..


Dhara:- yeh hui na baat..( caressing her cheeks)


Raavi:- mujhe kuch kehna tha..


Dhara:- haan bol na beta..


Raavi:- voh actually mujhe na kitchen ka kaam thoda kam aata h.. 😅


Dhara:- bas itni si baat.. main hu na.. main help krdungi teri..


Raavi:- thnku..( hugging her)


Dhara:- chl fir shuru kre??


Raavi:- hmm..


In afternoon..


Everyone was sitting on the dining table waiting for their lunch..


Suman:- dhara khana bna nhi abhi tak??


Dhara:- bn gya maa.. bas la rhi hu..


Dhara and raavi brought the meal..


Krish:- waah maa kya khusboo aa rhi h..


Dhara:- aayegi hi na.. raavi ne jo bnaya h..


Gaumbi:- aree waah raavi beta.. khushbu toh kaafi achi aa rhi h..


Raavi:- maine akeli ne nhii bnaya.. ulta sab maa ne hi banaya h maine toh bas thodi help ki h.. actually mujhe kitchen ka kaam kam aata h..😅


Suman:- aree koi baat nhii raavi beta.. help toh ki naa.. voh hi boht badi baat h.. vaise bhii mumbai main shiva sikha dega tujhe..


Raavi:- ise khaana bnana bhii aata h??😮


Krish:- haan bhabi.. mera bhai allrounder h..


Shiva 😏 Raavi 😒


Suman:- chalo chalo ab baatein kam kro aur khaane pe dhyan do..


Everyone ate their food and give blessing to raavi..


Suman gave her cash.. while dhara and gaumbi gifted her a pair of anklets..


Suman:- chal shiva tu bhi de koi tohfa..


Shiva:- main kyu du daadi??


Suman:- kyuu nhiii dega tu.. teri biwi ne pehli baar khaana bnaya h ghar main toh tujhe kuch gift toh dena hoga..


Shiva:- par..


Dhara:- par var kuch nhii dena hoga..


Shiva:- theek h de dunga room main..


Krish:- ohh hoo room main.. ( teasing)


Shiva:- abeyy Gadhede jayda dimag mat chla samja.. khaana kha chup chap.. vrna..👊


Krish:- hmm khaa rha hu..


Gaumbi:- shiva packing ho gyi saari??


Shiva:- haan papa..


Gaumbi:- toh kal kitne bje ki flight h??


Shiva:- subah 11 bje..


Gaumbi:- theek h fir main tum dono ko drop krdunga..


Shiva:- jii papa..


Dhara:- jaa raavi beta tu bhi jaake packing krle..


Raavi:- jii..(she left from there)


Shiva too left behind her..


Krish:- bhai ache se gift dena 🤭


Shiva:- teri toh..


Krish:- enjoy..


Dhara:- krish kyu maar khaane waale kaam krta h..


Krish:- maza aata h🤭


Dhara:- shiva ko maarne main maza aata h.. yeh tu ache se jaanta h 🤭


Krish:- kyaa maa aap bhi..( he too left from there)


Suman:- hey somnath mere parivaar ko ese hi khush rakhna hmesha..☺️




The end ❣️


Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..


I hope u have enjoyed reading it..

I know aap sab shocked hoge sidha married shivi dekhke.. tbh mera bilkul man nhi tha shaadi scene likhne ka.. aur vaise bhiii main story toh shaadi ke baad hi shuru honi thi.. toh maine thoda fast forward kr diya 🤭


I don't know kya likha h aaj.. agar bura bhi likha h toh btake jaana.. I won't mind the criticism..


Chlo fir milte h boht hi jldi..

Byeeeeee 🤗

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